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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

di kitna bhi padhon kuch samajh nahi aata hai actual mein hua kya tha bt yaa all geet wanted was maan's aitbaar and she loved him only prem ne toh geet ka help kiya knowing that she wanted maan's confession!! samajh toh aaraha hai bt yeh samajh nahi aaya ki yeh prem ki baat!! as to what happened to him!!

i know you wont give a sad ending more than you i know it di 😆


jo mujhe acha nahi laga woh hai maan ka ego sabse bada hai woh thats too much mujhe yeh story destiny ki yaad dilati hai di 😭


His eyes looked upon his bleeding hand as the blood dripped but there was no pain in him as the pain tat he was making love to his wife who loved someone else was killing him

these lines made me feel like what i just cant say that out pata nahi kuch ajeeb laga bohut laga

but yaa yeh wali i can make out kuch haha geet was only maan's and she used prem for aitbaar from maan😭


In their marriage of six whole months she failed to say wat she had to and now she feared to lose the one whom she worshipped as she lost the other whom she confined her most kept secrets of her life.

mujhe GHSP ki yaad aagayi when geet blames maan that he choses to stay away from her physically waha he stays away and asks her kya yeh kaafi nahi hai ki she is MrsMSK and yaha


So you need me only for bed she said making him to stop in his track. His blood boiled hearing her insult his love. His whole body shook as he grabbed her by her hair in anger making her to yelp in pain isn't it enough for you ya phir Prem ki kami mehsoos hoti hain . Maan said gritting his teeth in anger as she looked at him with tears in her eyes should I ask god to send him back for you as your husband cannot satisfy you in bed he said pulling her closer holding her cheeks with one of his hand while the other tightened its hold on her hair.


meri jaan nikal gayi with this para😭



I wish you could ever read beyond my pain Maan, par nahi you will never be able to do it.. na kabhi Aitbaar tha nahi kabhi hoga mujhpar


she clearly told maan how much she loves him indirectly pehle bhi lekin he isnt ready to accept why would he?? his big fat ego😡😡


precap is hell scary di😭


next part kab milega di??




Tu tere question bank tere paas chupa kar rakh

ek ek karke answer milega😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice starting
as it very confusing now to understand that what really happen
they were sooo close friends and then both love geet😕

i am sure it will solve slowly slowly but for now It makes me to think hard what is going on😕




hehe.. i love when my readers think abt wat will happen next... why it is like this
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

Awesome update
Eagerly waiting to know y maan is behaving like this
I guess geet always loved maan
But to confess him she lied that she loves prem:/
Now maan has become so rude
He was saying like that its only his child
N geet doesn't have any right!!
Sent request to ur blog
Plz accept me
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Lets see whom geet loved.. maan or prem...

why is he saying its only his baby.. woh bhi lets see why is so

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

painful update...


geet and prem were playing a game to know maan's reaction towards that ...

and unfortunately maan thought they were actually in love ..

and may be coz of that he is somehow involoved in prem's death/or something like that ...

you might bring prem back 😉

geet must had tried to tell maan abt the truth but maan must had not hear her fully ...so there is some MU ...

geet preg. hmm and maan is thinking too much abt that baby ..

grr 😡

poor geet ... but again what was the need to play ...

waiting for more

cont soon




May be she really loved prem and may not be...

if not than why maan is like this... answers will be given with further updates

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Why do I feel that Geet had always love Maan, and Maan is in big Misunderstanding.

Just to make him feel J and confess his feelings Geet and Prem put on the play that they are in love.
Her outburst shows how much she is holding back and still how much she holds back.
awesome part




May be may be not...

may be there is much more to it

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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago



PART 3


Kaise kahu.. How should I tell him tat wat you meant to me Prem Geet said caressing Prem's photo. She was highly emotional. She was weak and her misery worsened when Maan warned her saying tat it was his baby. Kya yeh baby sirf unka hain Prem...don't I have any right on this baby.. why is tat he does not understand me... Why cant he understand wat I and you shared.. how will I tell me wat you were for me and wat he is. Her tears poured her heart as she tried to pour her pain.


You left me all alone to deal with this... yeh kaisa pyar hain..jaha saath hoke bhi hum saath nahi hain.. Pyar ke liye tho maine apni haddein bhi paar ki na Prem phir why isn't my love with me when I need him.. you promised me na.. than why this she looked at his photo in anger and next she hugged it. Aitbaar se kaha tha.. par mera Aitbaar thooth gaya Prem.. I lost everything now... I lost wat I dreamt for.


She stared as Maan pulled the photo frame away from her. He looked at her with anger and than his eyes turned red seeing the picture as the glass shattered into pieces like his heart. He had come back after calming his anger but when he entered his room he saw his wife talking to one whom he hated and loved the most. He could not bear this truth tat she was still in love with him and the mere thought would get the worst in him. He turned as she said He was your best friend in pain and I hate him to be anywhere near MY BABY he said walking away but stopped with her words Sirf aapka kaise.. its in me so it belongs to me too Maan.. mera bhi hain yeh baby.


Your heart belongs to him he said pointing towards the broken frame do you get.. you belong to him and this he walked towards her touching her flat tummy caressing it with love its only mine.. only mine where I gave him life with all my love.. do you get... with all my love and not pity.. not pity by sleeping with you..but with right.. the right tat my love gave to mark you as mine he looked into her eyes holding her cheeks between his fingers but you slept with me in pity.. pity tat Prem was not there for you so why not satisfy yourself and me.. hain na Geet.


She cried hearing him. His words were much more venomous than any venom tat would kill her right now. She looked at him as her tears wetted his fingers too and this tears.. they are meant to pain me... do you get.. but not anymore Geet .. not anymore and I swear if I see them in your eyes again.. you will see the worst in me.. Pyar karta hoon.. and I know how to take care of you and my baby.. chahiye uske liye I have to vanish each and every memory tat belongs to him. He picked her up calling out to one of the servant to clear the mess of the room as he walked down to get her dinner.


She stared at him as he fed her with all love. She could not believe tat when he loved her so much than why he could not understand her. Her hand on its own reached his face and traced his features surprising him Aap mere Maan ho na she questioned herself more than him. I love you and it's enough to know tat m yours but you are not Geet.. so ab chup raho and let me feed you.. kahi pata chala tat my Baby is hungry because of you than he taunted her making her shed more tears. Why do you speak so harsh Maan.. kya mera Aitbaar kabhi deekha nahi.


Aitbaar tha Geet.. but you broke it.. You shattered my Aitbaar tat I held for you since years he said shutting her mouth for once and all by stuffing it with food. She looked at him with pain trying to say so much but her pain was getting worst day by day. Six months they were married and she failed each time to make him believe her. She wanted to run away from this pain but she failed every time she tried. He carried her to the washroom and changed her to her night dress and laid back on the bed tugging her under the duvet Remember Geet its my baby... apni galathi dubara mat karna... if you ever hurt yourself again.. than I swear you will regret.


Since how long Maan questioned Prem who was taking his seat beside him but having his eyes still on Geet. Maan was angry as Geet refused to him today saying tat she would come with Prem to college. He could not bear tat his Geet would be so rude to him and say tat. He wanted to scream and shout but controlled knowing tat somewhere he was losing his love his Geet. Since when did you come to know Prem tat you love her he questioned Prem again as he saw him smiling to her.


Pata nahi Maan.. or say I loved her since long.. par kabhi realize nahi kiya Prem said facing Maan as Maan burnt in anger hearing his words I mean this trip changed my life Maan.. it was the best trip I ever had in my life..


You mean my absence made you both realize tat you love each other Maan questioned Prem clenching his fist yeah.. aisa laga ki shayad babaji ne hi sab plan kiya ho.. like making you ill and all.. so tat we both can understand our relation better aur dekho we finally said wat we had for each other.. and now I wish to be with hers forever Prem replied back with a wide smile as Maan kept burning in anger and hatred. He could not sit and just walked away leaving Prem and Geet confused. Prem followed Maan as Geet ran behind them trying to know wat went wrong suddenly.


Stop Maan Prem called behind as Maan walked faster with anger and hatred in his eyes. He wanted to burn the whole world but he was helpless. Prem ran faster and pulled him by his hand Wats wrong.. abhi tho sab theek tha na Maan.


Theek Maan's voice was filled with sarcasm sab theek kaha hain Prem.. you know wat.. I was a fool to believe tat she will never betray me.. galathi ki maine. Geet stopped hearing his words Dekho ushe Prem.. can you believe she is my best friend.. tumse pehle meri friend thi na.. bachpan se.. so how come all this..or was it tat I failed to see the budding love between you both Maan said looking straight at Geet.


Maan Pyar, Keh ke nahi hota.. it happens..and we love each other.. its just tat we never felt and you are the first person to know it Maan Prem tried to clear him as Maan gave out an evil smile Tu tho baad mein aaya na Prem.. and you say m the first.. you are wrong Prem.. its you.. you are the first and I can never be it.. do you get.. Maan Singh Khuranna can never be first. He walked closer towards Geet Thanks for the betrayal Geet.. Pyar Mubarak ho.


He tightened his hold around her waist as his past haunted her. He opened his eyes to see her sleeping in his arms. He wiped the lone tear tat was the proof of his pain and fear to lose her. He traced his fingers on her face placing a soft peck on her lips I was never your first Geet.. he was.. only he can be your first and you say it was never.. you betrayed me Geet.. mere Aitbaar ko dhoka diya tumne..and I will never forgive you for it.


A two months passed by and Maan was strict with Geet . His fear was coming in form of his care as Geet cried seeing his pain. She wanted to assure him tat she was there with him but she failed. She cried tat day when he had done wat he said by removing each memory of Prem from Khuranna Mansion. She begged him not to destroy any of their memories but she failed along with his family who were shocked to see him doing it. They knew wat Prem was for Maan and Geet but the sudden change in Maan had left them only with thoughts tat wat was wrong with their children. Geet had a sudden break down making her to faint tat day after Maan's act and the doctor warned him of severe consequences of any stress to her. The doctor made it clear tat she was not only weak but going through severe stress and was affecting her pregnancy and if continued she would have a miscarriage.


She stared at Maan who face was devoid of any expression. Though they were physically close but she would find him away from her. She tried many times to talk to him but he would not even let her to bring Prem's name on her lips and today he was about to leave for an oversea project for about 10 days and for tat he even tried to take her along with him but none of the family agreed and he was now angry but could not cancel his trip. He looked at her through the mirror staring at him Zinda wapas aaunga he said seeing the way she gaped at him. Geet had a sudden fear since last 2 days and she tried to share with him this but he did not listen saying tat it was her mind tat was thinking. She so much wanted to stop him from going but she knew tat he had to go. She just kept staring when he repeated again Kaha na.. itni jaldi azaadi nahi dunga.. you may betray me but I will not betray my love for you .. so will be back in 10 days.


Prem ne bhi yahi kaha tha.. tat he will never leave me she said in a trance only to boil his anger and next second the whole room echoed with the shattering sound of glass. She looked up with a horrified expression as his hand pierced with the mirror cutting through his skin. She yelled taking his name as she saw blood dripping from his hand Khush ho ab. She stopped as his words reached her ears again Akhir kab tak tumara pehle pyar humare beech mein aayega... will you ever stop bringing him between us. How long you will pierce my heart with his name... kya galathi thi meri tat mere Aitbaar ko tum dono ne thodh diya.. was I at fault tat I felt tat I owned you and don't require to say wat I feel for you.. tat you both shared love with each other.. kahi mere peeth peeche soye tho nahi na Geet.. tat you cant forget him for even a second.


His words numbed her as she stared him with pain and anger. She wanted to scream but her throat refused to even let her do as his words continued to shatter her further Answer me Geet.. did you both sleep with each other tat you cant stop thinking about him when you are carrying my baby.. 8 months of marriage Geet.. can you tell me he walked closer grabbing her by her shoulder 8 months.. for how many times did you take my name.. jawab do.. can you count.. no na.. but I can Geet.. I can.. Pyar ki itni badi saaza di hain tumne tat I feel like a culprit making love to someone who does not love me.. do you get.. m a criminal from all sides.. gunnah karta aaya hoon main. He shook her as she stared at him with pain Do you get.. a sick criminal who is f****** his best friend's lover.. to be his best friends wife...Prem ki hone wali biwi ke saath sotha hoon main.


Nahi thi main she jerked his hands away from her body holding his collar Do you get.. I was never his.. nahi thi main uski hone wali biwi ..she shook him by collar Aitbaar,. Wat do you know about Aitbaar Maan Singh Khuranna.. you say you felt tat you owned me.. kya gudiya thi main.. was I a doll for you tat I would see you getting tagged with girls all over and I keep quite..Do you think tat if I ever loved Prem I would sleep with you on our wedding night.. Kya kaha tha aapne.. ush raat.. tat you love me.. you cant stay without me and want me for all yourself.. par meri baat suni thi aapne ush raat.. sunni thi tat Geet Handa only loved Maan Singh Khuranna.. did you ever give me a chance to explain wat I had to say.. nahi.. but you always shut me with your anger when I took Prem's name.. boliye.. Aitbaar ka meaning jaathe hain aap she jerked him towards her as she felt a sharp pain in her lower abdomen.


Aitbaar.. Aitbaar woh tha jo mujhe tum par tha.. but you did not have.. tats why in my absence you fell for tat Prem... Aur shaadi wale raat.. you wanted me to soothe you for losing your love.. so you came closer.. do you get.. you wanted someone to touch your body and you got me when I said I loved you..Yaad hain.. wat I had said Geet.. tat I can never be your first and you proved me by getting ready to marry Prem.. engagement hui thi na tum dono ki..and you speak about Aitbaar.. dhoka diya tum dono ne mujhe.. Prem confessed it to me.. do you get.. Maan said getting hyper looking straight in her eyes Answer me Geet.. who broke whose Aitbaar.. who Geet.


Aitbaar tha mere pyar pe isliye khel baithi apne hi pyar se Maan.. I played with my own love and now I get this.. I get this for having Aitbaar on my love.. do you get.. Prem ko Aitbaar tha mere Aitbaar par. But I lost it.. I lost tat you failed to see the love I had for my Maan.. nahi jaan paayi ki yahi Aitbaar mujhe dhoka dega.. tat I would drag Prem in all this.. I would force him to get tied up with me for my family honour.. nahi socah ki jis Maan par Aitbaar tha he would let his Geet go.. think tat his Geet loved someone else.. haar gayi main Maan.. mere Aitbaar haar gaya.. do you get she said holding him again by his collar as she closed her eyes in pain of losing her baby feeling the liquid touching her inner thighs and darkness covering her life Kho diya humne Maan.. kho diya apne pyar ko as she fell down on his knees shattering Maan seeing her white salwaar kameez turning red



Precap: None.

I know many want to kill me for this update.. but trust me.. this was very much important. Don't think tat this will be leading to separation or something like tat but this is needed for strengthening their love and marriage where Maan will realize her words and her love tat he missed. And how this will be you will have to wait.

A reader had asked me wat Aitbaar means.. than its trust and faith dear and here all 3 had Aitbaar on each other tat they would win but they only lost.

This update is for Harika and Abi who were behind me for it.. Specially Harika who troubled me on my facebook timeline for the update and now I know she wants to kill me for this update and m ready for it darling.

Next update will only be after 175+ likes with 15 pages of comments.

Do like and Comment.


NEXT: PART 4

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AITBAAR!! a word that bonds two loving people!! we feel that it isnt necessary to express our feelings many times bt yes we need to coz it makes the other person to feel special and also understand what place they have in our heart!!

well when maan is being linked up with other woman geet would obviously go possessive for him and thats the reason she wanted him to come out with the feelings he has on her, so she used prem for the confession of maan

maan loved geet so much that he never felt the necessity to express his feelings ... idiot bhook lagti hai toh maa ko bhi batana padta hai khana dene ke liye phir mehbooba kya cheez hai?? and its coz of the confession many fail in relationships ... ullu da patta, gadha, idiot, stupid agar prem ko geet ke saath bardaash nahi kar sake toh doesnt the same applies to geet?? how would she tolerate maan's name with other women??

i wont blame maan fully coz geet did cross her limits and get engaged to prem just for the confession of maan and broke him to an extent that he refused to believe that geet had always loved him ... the loved one would often get a feeling that if at all the lover truly loved the one latter would never ever take such a step!! Geet used prem here and i was right!!

coming to maaneet!! both of them did mistakes but now things cant go normal, they have damaged to an extent that they need to start their relation with an understanding

di i had always trusted you in terms of story never would you give a sad ending😆

the words maan used yes they did boil me and it took me a night to calm down and comment how could he think she might had a physcial relation with prem?? khota kahika!!


and now the loss they had i wonder how maaneet would cope up?? mostly maan he is anyway blaming geet for all that had happened now the baby's loss will that lead to MU??

i cant even ask you for an update with the way u are giving updates di trust me i truly wanna ask you for one bt i just cant please di try giving if u can

precap:😭 kamse kam soch bhi nahi sakti main 😭


peej update!!
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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READ PART 1 DI

though there's is a kind of love triangle but me couldnt help to read more..
me didnt like prem well u knew how can i well he was with geet and her love interest
i love present than past in this update..

but the cancept is damn good..and the name aitbaar..
congratulations for this fabulous ss

a treat to readers😃
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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part 2

filled with pain , anger passion and something that i dont know if its geet's repentence for not reciprocating maan's love or its maan's guilt

geet is expecting this will be turning point in maaneet's life

past was beautiful...

cont soon
will comment for part 3 when i will read
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago

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