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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari


haaw. . .kyu be?
Maine kya kiya?


Mere threads kisi ko ache nahi lagte..
Koi nahi aata wahan.
Swaron AT itna chalta hai n KriYaansh TT (Tribute thread) jo maine banaya hai wo😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohad3fan



Mere threads kisi ko ache nahi lagte..
Koi nahi aata wahan.
Swaron AT itna chalta hai n KriYaansh TT (Tribute thread) jo maine banaya hai wo😭


thik hai meri maa. . .
Abb se din raat tere TT mein padi rahungi happy?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey plzzz update next part
I cNt w8 anymore now plzzz i really am addicted to ur ss plzzz
Update sooon :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey friends...sorry sorry..late again but was busy...may be I will update the next part in 2 days otherwise I will not be able to update it for next 8-10 days because I am going on small trip...lets see...AND THIS UPDATE I DEDICATE TO MADHU AND PRADEEP...😊

Part 8:
Kriya took him inside to show him her room...it was well organized and so beautifully decorated room ...1 wall contained a big wooden dashboard(dont know what it called) where she has pinned so many photos since from her childhood till date...they were randomly pinned...not arranged properly which made the whole board look wonderful...in few, rey was also there with his mom or with swayam or with Vicky or with nanu...he was amazed to see his own pics there...

Rey : kriya my pics?

Kriya : yup...main hammesha nanu swayu ya payal mom aate hai tho new photos ka demand karti hoon...unme se jo bhi natural pose ke hote hai I take them...you see this is my private family album...my personal collection...

Rey. :unbelievable...you have very good collection...main tho sirf Facebook pe upload karne ke lie photos leta hoon...you know I love getting comments and likes from people...

Kriya :hmm...that's why I called it private...not personal...yeh collection I don't show it to everyone...only to my family members...

Rey: impressed...(looking at kriya)

Kriya just smiles...then they go down and join Smriti for dinner...since rey went to Bangalore for the first time, Smriti had prepared so many dishes according to his taste...after dinner, it was 8.30 pm

Rey : kriya lets go and meet Sharon...yeah your other friends too...I specially want to meet neha...heard a lot about her...

Kriya : laughs...wait a min I will msg them..will give them surprise...

Rey : cool...I told swayam also that dont tell Sharon about my visit...I will give her surprise...you know 1st time I am going to meet her...we only talk on phone always...

Kriya : hmm done...they will gather in Sharon's apartment in 2 mins...

After 5 mins rey and kriya go to Sharon's apartment which is just next to kriya's apartment...kriya enters first

Kriya : hey guys

Sharon : hey kriya...what happened? You msged us

Neha : thank god you are smiling now...its been 4 days since you were (her sentence was left inbetween when they saw the person who came and stood beside kriya smiling)

Sharon shouts "reyyy oh my god"...runs and hugs him tightly saying "I dont believe this..."...rey hugs her back smiling...neha just stands there shocked...simmi rinni grins all excited seeing rey infront of them...after few secs rey and Sharon free themselves from hug...

Sharon : rey you here? I just cant believe...I mean...itz so unexpected

Rey :(laughs) I know...had some work so came...

Neha regains her senses...out off shock now...

Neha :(pointing at rey) you mean yeh sach hai? He is here ? Actually mein? Physically?

Kriya and Sharon just nods their head all smiling...next moment neha was in reys arms hugging him as if she knows him since ages but what made all of them speechless was neha while running to rey for hug shouts "JEEJUUU"...Sharon simmi rinni try to supress their laugh...kriya and rey looks at each other shocked...after they free themselves from hug

Neha : sorry sorry...without my introduction I hugged you...extending her hand " hey I am neha"

Rey : I know...I saw your pics...(after a pause) from Vicky mobile (winks at neha)

Kriya rinni simmi Sharon : hmmm...from her "just good friend"...?(pressing on "just good friends")

Rey :(laughs)yeah "just good friend"

Neha : haan tho ? Me and Vicky are good friends only...isme hasne wali kya baat hai?okay (after a pause)..leave it...jeeju finally aap agaye...kriya ko manane...tabhi main sochu kriya achanak itni kush?

Rey :(clears his throat) well first of all ...please give us(pointing at himself and kriya) some time...hold on to this "jeeju" title for few days till we adjust with this whole dhamaka in our lives...and secondly I am here on some serious business deal...yeah with kriya ofcourse...and lastly about kriya's kushi, yeah our misunderstanding cleared now...

Kriya felt bad...
Firstly, rey referred the marriage proposal as "dhamaka"...no offence she too considered it as dhamaka only but hearing it from rey, made kriya sad..
Secondly, rey said he came to Bangalore for some business deal...not for her...
Kriya became silent again she was giving fake smile to every one but her eyes were filled listening to rey's words...rey was closely observing her each expressions when he was giving those explanations...someone else was paying all her attention to rey and kriya's expressions...that was none other than Sharon...

Neha : okay...now meet our silent members of our group...the twin sisters simmi and rinni...

Neha introduces them to rey...

Simmi rinni : hey rey...

Rey : oh hi...you guys are twins? Dikhne mein tho bilkul different ho aap dono...

Simmi : yeah...dikhne mein hi nahi, character bhi totally different hi hai dono ka...

Rey : interesting...

Sharon : rey aise sudden visit ? Is everything alright? Dont mind...but deal ? That too with kriya?

Rey : yeah yeah Sharon everything is perfectly fine...and about deal, its a same project deal on which me and swayam will be working together for the first time...we thought lets involve kriya also in that project...

Sharon : really? Yeah swayam told me about the project..itz really nice...fir se teeno families connected rahenge professionally bhi...for a long term...congratulations kriya...

Kriya : thanks...(smiles)

Neha : accha rey apne bekaar friend vicky ko bhi jara samajao...I mean he is not at all serious about his future...raat bhar bait kar I make him understand that along with dance, he needs to do something else also in order to settle down in his life...subha hote hi uska wo "choosa hua aam(mango)" 'give me the beat' bolke mere saare mehnat apne beat ke sath vicky ke dimaag se nikaal deta hai...huh

All burst into laughs...it was really hilarious the way neha said all those dialogs in dramatic way...

Rey : neha can you repeat it please...I want to record it...will show it to neil...it will be fun...

Neha repeats the whole thing with more excitement...she adds some more dialogues...obviously funny ones about neil...

Simmi : stop it guys...(all turn towards simmi...eventually reyz video recording continues) I mean itz a talent...that guy instantly on the spot apne lines banata hai..and you guys are making fun of it...har koi aise talent posses nahi karta...forget about others...we all are very happy to see rey today right? So can any one of you create two lines, just 2 lines to express our hapiness? Bolo...

Neha : okay sim relax...itne hyper kyun ho rahi hai...we are just having fun...

Simmi : yeah ..but still guys...itz a great talent...very unique...we should appreciate it...

Neha : okay meri ma galti hogayi...maaf karde...waise itni tarafdaari neil ki? Baat kya hai haan?(starts to tease simmy)

Simmi : ha.. here you go...tumhe na neha bas logo ko tease karna hai..I am just waiting for your and vicky's turn neha...then I will show you what is teasing..

Rinni : bhool jao then sim...they are never gonna accept it...

Simmi : i know...they have all the qualities the perfect couple should have in a relationship..but I dont understand what is stopping them to accept it...? Why are they still sticking to "just good friends" tag?

Neha : guys shut up...just shut up...when you guys can't see things beyond what is actually happening, then you should understand and drop that topic...(lil hyper)

Kriya : hey neha sorry yaar...maaf karde...will not tease you now onwards...pakka

Simmi : yeah...sorry (upset after neha's sudden outburst)

Neha : guys I am sorry...I did not mean to hurt you guys...accha chodo rey ko bore nahi karte haI ab hum(she is back to her bubbly mode again)

Sharon : yeah... rey kitne dino ka plan hai? I mean this your visit...because according to that will plan things...itz your first time in Bangalore na..

Rey : oh actually tomorrow only(he looks at kriya who gives him sad smile)...I will leave day after tomorrow (he observers kriya blushing slightly avoiding looking at rey)..he too smiles

Rinni : what? you are leaving day after tomorrow only? 2-3 din aur rukte...

Neha : kriya ko apne sath leke jate Mumbai.

Rey : I am sorry...since it is not a planned trip, I need to go back as early as possible...have lots of work...

Sharon : oh...achha tho...fir kal ka kya plan hai? (Looks at rey and then at kriya)

Kriya : meeting arrange kie hai regarding the new project deal...it will take time to finish off with the formalities tomorrow ...

Neha : kya? I mean sirf work tomorrow?

Kriya :(putting her hand on neha's shoulder) yeah because rey work related tho aaya hai Bangalore...(looking at rey...hurt tone clearly Understandable)

Rey thought to avoid it ..then all chatted for some more time...kriya and rey headed back to kriya's house around 10.30pm..since rey was tired, kriya force him to have some sleep...and she goes to her room balcony to spend some time since she doesn't feel sleepy before 12...around 11 pm, kriya was still busy in staring at stars in the sky, hears a knock on her bedroom door(which was open anyways)

Kriya :(looks at the person at door and smiles) come in rey..(she was looking so calm and innocently beautiful in her purple color velvety night suite)

They both sit on the couch comfortably..

Kriya : so neend nahi araha hai? New place so is it?

Rey : nah...whenever I hold on to something from sharing with related person, I dont get sleep...

Kriya : matlab

Rey : though I came here on business purpose but the actual reason was ...YOU...since you switched your mobile off, I kept on trying your number..I spoke to Smriti mom daily..if I wanted, I would have contacted you through Smriti mom but I didn't want that...I wanted to reach you by myself...I couldn't concentrate on my work for 3 days...then I thought lets work on this new project...may be that would succeeds in diverting my mind but the next minute this idea flashed in my mind...you know involving you in this project...but all these formalities and meetings with you and your company was really not needed at this initial stage of the project...but again I wanted to contact you so took this opportunity and came here immediately...

Kriya was silent for few secs, then

Kriya : thanks ..and sorry for the whole clash between us...and sorry for not allowing you to contact me...

Rey : you really wanted me not to contact you?

Kriya : no...I mean my intention was not to cut all the contacts from you...

Rey : then why did you do that?

Kriya : I was upset..

Rey : for 4 days? Upset or angry?

Kriya : upset...and I needed time to think..

Rey : think about what?

Kriya : about us...

Rey : about us?

Kriya : about whatever happened between us that day...

Rey : so sochi tumne uss incident ke barein mein ya hum dono ke barein mein in last chaar(4) days mein?

Kriya : bahot..

Rey : then why didn't you switch on your cell?

Kriya : because I was not getting how to talk to you after all that..

Rey : switch on karke mere call ya msg ka wait karte...

Kriya : I didn't have the guts to talk you

Rey : yeah...saw that when we hugged...

Kriya becomes silent ...

Rey : kriya I want you to say things on my face rather than keeping it to yourself..otherwise we both will be upset...like I said baat karne se misunderstandings clear hote hai..problems solve hote hai...

She keeps quite looking down playing with her fingers due to nervousness...rey who observes this

Rey : am I asking too much?

Kriya immediately looks at him and nods her head left and right indicating 'no'

Rey : so please jo bhi ho feel free to express it to me...can you do that for me?

Kriya : hmm

Rey :(smiles) thanks...so... balcony mein kadhe hoke taare gin rahe the?

Kriya :(understood his teasing tone) nahi universe ji se complaint kar rahi thi...

Rey: universe ji?

Kriya : "my god"...

Rey : oh tho I am sure mere barein mein hi complaint ki hogi tumne?

Kriya : obviously...you addressed all this marriage proposal thing as "dhamaka" and you said you came here on(she realises what she was about to say so starts looking here and there embarrassed )

Rey : (smiles) sorry but...(pauses till kriya looks at him) main aisa hi hoon...I wont accept some precious things infront of every one...I keep them private...

Kriya : private? But you said everything to me few mins back...

Rey : people can't keep precious things to themselves throughout their life...they will start expressing them to someone in some stage of life...

Kriya stares at him for few seconds...unable to digest the spead at which things between them progressing..

He looks at her for couple of secs then (clears his throat to divert their minds)

Rey : I think its too late...I should leave now...

He says 'good night' to kriya and leave from there...

Kriya : (looking up) universe ji...yeh kya kar rahe ho aap mere sath? I want to understand whatever he expressed just now but scared to think about it...or may be I understood everything but scared to accept it...


Done
Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was late mai chahta tha pahala comment but late i got second place but its ok
I m happy that finall humara andolan kaam tho aaya
Congrz Madhu
We did it dekh update mil gaya yappiii
And thanx to dedicating this update to me and madhu
Thanku very much
Now comeing to the update
Hole update fabbullash kriyansh are rocking
Kriya and uske friend se rey ki meet and the expresion of every one is dhamaka tho unn logo ke liye tha sharon and neha
Neha and vicky ka just good friend ka tag
Simmi ka nil ke liye protective hona
All things are amazing
And then kriyansh ki talk about the life i loved it
How cutely kriya complain to universe ji
All update i love it
Update next fast
And ha
Happy jurney
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wanted to occupy d 1st place! Bt itz ok.. At least in top 3.. Not Bad!
Beautiful update once again.. Rey's meeting wid Kria's friends was awesome, specially luvd Neha here..
Was li'l confused why Rey wasn't admitting d fact that he was in Bangalore because of Kria! Bt itz clear now.. Luvd how Rey confessed to Kria n explained everything ..
I'm liking d way d story is proceeding.. Excited for d next chapter..
So,,, U'll update it either in 2-3 days or after 10days!! 1st option is pretty much better U know.. Can't wait so long.. Want d next part A.S.A.P!!
Edited by --Shukti-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

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I was late mai chahta tha pahala comment but late i got second place but its ok
I m happy that finall humara andolan kaam tho aaya
Congrz Madhu
We did it dekh update mil gaya yappiii
And thanx to dedicating this update to me and madhu
Thanku very much
Now comeing to the update
Hole update fabbullash kriyansh are rocking
Kriya and uske friend se rey ki meet and the expresion of every one is dhamaka tho unn logo ke liye tha sharon and neha
Neha and vicky ka just good friend ka tag
Simmi ka nil ke liye protective hona
All things are amazing
And then kriyansh ki talk about the life i loved it
How cutely kriya complain to universe ji
All update i love it
Update next fast
And ha
Happy jurney



Haan aap dono ka aandholan kaam aaya.. 😊
And thanks for such a wonderful comment...and long one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res:-D . .
Unres :-D . . .
Maine sunna ki pura ka pura update mujhe dedicate kiya hai,toh mai bhaag ke aayi update read kerne, haan-haan bhai ko bi dedicate kiya hai,bt mujhe. .seriously mujhe update dedicate kiya. .
Wow. .m super happy. . .
Hmm. .
So review part. . .
Wow smi,
nice update. .
Waah-waah. .rey kriya ko pataane mumbai se bangalore aa gaya. .gud. .gud. . .
They hugged,and finaly unka MU solve ho gaya. .
Gud. .gud. . .
Rey met sharon,neha,rinni n simmi. .i lovd their reactions. .aisa lag raha tha ki unhe 440 V ka jhaka laga h.
🤣🤣🤣
i likd their convo in kriya's room. .
Finaly they r opening up to each othr. .dats gr8.
Chal nxt part jab time mile tab kar dena. .and haan. . .mujhe pm nahi mila,frm nxt time
I want pm. .
And yess. . .
THANK U 4 DEDICATING THE UPDATE TO ME AND BHAI. .
Bahut cum log mujhe update dedicate krte ,and those people r realy close to me. .
and nw u r 1 of them,
So,A BIG WALA THANK U. .
And haan,
HAPPY JOURENY. .
Jaldi aana aur mast-mast update dena.:-D
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
love the way all were chating
specially neha n her dramatic dialogs was to good
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
all were just awsome
neha was talking to rey as if daily they talks
rey n kriya are gng good slowly n smoothly
loved the way their are trying to understand each others perspective
updt nt pt sn

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