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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet loves Prem & Maan loves Geet..
Then why the hell Geet married Maan...
Why Maan is so caring at one moment & then extremely rude at the other...
Waiting fr nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow a new ff ...superb update ...past was like geet loves prem ...i was like OMG ...then present was geet is married to maan ...so happy lol :)😊...wating for next part ...want to know y maan is behaving like that ...
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Posted: 12 years ago




PART 2

His eyes burnt seeing Prem pulling and hugging her tight the moment they got down the bus. He blinked his eyes seeing the intensity with wat Prem hugged his Geet. Yes she was only his Geet though they were best friends but she only belonged to him. He could not bear even Prem closer to her and here he was hugging his love. He was happy tat today they would return back from their trip and was here for giving them a surprise but why did his heart ached, why did he feel tat his life would be full of pain seeing them. He never let anyone know wat he felt for Geet as he always had girls ready for him. He would casually date them and his name would be linked with each high society girl and his ever so cool nature made him so much egoistic tat he never felt the need to express his love for Geet as he felt he owned her. Geet was always a simple girl though she belonged to one of the richest family but she was as simple as a middle class girl and was always tagged as behanji by the college so called cool girls. She would never attend any parties with them but they would hang out almost whole day at college and being the simple girl Maan would avoid taking her seriously as he felt tat she would only be his even if he did not say anything. he was proud tat she was simple though extreme beautiful and the truth tat no one would approach her as all knew she belonged to Maan and Prem made him feel proud and her owner and he would directly claim her on their wedding night the wedding tat he dreamt with her.


Maan was so lost in his thoughts tat he did not even realize tat his Geet was standing right in front of him and when he saw she hugged him tight saying m in love Maan.. your Geet is in love she screamed hugging and tightening her hold around him as he stared at Prem and the moment her words reached his ear his whole world crashed m in love Maan. I love Prem Maan.. m in love with Prem Malhotra Maan' he is my love.. Geet Handa loves Prem Malhotra.


He stood staring at Prem while Prem smiled patting Geet trying to pull her out of Maan's embrace Oye tu meri girlfriend hain na so why are you hugging him so hard and Geet broke the hug but still her hand encircled on Maan's waist oh really' and wat will you do if I keep doing it. She challenged Prem who neared grabbing her by her waist parting her away from Maan m one of those hell possessive lovers Geet and I don't permit any one touching wat belongs to me.. nahi tho mujhe tumhe abjhi uthake shaadi karni padegi he said winking at Maan wat do you say Maan.. m I right while Maan just kept looking at him clenching his fist tight and I too would love it Prem Malhotra Geet said hugging him hiding her face into his neck.



Maan sweated as he broke down another piece of hard wood remembering tat day when he lost his love to his best friend Prem. The day when they both confessed their love for each other in front of him. His eyes looked upon his bleeding hand as the blood dripped but there was no pain in him as the pain tat he was making love to his wife who loved someone else was killing him. He turned to break another log of wood when he stopped hearing a painful voice Maan but still tat did not stop him and next moment a small part of the wood pierced his hand making it to bleed more. Geet cried seeing him hurting himself and ran to nurse his wound but the moment she reached him he jerked her hand away from her Stay away. He said ruthlessly pushing her by her shoulder while her tears pained him to see her crying. Don't get me weak with these tears, don't you dare show me them he said wiping them with his blooded hand. Geet could not say a word as whatever she says he will never agree to it. In their marriage of six whole months she failed to say wat she had to and now she feared to lose the one whom she worshipped as she lost the other whom she confined her most kept secrets of her life.


So you need me only for bed she said making him to stop in his track. His blood boiled hearing her insult his love. His whole body shook as he grabbed her by her hair in anger making her to yelp in pain isn't it enough for you ya phir Prem ki kami mehsoos hoti hain . Maan said gritting his teeth in anger as she looked at him with tears in her eyes should I ask god to send him back for you as your husband cannot satisfy you in bed he said pulling her closer holding her cheeks with one of his hand while the other tightened its hold on her hair.


I wish you could ever read beyond my pain Maan, par nahi you will never be able to do it.. na kabhi Aitbaar tha nahi kabhi hoga mujhpar she said wetting her cheeks with her tears tat always pierced his heart. He placed his lips on her cheeks drinking her salty water and you never did understand me Geet as you always had Prem for you leaving me all alone. He placed a last kiss on her forehead jerking her away from his body concentrating on straining his body with his vigorous workout get away Geet .


Where should I go? She questioned him placing her hand on her tummy where should I go with this life inside me Maan making Maan stiff in his place as he registered her words. Boliye Maan.. where should I go with the baby tat is breathing inside me as Maan turned to face her. He was filled with joy and happiness hearing tat his own part was breathing inside his Geet his love. He kneels down touching her tummy mera baby.. is it Geet he asked her trying to confirm his happy heart. He pulled her closer placing kisses over her kurti as he could not hold on to his excitement. He was always bad in expressing and when he would do he would cross all his limits. Geet smiled seeing him showering his love on their love but her heart feared for unknown. She pulled herself back staring at him as he stood on his feet cupping her cheeks Thank you Geet.. thank you so much.



Thanks for hurting yourself Maan she said in return of his thanks making him come out of his happiness as he glared at her in anger This is wat you deserve when you hurt someone Geet aur maine tho.. maine tho ushe and he sealed his lips seeing her eyes shedding tears. He could not say wat he meant as it would destroy wat he had. He had come far and now he could not lose wat he had. He could not lose his Geet and now the baby would assure tat she would stay with him forever as his only his. He pulled her and kissed her hard until he felt satisfied with it.


He walked carrying her downstairs where everyone was sitting. Naina and Dadima worried seeing Maan carrying Geet and ran towards them while Dadima questioned Maan Kya hua ishe.. did she hurt herself again Maan. Maan smiled as he placed Geet on sofa asking her to sit but Naina instantly pushed Maan away and started to check Geet all by herself Kaha tha maine.. why don't you care for yourself Geet. har baar hurt karti rehti hain.. show me now where did you get hurt Naina kept questioning her but stopped when she heard Maan say My Geet is pregnant with my baby Mom. Everything stopped for them as they tried to register wat he said. Naina just kept staring at him while Dadima and Raj at Geet. They could not believe wat they heard when Maan spoke confirming it She is Mom. My Geet is carrying my baby.. and m so happy tat I cant even express Maan said hugging his Mom trying to convey wat he felt. Geet smiled seeing him so happy after ages.


Everyone blessed Geet for giving them the news when Raj saw Maan's hand bleeding. He walked to him holding his hand asking him When did you hurt yourself and why again. Raj looked at Maan getting angry at his strange behavior. Whats wrong with you tat you keep doing this haan.. aakhir baat kya hain.. batate kyu nahi he shouted unable to control his temper seeing his only son destroying himself for no reasons. Its my body and my blood and I can do wat I want Maan answered back with equal anger as he was so happy and his own Dad ruined it by reminding of his wound tat reminded him of his past and walked away leaving all but not before warning Geet Do remember Geet its my baby and something wrong with my baby than you will face it she cried closing her mouth as heart said its ours Maan.. humara baby hain.


Precap: Aitbaar ki Saaza.

Hi all

I know many are confused here but trust me it will not have a sad ending and whether it's a love triangle or not you will have to wait as if I tell than there wont be any surprise. About Prem is he alive or not tat will be revealed later. Maan's behavior you will come to know as I update. Why is he like this. Does Geet love Maan or Prem you will also know it as I update. Wat happened in Past will be revealed. Did Maan kill or is responsible for Prem's death will also be coming up soon. So please have patience.

IMP: I will be shifting Devil's Haunted Love along with Guzaarish to my Blog and those who read it please do follow. I have made it private and you know wat you have to do. I will also give all 18+ content on blog so tat I don't get any problems here as I know when I give 18+ contents its very raw so you will have to read there. Slowly I will shift all my works there as here I have seen how some readers do partiality and m sorry for saying this.. but I can see same readers liking and commenting for others but not for mine so now I will be only loyal to my loyal readers and will give access for them to my blog. And mind it if I find anyone not liking and commenting there to I will remove them as users as being a writer I don't ask much but a like and few words of appreciation tat all readers can do.

Will be also shifting this SS on blog so those who want to read do follow me. I can see the views here increasing but not likes and comments so no more silent readers will get to read my updates and I know m rude but when some cannot appreciate its better tat I shift this story to blog. So this can be my last update for this on IF.

So follow here

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Next update after 175+ likes with 15 pages comments' or you wait till I get my target and whoever wants to comment one word please do not comment here. I would prefer only few if they are sincere as I feel you all insulting the writers hard work by commenting one word or one liner.

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NEXT : PART 3

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first for the first time at ur updates nd i think its my last comment as u shift all ur wrk on blog

superbbb update
so geet loves prem nd maan loves geet
maan is in pain whn geet confess her love toward prem
bt how come geet nd maan married
where the hell is prem?
Nw geet is pregnent with maan's child bt he only says my child my baby
wo kyun geet ko aisi khari-khoti sunata hai

wating for nxt

Edited by shalinimg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrast on new ss Di

Loved the prologue...awesome


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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update aww geet is pregnant
why maan behaved like a possessive jerk ..
waiitng for their past revelation

P> S I send you request on your blog , meh blog name is fairy078 , please accept the request
Edited by --Fairy-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update Di...
Both are in pain again..! 😭
I hate Mana when he hurts himself to take out his nager.. Gadha kahin ka...😡
Felt bad for them.! Geet is preggy..wow..Hope this brings some happiness between them...
Really waiting to know what happened in the past between Maaneet and Prem which shattered everything.!

Waiting for the next one..Update soon.!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it dear
amazing one
oh god ye maan bina
love n hatred
and d warning to geet
short udpate dear bt confusing dear
hope u reveal everyhting soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
but confused with maan's behaviour
geet is pregnant
wht hppnd to prem???
when maan love geet soo much than why he is doing this???
continue soon

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