ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb. - Page 46

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premdewaani thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear!!! Can't wait for the flashback to be over:-))
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wonder as a husband how Arnav is taking all this talk from Maan ... I mean even though he claim to not believe in love and says that he don't love his wife but... still how can he b so cool about it all and than on the other side he was so worked up after seeing those pictures that he had to have her that night no matter if she was ready or not and than he is all cool n standing their listening maan's love story with his wife which he is very possessive about
Arnav Sing Raizada is such an enigma that its very hard nut to crack ...,, but I'm loving every bit of it
But i feel for maan cuz his condition reminds me of a man thats in coma nether dead nor alive .. such is his condition in love
but I like everything about this story
Edited by archmink - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hmm.. so Khushi asks him and those fotos were by chance taken by those goons.. interesting..

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Posted: 12 years ago

THE PURSUIT-53/4

THE MIRAGE-II




"Dekh Thakur thu dar gaya! HA ha aha hehe..."( See!You are a chicken!) her laughter was odd and uncontrollable! She giggled away and Deepthimaan found it a little odd but he was so happy that he just blamed it on the situation they both were in!


"Khushi! I am like a son to your family too! I cannot risk the trust your people put in me any time! Today I know you are yourself and willing but I cannot over step some basic rules...er...please understand!"He explained brushing the errant strands of hair back, that covered her forehead and eyes as she lay on top of him.


'Willing? for what? 'Anyways this feeling of freedom was too good and anyways Maan is there to take care of anything that might go wrong Khushi thought and said,"Oye! Yeh sab bahaaney hain! Dum hain tho humey bathao ki"( These are all excuses! If you have the mettle, then proove it that...) ...Khushi was yet to finish!


Deepthimaan toppled her and said showing his finger to her in a stern warning ,"Khushi I cannot have eternal control! Please ...yaar!!! I...Ohho!!!What do I do With this girl!!!?... So help me!"


She chuckled and toppled him again... they were literally rolling in the hay! And said... ,"Thakur... yeh aisa hi raha tho kitna accha!" ( how nice if this is for ever!) She was referring to her mind that was floating now!
Deepthimaan wanted to put his arms round her as she lay on his chest but propriety prevented him from doing so! So he just let his hands be extended to his sides and very softly asked her... "Rani saa... aap chaahthi kya hain?"


"So all those photos were of these moments!" Arnav spoke aloud his thoughts!...remembering the photos in the second lot...


A picture of Deepthimaan denying dupatta to Khushi for which she was stretched across him trying to grab it,


A picture of him lying on top of Khushi the dupatta still in his hand held high and away from her reach!...and he was warning Khushi about something showing his index finger to her!


One where Khushi's palm was on his cheek and her other arm around him and she was talking to him in earnest


...and the other where she was lying on top of him in the hay with her chin on his chest and her long hair splayed all over... them... her lips parted in a smile !

"Haan Yaar!" Deepthimaan said hanging his head and leaned his back taking the worn and battered old fort wall for support!


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Posted: 12 years ago
i know i am late..
i didn't comment on ur update...
its coz...i was stuck with my assignment,varsity..along with that my part time job..
n i didn't want to rush with ur update..
just got some time...read all the missed update at a go..
indeed it was good...that i could read the whole mystry being khushi married to maan at a go,...
i am really feeling bad for maan..
so this is the very reason..maan never wants to interact with girls...let alone thinking of marrying them...
they all were puppets of circumstance...

w8ng for next...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! I dnt knw wt to say .. They spiked Deepu's drink too..
Feel sad for Deepu .. he realized that khushi wasnt in her sense. though they got married unfortunately she didnt even remember .. And mostly she was talking about Amy at the end and after that i think Deepu realized everything..
Well about payal ,i think she too realized ,to khushi, Deepu is only a vry good friend not more or not less ..
but I dnt knw wt happn if khushi got to knw all this..
Well waiting for next update eagerly ..
xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear as always:-))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cant get enough of this story.. Awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
So thats the story...but I am waiting when Khusi will know this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Despite of the truth being out in open, I believe things are still complicated.
Chal agreed that their drink was spiked and all and they are not at fault but then I don't really like Khushi not knowing all this.
When she'll come to know that her Thakur loves her immensely, she'll be heartbroken and when she comes to know that she was almost married to him, she'll be shattered.😭
Arnav's taken a calmer side and I am glad he's doing so. 😊
What's with gulabo...!!!!! Will she ever stop scheming...?? 😡
Update soon. 😊

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