MANVEER FF/Chahun Mai Ya Na update chapter 12 pg 93 (new update) - Page 54

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice...

AWESOME updates❤️
kamini update soon🤗

promo is really good and loved j and manyata convo that was the best part... hmmm like ur entry in this story awesome really cant wait for the update so please update soon and thanks for the pm 

i hate why u didin't updated waiting for it haan nahi toh
nd plz plz update update fast
now i'll talk with u only when u update otherwise no talking nd commenting :-(

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

i hate why u didin't updated waiting for it haan nahi toh
nd plz plz update update fast
now i'll talk with u only when u update otherwise no talking nd commenting :-(

hey! read all the parts in one go
its superb, loved it to the core
please update soon

Edited by priyash.. - 10 years ago

Edited by priyash.. - 10 years ago

CHAPTER 9 25 LIKES 

HEY GUYZ WATZ UP I M BACK WID CHAPTER 10 PLZ FORGIVE ME FOR MY GRAMMITICAL MISTAKE N DO COMMENTS N LIKE ALSO SO HERE CHAPTER 10 READ N ENJOY

Chahu mai ya na

CHAPTER 10

J luk at her wid a great shock '. !!!

Suddenly uday enter manyta's rum  he luk at j '

smrick appeared on uday face

J: ye larki humari bhen kese ho sakti hai !!

Uday: ab tho ye hi tumhari bhen hai !!!

J shout: OH GOD'mathlab ab kisi ko bhi kahi se bhi utha kar ye log kisi ko bhi humari bhen bna denge !!!

Uhhu one voice come

Uday n j luk at her !!

Manyta slowly slowly open her eyez she luk at front two peoples were standing but she can not understand who is them ? they both luk blaurd

Manyta: where I m ?

J:in hell !!!

Manyta: wat ?

Uday:oh comon j ye tumhari badi bhen ab tho ye sab kuch inka hi hai  is mhel ki har ek chiz par manyta ka hak hai or hum pe bhi tumhara nhi !!!

J luk at uday wid angrey luk !!!

Uday go manyta side manyta luk at him wid confusing luk uday take a glass of water n he gave her she take it n drink it uday luk at her hair who cover her face he put his hand on her chickes suddenly manyta luk at him they both in eyecontact 

 

he tag her hair back side of ears uday put his hand on her lips manyta close her eyez she feel it uday didn't control him self he want to suck her lips n he want to feel her !!! but unfortunatly somebody watching them  with a great jalousy yes j was burning in jalousy !!!

J:DISCUSTING ptha nhi ye larki kab se yha pe hai ithni gandi smell aa rhi hai hum is larki ko ek min bhi is kamre mai bardash  nhi kar sakte or sab humse expect kar hai ki hum ise apni bhen mange !!!!

Manyta luk at j wid anger !!!

J try to go out side

Suddenly one voice come !!!

O NAKCHADI RAJKUMARI RUK !!!

J LUK AT MANYTA !!!

Manyta: agar tujhe meri shakal nhi achi lagti na tho ek khushkhabri sun le mujhe bhi teri shakal dekhne ka koi shock nhi hai !!!

J: u?

Manyta:phele mujhe ye btha mai yha kese aai badh mai apna introduction diyo !!!

J: luk bitch!!!

Manyta: luk miss dumb ass '. Just tell me wat I m doing here ?

Suddenly rahul unnati vb come !!!

Rahul: wow do jungli billiyo ki ladai or mujhe kisi ne bulaya bhi nhi uday its not fair yr !!!

Uday: hum nhi jante the ithni jaldi ladai shuru ho jayegi chal ab maze le le !!!

Rahul :ha chal sath milke lete hai !!!

Unnati: dada rahul ye koi mazak karne ka time nhi hai !!!

Vb: hum mazak thodna kar rhe hai unnati bhai hum tho maze le rhe hai !!!

Manyta:oh hello MAI YHA KESE AAI ' ?

Suddenly manyta rember that uday gave her a juice n she was try to stood up but she was faint

Manyta:  TUM ? NOW I UNDERSTAND YE SARA PLAN Tumhara hai tumne mujhe vo juice pilaya jiski wajh se mai faint ho gayi she pull his caller with full force luk mr mai tumhe jaan se maar dungi tum nhi jante but mai apne skul mai tai kown do ki chapmion rhe chuki hu !!! haa nhi tho !!!

Uday pull her weast wid full force they both r really close even air couln't pass there ' !!!

Udayluk at her eyez manyta luk at him wid shock

Uday: really ?

Manyta: yes !!!

Uday: fir tho bhoth maza ayega ' !! kyu ki tum nhi janti mai sword fighter hu !!!

Manyta murmmered: mar gayi !!!

Uday: kya ? humne sunna nhi !!!

Manyta: (cutly say) sachii!!!

Uday: muchii!!!

Rahul try to control his laugh !!!

Manyta: chodo mai apne brabar walo se ladti hu tum mere brabar ke nhi ho !!

Manyta leave his shirt !!! n pull him back side !!!

Manyta luk at j

Manyta: or tum chudailo devdta MAINE TUMHARI DRESS PAR WINE KYA GIRADI OR DO WORDS SHARFAT KE KYA BOL LIYE TUM THO MERE PICHE PADH GAYI TUM JESI CHUDAIL MAINE APNI PURI LIFE MAI NHI DEKHI JAB TUM MAKEUP KARTI HO NA THO EK THI DAYAN KI DAYAN LAGTI HO '. HAA NHI THO ..!!!

Uday n rahul try to control there laughter !!!

Vb n unnati shock to see her behaviour !!!

Suddenly

DS KOMAL MENKA GRIJ BRIJ N DR SHAB COME !!

DS: KYA HO RHA HAI YHA PE ? ithna shor kyu mcha rhe ho !!!

J:OH GOD AAP HUMARE SATH YE KYA GAME KHEL RHE JAB DEKHO IS LADKI KO HUMARE SAMNE LE ATE HAI !!!

Manyta:TUNE HI KUCH PAP KIYE HONGE OR TERE BHGHWAN JI KI TASION M MAI FAS GAYI !!!

Brij: aap dono ladna band kargi !!!

They both shout together

NHI !!!

J:DAD YE HUMARI BHEN NHI HO SAKTI !!!

Manyta:TUM JESI PARANORMAL ACITIVITY KI BHOOTHNI KI BHEN BNNA BHI KON CHATA HAI !!!

J:OH ACHA MAI PARANORMAL ACTIVITY KI BHOOTHNI !!!

Manyta: decidePUCH RHI HAI BTHA RHI HAI ?

Uday n rahul brust out laugh' !!!

Unnati n vb control there laughter

J:HUM MAR JAYEGE '!!!

Manyta:CHALO DUNIYA SE EK BOJH KAM HUI KAB MARNE JA RHI HAI ? KAL YA PARSO?'

J:HUMARI PURI BATH SUNLO !!!

Manyta:YEHI KAAM NHI RHE GAYA OR BHI KAAM HOTE HAI !!!

J:HUM MAR JAYEGE PAR TUMHE APNI BHEN KABHI NHI MANEGE !!!

Manyta:THANKYEW CHALO BHGWAN NE MERI SUN LI !!!

J: go to hell

Manyata:same to u !!!

j:go out side wid anger !!!

 

 

''''''''''''..XXX''''''''XXX'''''''..

Ds:Manyta hume apse bath karni hai !!

Manyta: mai manyta nhi hu ' !!!

Ds: beta aap hi manyta hai ' !!!

Manyta: plz baar baar mujhe is naam se mat bulaiye !!! mai aarohi hu manyta nhi ' !!!

 

Ds: thik hai tho apka DNA ' TEST HOGA if agar apka test positve aya tho aap humse bhes nhi karegi ' !!

Manyta: thik hai !!!! or agar nagative aya tho aap mujhe mere ghar wapis chod denge

Ds: thik hai !!!

Continue'..

Sorry guyz ' ithna hi likh pai so plz don't abuse me sorry 😳😳 !!!

 

Kritz n pari 

 

 

Edited by priyash.. - 10 years ago