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Posted: 12 years ago

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*******************To The Virman World*******************


Chapter 2


Song for the update: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K3Q-lQSEH8c

**********kindly listen to this song while reading the update!!!! Story has nothing in similar but this song suits this situation the best************************ (naina for u)

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Next morning, Taani and family left Delhi early in the morning so that they could reach Chandigarh well before after noon as it was Vinay's take that it will take a lot of effort to get Madan agreed for letting maanvi to come with them and the next day was last day of reporting for the all the aspirants.

Here, in Chandigarh maanvi was getting restless thinking what should she do? Will taani be able to sort her problem out? And if yes then how? Thinking all this she didn't noticed how the time passed and it was about 11 o'clock when suddenly the doorbell rang!

Pinky Chachi: Mannu beta dekh to kaun h?

Manvi: Jii Maa

Mannu walked towards the door drowned in her own deep ocean of thoughts and opened the door indifferently but to her shock she saw the least expected vision, at least at this point of time.

Not being able to understand how to react she just shouted at the top of her voice

Maanvi: Maaa

Papaaa!!!!!! Jaldi aao!!!!

Madan and Pinky got panicked and rushed towards maanvi to find the reason of her sudden panicking voice!

But when they reached the door they too got shocked! Rather I should say surprised! It was Vinay and his family at the door with taani!

Madan and Pinky were surprised and for maanvi it was like a person has got a drop water in desert! She was happy! Happy beyond limits that her eyes betrayed her and started welling up with tears!

Vinay understood this and to lighten the atmosphere said"Lo hme to laga tha k sab khush hnge but inhe dekh k to lgta h k kisi ne yaha khulle sand chod diye h!!!! aise expressions milenge hme ye to socha hi na tha!!! Chalo yaar taani waapas chalet h"

This brought them all out of the trance and Madan haply hugged Vinay saying "Chal nautankii! Waise I must say it was quite a surprise"

Vinay :kyun ? aapko achcha ni laga?

Madan : aisa h pitna h kya ate hi? Tera hi ghar h jab chahe aa skta h tu"

And all of them indulged in their worldly talks but here our poor soul maanvi was panicking like anything. Getting no hint from taani about whats going on in their minds she elbowed her asked"

manvi :Tannu?

Taani: what?

Maanvi: whats going on? What have u thought about my prob?

Taani: Problem? What problem?

Now this makes maanvi hyper.

Maanvi: Look tannu be it your new prank or it may be possible that u forgot about my problem but let me tell u onne thing that if I doesn't get the permission I would do smthng which may be not liked by others

This reaction from maanvi made tani worried to the core .

Taani: arey mannu dear don't get hyper sweet heart and be patient! Do you think that I would have forgot such a big thing? Specially when it is related t your career? Don't worry sweetheart! I have discussed entire thing with pa and we are here for solving your problem only!!!! Just trust on "Mr Vinay Malhotra,The Great".

I was about lunch time and it was a very quite affair so Vinay tried to break the silence and started his mission.

Vinay: Bhai saab! Maanvi ki padhai kaisi chal rahi h? I mean last time jb hum mile they to she was giving her finals of graduation na? kaisa rha?

Madan: Arey Vinay what to say? This girl always makes me proud! She has passed her graduation with a very good marks! She really makes me proud!

Vinay: looking at maanvi: really mannu? Congrats sweetheart! May your journey of glory continues and you will get what u want!***winking at her ***

Maanvi : thanks chachu ***giving a smile and understanding the hidden meaning of his blessing***

Vinay: so maanvi whats next u r planning? I mean studying further or doing some vocational course?

Suddenly taani interrupts

Taani : arey dad how can u forget ? I told u na that she is interested in management studies! And u knw what she has appeared for CAT as well and guess what she has got a good percentile !!

Vinay: really? So which college u have got mannu?

Before maanvi could speak anything, madan interrupted

Madan: arey its sme college of Delhi! Arey what is its name?????????????... haan FMS!

Vinay: *****shocked*** Bhaisaab!!!!!!!!!! Some college??????? U r calling fms "some college"????? bhaisaab it's one of the best management college in india and for finance aspirants like Maanvi its like heaven!!!

Madan was quietly eating his food and maanvi was looking expectantly towards him for him to react but he was indifferent! Seeing no response Vinay again spoke

Vinay: so what have u thought maanvi?

Again before maanvi could speak, Madan interrupted

Madan: isme sochna kya h? she is studying here in Chandigarh!!! Living with us!!!bahar uski dekh rekh kaun krega? And padhai to padhai hti h!!! padhne wala achcha hna chaiye!!! College se kya farak padta h!

Vinay: Bhaisaab u r absolutely right !! but tell me one thing will u buy a local soap or branded one!!! Matlab to nahane se hi h na? but we go for a good one!! Brand bhi ek cheez hoti h and FMS is a brand and after completing her course from there wherever maanvi will go she will have an edge over others.

Madan: Vinay! Meri bachchi kabhi bahar ni rahi h! she is so delicate ! wahan uski dekh rekh kaun krega??? Nahi nahi!!!!! She will study from here only and that's final

Vinay: arey bhaisaab bas itni si baat! Main hun na whan per and mannu hmare saath rahegi! Hostel I bhi zarurat ni h ! and har weekend aap log aan use milne and 2 saal ki to baat h! and hamare liye jaise taani waisi mannu!

Understanding the situation pinky and shivani also tried to persuade Madan but he dismissed all!to which madan offers maanvi's staying at his place during the course

Now vinay was getting impatient as his older brother was acting like a 5 yr old who is being asked to give his favourite candy to others. So he decided to do what he hated the most to do to his "Bhaisaab" but it was the last left weapon but sure to show immediate effect."The Brahmastra"

****EMOTIONAL BLACK MAIL*******

Vinay:sahi kahan bhaisaab! Aap kyun dnege apni beti ki responsibility mjhe? apko to mujh pr bharosa hi ni h ,agar apka apna beta hta to kya aap use bhi mna krte, ??? nahi na !!! woh to aap mjhe apna beta sirf kehna k liya kehte h taaki main dad ko miss na karun warna bhai bhai hta h beta nhi" and starts shediing his nautanki tears

Everyone present there started giggling to this nautanki specially tannu.

And maanvi was left confused with the series and speed of the events happening which were occurring at supersonic speed.

Finally this dialogue did it 's work and finally madan agrees

Which left maanvi flabbergasted as well as happy beyond limits.

Her dad was happily hugging her chachu and she was watching them with her mouth open thinking of what his chachu is made up of!!!!! She was doing hell things to make her dad understand and agree from last seven days with all tears, anger, request stubbornness and what not and here something happens he says her problem to tannu and she with her dad and he comes the next day bye 11 , take the entire house by storm, started the discussion at 3 pm and within 2 hours i.e by 5 she gets a nod for her college.Man she needs to learn so much from her chachu!!! Maanvi thinking****AJ se ye mere official guru!!My Chanakya*******

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Here in delhi virat was restless and excited thinking about mannu coming but he doesn't know y is he feeling this much excited and and was pursuing himself that this is only because of their friendship and also because he will be seeing her after long two year

Virat ****thinking**** kya yaar maanvi?tum to lagta h bhul hi gayi mjhko 2 saal mein no contact its not fair!!!!!!I just hope k aisa na ho k ab tum mjhe pehchanogi bhi nahi!!!!

~~~~ flashback~~~~~

Taani: Helllooo!!!!!

Virat: arey waah!!!!! Dekho to who is calling??????? Motiii iss samay kyun call kiya?

Taani: waooowww ! someone is in really a sadu mood? What happened Mr rude??? Girlfriend bhaag gayi kya?

Virat: oh shut up!!!!!! U think I am rude???? Ksisne promise kiya that k meri show k final dress rehersals ki arrangements ko check kr lega? Let me remember who was that person? Who ? who ? ''. Arey haan Taani who to tu I thi?????

Taani: arey yaar shit sorry yaar virat ! dimaag hi se nikal gaya yaar! U know I was so depressed and worried ek problem jo aagayi h suddenly''

But virat cut her off in the middle

Virat: bus kr yaar taani pta h is wajeh se kitni problem ho gayi! Kal morning me show ha and its 3 now jb I have returned fro the dress rehearsals ki arrangement check kr k! and u know what I haven't practiced a bit !! hw is this?

Taani was really feeling guilty now so she said

Taani: sorry yaar ! realyyy !!! sach mei problem h ! agar tu sunega na to''''..

But she was again cut by virat

Virat: nahi yaar no need to give excuses ! kaam to bigad hi gaya h ab show ko b flop hna hoga to ho hi jaega tere ko sochne ki zarurat ni h

Now this angered taani and she said

Taani : fine u don't wanna listen then don't! bus maine ye kehne k liye call kiya tha k tomorrow we r leaving for Chandigarh to meet maanvi!!! Ok byeee'''''.

Taani took maanvi's name deliberately as she knew what reaction would come from his desperado friend

Virat: heyy''.wait''.wait''' don't put off the phone!!! Maanvi? What happened to her? Is she alright? Why are u all suddenly going to Chandigarh???????wait a second ''..does that problem thing has something to do with mannu''''..

And here Virat continued his banter while on the other side Taani was smirking and listening to whatever he was saying as she knew that she had hit the bullsye but now she needs to tstop him to tell what actually the matter is''..

Virat:hellooo''Moti''..u there???????? Kahan gay??????? Bta kya hua????

Taani: arey bas kar yaar !!!!! saans to le!!!!! Kya btau ?? tu bolne dega tabhi to bolungi????

Now virat was hel embarrassed and was thinking of what to say as every time Taai used to tease him with Maanvi's name he used to shrug it off by saying that she is tupid and that they both are only friend but in deep insiede his heart he too kew that it is much more than what he calls friendship

Virat: who'. Ummm' ni aisa kuch ni h'''.

Taani: Ok virat! Now lets cut the crap out and listen'''''''..

And then taani tells him about maanvi and her prob and also her admission in fms

virat is super happy listening to this news of maanvi may be coming to delhi for full 2 years but also got bit disheartened knowing about her problem and this didnt go unnoticed by tani and she teases him a bit but he tried to show an annoyed attitude which made Taani teade him more.She also tells him abt their plan and virat being virat without ni second thought offers taani that he will be coming with them to which taani denies

Taani: No Virat!!!! U cannt come with us!!!

Virat *** a bit irritated***: And can I know the reason please??????

Taani: Yes sure dear why not???????

Virat : oh my!!!! So so please kindly enlighten me with your so called 24 carat reason?

Taani: idiot! Your coming with us may ruin our plan as it will make it obvious to taaya jii that we are here with some motive and allthis is planned and also if u have forgotten let me remind u that Taayaa jii doesnt like interference in family matters from others specially kids

This made virat feel offended and he says

Virat: I am not an outsider and madan uncle treats me like his own son and also I am not a kid anymore.

Taani :Ohhh reallyyy?????

Virat: Yes!!!!I am a mature and an established person

This mature part made taani roll her eyes ****thinking***** apne dil ki baat to aaj tk samajh k bhi anjaan bnta h and he calls himself a matur person!!!!!

After lots of bantering and bickering Taani makes him understand and he agrees half heratedly and asks when ae they leaving and wishes them luck

**flashback ends**

Virat *******Thinking******** ~~~~I hope maanvi every thing goes well and u get the permission to come here!!! I am missing u my''friend???????????~~~~~~

Please yaar maanvi yeh confusion baad mein door kr lunga!!!!!! But ab bus jaldi aa jao!!!! Waiting for u desperately!!!!

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next day chandigarh

Taani and her family were leaving for Delhi with maanvi.

Pinky ***with tears welling her eyes*** : Mannu beta apna khayal!!!! Time par khana! And no late night studies!!!!

Madan : Beta koi bhi problem ho na turant phone krna !!! hum wahan aa jaenge lene tereko!!!

Seeing so much emotional turmoil going around,vinay thought of making environment lighter and said

Vinay: bhaisaab! Aap beti ko padhai k liye bhej rahe h ya sasural!!!!

To this everyone laughed out loud

Vinay: Don't worry bhaisaab!!!! Now Maanvi is my responsibility and for me from now she is my priority above taani!

Madan and pinky smiles to this and nods in assurance!!!!

And Finally Taani with maanvi leaves for delhi.

In the mean time taani is pissed off with virat'ss continous pestering thru msgs abt there arrival with manvi andd situation there in cchandigarh

tani gets hell irritated and replies all abt in one msg scolding him

Taani : Virat!!!!! What kinfd of kiddish behavior is this??? Is that so difficult to understand that if I wasnt replying to your messages than there would have been some reason and you want me to think of you as a mature person???????????with such kind of behavior!

This lowers virat's anxiety and he cutely apologises

Virat: Sorrryyy Moti! Now don't be angry!!!! Actually u werenot replying to me and this made me more anxious to know about the situation!!! Sorryyy!!!!!!!!!!

Taani **shakes her head*: aww its ok !!!!! I can understand!!!!!

Virat: pakka u r not angry on me na???????

Taani: No!! yaar pakka!!!!

Virat :Sure na???????

Taani : haan baba!!!

Virat: Achcha to tell me kya hua wahan per????????

Taani: hmph '''.. ok to listen''..and she narrates all that happened and also abt maanvi cmng with them.

As soon as this message was received in virat's inbox; he without any second thoughts called Taani and befor she could have spoken, he said

Virat: just shut up and listen to me''..

Taani: Excuse me??????? What''.???????

Virat: Please'''''

Taani: Ok'''''''

Virat: is Maanvi with you??????

Taani:Yes'''..

Virat: Is she sitting beside u''''''''????????

Taani:Yes'''''..

Virat :Now answer my questions in yes or no'''''..

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To be continued>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Edited by fatima06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay



bcz your talks leave me speechless! u should practice law!!!! lolzzz

😲 haww i never knew that i made u speechless 🤣 haww me law study kia phr toh sab chor wese he bhag jayein ge 🤣
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p.s:- ye update mella bcos ye colourful hai 🤗 no thankyu re 🤣 meko aise he colourful updates dete rahio :P
n es baar me firsht aai.??last tym toh me chor dia jisne b meri position pe kabza kia 🤣 ab har baar thore dun ge 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keertu

hawww update i am waiting😳



updated dear!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww the update was amazing ya finally virat aahi gaya aur woh bhi itni desperation ke saath ...😉
taani and virat ki frendship is just soo amazing and manvi understands him soo welll hamesha right time pe click karti hai 😃
and virat ki desperation dekh ke hi pata chalta hai how much he loves her😃😉
and family time the nautanki and all was fun...ecited for virman meetin mazza ayega ..😃
you write really well 👍🏼
update next part sooon and thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved taani and virats Congo
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome. ...virat nd taani cobvo is awesome
Virat desperately waiting for manvi haye
Plz update soon

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