The Pursuit of Love - Note on page 152

Dear Readers,

I am extremely sorry to do this, it is beyond annoying when a story is left unfinished and as much as I hate it, I am doing that to you all. There are many reasons for this and I would not want to bore you with the details.

It is my humble request, please dont ask me to continue or repost or move to a blog. If ever I do move to a blog, I will intimate the readers.

The story is near completion and to leave it at this juncture is unfair to you all. I will put up a brief summary as to how it will end as I have already written my story.

I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for all your time and efforts in letting me know what you felt about my story. That is the reason why the threads were not removed as I would like to revisit the comments my readers have left for my story.

Please accept my apologies and happy reading at IF. My experience has been a mixed bag here, hope yours is better.

PS " As I will not be writing much in the future, please remove me from your buddy list.

Much love,

Kalyaani

r

Edited:

Do not expect a sane comment. Me only ranting 😡

What is wrong with this woman?

Best interests of everyone? Did she even ask those 'everyone' involved what do they want?

She just walks into a house and 'asks for the girl's hand' so that the concerned girl can be Arnav's wife and Mama's daughter-figure by default. If Khushi wont agree to disclose the truth to Mahi, this Dadi will do anything to get what she wants.

Plus she gave a pre-nup to Khushi? Fine, badey log hain... a lot of money and property is at stake. But if in case anything goes wrong in ArHi marriage... Khushi wont be able to keep her kids?

Who is this Dadi to decide on the clauses of the pre-nup. If Arnav and Khushi are old enough to earn their living, marry, make their own decision... they can very well decide upon the clauses for the pre-nup too. Forget Khushi, would Arnav want this?

But wait... Dadi ney toh Arnav ko kuch poocha hi nahi. So what, if he is her beloved grandson. Dont talk to him. Lets go and intimidate the girl first... embarrass her first... pose questions to her... demand answers... also get a pre-nup ready (while Arnav isnt even asked if he would want to marry Khushi... yeh Dadi pre-nup ready rakhti hain...)

Khushi better talk with Arnav asap. Bohot hui Dadigiri 😡

You started the update with ArHi 😳 then gave me sweet sibling talk 😊 and then you gave me Dadi 😡

r

I am finally back to commenting on PoL 😃 It feels so good! Kay firstly a big 👏 for writing this story so flawlessly and for keeping us gripped to the story throughout.


I was very happy while I read the naughty interchange between Khushi and Arnav and pouted when he had to leave.


I was awwing as Khushi and Kushal spoke and got excited as Shashi broached the topic of ArHi wedding


But kisi se meri khushi dekhi nahi jaati! 😭


*rant alert*


This Devyani Raizada, what does she think of herself? Hadn't she spoiled enough lives and relationships and caused ample amount of hurt and pain that now she is targeting her grandson and his love? 😡


This woman is authoritative and wants everything to be done her way 😡 I seriously hate such people. Making her sign a prenup? Means she already knows that their marriage will fall apart. She just wants a great grandchild, let Khushi and Arnav go separate ways in the future! 😡


But kudos to Khushi for not getting intimidated by that female (or at least she pretended before Devyani! Go girl! 👍🏼 ) I am glad Khushi didn't make her feelings for Arnav apparent before her and showed Devyani how vulnerable she is when it came to her grandson!


I don't use fowl language but I would have used some nice ones for Devyani if the case was otherwise!


Can someone please wipe the smug look off Devyani? May be Arnav! 😃


P.S. Kay now you should know that whose comment you will see after that SAP's!

r

🥳🤗 Congratulations and Jubilations ...

congrats for the new thread...😊

congratulation K on new thread 🥳 wish many more to come 🤗

Congrats :)

I can now only imagine Lalita pawar or suhasini Malay as Arnav's dadi..