ARSHI FF:PERSONAL MAID *Link to thread 2* Pg.1 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm charecter sketch is good...but why a personal maid n not as care taker of house...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothim78

Hmmm charecter sketch is good...but why a personal maid n not as care taker of house...?



You will understand why as you read chapter 2...but she wasn't suppose to be Arnav caretaker but as you said the house care taker
Edited by gungun24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely character sketch ! Lukin forward for the upd .. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue and character sketch. Looking forward to read more of this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arshi FF:Personal Maid
Chapter 1


"Tonight's our last night here in Goa lets enjoy it." Arnav said while wearing his leather jacket with black denim jeans.

"Yeah guys lets go to a club!" NK yelled jumping up from his seat.

"Calm down NK... But bhai don't we have a flight at tomorrow at 10 in the morning." Akash tried controlling NK's excitement.

"Chill Akash, no need to worry dude and anyways we'll be going back in our private jet so no worries." Arnav said while brushing up his hair back.
ON THE OTHERSIDE...


"Anjali!!! What's taking you so long, lets go yaar." Khushi yelled from the kitchen. She was getting irritated with Anjali taking so much time just to get dressed. Why the hell does Anjali need to take so much time, we're only going to a club that's it. Khushi thought.

"If you don't come out in 5 mins I'm leaving without you."

"Haa.. Wait...wait I'm out lets go now!" Khushi rolled her eyes at her and got the keys of the hotel room and locked it.


ARNAV'S POV

As soon as we entered the club I saw my baby sister sitting near the bar. I wondered what she was doing here and that to alone. I excused myself and made my way towards her.

"Anju, what are you doing here in Goa?" I asked her hoping that she wasn't alone.

"Bhai, umm.. Khushi and I had decided to enjoy the summer before college together,so we came here." Anjali gave me a smile and hugged me.

"Khushi?" I felt as if I had heard her name somewhere.

"Oh bhai she's the girl I used to meet at the orphanage when I was little." I realised she was the girl who everyone used to talk about. I was a little jealous of her because everyone used to only talk about her. I felt as if she had been taking my spot even though she didn't live with us.

I said I quick good bye to her went to the guys.

"Where were you bhai?" Akash asked while ordering some shots for us.

"Nothing I saw Anju, so went to see what she was doing here."
All of a sudden Aman asked "What she was doing here?!?" I at first felt as if something was a miss but I ignored it thinking how we all love her so much.

"Nothing, she's here with her friend khushi."

"Enough talks of Anjali,lets enjoy our last nights here in Goa." NK passed me a shot and on a count of three we all gulped it down.


I got up to go get more shots. On the way back some next idiot bumped into me making me spill the drinks. "Shit!"

I made my way to the washroom. But on the way I heard some noises coming from a corner.

I made my way slowly towards the noise. What I saw left me shocked. "Holy shit!"
I couldn't stop staring my mouth was left open.

"Don't ever try to mess with a girl like me. Do you get that!! F*ckin cheapo!" I couldn't believe my eyes. The most gorgeous girl I have ever seen just kicked the guy where it hurt the most.

And here I was thinking to go up and help her. Before I could do anything else NK and the guys came looking for me and we left.

KHUSHI'S POV

I got up and told Anjali I was heading to the washroom. On my way there, I felt someone grab my arm and pull me towards a corner. When I opened my eyes I saw a guy who was fully drunk. It felt like he was manhandling me and no body dares to mess with Khushi Gupta. I did the first thing that came in my mind. I kicked him where it hurt the most with my knee and then jabbed my heels in his toes.
"Don't ever try to mess with a girl like me. Do you get that!! F*ckin cheapo!"
I felt as if someone was watching. But when I turned around no one was there. Everyone was busy dancing or drinking.
"Khushi!" I heard Anjali calling me. I quickly fixed myself up and went towards.
"What happened? What took you so long yaar." Anjali asked me looking all worried. I thought to tell her later and not now. Or she would get too worried.
"Nothing I'm just tried and plus tomorrows our flight back na. Lets go" I said trying to change the subject. "oh ha and then we have some shopping to do and also your jobs going to start soon." We paid the bill and ran out.

The Next Day...
NO ONE'S POV
"Anju!! Wake up already!" Khushi tried waking up Anjali, but this girl wouldn't even move an inch. Khushi went to the other side of the bed and got a jug full of water and poured it all over a sleeping Anjali. "Ahhh!!!! What the hell Khush!!!" She sat up with a jerk. Anjali got up and started wiping her face with a towel while shooting death glares towards Khushi. "Don't what the hell me we are going to be late for our flight, go get ready Im waiting in The lobby for you." Saying that she walked out of the room taking her luggage with her.
"God, khush would be perfect for bhai, I just hope maa will be able to pull it off." Anjali prayed to god. Suddenly the door opened and Khushi walked in. "I knew it, you would take your lazy ass out of the bed. Now get move." She pushed anjali in the washroom and closed the door. "This girl with never change I swear." Thinking this Khushi walked down to the Lobby.

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Thank you all so much for the comments. I was really happy, it actually made my day.
So this was just the starting of the ff im not sure how long this is going to be but I hope you guys like todays update...
I appreciate when you guys write comments telling me how it is.. It encourages me to write more fix something if I messed up
FOR PMS BUDDY ME
(Will only accept if u comment or like)
Edited by ll..Gungun..ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the prologue and the CS!!! Can't wait for the first part!!! Lets see how Arnav and Khushi's life is after they are living in the same house!!!

Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res For Part 1

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Loved the part!!! LOL I have a feeling Aman has feelings for Anjali!!! ;-)
I love Khushi!!! Go kick that man Khushi!!! And loved how she woke Anjali up!!! Yep she sure is perfect for Arnav!!! Now even more excited to know what will happen when Arshi are together in one house!!!
And Arnav is dead in one look!!! His reaction to her identity will be awesome!!!

Please Continue Soon
Edited by LazilyAnonymous - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
awesome chapter
so aman has feeling for anjali..
loved khushi..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Heyyy glad u updates
Awesome update
Ot a feel aman likes anjail
Love love khuhsi
Cant wait to see what happen when they live in the sAme house together hehe :D
Amazingly written
Cant wait for more
Thanks for the pm
Ps: Plzzz will u change the font if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Omygoshhh
I'm so lucky I stumbled upon this story!:)
Seems sooo interesting!
When you gotta continue?

If you will can I recommend this to my readers?
Thank you!

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