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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hai...

just loved ur story... it had a reality touch which made me relate to it soon...

geets apprehension for future and her sense os responsibility is the thing which is more seen perhaps in women... maans temper initially and later asking sorry to geet after her explainng was lovely...

their starting of the train journey was cool... maans possessive side was good to read...

hope u will update soon and lil bit often too... will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will be updating 2dy 4 sure sorry was very busy with baby tua couldn't make it bt will update 2dy 4 sure & next will be will u marry me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimi216

I will be updating 2dy 4 sure sorry was very busy with baby tua couldn't make it bt will update 2dy 4 sure & next will be will u marry me..



will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hv written d update will post it in few hrs.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

Next morning they reached manali.
Maan was still angry with kabir.
He thanked his stars as kabir ws nt with dem on the further trip...as he hd booked one of the most expensive tourist to explore manali hills.
The train stop on the platform.maan & geet came out with der baggage.geet sstopped over der.
Geet:maan...
Maan:haan geet...
Geet:maan wo wo...mey aditi aur naina ko bye bolkar aao...
Maan:hmmm...
Geet again went inside the train as kabir & rahul were busy taking der baggage out.
Naina:arey geet...tum gayi nahi...
Geet:haan wo mey tumey bye bolne aayi thi...
Aditi:oh...
Geet smiles.she did bye 2 evry1 & even 2 kabir & rahul.
Geet got down the train.
Maan:chaley madam kitna time lagta hai tumhe...
Geet:haan bas wo number ley rahi thi...
Maan:hmm ok...
I spoke 2 ali he hv arranged car 4 us outside chalo...
Geet:haan chalo...



Maan geet sat inside the car.on the way 2 hotel maan got call 4m ali..
(Ali is the travel department owner & gives special attention 2 maan as he is a regular customers & even friend. )

Ali:hey maan I hv solved ur wife's complaint dis time I hv arranged 1 more group with u.
Maan:hmm...interesting. ..tua whoz dat..
Ali:they are friends & 2 boys & 2 girls.
Maan:oh...college haan...
Ali:sumthng lke dat bt nt exactly. ...1 couple is going 2 marry soon & other is just fndz.
Maan:ohk...
Ali:they would meet u direct at dinner table. ..as they want 2 explore manali themselves 1st...
Maan:nt a problem. ...gud atleast dis time geet won't complaint. ..
He wrick 2 geet...geet gives maan a confused look..
Maan put hand on geets waist...& pull her towards him..
Maan:ohk den thanks ali...
Alu:yup ur welcome bye...
Maan:bye...
Maan ends the call. Geet trg 2 move...bt maan doesn't allow her 2 move.
Geet points towards driver by her eyes & gives a puppy face...
Maan smirk & wrick.
Geet:plze...
Maan lives her...
Geet takes his hand in her & sits.
Maan:hotel mey dekh luga..
Geet:oh...maan ko gussa aaya...mujhe bhi aaya...chado...aapse aacha tua wo kabir tha...
Maan:kya...

Geet:haan at least baat tua manta tha...
Geet turns & smiles. ..
Maan smirk he again pull geet
Maan:chalo aaj dekh hi letey hai whoz more into it...aur kya haan... kon baat nahi manta...
Geet:haan...f9...
Maan:tua deal...jo 1st pass ayega he is a loser.
Geet:deal...
Maan getz aside & shows smile.
Geet & maan reached the hotel & cums 2 rum.
As maan entered the room he climbs bed & lay over it...even geet does the.same...
Maan smiles at geet & geet 4got abut the bute & comes in maanz embrace.maan smiles.
Maan:u lost...
Geet:pata hai...bt actually I won...
Maan smiles & hugs her more tight. Geet ws tiered so she slept there itself with maan even maan slept.
After few hours geet got up & got fresh.she also made maan get up as she was willing 2 go out...
Geet:maan utho na...I m trying 4m last 15mins agar u didn't get up tua I will paka pour water on u...
Maan:I m sleepy plze...
Geet:cum back & sleep. ...plze...
Maan at last got up & went 2 washroom 2 get fresh.
Both went out 4 a nice lunch.
Geet saw sum good stuffs..so she was buying them.at the same time ask maan if that is gud or bad...& maan nood 4 everything.
They came 2 hotel bck it was in the evening. ...all tiered.
As both entered maan was going towards bed all suddenly geet climbed on maanz bck..
Geet:maan...
Maan:geet u hv got heavy. .
Geet:shut up...
Maan smiles. ..geet comes down & put her hand around maanz neck...
Maan saw geet & without wasting anytime just climbed bed...slowly slowly all clothes were down & they both were drap in quilt.
Maan was constantly kissing her...he ws at his pick point. He made his way inside her..& in rhythm.
Geet enjoyed the pleasure & desire 4more...aftr making many rounds of love making at last both got exhausted & took at small nap...
Precap:dinner. ..


Part 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88596902
Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 part was nice... but it was too short...

try to continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

2 part was nice... but it was too short...

try to continue soon


Itz nt complete I will write more will send pm 1ce complete.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimi216


Itz nt complete I will write more will send pm 1ce complete.



ok will be waitng
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice update
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