~The Traitor~An OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: AurTu

Hi Piu di! I'm back😎
Yeay Inchara🤗WELCOME BACK😎 Aww such a sweet b'day gift...I enjoyed it...& i loved the timeline of the story i.e., the pre independence time😳
Thanks :) There is a specific charm about this timeline,the era was wonderful..Just used it for our Kesgul...I am glad you liked it😳

I loved chotiwaali Gullu😆 waise show waali bhi choti champion thi na remember Champa?😆 I loved everything about this OS...liked their jhagada in bachpan & really liked how kesu had upper hand loved Charu when she pampered Kesu and dantofied Gullu😆
Yup Gullu ki do chotiyan is inspired from the show only😆😆😆Charu si a typical mommy who wants a good tamed daughter but rebel toh akhir rebel hai😆😆😆I am glad that you liked their tu tu main main😆


i really loved the scene where Gullu holds her father's hand...
Yes that was the moment ,she imbibed the qualities of a visionary from him..Who hoped even in the most grim circumstances😳

and after the return of Kesu the scene where he was watching the photo really loved that...the girly talk was nice i liked where she was touching her scar remembering her hubby😳
Yes For Gullu that scar was her mark which reminded her of him..Like he was imprinted on her mind..the scar his physical touch gave her goosebumps 😳

So Gullu ke liye Kesu ne army joi kiya aur choti masteri bhag gayi😡lekin pyaar toh woh hubby se hi karti thi na...flag hoisting scene was superb⭐️👏Last scene ke baare mein kya bolu woh toh ekdum delicious tha😳...Shatkoti pranamas to you for writing this one...Bhagwan kare ganga nadi ka pani & your Gulsar kahanis kabhi na ruke...Please keep writing such wonderful stories...
Thanks a ton yara...Thanks so much🤗🤗🤗 woahhh I am on cloud nine after reading such awesome words..Thanks again..I am glad that you appreciate my works and my love for KG..and lol jab tak...I have time and energy..Stories will keep coming..THANKEEZ
🤗🤗KEEP READING!!

Originally posted by: AshFdo

superb!!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Ahh I love that movie especially Manisha with thoselovely sarees.naa not tht i loved the backdrop of the story i could imagine them singing rimjhim rimjhim ☺️..Just mind blowing music and still...Yes the premise is the same 😳Hum bhi team Netaji mein😆Action you see😛😛😛 exactly
thanks for the appreciation and the lovely comments🤗

Originally posted by: arti07

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

piyu tu kya kya imagine kar sakti hai yaar😲

gulsar in preindependence era😳

res for retro romance

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

aww piyu it was wonderful!

i imagined each n every scene as i read

loved those cute fights of batukehwar n satayanthi

blushed and giggled wid gulaal when girls teased her, and grinned at kesar's anger over the girls

and cried when kesar got shot and he was in gulaal 's lap

and loved the ending

piyu u r awesome writer👍🏼