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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I just read last three updates in a row!!
Amazing!!
I loved the way everything turned out!! Even I loved how Asad had changed!! :)


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


thanks a lot dear...



You welcome

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-16

It was their Jashan-E-sughat next day and Asad gifted zoya a beautiful Saree……

Zoya accepted with a smile but later on she was fighting with Asad outside in yard.…

Asad, you know, I don't like sarees..

But I love to see you in sarees…. Now go to home and change, I want to see you in this saree…… now……

If I don't? zoya said ….

Then I will come and make you change…… asad said naughtily placing a kiss on her neck.……

Agar tumhara yahi haal rha na, to soon we will be three from two. Zoya sad shyly…

That's what I want dear……… …….Asad said holding her from waist and making a way towards her stomach…zoya too held her hands…

You are mad Asad…. Abhi nikah bhi nahi huya, aur..…..main to hamesha sochti thi, Mr. Khan jasa shrif to koi hoga hi nahi is duniya mein. I didn't know your true face….

Kyon, wish of a baby form my would be wife is naughtiness? I need a baby girl within one year…

Baby girl? Zoya repeated….

Yes….. a baby girl. Just like you……I have thought a name for her too…..…Arshiya…

Arshiya? Zoya asked with a a smile..…

And I want to give her all the happiness of world…… that I could not give to Nazma…… suddenly he became serious……

Zoya turned back and looked towards him….. she could see tears in his eyes……… she cupped his face in her hand and wiped his tears with her lips…..

You know zoya. I used to take nazma on bicycle on school, when my step siblings used to come in big chuffer driven cars… then I had decided. I will be so rich that I will give everything to my sweet sister that she deserved in her life…….. had to work a lot for that and when the time came. Nazma had almost killed all her desires……. But it was you who made her desires alive again…….. that's why when she asked for fashion show….. I agreed…. That I could fulfill atleast one of her wishes……

We will fulfill every wish of phuphi and nazma , Asad……. Don't worry about that……..zoya said with smile….. .

Ya I know. You are with them, so they will need a lot now…….. Asad chided her……..

Ab agar tum dono ki itni door ki future planning complete ho gyi ho to let me tell you, all are waiting for you….tanveer said from behind smiling at them……

Next day was Sangeet and then was Mehndi. But there was no moment when Asad and Zoya could leave each other…….. Dilshad was too happy on seeing their happiness and was just praying to Allah to keep them so for all the life….

Asad, aj tum zoya se nahi miloge, tomorrow is you wedding and now onwards you can't meet zoya….. Dilshad said…. And it applies on both of you……… so you will not be visiting zoya tonight……… ok? Dilshad said with smile……

Ammi? Asad was surprised….. she knows…….

Ammi hun tumhari. Know you very well………. Aur zoya has mad emy son a thief, locks his room from inside, leave through indows and even goes to her through windows……….. ye to mera Asad nahi tha? She made a puppy face., ane se pehle hi bahu ne apna jaadu chala diya…..dilshad said laughing… To which zoya left the place blushing…

It was night, when zoya heard knock on window…….

Zoya, open the window…

Asad? No you can't come today……..

Ammi had stopped us to see each other but we can talk na? Asad said…

Uummm… ok, wait for five minutes… zoya said……..

I will open the window, come and go on other side of curtain….. she said to Asad…..

Curtain? Asad was surprised…

You will understand. She said while opening the window…

As he entered, he got it… She had removed curtain from the door and hanged it in between the room parting the room into two parts…

Wow….Kafi Intelligent hai meri Biwi……..Asad smirked…..

That's what zoya farukhi is Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. She spoke proudly……. Now we can be together as well as apart…… she said from other side of curtain……. You know Asad, I was dying without you…… she said with a sad voice……

Hey its just tonight…….. from tomorrow, we will be together forever…….. he said to cheer her up………by the way jaan, what do you need for Muh Dikhayi? Asad asked……

Allah Miyanm ye to main bhol hi gyi thi…………. Mujhe to gift bhi lena ha apse….will you give me whatever I wish?

Anything for you jaan…… Asad said……..

Mujhe chaand chahiye………. Suddenly zoya said…….

What?Asad was shocked…….

Ya, I need Moon Asad and you promised, now you can't back off……. If you want to see me after wedding, bring moon…… she said smiling………

Zoya tum pagal ho……. Asad said in irritation……….

Zoya held his hand in the curtains……… Asad, I got you, now I need nothing……….i love you Asad……… nothing else………

I love you too zoya………..he said while pressing her hands…….

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------It was their wedding day and zoya was getting ready……….. when appi came…..

Zoya, ready ?

Yes appi………..

Show me, hows my sweetheart looking? She had tears in eyes……… pta ha zoya, yo were just five when you came in our lives aur aaj itni badi ho gyi? Never knew how twenty years passed? hiow will we live without you?

Zoya hugged her appi……… appi, you are at my ammi's place always. It is only y, due to whom I am still happy and I am what I am . I laways thanks god for sending you and jij in my life. Otherwise I would be………..

Both the girls were crying when her jiju came……

B tum dono rona band karo ad lets go out zeenat, guest are arriving……..

Zoya, apnea sad miyan se pucho to when will he reach.. zeenat teased zoya……….

Hey,…… ready? Suddenly she got call from Asad…..

Uumm.. ya just waiting for you to come……. Zoya replied with smile….

I am not coming. Suddenly Asad said……..

What? Zoya almost cried……..

Zoya…….. I was just joking….. Asad tried to cool her down but zoya had already started sobbing……

Asad I had already warned you never use such words………

I am sorry zoya, we are about to leave. Just ten minutes more. Ok? Now stop crying………. Hey. I love you……..

I Love you too Asad…. And she cut the call……

Uhun uhun………. Ab itni to sabr kar lo zoya………..Zeenat smiled from behind……..

Appi. Zoya irritated……….

To? When will they reach?

They are on the way.zoya said shyly………

Aj to hmari zoya shrma bhi rhi hai? Appi again teased her…….. Suddenly she became emotional… Meri bachi ki khushion ko kisi kin ajar na lage. And both hugged again……….

Ok. You stay here, I go outside and tell anwar…….saying zeenat left….

When Zoya's phone rang again. It was Asad……

As she picked the phone. She was shocked………

Appi. Zoya screaming weeping badly………

Kya huya zoya? They were really worried………..

Zoya? Anwar and Zeenat came running………

Appi……. Asad……….. Zoya said crying…and she fell unconscious……all relatives had gathered in the room…

Zoya…… appi tried to wake her up… when anwar saw phone n her hand…… he checked phone , last call was from Asad. He called back…….

Asad………

Ji ap kaun? A person asked from otherside…….

This si Asad's phone, who are you? Anwar was worried……..

Sir, accident has occurred on highway……… This is phone from one person of the car……I just dialed last called number, it was yours… there was one driver, one man and three ladies in the car, all are rushed to city hospital………. Pleas reach there…

Anwar was shocked on listening…….. Asad's car had met with an accident……

Till then zoya had also gained consciousness……. They all rushed to hospital………

Anwar went to doctor and enquired about them……….Mr. Anwar, It was a major clash of car with truck…Driver was already dead when brought here…..three ladies, who were sitting on backseat are almost safe, they had minor injuries and are being treated…….

And Asad….. I mean the man in the car? Anwar asked…..

He has got major injuries being on front seat.., is being treated. I can't say anything till he gains consciousness…… Doctor saod while leaving…….. zeenat was trying to console zoya who was weeing badly….. Anwar asked them to check for the ladies, they went to them…

Zoya. Dilshad hugged zoya and both cried to their heart……..

We were on the way when suddenly a truck collided with car and………. Dilshad broke down…… Nazma and Tanveer to were weeping badly, when dilshad asked anwar about asad…….

Appi….. he is still unconscious……. All anwar said………… and left place leaving all ladies crying,

Five hours had passed when doctor came from Operation Theater, all were praying in the prayer room continuously…….

When operation completed and doctor cam outside operation theatre.

Doctor, how is he……..Asked anwar with courage………

He is out of danger now but I am sorry to say Mr. Anwar…………… Doctor said with a sadness on his face……..

So sad enough? but what to do? who likes stories without twista and turns? all juties , chappals are accepatble...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg

Omg

Omg

Oh no

Pata nahi kya hua hai

Hope its not memory loss

Plzzz

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon
cant express my views
plzzz pm me for the next part
jeenia123 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Omg

Omg

Omg

Oh no

Pata nahi kya hua hai

Hope its not memory loss

Plzzz

Update soon


Ok.. it will not be a memory loss...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

continue soon

cant express my views
plzzz pm me for the next part


tomorrow , i will not be able to update...so wait till Thursday sweetheart...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


Ok.. it will not be a memory loss...



Yipee

Yipeee

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no!! 😡 After such a great episode on TV, you broke my heart with the twist!! Poor Asad! Poor Zoya. What next? Memory loss?
Well you gave us a good Tanveer, so I guess we have to compromise with this twist!! 😆 Bring it on!! We are fortified by the positivity, so hope nothing major in store for us.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: webuser7

Oh no!! 😡 After such a great episode on TV, you broke my heart with the twist!! Poor Asad! Poor Zoya. What next? Memory loss?

Well you gave us a good Tanveer, so I guess we have to compromise with this twist!! 😆 Bring it on!! We are fortified by the positivity, so hope nothing major in store for us.


ya twists are always necessary to keep the story going... but not necessarily all the twists are negative... these may be positive too. may be you get something different to read...so i will just say please wait and read next part...one thing i assure, i will not write something just fiction, whatever , i will write, i will write on proper medical grounds... i always prefer to write everything with proper research... it may be anything.. on the problem of Asad, on their marriage or anything else...

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