ToIPK writers& readers *DT note: P74* solution p94 - Page 53

I don't have words to appreciate what good u have done to me... I have read mature content by many writers very few of them held some decency... I generally have to skip the mature content part because being a girl, it becomes quite embarrassing to read all that at times... Not every writer is capable of handling the mature stuff with the required level of decency n generally the terminology used it quite unbearable... I hope people will consider this thing after reading ur post n the stories henceforth will contain the humanity it should have... Arnav n khushi r the charactrrs which speak of love, passion, pain, intimacy but there has always been an innocence n a certain level of respect in whatever they share... Even being married, arnav didn't touch khushi in an indecent way... N when he did move ahead to physicality, then despite of the problems regarding their past, he took the responsibilty of his actions n married her, leaving behind all the doubts... That is the ASR we love... N i don't want to see that image tarnished


M a very optimistic person... That is why whenever i comment on any such posts, i look for the positives in the situation... But sometimes words fail me when there is nothing else in the post except explicit content... Iy's a bit disturbing but u have to bear with it as whatever the post is is the writer's disretion...


Sorry if i offended anyone

Originally posted by: TabbyJ.

Nahi meri jaan!

We r talking about a completely diff arnav than the one in best friend!

We wud never let u cross the line!

U know I wud always inform u!!

Relax!! 

Rofl thanks :) 
Edited by Shimmer_Vani - 10 years ago

I can't read anything dark...especially when it comes to Arshi...I start crying n then I sulk for days...so that's y I don't read any ff or ss unless its complete n positive...I read the ending first or let my sister read n then she passes it to me...

Originally posted by: mz.brar

Even when a story isn't dark and sex between two party's is mutual, the maturity of the author can make or brake a scene. I've read story's where authors have referred to a vagina as a "thing" or "OMG she saw his "thing" LOL*stupid smiley face*"

I'm mean really?! have you forgot that little thing called a dictionary! If you can't refer to a body part according to its proper name, chances are you shouldn't be writing about  mature topics.

Also put some research into your work(no I'm not talking about sex), what ever the topic maybe; pregnancy(I've seen this one blundered up a thousand times), prostitution, domestic abuse,child harassment.
Most authors mean well, but poor execution(which I will sit though if the writer has their facts straight) and lack of research is what derails a good story.

I totally agree

Originally posted by: -RabbaVe-

I totally agree! this is what im running away from since past many days. and Cz of such concepts i stoped reading many suggested stories. whats such need of writting stories that has to show the lead as the actual villan :S Arnav was arrogant, short tempered but was never an evil!! and thats what all of us know.. so whats the need of ruining that Character cause as a reader in the end however they patch up but i'll always rmmbr that grey side of the chracter and that keeps haunting!! We all writers here are writting ffs not our own novels! & what does ff mean.. fanfiction right? means we type what v wanted to see but couldnt and share it wid other fans or can say that we try to discover and try to potray the 'what ifs' that the show leaves in our minds.. so my question that only those writers can answer (if they are visiting othis thread so) is, Did they wished to see a beast in our arnav? did they really wished to see such ill track in our ArShi's lives? -.- Do they really think that its justified to write such things which gives nothing but a higher number of writers and at the end leaves a bad mark at the reader's mind?
*Applause* KBS for taking the step. :) and yes.. guys you can say im clearly against such stories but not the writers. :)
-KR

Ya thats my point too

Originally posted by: mz.brar

I'm trying to be serious here young lady!

We have to be serious

This has oddly enough been going through my mind all day. I was talking to a friend and I finally came to terms that I agree with the TM. 

Originally posted by: mastermagician

KBS! Im on a rampage! 😆

😉

Originally posted by: HK90

I think in few pages some of you really lost the real meaning of this post, this is not to chat about who wrote batter or who not, and who is a boy or a girl, this topic it to make people understand that they should write in their limist taking into their mind that here on this forum there are a lot of kids 

I agree guys please it is not CC...focus