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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice promo yaarr biw manvi wants virats intention cool yaaarr update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
link to the previous chapter
CHAPTER 32
at night
manvi was unable to sleep because her thought process was fixed on one thought only... rather we can say on one person and that was virat. manvi knew that virat has given up on her infact he has set her free but something was missing. manvi wanted to know what made virat change his decision overnight and why is he determined to unite her with viren. was something going on his mind...?? was it an another game taht virat was playing with her...?? will he play his part after gaining her confidence...?? what is he upto...??
manvi : i need to clear this air of confusion... so i should do it as soon as possible... i should virat... i should call hi and confront him...
manvi called virat and surprising he didnt pick the call and the next time manvi called him, the same happened and the thrid time she called him, his mobile was switched off...
manvi : ohh so u really want to play a game with me virat... so want to ignore me so that i get confuse and follow you in order to know the reason of you ignoring me suddenly... and here i was thinking that you changed... nooo... you are playing on the funda of yours " ke ladki se jitna door bhagoge wo utna hi tumhari piche ayegi..."
scene shifts
virat : what do u want from me manvi...??? ab kya chahti hoo...??? now when i am trying to distance myself from you and your life, why are you suddenly so interested... why do u want to pull me towards yourself...?? i know what were u upto today... you just wanted to have my attention today... and when u didnt get it, you were pissed off... no... no.. no... you were disturbed and worried... you are just impossible... and now at this point of time you are calling me and for what really god knows... now concentrate on your life damn it... let me be... dont think about me manvi... learn to ignore me as if i dont even exist.
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manvi : try to forget you... i have forgiven you long back... i was only concerned about you because at a time we shared a close relation. i just wanted you to share your feelings and pain with me but i think i went weak on seeing this new side of yours... and in this whole fiasco, i ignored viren for the first timr ever... i did this mistake of sidelining viren... the man who brought me from the darkness of life... the man who taught me how to smile again... the man who taught me that i was worth of having another chance in life... the man who made me believe that i do deserve a gem like him... i am sorry viren... i am really sorry... it was a phase which took me over jaan... i love you viren... nothing could change my feelings towards you...
manvi called up viren...
viren : Din raat sochta hu tujhe itna pyaar main du
Jo kabhi utar na paaye tujhe wo khumar main du
manvi giggled and replied : Mujhe aisa tu kuch mila hai jaise ke koi dua hai
Tujhpe koi aanch aaye to main khud ko bhi jalaalu
viren : wow 10 /10... tumhein kitna gaane aate hain yaar...???
manvi : khatta ho gayi mujhse...
kaha kuch nahi tumse...
viren : tum jo aaye jindagi mein baat ban gayi
ishq majhab, ishq meri jaat ban gayi
manvi : i was not singing a song... i wanted to apologise...
viren : so i also wasnt singing a song... i told you that ionly you matter to me... nothing else and i can never be angry on you...
manvi : but really... today in the temple i behaved weirdly with you... i didnt even talk properly to you...
viren : its okk manvi... i was also preoccupied with something going on in my brain... actually i was worried about virat... he is behaving strangely from today morning... he disappeared in the morning and when he came back, he seemed so lost in himself...
manvi : something must be wrong with him... you should try n talk to him...
viren : i tried but he acts as if nothing ever happened... i am worried about virat manvi... i have never seen him like this... he has always been like an open book to me but these days... these days i fail to read whatever is written in his eyes... and i feel really helpless manvi... i keep on thinking what has distanced me from my brother so much...
manvi : viren please dont get disheartened... may be there isnt nothing wrong with the relation you n virat share... he will surely tell you his problem... or may be he doesnt want to make you worry about him... cmon we are getting married, so may be virat wants to live these moments without any tension in your mind.
viren : manvi lawyer main hoon ya tum... it seems as if u are defending virat...
manvi : kya...??? nahi nahi... main kyun.. woh main...
viren : its okk manna...
manvi : viren i wasnt defending him... trust me...
viren : hehe... i was kidding... tum theek ho na manna...???
manvi : hmm...
viren : toh so jao madam... kal sangeet hai na... i dont want my princess to have dark circles... kal toh tumhein sab se beautiful dikhna hai...
manvi : okk... goodnight...
viren : goodnight.. love you...
manvi : love you too...
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please see the post just below... help me dcyd the upcoming track...
sorry for short update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update was superb
i really wish manvi to repent...i badly want that track
plzzz naina
virat had his part
now i want manvi to go thru dis...
continue soon
Edited by nahaananya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

**** IMPORTANT ****

i am really confused guys... i was writing the update and i realised that i have too many plots planned in my mind... so i want to know from you all what u all prefer... tell me guys what would you want to see in the coming updates... here are your options and all four will lead to virman at the end except the last one...

1. the most simplest one : make manvi realise her love and go back to virat. virman reunion followed by a happily married life awaiting them...

2. drag this pain n separation phase... this phase will have manvi viren together... their romantic moments... virat all scattered and trying to move on while manvi helps him in doing so...

3. get virman married and leave them to fight with each other and resolve their issues. this part will have viren in a different shade...

4. manvi viren getting married n come back of badass virat...

here are your options... choose fast... so that i can continue with the story further...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
I loved 3 rd one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ready to read sad updates bt not Viren Manvi romance nd marriage.. its a scared bond just cant digest dat fact.. nice update.. continue soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
chotu sa but pyaara sa update specially manvir part bahot cute and sweet tha...😃
and virat felt bad for him really bad the two person whum he loves the most he cant share his pain with them just coz he wanna see them happy...
and abt the further track i want ke krystle comes bke and new twist or viren comes to know abt virat's this big secret ...😛
waiting for the next update sooon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
no. 3...any doubt???o.O

or may b no 4 if u promise no manvir romance as u know what that makes me feel.🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShivRajput

Ready to read sad updates bt not Viren Manvi romance nd marriage.. its a scared bond just cant digest dat fact.. nice update.. continue soon..!!




arrey???the evil queen thinks just like me.😲👏

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