The Light Of Love! Promo chapter 3: page 15

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Hi everyone, I'm Anicha!
Some of you may know me, but a lot of you don't. I have been a silent reader for a long time, but I eventually started to comment on posts and started making some friends here!
Well, now I'm having my summer holiday, so hence thought about starting a FF, as I have a mind with lots of imaginations😆
But I'll warn you, my writing isn't that good. It takes a lot of time to put down on paper what my mind is throwing at me, but I've made an attempt and I truly hope you guys like it!😳

Here are the charactersketches and the prologue!
Chapter one will be updated ASAP, maybe even tomorrow if I get encouraged, but for that will have to wait for the respons of you guys😊


Charactersketch:

Udayveer Singh:
A very handsome, good-looking and rich 26 years old guy. He lives with his parents, younger sister and cousin. He's the dream of each and every girl, and he makes full use of his good looks to get the attention of woman. He doesn't believe in love, mainly because he never experienced it nor has he ever seen people madly in love. His parents aren't that close with each other, love certainly doesn't exist between them. He loves his youger sister and is good friends with his cousin.

Tina Agarwal:
A pretty girl in her early twenties, who got pregnant with the child of the Udayveer. Although Udayveer doesn't love her, he takes the responsibilities of her and their child. She shows to love Uday alot, but has her own plans and meanings regarding being with Udayveer.

Manyata Kumari:
A beautiful young lady, 22 years old, lives with her parents and her older sister. Eventhough she loves them alot, Manyata can be very stubborn and selfish at times.
She is engaged to Akash Verma, but doesn't really love him.
Manyata is from a middleclass family.

Akash Verma:
Fiance of Manyata, loves her alot and would do anything for her. Yet they always end up fighting over the smallest things. His love for Manyata has reached a level of madness. But he has a feeling, he doesn't mean as much to her as she means to him.

Jainandini Kumari:
Older sister of Manyata. She's very kind and caring. Loves her parents and sister alot. She married to Jagat and has a 3 months old baby boy.

Jagat Rathore:
A selfish, ruthless and dispiteous man. He's married to Jainandini but doesn't love her nor cares for her. He's constantly enjoying himself with other woman.

Komal Kumari:
Mother of Manyata and Jainandini. Loves her two daughters alot. Her relationship with her husband isn't that good. They always have fights.

Brijraj Kumari:
Father of Manyata and Jainandini. He is the most selfish and heartless man in the whole world. Pretends to love his family alot, but the main priority for him is money. He CAN and WILL do ANYTHING for money.

Unnati Singh:
Younger sister of Udayveer. Loves her brother alot. Has never loved someone, but once she falls in love, it will be a dangerous kind of love.

Griraj Singh:
Father of Udayveer and Unnati. A caring and understanding man. Loves his children very much. He's very different fom his wife.

Anamika Singh:
Mother of Udayveer and Unnati. Loves her childeren alot and can do anything for them. But once she wants something, them nothing and no one can come in her way. Always takes the lead and tries to control things, to be the way she wants it to be. This can cause her and her family, specially Udayveer, a lot of pain. Even if she doesn't mean to hurt them.

Madhu:
Aunt of Manyata and Jainandini, sister of Komal. She is very close with her nieces, specially Manyata and helps her alot. She works as a maid at the house of Singh Family.

Armaan Singh:
Cousin of Udayveer and Unnati. His father is the brother of Griraj. He's very close with Udayveer as they're partners in bussines. He's in love with Veena.

Veena Shukla:
A very beautiful lady. Good friend of Armaan and madly in love with Udayveer, but has never dared to come out for her love. She's an innocent soul, but as they say: if love isn't madness, it's not love. Veena and can go to any extent to prove her love to be madness.






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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue:

Servant: Sir, aapke liya phone
He gave the phone to a tall man, who was standing in the garden with a glass of wine in his hands. Udayveer looked behind, put his glass on a table near him and took the phone.
Uday: who is it?
Servant: Tina mam
Taking a deep breath, he answered the call
Uday: yes Tina, what is it
Tina: ek khush kabri hai tumhare liya, tumhara beta aara hai ha is duniya mein
She said with a heavy and sarcastic voice
Uday: theek hai, tum maa ke saath hospital jau, hum baad mein aajayenge
Tina: is that how you should behave with the mother of your child, Udayveer Singh
came an angry reply from the other side
Tina: Neither are you marrying me nor paying any attention to me
Uday: Tina, I said go to the hospital with my mother, I'm coming later
Tina: Untill you don't say, you're marrying me, I won't get out of this room!
With that she cut the call
Uday: Tina! Tina!
He stared at the phone for a while, his temper starting to rise.
Edited by MsAnicha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting
wowww
really good
cs kafi hai
and sabi ke sabi is good
woww
superb
👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Anicha, I'm so glad that u took my advice and started writing. The c/S is great. I don't like TINA😡 (for obvious reasons😆).
But I have a feeling that her child , might not be Uday's and she just manipulating him with lies pertaining to the paternity ... (WISHFUL THINKING😳).
Good luck for your FF 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: serat

intresting

wowww
really good
cs kafi hai
and sabi ke sabi is good
woww
superb
👍🏼


Thank you so much!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Anicha, Hi NaviI'm so glad that u took my advice and started writing.Was getting bored staying home al day, doing nothing😆 The c/S is great. I don't like TINA😡 (for obvious reasons😆). Don't worry, she will be gone soon!


But I have a feeling that her child , might not be Uday's and she just manipulating him with lies pertaining to the paternity ... (WISHFUL THINKING😳).Hmmm... interesting🤔 we will see
Good luck for your FF 🤗 .Thank you!🤗


Thanks for the support Navi!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsAnicha


Thanks for the support Navi! Don't mention it Dear😃.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heya anicha..!!
howz you deary
watsp buddy??
i m dreamming u really write ff??😲😲
now come you ur update😉😉
u r writter OMG yeah u r the awsome writter i can't belive...OMG u writtern update was fabulous u know wat u r very good writter tina awee...uday is married?? i m little confuse uday have a wife n soon baby omg den where is manyata update soon i m eagerly waiting ur concept is 2 good u pure writter loved it character sketch also nycc majnu also included in this story😡😡but dont worry hero also here my ashu loved ur concept thinking n tina so much angry n rude uday entry is too awsome loved ur story update soon pm me 4 sure pls.
thank you 4 the inforiming
this is sach a awsome update
really loved it
can't wait more update very fast pls
love you...
keep it up
best of luck 4 ur new n first ff
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

heya anicha..!!
howz you deary
watsp buddy??
i m dreamming u really write ff??😲😲
now come you ur update😉😉
u r writter OMG yeah u r the awsome writter i can't belive...OMG u writtern update was fabulous u know wat u r very good writter tina awee...uday is married?? i m little confuse uday have a wife n soon baby omg den where is manyata update soon i m eagerly waiting ur concept is 2 good u pure writter loved it character sketch also nycc majnu also included in this story😡😡but dont worry hero also here my ashu loved ur concept thinking n tina so much angry n rude uday entry is too awsome loved ur story update soon pm me 4 sure pls.
thank you 4 the inforiming
this is sach a awsome update
really loved it
can't wait more update very fast pls
love you...
keep it up
best of luck 4 ur new n first ff
👏



Thank you Ayesha for such a encouraging and sweet comment!
No, Uday is not married to Tina, she is just pregnant with 'his' child.
And yes Akash is also included, we need some drama haha!

Love you more Ayesha

Edited by MsAnicha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsAnicha



Thank you Ayesha for such a encouraging and sweet comment!
No, Uday is not married to Tina, she is just pregnant with 'his' child.
And yes Akash is also included, we need some drama haha!

Love you more Ayesha

ur welcome but really no need thanks in firends u forget the firendship rule again ufff learned this rule again no thanks no sorry😉😉
ohooo ur mean wo aise hi not married or maa ban gayi wowu uday not bad han nai tu naughty hogaya ho tumhari jhali princess ke begair
story seems like intresting so much
han jaha akash kamina bitch waha drama tu hoga hi

love you so much update soon😉😉

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