MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 8 - Page 44

Created

Last reply

Replies

798

Views

90.6k

Users

155

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

mishtiritu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting...

Di mujhe aapse baat karni hai...

Free honge to plzz pm karna...

It's very urgent...

UPdate post karne ke baad pm karna plzz..
ritzy09 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
Request all of you to support Drashti in JDJ...please vote to make out Maan ki Mishty win this title. Use this link to vote -
http://colors.in.com/in/jhalak-dikhhla-jaa/#nav

Happy Belated Birthday to Jyotsana and this updated is dedicated to her.

Thanks lot friends for such nice comments. All of you loved the songs and romantic moments so I am glad I haven't lost touch with writing such scenes.

Some of you are confused about Geet's relationship with her husband. They did have a physical relationship but he did not indulge in anything romantic or even foreplay to be crude. Many of you were shocked but this is a reality for many women.

Thanks Shruthe for the pics

Aashi14 – Your comment made me really smile...nahi is kiss mein Vivah wala twist nahi tha...

Rituja – still waiting for the reason for your comment J

Sree10 – Welcome to jiju J

Lakshmi – OMG my own waiting banner...thank you so much...i just loved it

Parimishty – Song is from movie Prem Pujari

I will now be updating next week only as I am travelling to India this weekend and will need to sort my access and other stuff before I can be online. Also, next four week I am on vacation with my family so updates will be erratic.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 54 – Jaise Radha Ne

"Haan Daadima…acha hai aapne hi bata diya nahi toh dekho yeh mere behen aur bhai I mean jiju hain…meri yaad bhi nahi aayi"

"Meera---Anu"

"Oh please…when you guys had not confessed tab toh Meera aur ab kaun Meera"

"Kaisi baat kar rahi hai Choti"

"Bhai seriously aap toh rehne hi deejiye...mujhe aapse aise umeed kabhi nahi thi. Aur di wow, you didn't even bother t tell me that you are coming here...hmmm"

"Woh Meera sab kuch itni jaldi mein hua…sorry

As usual our rondu Geet got emotional and Meera had to relent

"Oh Di…aap na u are such a cutie pie ki aapse mazak bhi nahi kiya jaata"

Saying this Meera just hugged her Di

"Congrats Di…I am so happy for both of you. Bahut kam logon ko aap dono jaisa pyaar karne wala life partner milta hai...congrats."

"Mujhe bhi hug de de"

Meera hugged Maan too when Daadima made a face "Meera yeh dono hain hi aise…tumhein bhi bata diya bas mein hi puchti rahi is se ki kaun hai Mishty lekin janaab hain ki bas pucho mat."

Just then Nakul entered with a packet

"Daadima sab kuch ho gaya"

Daadima took the packet and kept it in front of Geet.

"Aaj agar Maan ki maa hoti toh woh khud tumhein apne haathon se deti beta. But before going, in whatever time she was left with, she tried to make arrangements for everything. Maan ko sirf zindagi bhar ka pyaar hi nahi balki uski dulhan ke liye bhi bahut saari cheezein woh humare paas chod ke gayi hain. Kisi din aapko sab dekhayenge."

(If Maan's mom was here then she would have given this to you herself. But before going, in whatever time she was left with, she tried to make arrangements for everything. She did not only give all her love to Maan but she also kept lot of things for his bride with me. Someday I will show you all.)

Daadima took a beautiful red colour saree out of the bag

"Yeh unhone khud pasand ki thi aur humse kaha thi ki jab bhi Maan ka rishta paka ho toh mein ise bahu ko doon…hum jaante hain ki ab yeh latest fashion nahi par..."

(She herself selected it and told me that I should give it to his would be wife when his marriage is fixed...I know this is not the latest fashion now but...)

"It is beautiful Daadima…maa ka ashirwad"

Geet caressed the delicate chiffon saree with a golden border. She took it and touched her forehead and then clutched it near to her heart. Brightness of unshed tears told Savitri Devi exactly how she felt at her gesture.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3sm6n4sdaU&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3sm6n4sdaU

Jaise Radha ne Mala Japi Shyaam Ki
Main ne Odhi Chunariyaa Tere naam Ki
Tere naam Ki Ho Piyaa, Tere Hi naam Ki
Radha ne

Geet just bent down to touch her feet when she stopped and hugged her.

"Nahi beat…bas aap khush rahiye. Humara aashirwaad toh humesha aap ke saath hai. Meera, you help your Di in getting ready. You can use the guest room…"

"No..."

Daadima looked questioningly at Maan's abrupt intrusion. Maan had no idea why he was getting so possessive but suddenly he wanted her to be part of him in every way possible. This was her house, her room and she was definitely not a guest.

"I mean, there is no need and she can use this room. I am anyways coming down with you."

Daadima smiled and with a tinge of naughtiness teased him – "Han bhai…wais bhi ab toh yeh inka bhi bedroom hai…hum hi bhul gaye the….kyon Meera"

Meera giggled at Daadima's antics as Maan just rolled his eyes and took her along with Anu downstairs.

Geet was still looking down with shyness when Meera hugged her tightly. Kissing on her both the cheeks she twirled her around in happiness

"I am so so happy Di….I can't express. I never thought Daadima will be so cool about it. She is really amazing…hai na"

Geet bit side of her lip in nervousness. Though Meera was much younger but their past had forged an unthinkable bond between them

"Meera…I am right na. Mujhse koi galti toh nahi hui. I don't want him to suffer because of me in any way."

Meera sighed as she cupped her Di's face

"Yes Di, you are right…absolutely right. Truth is that not only he loves you a lot but you also love him equally if not more. Jab sacha pyaar hota hai na Di toh bichadne ka dukh us dukh se kahi zayda hota hai jo saath milkar dono face kar sakte hain. Problems will always be there in life Di. But if you are together you may still smile and face them but if not then they will break you. Waise bhi, if Daadima thinks that you two are made for each other then who are we to question her decision."

Geet just hugged Meera as even last remnants of any doubts also left her. It was true that she had suffered so much in her past but Maan and Daadima's love had erased every hurt and pain. Their every action told her that they both loved her. Now she wanted to be just excited to enter this new phase of her life. Ek ankaha ehsaas…ek ankahi khushi jaise zindagi mein shamil ho rahi thi…dil ko gudguda rahi thi.

Meera caressed her red cheeks and wriggled her eyebrows mischievously

"Aye haye kya baat hai…Jeejs ke naam se hi gallon pe laali aa rahi hai…aisa kya keh diya ya phir kar diya unhone…."

Geet flushed even harder as images of their kiss just entered her mind at Meera's suggestive words. She pouted and hit her lightly on the arm

"Chup badmaash….mujhe der ho rahi hai"

"Haan haan kyo nahi…sajna hai mujhe sajne ke liye…sajna hai mujhe…zara uljhi latein sawara loon…."

Geet could hear her singing and laughing as she ran inside the bathroom to change.

As she wrapped the saree she felt as if she was getting wrapped in his love and his mom's blessings. Every pleat was like tucking his feelings inside her. As she draped the pallu to cover her front, it felt as if she was covering herself with a new chunar of dignity and identity. All these thoughts raised her heartbeats in anticipation and she finally came out hesitating and blushing. She looked like a newly wedded bride in that red saree and the colour of excitement for being part of her love and nervousness of the responsibility of this new relationship reflected as deeply on the fabric as on her cheek.

Prit Kyaa Judi, dor Kyaa Bandhi
Binaa Jatan Binaa Yatan Ho Gai Main nayi
Binaa Mol Ki Main Biki, Binaa daam Ki
Radha ne

Meera was awed seeing her Di like this.

"You already look like a dulhan di…Maan jeejs ki dulhan"

Meera's words just added to the shade of love which had covered her entire being. Overwhelmed with her own emotions she hugged her tight.

Meera made her sit as she starting getting her ready.

A simple line of Kajal to highlight her brown eyes which had captured his heart the very first moment

A sweet glaze of deep raspberry coloured lipstick covering those lips which he had touched with his own few moments back

Combing those dark tresses where his breath fanned as she chained his soul to her

A bindi adorning her forehead, right in the middle of her brows, where he had kissed his destiny

Dancing jhumkas in those ears where he loved to whisper his heart

Kyaa Tarang Hai, Kyaa Umang Hai
More Ang Ang Rachaa Pi Kaa Rang Hai
Sharm Aai, Kaise Kahuun Baat Shyaam Ki

"Oh No…."

Geet came out of her reveries as she saw Meera frowning

"Kya hua…achi nahi lag rahi?"

"God Di…seriously…jeejs ke pyaar mein pagal ho gayi ho aap. You look so beautiful lekin mein gadhi chudiyan toh lana bhul hi gayi and these white chudis are not going with this saree. "

Geet giggled at her words "Koi baat nahi Meera…"

"Kaise koi baat nahi…khair yeh lo, aap mera bracelet pehn lo

"Lekin"

"Arre kya lekin di….khali haath acha nahi lagege…lo"

Meanwhile downstairs, Daadima felt like banging her head.

"Yeh ladka kabhi humari nahi sunta. Now why has he gone to outhouse….God only knows. Geet bhi aati hongi tayiar hoke aur in janaab ka kuch pata nahi."

Just then she saw him entering

"Kya hua? Why did you go away like this. Doctor has asked you to take it easy not exercise by running around"

But Maan did not answer. He was long lost seeing the vision of red coming down the stairs. Daadima turned to follow his gaze and smiled slightly as her grandson's open appreciation.

She elbowed him and though he blushed a little but still couldn't stop himself from admiring his Jaan.

Daadima took a bit of Kaajal from her eyes and placed it behind her ear

"Bahut sundar lag rahi ho. Just like an angel."

With a sweet smile on her lips she just tried to look at him from corner of her hooded eyes. Feeling shy, she was not even able to raise her head to see him but was just pulled to his eyes seeing so much love floating in them for her.

Paa Liyaa Tujhe, Paa Liyaa
Paa Liyaa Tujhe, Paai Har Khushi
Chaahuun Baar Baar Chadhuun Teri Paalaki
Subah Shaam Ki Ye Pyaas Bade Kaam Ki
Radha ne

Daadima just shook her head and hi-fived with Meera seeing both of them so lost in each other. Finally, it was Anu who jumped in Maan's arm breaking his gaze.

Daadima chuckled and started to direct Geet towards the Puja room

"Ek Minute Daadima…woh…can I..I mean I will just come."

Saying this he held Geet's hand slightly and pulled her towards himself.

"Geet ke saath"

Geet could just see the floor as Meera's eyes widened in surprise.

"Not bad jiju…abhi se private time"

Maan though was feeling awkward but stood to his point

"Please Daadima"

Daadima just nodded seeing how her grandson was requesting. She knew that there was something important which he wanted to share with Geet only.

Precap – Aye Ho Meri Zindagi Mein

-lakshmi- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

accidentally came 2nd...

will edit this after reading the update... cya

edited:

Lakshmi ' OMG my own waiting banner...thank you so much...i just loved it



i so much loved this part... teasings... blushings... blessings... secretly eyeing alll...

loved nautanki meera too...its such teasings which make occassions more special...

maans moms blessings in the form of her selected saree was just perfect for the occassion...

cant stop myself from calling this maan a cutiepie... when he asked geet to change in his room ... am sorry ...their room itself...😉

but the most i liked was the lines u used for geets dressing up⭐️

maans request... ummm... i think he wants to make geet wear something special ... i mean bangles may be... serial main writers tho bhool gaye😭

holiday ... have a safe journey and enjoy the holidays...

but couldnt stop my self from saying this...



Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
mishtiritu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being late...
But u knw the reason...

Now coming to the update...
Aww... I sooo much loved it..
Meera jaisi sis ho to ho gaya.. :P
HOw much she loved to tease geet...
That was actually a sweet-cute moment...

I actually adore maan's mom... How much she loved maan...
And Then the way she has given all that to dadi which she wanted for maan's wife...
That was really a touchy moment...
And The way u described geet while wearing that jwels was just wow...
What's there in outhouse...???
Maan ka kuch surprise hoga... I guess bangles or anklet...
Too curious to know...
But we will get update next week only.. sobss...
Koi na will wait...
Take care...
Luv ya...
Edited by mishtiritu - 12 years ago
HeytzMaaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 53

Haaye Maaneet dreamy update

Shy Geet trying to get a grip over herself and her unleashed emotions, Maan in no mood to restrain😳
Geet asking him about him addressing her Meeshti and his answer...Haaye Mardala😊

Their kiss so soul stirring, pure just like their love
and Geet's confession of never been kissed earlier just touched the heart
Poor her she never felt what it feels to be loved but as she proclaimed that only Her Maan could make her feel this cos he loved her so much😃

Dadimaa wants to give her a rightful place in Maan's life and their family by giving their relation a name😊

This simple gesture means so much to Geet finally she will be his, she will have her family, true love and her soulmate😳

Loved the awesome update Ritzy
It was so touching, their simple but straight talk dil ko chu gaya
Perfect songs
Thanks for updating
🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
HeytzMaaneet thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 54

Daadi and Meera teaming up to tease Maaneet
Meera doing nautanki to add spice to their special moment
These small things really mean so much
Two of her loved ones are going to one after overcoming all odds
😃

Krishna collecting and preserving all 'shagun's' for her Maan ki dulhan😳 was so touching, gives us an insight how much she must have been wanting to see her son settling but Destiny had other plans but she did make her dreams realize by leaving her blessings and amaanat for her bahu😊
Geet touching the saree to her forehead as Maa ka ashirwaad truly shows how much in sync both Krishna and Geet are😳

Geet's self thoughts and feelings while dressing up was so pure and honest and the song perfectly complemented it😃

Maan floored seeing his Geet wrapped in his love and his mothers dream😛

Maan taking Geet I guess maybe he will gift her Krishna's kangan or a pair of payal😊

Fantastic update Ritzy
Thanks for updating amidst your busy schedule and
Welcome to India
🤗


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
893213 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect song selection!
The update ending with him watching her dressed like that and taking her with him... jhappis for that.
Maan so deserves this moment with her.
Meera is so chulbuli and natak company. It shows her resilient spirit that despite everything that went wrong she is now secure and happy with her new family.
I liked the fact that it was Krishna's chunnar that Geet wore. What a pavitra connection you created here..
The thoughts when she was dressing up reflected in the song perfectly.
Loving all their sweet moments.
Thanks for updating.
Have a safe trip.
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
mishtiritu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Cmnt kal... Abhi I m tensed...
Padfoot_Prongs thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
i just love ur song selection.. old one but nice and very apt to update...

nice update di..
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago




Love it...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

8 months ago

Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25 Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25

This story is about teenage Maan and Geet who met at a marriage. Whoever is interested in reading pls responds to this post. Ignore if not...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-2 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".