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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

Did's itz getting way to intersting..update soon with a bda vala kriyaansh scene



thanks bacha

i am glad that you liked it

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~Anu~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvkriyansh-anu

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Heyo guys 🤗... I back with a update... Hope you guys like it... This one is basically KriYaansh with something here and there but most of it is KriYaansh...

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All for leave goa

When they heading towards the beach where the incident occurred netween Don and Kriya and the plave where they thought that she took her last breath, on the way they came across and mental hospital. But when they are going past Rey felt her, her felt her felt her presence and he could sense her, his heart could catch her heart beats and he hear heart beat ( he felt like he could). This applied to Kajen, Vicky and Swaron to all the rest felt something but it wasn't as strong as the other sixes.
Karan: "stop the car!"
And Sam who was driving the car stops it with a jolt which made all unsteady in their seats.
Rathode: "kya hua?" he says with a confusion expression.
Rey: "Kriya wahan hai" he cribbed like a child pointing at the mental hospital.
Swaron, Vicky and Kajen: "tumhe bhi" they asked comfused that they weren't the only ones who could feel her presense.And they exchange a look to one another and then after a few seconds their faces shows confidence and certainity.
Jenny: "um we felt Kriya's presence"
Sharon: "it might sound insane but can feel her being around somewhere near here"
Arjun: "come on let's go"
And they go to the hospital
Seeing the mad people the girls kinda get scared apart from Jenny as she is a doctor.
Jenny: "warden wahan hogi" ( as she points her index finger towards the sign that read warden office )
They enter
Rey: "can we come in"
Warden: "yep sure come in"
Arjun: "ACP Arjun Route"
Sam: "ETF chief Sameer Rathode"
Warden: "how can I help you?" she asked with respect for the two.
Karan: "is someone called Kriya admitted here"
Warden: "Kriya haan lekin usne nahi bataya ki uski family hai I mean she said she had none"

Hearing this all of them broke even more... She was in a mental hospital?!... She's alive...?
Arjun: "um what's wrong with her?" he asks being the first one to come back to senses.
Warden: "amnesia"
Jenny: "uska matlab she is has memory loss"
Warden: "yep and it's very sever due to the head injury!"
Rey hearing this breaks down
Rey: "I want to see her and be with her"
Warden: "come with me my child" and takes to Kriya's ward.
And after sometime they go in...
Kriya is playing on the wii as if she was 12 or 13 years old
Rey goes to her and sits next to her... Andthe expressions on her face starts changing, and she looks straight into them eyes and she gets some visions and after a few second her head starts paining and she starts sweating badly... And he gets worried and grips her waist and blows on her forehead... Seeing the sweet drops stop and her lids relaxing he says...
Rey: "baatcutter" worried
Kriya: " hmm" she replies as remembers that's what he addresses her as...
Warden: "how can she remember that" wondering...
Kriya holds his hands feeling him... "hello"
Rey:" hi" and gently loosens his grip on her waist and places his hands on hers and gently strokes it... Feeling her too... Making sure its not his illusion...
Kriya: "you are very fitt and sexy" she says out the blue, looking him from top to bottom... Leaving everyone shocked... But Rey comes out of hearing these golden words from her love and replies...
Rey: "kya? Thanks" with a 32 inch smile oh his face.
Kriya: "mere saath wii kheloge?" she says tightly grabbing his arms.
Rey: "okay" he says... Biting back tears, he couldn't see his life like this; but she was with him and he's there for her somewhere in him satisfies him... And the others leaves the room...

Both play on the wii and after sometime Kriya falls asleep on his shoulders... And as shes to sleep her palms trace down his chest and the top buttons of his were open... And her touch on his bare skin sent shivers dwon his spine... He thought to himself that aww her skin is so soft and silky... And her hands stopped on his upper thigh... Without even knowing she keeps on adjusting herself and while doing that she's making Rey arose due their bare skin having contact. Every now then when she's snuggling into him, her lips brush on his chest, and her hot breath on his bare skin makes his breathing rate increase... Rey who has lost his control over the beauty who's snuggling in him pins the strand of her hair behind her ear and was about to take her lips in his for a smooch but reality struck him and he came to senses. He knew that he couldn't do that...

With that Rey picks her up and places her on the bed. And kisses her all over her face and giving a quick peck on the forehead... and lastly a peck on the lips...

Rey: " you know how badly I wish that we share a passionate smooch instead of this peck?... But I guess time... you I know never thought that our love will see this... But you know what? You being with me... You just being here on itself gives me the peace, the love, and gives me my life cuz YOU are my life ".

Saying this to the Kriya who is the sweet slumber dreaming of her linecutter he leaves closing the door quietly behind him... Making sure he is not going to disturb her sleep... All were waiting for him outside and peaking in through the tiny circled window of the ward...

Warden: "aap dono ka pyaar bohot hi strong hai and it is true love. In this period of time all of us have tried speaking to her but she wouldn't respond and as days went past she forgot nearly everything.
"Aur aaj she remembered you and she calmed down without us giving her an injection".
All were in tears seeing Kriya like this and to see Rey's love for her and how pure it was...
Arjun: "how did all this happen?"
Warden: "well after the mission she was severely injured, when she found out about her having partial amnesia and that as time passes she would become like a 1 year old baby and that as that happens she will need lots of care. She didn't want Rey to know about this, as she knew that he will give up his entire life's happiness to look after her. And she wanted Rey to have stayed in happy in his life. As a result she admitted herself here.
"In fact she in a matter of moths she will have completely become like a new born baby! She will need love and care then."
Rey: "I will give the love and care!" love, wanting and determination reflecting in his voice.
And that was it. They took Kriya back to Mumbai and she lived with Rey, Minni, Karan, Jenny, Sharon and Sid! After Sharon found out about everything she went with Jenny and Rey to started living with them as Jenny wanted Kriya to be with her too. ( KriYaansh are going to live in the same house)

Precap:

Rey: " chocolate icecream for a beautiful cutie"...
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Kriya: "mere saath aao na linecutter"... And grabs his hands...
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Jenny: " don't worry Rey..."
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Okay guys how was the update?

And haan I don't know how patients with amnesia actually gets treated so please play along with it guys... 🤗

This the most KriYaansh love scene I have wrote in this FF... Kya karoo romance mere saar se upaar hai... 😆

Hope you liked it... I know you lot have been asking for a really long time... But abh de rahi hoon... Sorry... I guess better late than never...

Chal Madhu abh lamba comment tererko dena padega... Sorry yaar... Meine try kiya abh to gussa chod de... 🤗


Sorry for any spelling mistakes or typos... Do leave your like and comments... 🤗

Thanks for reading...

Have a dancing day guys

Love ya all 🤗

😊

~Anu~


Amazing update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -ARMA_RUBHARU-

kha ho tum ...bacha missing u

hii di 🤗
me missing you too 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu update kab dene wali hai???
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So here I am back with a update...

Sorry before hand for any typos or grammar mistakes 🤗

Enough of my bak bak here the update...

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So Rey, Sharon and Kriya live with KaJen and Mini now...

It's been a day or two since Kriya has came back... Mini is told that Kriya isn't well. Rey is looking after her really well as if she was his baby...

" linecutter... Muje ice cream chahiye" she asks ever so lovingly and as Rey could never say no to his princess he gets her some chocolate flavoured ice cream... Kriya looks away with a pout playing on her face... Rey knew what she was thinking and what she wants (true love after all) " mein feed karoo toh bhi tum nahi kahoogi baatcutter?" he question with a sweet and persuading tone with a cute smile on his face... Hearig this her pout disapears and an 32 inch simle was there now instead. With that she nods her head in a yeah... And he gets lost in cutness... " linecutter?!" she shouts as he doesn't feed her... This brigs him back to senses and he feeds her...



Its been a 10 days or so since they brung Kriya back to Mumbai... People would have thought that their love would have become weaker as days went on but it was totally opposite for these two.

Every night the lights in the study used to be on... So out of curiosity Rey goes in the study to find out what is happening there... There he sees... Jenny Sid and Karan... With Sid on the laptop with Karan and Jenny digging information from a thick book...

Rey knocks and all look towards the door to find Rey looking in...

Jenny: " yup Rey do you need anything" she asks in a loving tone...

Rey: " nahi... I was just wondering why the lights were on..."

Karan: " oh okay"

Rey: " aap log kya kar rahe ho"

Jenny: " um why don't you come in..." and with that Rey goes in taking a chair as he walks in and joins the trio...

Jenny: " we're doing research on amnesia and it's cures.."

Rey: " for kriya?" after asking he felt like Duah.

Karan: " yeah... Infact weve just found the perfect neurologist... Dr. Shaskan Gupta..." hearig this Jenny hit her forehead and said" oh man how can I forget... He's supposed to be the best... Argh I can't belive myself"

Sid: " are bhabs it's okay na... It's better late then never..."

Rey: " yeah"

Jenny: " okay I will talk to him tomorrow and get everything fixed..."

All: " okay"

And after saying night to eachother they go to their rooms... Rey who was making his way to his room comes across Kriya's room and sees Kriya who was sleeping like a cutie... He walks in completely lost in her beauty... And the moonlight pouring in from the window on her right didn't help him stay in concious... He goes next to her and takes her small petal like soft hand in his and starts cherishing it... " you will be back to normal baatcutter I know it my instincts says so..." but in reality he was consoling himself he was scared... Yes the great Reyaansh Singhania was scared he didn't want to lose her after all she was his love and his one and only... And with that the precious pearls started to escape from his eyes... And a drop fell on her hand she moved a little due to the coldness but luckily she didn't wake up and she took a turn in her sleep she kissed the water droplet which laid on her hand. Not being able to take it anymore Rey quickly leaves the carefully shutting the door behind him making sure he doesn't wake his baatcutter up.

The fear of losing her made him weak... He cried and cried thinking of the possible outcomes and fell asleep crying.

Next morning at the breakfast table...

Kriya and Mini are having their breakfast and playing around...

Rey walks in

KaJen: " we need to talk"

Rey: " yup sure"

Karan: " Jenny has spoken to Dr. Shashank and fixed an appointment too..."

Jenny: " today afternoon" she completes for him.

***In the afternoon***

Kriya: " Linecutter hum kahan ja rahe hai?" she asked in her innocent and cute tone like always whilst she had a firm grip on his arms.

Rey: " Baatcutter bas kuch kaam hai" in a persuasive tone.

And they reach the hospital and Kriya's mouth makes a 'O' shape... " hospital?"

Rey: " yeah..."

Kriya: " muje nai anna" as she starts feeling scared.

Jenny: " bacha kuch nai hoga..." gentelly patting Kriya on the head.

Rey: " muje pe turst karti ho?"

Kriya: " haan bilkul" she replies in an instant

Rey: " then let's go"

And they go inside...

They meet Dr. Shashank and get know about the procedure of the surgery and all. Some test have also be done on Kriya and they have fixed the date of her surgery.

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Today was the day when Kriya is going to her Nero Surgery... All were scared why wouldn't they be they didn't want to loose her again.

At the hospital

Dr. Shashank: " we need to keep Kriya conscious while we do the surgery..."

And hearing this all are shocked to th core ( as they didn't know about this apart from Jenny but she stays quite)and Rey literally shouts " WHAT?!"

Jenny: " Rey calm down..."

Rey: " my baatcutter no it will be really painful... No" as he starts thinking about how much she will feel the pain and he starts getting images.

Karan: " Rey try to understand... This is the only way..."

Rey: " no I am not going to let her go through all that pain" with that he puts his hand out showing his palm to KaJenand Sharon who are standing infront if him.

Swayam: " Rey if this surgery doesn't happen she will continue to loose her mental age"

Rey: " so what?! I don't care... I really don't care... I really don't. She has me! I will look after all my life but I will not let be in that pain"

Sharon: " Rey is right guys"

All: " Sharon.." As they know that they are being over protective.

Sharon: " what!? My sis is not going to go through all of that pain and the fact that shell be conscious through out that surgery which is already that risky is like giving her torture" and tears were flowing down her eyes whilst she was saying all of that.

This was it for Mini who was standing there listening to them... She might be young but when it came to maturity she was older than her age.

" ENOUGH! Aap log shayad yeh bhool rahe ho ki sexy beimar hai... And yeh bhi ki she would want ki yeh surgery ho..." and she looked at Sid to continue..." yes guys she was a very independent girl... Not doing this surgery will only give injustice"

And after a lot of persuading Rey agreed along with Sharon. With that Rey went into the I.C.U as he could keep her conscious and he wanted to be with her...

He kept her conscious wile the surgeons did their work and the surgery was finally finished.

Rey went outside and Dr. Shashank too went with him...

Dr. Shashank: " the surgery has been finished and now when she will gain conscious she should be back to normal." he patted Rey on the shoulder and said " young man your love for her is true and divine... And I haven't seen many who posses this kind of love for the other" and with that he left...

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Precap...

Rey: " I love you baatcutter"

Kriya: " I love you too linecutter"

...

KriYaansh romantic fight sequence... ( cant say more than that)

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Okay this was the update... Sorry again for any grammar mistakes meine check nai kiya tha... Sowie...

Thanks for reading

Have a dancing day!

Love ya all 🤗

😊

~Anu~

Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
IMPORTANT NOTE

HEY GUYS...

I WILL ONLY UPDATE AFTER GETTING 50 LIKES AND PAGE 75...

LOVE YOU ALL

~ANU~

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Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum part yaar..
loved it..
n plzz pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
i m loving this
pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it
love how rey care for kria
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago

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