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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Amazing update! Loved how dadi maa telling them all about what they should do and not do, it was as if it's PayAl grandmother making sure that everything goes fine! I'm glad that no one from high society will point fingers at the Gupta now! Dadi you are fabulous! Awe I love nt and geet, they are like the best friends you can get.

Yes, dadima simply rocks! And NT and Geet simply superb!😊

It was just way to nice how they bought gifts and all for them and arranged a beautician for PayAl! We too sweet and I love them for that! I hate it when people point fingers at you for wearing this and that! That's why I get pissed at my dads friends when they complain about mine and my sisters dressing! Which is really appropriate! But no they still have to call him and tell him. Idiots.

I understand your feelings. My family also has the habit of looking down on modern dressing style. My parents are cool and open minded. Infact, my dad prefers me in western dress as indian dresses make me older than my age. But my relatives are headache. Infact, my father avoids these getogether just so that I wont have to be dressed up in saree and all.

Anyways maan and arnav! They rock. Hahah arnav has a full proof plan! I was scared that khushi will be hurt, but by Arnav's plan I hope nothin like that happens and she accepts the proposal! It would be amazing to see them engaged too. Well her veer ji is there to if something does happen!

I am happy that you liked Arnav's plan. It will succeed. Khushi wont be hurt directly due to the plan. BUt Arnav will regret hiding his identity one day! Uska ghamand tootega jaroor!

Awe akash scene was just so cute. Awesome friends he has. Dev and arjun! The way you explained how they are more close to akash than arnav because arnav and maan had a lot of burden on them, was what I liked! Haha college days, bechara akash even when his friends were gone he had to take care of their girlfriends! If he lets guys come close to their girlfriends he'll get beating from them and if he doesn't he gets beating from the others guys from college! Haha.

I am happy that you liked the explanation. May be one day I would write some one shots on their college days after my story ends!😉

Loved the song scene! OMG I can't wait for khushi reaction to arnav and raizada families reaction to geet!! It'll be one heck of an engagement to read about.

Yes, the engagement will be explosive! But not in the way you think!

Oh that means I'm wrong I thought akash would be protective over here! Which is not. Cool! And the Devi Maiya idol wow what will happen further updates! Yep I always knew dev wasn't a stupid one, he might think about PARATHAS all the time but when it comes to family he will do anything.

Well it's good that your back pain is gettin better! And you'll be totally healed than!! Yayy :D
Thanks for the update and continue soon.
Love you (:

Thanks for the review! And my back is lot better. I can atleast sit for few hours nowaday without back pain! Will update next friday!
Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

okay once again give me half an hour and one shall be back
sorry took longer than one thought
so let get down to it then shall we
awww finally the day is here man
payash are getting engaged
and a lot will happen on their engagement day
lets just hope nobody gets beaten up by the end of it

Oh SHIT! I am sorry but your wish will not come true! Woh kidnappers haina! Unki Dhulaai hone waali hai by the boys band aka Arnav, Maan, Dev, Aakash, Arjun and Shyam. So enjoy! 😃

and we all know whom am referring to there
ASR of course he better play his cards right or khushi will defo feel like killing him

Khushi wont kill him! God promise!😉

might even do that for lying to her like that
but lets get back to the story and not what might or might not happen
so all ready for payash engagement then
awww so cute how khuranas too are getting ready for this too
from gifts for the engagement to getting the bride i guess dolled up
okay that sounds horrible dolled up sorry couldnt find better word its pathetic me vocab man

Yes, dolled up does sound weird!😃

awww aint dadi the best right
the way she wanted to make sure payal looked her best and to drive her nervousness away

Yes, Dadima is a sweetheart!

dont worry dadi these girls will make her feel like a princess for sure
oho so all geared up for this day it seems
and why not finally the day when things will be set in motion is upon them
though that also means time for separation might be near too

Yes, the separation is near!😭

dang it dont know if i want that to happen
but then we cant take payash day from them can we now
so this looks like will be some event for sure
but it would have been cooler if arhi and maneet could do the same

Dont worry Arhi aur Maaneet ke bhi din aayenge!

but lets not steal their thunder here at least
hope it all goes smoothly maybe not though if ASR dont ruin things
only time will tell what she will say or do
poori ki poori fauj aa gayi guptas ke yahan waah kya baat hain

Yes poori battalion ne haazari lagaayi hai!😉

of course khushi ki bhabhis hain ek toh honewaali bhabhi hai
but lets not go to that for now
awww they really love the gupta sisters dont they our khuranas

Yes, Khuranas adore Paayal and Khushi and why wont they? Guptas sisters are so sweet!😊

well buaji raizadas would never mention about this and all know it
but then not everyone is like them and khuranas am afraid
no wonder they were hesitant to take these gifts
but they will since khushi veerji and boss sent them
wow that was fun for sure
chatting with just all the girls
wow they must have had a blast and kept payal from worrying too much

Yes, they are having a blast. More fun in chapter 53 (B)

so the boys have reached raizadas huh
well maan and arnie dudes dont ruin things
what i mean is best of luck to you guys after all tonight is the night when things shall happen for both of you and you knoe what i mean

They do need all the luck in the world!

arnie and his proposal for khushi and maan and his engagement with geet soon
lets see what lover boy 2 is doing since the first lover boy is gonna see him
dudes stop worrying too much
okay what am i saying do worry after all bechare ki pyaar ka jo sawal hai

Exactly! Keep on worrying. After all, Geet aur Khushi ka kuch bharosa nahi!😉

maan man he might be ASR but that aint gonna matter to khushi and you know it
considering same is your case you may be MSK but in front of geet thats nothing

So true! You are nothing in front of your lady loves!😃

the plan might seem good now my dear but once you are in front of her it shall go down the drain
no way will she fall for that and you know it or do you

Sorry to disappoint you but th plan is going to work!😉 Khushi will fall for it!

hello she is so gonna be mad for sure i can guarantee it
at least i hope she shall be

Errr...she wont. Because she will be worried about something else!

hmmm this is gonna end in disaster and maan stop encouraging him please
ek DM yeh toh defo gaye bara ke bhaav se
really do you really think she wont get you
hello itni bhi bholi nahin hain

Yes, she is not bholi. But when something else is going through her head, she will not be able to decipher Arnav's plan!

and trust me this over confidence of yours will bring you down

Yes, Arnav ka ghamand tootega. Khushi todegi but not because of his plan! No it will be because of something else.

hah when she finds out propose toh bhale aap karr le but beta uska jawab ke itne bhi naa confident rahiyega

So true!

man this is gonna end in disaster for sure his this arrogance will bring him down and it better
or he will never learn for sure
oyye hoyye lets not forget the lover boy of the day
haiyye he is so lost in payal that he didnt even notice the two enter
well this should be fun right
hmmm so maan and arnie are closer than anyone else due to their nature and the other three were the carefree lads who had their older siblings to look up to
wow poor sky man he had to look over the girls and yet not get into trouble with others
man he had it bad right

Yes, Aakash ki band bajti thi! Maybe I should write some comic one shots of their college days once my story is completed!😃

but thats the least he could do for his friends right
of course yeh khoye khoye rehete hain inko inka pyaar jo milne waala hai
am sure you guys were the same at time of your engagements
wow now thats one lover boy for sure
kya baat hai sky aap toh cha gaye
wow that was something werent it just and so cute too
well junior ka yeh haal hai senior toh inse bhi aage hai ji
wow this was the engagement without the dhamkas the shocks the twists and suprises
picture toh definitely abhi baaki hai mere dooston

BAAKI!!!! Abhi toh picture shuru bhi nahi hua! Abhi toh main drama baaki hai! Ab aayega asli mazaa!😃😃😉

and boy cant wait for the same now

wait did he forget geet man
she knows about it all so if maan might not say anything but she still can

No, Geet will not reveal anything. You will come to know the reason when the twisty day ends!

so things are be real fun for sure

wish he wouldnt think that he can win her so easily man
cheers for pm
how many of you guys think that this idea of his is gonna flop
for sure it will am telling you

The idea wont flop. But Arnav's ghamand will break!

okay i know he said he didnt lie to her

but thats not true naa
and this is KKG urf afreen he is doomed man
well hye is asking for it am afraid
DM bachaye inhe though one doubts it anything is possible now

Thanks for the review! Please enjoy the next chapter and review for it too.
Edited by Analeez11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 53 (B). THE DAY OF ENGAGEMENT PART II

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

"What do you think?", Arnav asked Maan as both of them observed the security plans spread on the table. Arnav fulfilled his promise of having tight security for Soni's safety and now both were pouring over it making sure there were no loopholes in it. Maan nodded grimly as his mind reminded him of the events happened on Saturday. He almost wanted to tell Arnav about it but stopped himself as he remembered that Khushi and Paayal were involved in it. He knew Arnav would make an issue over it as Khushi was also in danger by default. As Maan stared at it, Arnav walked over to the cupboard and pulled out a small velvet box. He placed the box in front of Maan. Maan glanced at it and looked at Arnav wordlessly asking him about it. Arnav glanced back at him and spoke up, "I plan to propose her with it. Have a look! I hope she will like it!" Maan shook his head. Sach kehte hain pyaar insaan ko badal deta hai! Ab ise hi dekhlo! The Great ASR ko pyaar ne nervous banaa diya; itna nervous ki woh mujhse ring ke baare mein pooch raha hai! He picked up the box and opened it. Arnav almost seemed to hold his breath; Maan noticed. He laughed inwardly but outwardly he showed no reaction. He closed the box and kept it on the table. Arnav took a deep breath, "How is it? Afreen….I mean Khushi will like it, na?" Maan got up and walked away. Arnav spoke up worriedly, "It is ok, right? I mean agar ring dekhne ke baad Khushhi ne reject kiya toh?" Maan turned around and stared at him. Arnav was beyond worry, "Maan, say something!" Maan smiled, then started grinning and soon he was laughing wholeheartedly. "I can't believe it. The great ASR nervous about a ring! Mujhse poochta hai ki Khushi ring ki wajah reject karegi kya? Arnav, are you crazy? This is Khushi, not some bimbo who is after your money!" Arnav rolled his eyes, "Exactly my point. This is Khushi, jiska koi bharosa nahi ki kab kya karde. I don't want to take any risk. I want everything to be so perfect that she would not have a single reason to reject me." Maan schooled his features to seriousness and spoke up, "Toh proposal mein kya bolega uski bhi practice kar li hogi na? I mean even that should be perfect." Arnav's eyes widened, "Damn! I knew I forgot something." He pulled out a pen and writing pad and started writing. Maan controlled his laughs till he reached the poolside; where he let loose them. Arnav bechara! Hope you say yes, Khushi! Arnav won't be able to bear your no!

Dev and Arjun entered the room, smiles on their faces as they discussed poor Aakash's haalat. They stopped in their tracks as they stared at the scene in front of them. There stood Arnav Singh Raizada in front of a large mirror talking to himself. They looked at each other in shock and took some steps forward to listen. Arnav was mumbling, "I know we are not compatible. I mean you are so loud and I am so quiet. And there is also the fact that we are from different social circles. But there are also various advantages to this matrimony. For example, you can make as much as Jalebis you like or you can buy as much as salwar kameez you like; though I prefer you in saree….." Arjun and Dev looked at each other in horror. Is he doing what we think he is doing? They crept closer and Arjun spoke up, "Bhai, what are you doing?" Arnav was brought out of his thoughts and he looked at them and smiled in surprise. "Arre, tum log kab aaye?" Arnav hugged each of them. Dev piped up, "Woh sab chodo. Tell me what were you doing?" "He was preparing his proposal for a girl.", came Maan's voice tinged with humour as he entered the room from the poolside. Dev and Arjun looked at Arnav in horror. Arjun spoke up, "Bhai, Propose kar rahe the ya business deal?" Dev shook his head, "Upar se, you are pointing out the flaws in girl's status. Dude, that's the worst way to express your feelings to a girl!" Arnav looked at them confused, "But when I speak this way, my clients are impressed." Dev and Arjun slapped their foreheads in unison. Maan spoke up, "Arnav, the girl is already impressed. Ab dil ki baat karni hai." "Exactly Bhai! Dil se kaam lo, dimaag se nahi!", Dev explained. Arnav looked back at the mirror and sighed miserably. Dil se baat karna was not the tough part. The tough part was to make it perfect! Arjun and Dev looked at each other and shook their heads. It seems their help was needed here!

Soon, Dev and Arjun had Arnav following their words with Maan looking amusedly from behind. The boys had Arnav on one knee while giving tips on how to look at the girl in a manner that seemed romantic while making sure you maintained balance on one knee. Maan was sure Arnav would have bruised knees by the end of the night. They started giving tips on what to say and what was absolutely not to say like the girl's status or her habits etc. When Arnav asked them on what exactly he should say Dev piped up, "What to say depends on your heart. When you are in front of her, just listen to your heart and it will guide you." Arjun spoke, "And never forget our tips while proposing!" Arnav nodded while Maan smiled as he remembered his own proposal.

Place - Khushi's Room at Laxmi Nagar

Paayal was horrified as she stared at NT. It was four in the evening and Paayal was seated on the bed surrounded by NT, Khushi, Lavanya and Geet. Lavanya was smirking while Khushi and Geet were blushing. NT spoke up, "Arre! Aap aise sharma rahi ho? Humne kya kuch galat poocha? Hum toh sirf itna jaanna chaahte hain ki kya ab tak Aakash ne aapko kiss kiya?" Paayal turned beet red while Geet and Khushi were not far behind. Lavanya was the only unmarried girl in the room who was not feeling uncomfortable as she was used to these kind of talks with her college friends. But Geet, Paayal and Khushi who were small towners were feeling shy. And there was also the fact that the talk reminded of their almost kisses too. NT rolled her eyes and spoke, "Arre! Agar kiss par aise sharmaaogi toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga?" Paayal hid her face behind her hands totally uncomfortable with the direction the talk was going on. Khushi controlled her blush and spoke up softly, "Shaadi ke baad matlab?" NT rolled her eyes at La as if saying 'what are we stuck with?' and La shook her head as if saying 'I totally agree with you, sister'. La piped up, "Khushi! Shaadi ke baad matlab suhaag raat, you idiot!" Khushi eeped, Geet squeaked and NT slapped her forehead. Hey Geet ke Babaji aur Khushi ke Devi Maiyya please save me from these idiots! Inko dekh ke koi vishwaas karega ki yeh 21st century ki ladies hain. Aur log kehte hain humaara desh pragati kar raha hai! NT spoke, "Dekho Paayal, aaj aapki sagaai hai. Bas kuch dino ki baat hai aur uski baad aapki shaadi ho jaayegi. Yeh sab gyaan aapko baantna humaare liye jaroori hai." Paayal, Khushi and Geet looked at her as if she was teaching them some great divine thoughts. La piped up, "Haan! Maine bhi yeh sab gyaan college mein suna hai! Kehte hain jo suhaag raat mein apne pati ko ungli pe nachaata hai, uska pati zindagi bhar uski hi gulaami karta hai." NT nodded, "Yeh sach keh rahi hai. Aap humaare Dev ko hi dekhlo. Aaj bhi humaare peeche lattu hokar ghoomte hain." As the three girls listened, a thought passed through the minds of Geet and Khushi; Inhein kya pata ki Dev inke peeche isliye ghoomte hai kyunki woh inke ghusse se darte hain, isliye nahi ki who inpar lattu hain. But both kept their mouths shut. Paayal was looking at NT and La as if they were Goddesses themselves who were distributing gyaan. NT continued, "Arre! Kuch saalon pehle is par ek gaana bhi aaya tha. Kya gaana tha woh? Haan!" NT sang softly a bit off key, "Aadhi Raat Jab Chand Dhale Aur Koi Na Ho Pichwaade Mein, Chaap Daba Ke Thhaade Rahiyo Du-Aa-De Mein!"

Paayal devoted her full attention to them her expression set on shock. La continued the song, "Aadhi Raat Jab Chand Dhale Aur Koi Na Ho Pichwaade Mein, Chaap Daba Ke Thhaade Rahiyo Du-Aa-De Mein, Minnat Kare"

NT piped up, "Na Maaniyo

Paiyyan Pade"

La shook her head, "Na Maaniyo

Agar Woh Haan Kehde"

NT looked affronted, "Na Kehna

Woh Na Kehde"

La nodded her head, "Haan Kehna

Jaan Ki Kasam Di Toh"

Both the girls giggled and sang further going with the momentum.

Aadhi Raat Jab Chand Dhale Aur Koi Na Ho Pichwaade Mein

Chaap Daba Ke Thhaade Rahiyo Du-Aa-De Mein

Minnat Kare

Na Maaniyo

Paiyyan Pade

Na Maaniyo

NT cleared her throat and spoke, "Aage is geet ke lekhak kehte hain…" Khushi piped up, "Geet ke lekhak nahi hote, kavi hote hai!" NT rolled her eyes, "Whatever! KAVI kehte hain…" She sang the next lines.

Jewar Na Bole Koi

Ghunghat Na Khole Koi

Akhiyaan Dikha Dijiyo

NT showed Paayal how to glare. La sang further.

Baataan Mein Ujhaaye Toh

Pooche Jo Samjhaaye Toh

Mundia Hila Dijiyo

Paayal nodded her head still seeming in shock. NT pointed at the room's door and sang.

Darwaaje Se

Kaan Lagaa Ke

Sunti Hogi

Sab Sakhiyaan

La got up and ran to the door and sang up.

Laaj Waaj Ko

Chod Chaadke

Kundi Kiwaade Mein

La locked the door and Geet and Khushi giggled amongst each other while Paayal blushed. La and NT sang further.

Minnat Kare

Na Maaniyo

Paiyyan Pade

Na Maaniyo

Paayal got up from the bed and spoke, "Bas kijiye aap log! Aur kitna embarrass karenge humein! This is so not fair!" Her face showed distress. NT nodded and hushed the laughing girls, "Paayal sahi keh rahi hai. Inhein chidhaana band kijiye!" Paayal stood by the window looking out while frowning. NT sat by the bed and said, "Chalo inhein aur mat sataao. Waise pata hai upar upar se toh aise bol rahi hai yeh….. par inke dil mein kya chal raha hai pata hai?" La, Geet and Khushi shook their head and Paayal looked at NT in confusion. NT sang.

Ja Ja Na Daal Paheli

Barso Ke Baad Saheli

Jagne Ki Raat Aayi

Paayal's jaw dropped. Khushi seeing her sister's reaction, sang the next lines.

Dekha Karti Thi Sapna

Sapne Ko Aakhir Apna

Kehne Ki Raat Aayi

Paayal pouted at the fact that her own sister went against her. She huffed and walked to Khushi. She pinched Khushi's ear while Khushi howled. Paayal sang the next lines with annoyance in her voice.

Dekh Paraayi

Khasmo Se Tu

Jalti Kyun Hai

Byaah Karle

Khushi pouted and NT turned and sang to her.

Door Door Se

Taank Jhaank Mat

Aaja Akhaade Mein

Khushi huffed while rest of them laughed.

Soon all five were singing the song in chorus, some in sync and some with total off key tone.

Aadhi Raat Jab Chand Dhale Aur Koi Na Ho Pichwaade Mein

Chaap Daba Ke Thhaade Rahiyo Du-Aa-De Mein

Minnat Kare

Na Maaniyo

Paiyyan Pade

Na Maaniyo

As the girls began laughing and chattering, Paayal's eyes glanced towards one of the cupboards in the room. It had glass door and she saw something in it which caught her attention. She walked towards the cupboard, sat on her knees and opened it. In it lied one of her favorite dolls, which she had left here in a young age so that whenever they visited Buaji they would not have to carry their toys with them. She pulled the doll out. It was dressed in dulhan's joda and covered with plastic jewelry. Her mind went back to those old days when she and Khushi used to play with the dolls. Life was so simple then! Her ears tuned in to the conversation going around her and heard Khushi speak up, "Ek baar Jiji ki shaadi ho gayi toh hum toh unse jyaada mil hi nahi paayenge. Hum Lucknow mein aur Jiji yahaan Dilli mein!" Paayal felt tears well up in her eyes as she realized that soon she would be leaving her house, her family. As she looked at the doll, she sang softly in a wavering voice, "Gudiya Batole More Doli Mein Rakhwa Dijo."

All four girls stopped their talks and looked at Paayal. Paayal hugged the doll and sang further.

Naani Kahaani Laawe Bhaiyya Ko Bulwa Dijo

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

She got up and her eyes touched the photo frame of her family on the wall nearby. There was her Amma, Babuji, Buaji and Lavanya's father sitting on the sofa in the living room while she, Khushi and Lavanya sat on the floor. The photo was of their teenage days. She walked towards the photo and touched it. She sang through her heart.

Maiyya Ko Lekar Jaawe

Sang Bhi Jaao Saheli

Babul Ri Babul Tori

Jaaye Na Jaaye Akeli

Jaaye Na Jaaye Akeli

Lavanya and Khushi had tears in their eyes as they got up from the bed and hugged their Jiji. Paayal kept on singing.

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

Doli Gali Mein Khadi

As her voice faded, all three hugged each other, realizing that they will be separated from each other soon. NT and Geet stood by the bed looking at them with sad eyes. Geet spoke softly, "Yeh kaisi reet hai? Ki ek ladki shaadi ke baad apne parivaar ko chod deti hai. Unki khushiyaan apne saath le jaati hai." NT smiled at Geet softly, "Geet aap yeh dekh rahe ho ki bahut jald is parivaar se khushiyaan kam hojaayegi. Par yeh bhi toh dekho ki yahi ladki kisi aur ke ghar jaakar unke ghar mein khushiyaan bikheregi. Yeh Parivaar bhale hi toot raha ho par bahut jald Paayal apna parivaar bhi basaayegi." Geet nodded and NT continued, "Ab bas kuch dino ki baat hai phir aap bhi toh humaare ghar mein aayenge hamesha ke liye apna naya parivaar basaane Veerji ke saath. Aur saath saare ghar ki khushiyaan bhi toh laayengi!" Geet nodded softly and hugged NT sideways as both the ladies stared at the hugging and crying siblings.

Place - Arnav's Room At Shantivan

"Arre! Maan Saab! Dev! Arjun! Aagaye aap log?", piped up Anjali entering the room as she noticed the three of them sitting by her Chote and Chutke drinking tea and joking around. "Angel Dear!", Maan piped up as he got up and hugged Anjali. Dev and Arjun were right behind him hugging Anjali while making sure not to squash her stomach. Maan noticed Shyam standing behind Anjali and hugged him followed by Dev and Arjun. Dev spoke up, "Of course, hum aagaye, Di! Hum nahi aayenge toh sagaai mein ronak kaun laayega!" Anjali glared at him and pinched his ear, "Achchaji, toh aap ronak badhaane aaye hain. Apne itne saalon ke dost ko support karne nahi. Yaad hai aapki shaadi mein bichaare humaare Aakash aapke peeche peeche the, aapka kitna khayaal rakhte hai aur aap aisa bol rahe hain." Dev winced and mumbled, "Arre! Main toh mazaak kar raha tha, please Di, kaan chod do." As Anjali left his ear, Dev mumbled, "Dikha hi diya aapne ki aap bhi ek ASR hi ho!" Anjali smiled and spoke in a saccharine sweet voice, "Former ASR! Abhi Anjali Jha hoon main!" "Former ASR hi sahi! Ho toh aap Arnav Bhai ki behen!", Arjun replied. All laughed but Anjali frowned, "Ek minute! Hum saalon se dekh rahe hain ki aap sab Arnav ko Bhai bulaate hain. Arnav toh aap dono ke umar ke haina! Toh aap dono Chote ko Bhai kyun bulaate hain?" All men folk looked at each other and Dev decided to answer, "Jab hum sab bachche the tab tak humne Arnav ko humaare umar ka hi socha. Par jab….", Dev stuttered and all of them realized that he was talking about the death of Anjali's parents. Dev continued, "Jab aap log permanently idhar shift hue toh Arnav bahut hi serious ho gaya. Laga jaise woh aur Maan Bhai bade hain aur hum teeno chote hain. Bas tabse hum teeno Arnav ko Bhai hi bulaate hain." Anjali smiled sadly as she remembered the fact that day she not only lost her parents but she also lost the happiness of her brother's. Arjun spoke up, "Baat umar ki nahi hai Anjali Di, baat responsibility uthaane ki hai! Yeh dono ne bade bhai ka farz uthaaya aur hum teeno ne chote bhai ka!" Anjali smiled and folded her arms, "Achchaji! Bade bhai ki responsibility toh hum samajh gaye. Par yeh chote bhai ki kaun si responsibility aap teeno ne nibhaayi hai?" Arjun piped up, "Arre wahi responsibility! Unki boring life mein smiles laane ki responsiblilty! Inki serious life mein khushi laane ki responsibility!" Arnav perked up at his lady love's name while Maan shook his head at the younger boys' antics.

Anjali spoke up, "Waise ek baat hum aap sab se poochein? Aap log Arnav ko Bhai aur Maan ko Bro kyon bulaate hain?" Aakash laughed and spoke, "Woh kya haina Di, jab hum sab ikkhatte hote the na, toh jab bhi hum teeno mein se Bhai ya Bro bulaate toh dono bade bhai palat ke dekhte! Badi confusion ho jaati thi." Dev continued, "Maan Bro ko bulaao toh Arnav Bhai aawaaz dete aur Arnav Bhai ko bulaao toh Maan Bro palatke dekhte!" Arjun concluded, "Isliye hum teeno ne faisla kiya, Bro matlab Maan Singh Khurana aur Bhai matlab Arnav Singh Raizada!" Anjali shook her head and rolled her eyes; men and their complicated logics. "Achcha achcha! Hum samajh gaye! Ab hum chalte hain humein thoda kaam hai! Aadhe ghante baad dining table pe milenge!" Dining table?? The men folk were confused. Anjali noticing their confusion spoke up, "Arre! Naaniji ka aadesh hai. Ek baar mehmaan aayenge toh raat ke khaane tak kuch khaane ko nahi milega. Toh Naani chaahti hai ke aap sab abhi kuch khaalein!" Anjali walked out of the room while Shyam stayed back talking with the Khuranas.

Place - Aakash's Room at Shantivan

Anjali smiled happily as she stared at the sherwaani in her hand. Chutke toh ek dum rajkumar lagenge aaj! Ab bas Chote bhi shaadi karlein toh hum in dono ki chinta chodkar Shyamji aur humaare honewaale bachche par dhyan dein! Even though her brothers were grown ups, for her they will always be Chote and Chutke. And hence, being a dutiful sister, she was in her Chutke's room arranging his clothes for the evening on the bed. Bas kuch dino ki baat hai, phir Paayalji is ghar mein aa jaayengi aur hum yeh sab chote mote cheezon ke liye pareshaan hona band kar denge! After all, Chutke ka khayaal rakhne waali jo aa jaayengi! Phir humein sirf Chote ka khayaal rakhna hai! Hey Devi Maiyya! Jaldi se humaare Chote ka bhi byaah karaa do! Aaj humein us phone call ka result mil jaayega! Agar result positive nikla toh chat mangni aur pat byaah! Shaadi ke gatbandhan mein hum Chote ko bandhaa kar rahenge!

Behind her a servant knocked on the door, "Bibiji! Savitriji aur Annie Memsaab aa chuki hai!" Anjali whirled around happily, "Aagaye! Achcha hua! Aap unhein bithaayiye, hum abhi aate hai!" The servant walked away and Anjali slowly followed. Her speed was dramatically slowed not only because of her limp but also because of her pregnancy. As neared the stairs, Arnav's door opened and out walked Maan followed by Arnav, Aakash, Dev, Arjun and Shyam. As she reached the stairs she huffed. Ab yeh sidiyaan bhi utarni hai! Hey Devi Maiyya! Maan stopped in his tracks as he noticed Anjali looking really knackered. He felt annoyed at Anjali's antics. Why was she tiring herself? Why was she not resting? He marched towards her and grabbed her arm, "Angel Dear! Yeh sab kya hai?" Anjali looked confused. "Tum pregnant ho aur do hafte mein tumhaari delivery hai aur tum upar neeche upar neeche kiye jaa rahi ho!", Maan growled. Shyam smirked; Daatiye Maan! Daatiye inhein! Humaari toh sunti nahi hai! Shaayad aapki sunle! Even Arnav and Aakash felt relieved at Maan's scoldings. May be their sister will listen to Maan! After all she never listened to them! Maan spoke in an icy tone, "Ghar mein kaam hai toh naukaron se keh deti! Naukar kam pad gaye toh Arnav aur naukar bula deta! Right Arnav?" Arnav nodded solemnly. Anjali sadly looked at him; traitor! Bhai humaare aur Maan ki taraf! "Maana ghar mein function hai but that does not mean you take risk! Just for you, Aakash ne tumhaara kamra neeche shift kar diya! Right, Aakash?" Aakash nodded timidly. Anjali was annoyed now; ek aur Traitor! She softly pleaded, "Par Maan Saab suniye.." But she was cut off. "Bechaare Shyam ne toh teen chaar din se kaam par bhi jaana band kar diya taaki yeh sab tayyaari mein tumhaara haath bata sake, right Shyam?" Even Shyam nodded his head. Anjali was beyond annoyed now; Teeno bodyguard toh humaare peeche haath dho kar padgaye aur ab yeh Maan Saab bhi ismein shaamil ho gaye! "Theek hai!", Anjali growled cutting Maan off while narrowing her eyes at Arnav, Aakash and Shyam promising retribution. While Arnav stared back and Aakash sheepishly looked away it was Shyam who was affected most; Chalo Shyam beta! Aaj sofe pe sone ki tayyaari karlo! Anjali spoke again but this time in a saccharine sweet voice, "Aapko itni padi hai toh humein godh mein uthaake neeche kyun nahi le jaate?" "What?", Maan looked at her shock. Anjali glared at him with her hand on her hips, "Haan!", she spat. "Le jaao humein godh mein! Itni aapko padi hai toh!" She huffed and turned away from Maan. Maan looked at the boys in horror and shock. Arjun, Dev and Aakash burst out laughing while Arnav smirked. Shyam remained quiet. Maan spoke up, "Arre Shyam! Apni Biwi ko samjhaao!" Shyam shook his head, "Tumne yeh gadda khoda hai ab tum hi niklo!""Par yeh toh bhaari hogi na?", Maan whispered but Anjali heard him. Anjali turned and glared at him. She pinched his ear and muttered, "Kya kahaa? Bhaari? You called me fat?" Maan shook his head, "Of course not! Angel Dear! Of course not!" Anjali turned away and huffed, "Then pick me up!" Maan rolled his eyes; it seemed Anjali was as stubborn as him. "Maan beta! Kya baat hai? Utha lijiye apni Angel ko!", they heard Savitri Khurana speak. They looked below to see Maan's Dadima, Arnav's Naniji, Maamiji, Maamaji and Annie standing. Annie shouted, "Haan Bro! Uthaalo! You can do it!" "Uthaai lo Bitwa!", Naani showed her support while Maamiji hollered, "Sharmaao naahi bitwa! Humaari Anjali hai ee! Tumhaari Angel Dear!" Maan heard Arjun and Dev cheer him from behind. Finally, Maan shrugged and picked Anjali up in bridal style. Cheer went up from Dev, Arjun and Aakash behind Maan while Anjali looked at Maan in shock. She had not even thought that Maan would actually take up her challenge. The people downstairs started clapping for them. Anjali waved eagerly at the people below while Maan rolled his eyes and carried her down. Soon, Anjali was downstairs hugging Annie and Daadi and whole Khuranas and Raizadas were filled with cheer and happiness as the evening came close.

SONG DETAILS

The song is from the movie "Paheli" (Year 2005) picturised on Rani Mukherji sung by Bela Shende, Madhushree and Shreya Ghoshal.

AUTHOR NOTES

If you think that the song sequence over-the-top, then please ignore it. The idea refused to leave my head and the idea did not allow me to delete it too.

PRECAP

And the night you all have been waiting for has arrived! While Maan is blissfully happy with Geet, Arnav decides to propose Khushi. Aakash is getting engaged to Paayal.

But will the kidnappers allow Geet to be happy?

Will Arnav get his Khushi?

Will the engagement happen?

If you remember the prologue, you will know that this is the night fate will throw the biggest obstacles in the lover's lives; an obstacle which will lead to sacrifice, anguish, betrayal and ignorance.

Will they survive Fate's onslaught or will they succumb to it?

To know more, be ready on next Friday!

(The update might be delayed for a day,

if there are heavy rains as they lead to power cut!)

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Posted: 12 years ago
okay shall spend an hour on this when home
and it shall make sense this time
so here i am and this time i will make sure not all over the place
lets see how ASR goes down
and what future mrs ASR does to him
he is doomed one hopes
lets get down on to it then
well not really like you say
as khushi wont be upset about the proposal
but something else but what can that be
guess will have to wait and find out huh
so this proposal shall work out but he is still gonna go down eventually and despite of that
that will be fun reading for sure
so geet cant gonna say anything either koi nahin arnie ka toh diwala toh phir bhi nikale ga naa
acha thats one good thing right
at least he is doing something right
well they have to right after all soni is in danger and its not a joke at all
warna poor maan will become devdas without his soni (sorry not paro folks)
well he still will if he is separated from her
which he might just be if things are indication enough two chapters ago with what dadi said
so maan hasnt told arnie about the mishap that happened recently
well thats good for sure
or else god knows how he would behave
not only was anji was at stake but his afreen too
the two most important person's in his life so he will go ballistic for sure
and onto over protective mode hence making things worse
awww if you will get the chance mate to propose
your chances look real slim mate no really
dude aap toh aise keh rahe hain as if you werent kinda in the same situation with geet
lucky for you that dadi fixed your engagement without you having to propose maan
warna same haal aap ka bhi hota
well its possible that might just happen anyway dude so dont laugh at this situation
awww poor ASR being so nrevous well he should be after all KKG aint easy to please and she can give it to him if unhappy unlike other girls kyun
man really practice for proposal hey DM what to do with them man
its supposed to be dil se yaar
practice speech koi conference nahin hain aur naa hi presentation
dil se bolenge toh baat banega arnie not with writing it down and then practicing it
that is if it comes to the proposal and she dont kill him before that only after her finding the truth
gayi bhains paani mein
agar inhone yeh bola naa jo yeh practice karr rahe toh forget it
you are making things worse there mate
but how to tell this one right
poor dev and jun they sure will get right shock when they hear this and they shall get it
see i was saying the same yeh proposal kam aur business porposal zyada lag raha hai
so it shall be rejected for sure by ypur bros only
toh khushi urf afreen toh pata nahin kya karengi yeh sab sunne ke baad
yup he so needs help
if he lists her flaws toh dekhna khushi toh inhe peet hi daale
well guys what do you suggest since you have experience of this naa
kuch toh uska faiyada uthao
waise if anji got to know what arnie was doing kitna mazaa aata naa
she would not spare him till she knew all though even she would say about the actual proposal
in fact she would be like really this is what her chotte is proposing to his girlfriend
she will be disappointed in him as i am at moment
oh sorry forgot maan did propose
damg it my memory aint what it used to be sorry
arrey yaar this proposal scene if it happen now am hoping it will sure will be worth the read
uske baad khushi inka kuch bhi karr mein nahin janti but it shall be worth it naa
please yahan maan and arnie havent been able to kiss and akash toh inse bhi bahut zyada hi bhole hain
well not really remember the almost kiss of payash before babuji phone call put stop to that
hey even maneet almost kissed but that too was missed
after all yeh family story hai
aur itni asani se kiss no way right mazaa nahin aayega naa if they get to kiss so easily
let there be some anticipation for the same NT
so no kissy wissy so far but am sure it wont be far along my dear
NT la my dears our khushi and geet are too shy shy when it gets to these things
though to be fair agar bas chale toh yeh bhi ache ache logon ko peeche chod de
wahan shantivan mein proposal ki baat chal rahi hai
aur yahan gupta house mein already SR ki baatein
wow NT and la sure are way ahead of the boys in talks
warna soch toh dono arnie aur maan ne liya hoga apni apni SR ke baare mein kyun
woh toh hai la what you said so true
and what NT is saying again true for sure
but then maan and arnie are lattoo over geet and khushi too and they havent even done anyting as of yet
socho if they do what will be the boys condition
bechare kahin faint naa karr jayein well that situation shall be worth reading and waiting for but thats besides the point
again what geet and khushi thought is true too but they are wise not to say anything
why spoil her illusion right girls
arrey waah payal aap toh nadi hi utawali ho rahi hain iss gyan ke liye
but then its her turn first
arhi aur apne maneet ka toh kafi time hai baaki toh unhe abhi time hai iss sab gyan ke liye
well these lessons are pretty informative but will they be able to do it
well when it comes to it am sure they will right
awww they are teasing her mercilessly
arrey payal you can do the same for khushi and geet when their time cometh dear
uff ab yeh aap ko nahin chedengi toh mazaa kaise aayega ji
aur yeh toh inka haq bhi hai ji
awww that was touching moment there thinking of her leaving to her sasural and away from her lil sis
but not to be sad as that same sis shall be their in your sasural too
i know that will take time but it shall happen payal so dont be too sad
though how can you not right after all you would leave your family behind for another
man that was just beautifully by you kalpu
so beautiful and touching moment thinking of their jiji bidaai
yes one house will be left bereft of its happiness but another would gain the same happiness
but then that cant be changed either so lets not get too emotional about that though its hard not to
good she didnt come a while earlier or arnie whole game plan would go down the drain right
and that would be the end of his proposal and what not
hawww sirf raunak hi badhane aaye hain aap log
inhe support karne nahin very bad you guys no not reallt they are just kidding naa
i know right even i thought what anji did arnie is their age and yet they were calling him bhai
so now we know why they call him bhai
its because like maan he too took responsibility of their family at early age while the three didnt have to worry about it too much due to these two
did ya just see him just lighting and brightening up with khushi name
beta arnav dont get so happy with her name pata chala di ko shaq hua naa toh sab paani mein jaayega beta samjhe
waah kya explanations diye inn chote bahiyon ne mann gaye ki aap bhi apne bade bhaiyyon se kam nahin hain
pssst anj you may not know now but will soon apke chote ne bhi apne liye ladki dhoond li hai
aur woh aur koi nahin parr akash ki hone waali saali khushi hai
waise agar yeh baat aap ko pata chali toh aap phooli nahin samayengi parr aap unse naraz bhi hongi ki unhone aap se yeh baat kyun chupai
well lets see what he will do then to escape his di
hey DM kisse aap ne baat karr hain apne chote ke liye
please let it be khushi only warna bechara toh faintwa jayenge and all his efforts shall go down the drain
will be so cool naa if it is khushi guess we shall find out soon enough so will be patient for same
well he is right to scold her
its not safe for her to take risks at the last stages of her pregnancy
after all you have enough people to do what you need them to do anj
you musnt over do it dear and thats what maan i saying
seems she hasnt been listening to either her hubby or her bros
maybe advice of a friend she wont ignore naa
wait this is good practice for ya mate
future mein when geet is in that condition you can do the same
then am sure he wont have any probs for sure
in fact he would be only too eager to do the same
thodi toh unhe sharam aayegi naa after all she is his friend but glad he did what asked of him
and yes shyam you better be ready for sofa tonight you never know that she will make ya sleep there
awww he picked her up pretty easily that was cute naa
hmm so the night draws closer for the two set of lovers to go through a lot for their love
will love win over fate and destiny
or will they overcome the love they have for one another
guess will have to wait and watch how love will win in the end
cheers for pm
cant wait for the night of decisions then

the night of twists shocks and surprises and the most awaited night right
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous part
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome.arnav practice of proposal is superb.girls boyas and girls talks.anjali is too much ,u made maan to carry u.hope fte willnot do wrong in their life
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Posted: 12 years ago
really hope arshi gets together
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update...haah loved Maan's teasing towards Arnav...aww girlly talk at gupta house...hehe and dev and everyone pitched in to help him with a proposal...hehe Anjali and her antics...poor Maan had to carry her down...cant wait for the next update...continue soon...thanks for the pm
Jenny x
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved poor Arnav's nervousness...he s afraid of Khushi's reactions...
so even girls are teasing Payal...
loved the update...
it was awesome...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice ... Can't wait for next

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