FF LOVE FILLED WITH Obbession upd ch 3 pg 4

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LOVE
What is love ?? The most frequent asked question
by humans
Yet no one asks about the Depth of love someone can feel for a other
Is it mutual consent
is it sacrfice
is it possession
is it fire
is it pain
???
Love leaves so many unanswered questions
It is a confusing emotion
What happens when two unlikely people fall in love , not only there personalities , tehir ideologies their background is different
What happens to love when it turns obession for one , and suffocation for the another
Read the buring obbessive love story of two polars apart individuals
Pritvi and Meera
can their love survive times ???

Characters Sketch


Pritvi Khanna - A 26 year old man who lives by his principles
which he is not allowed to break , nor any one around him. He is dark , full of anger , he hates it when someone goes against him , yet he has hidden personality which is full of love for his loved ones. He is the dreaded politician of his hometown. People fear him , yet look up to him , he believes good things happen to good people
if you are good to him , he is your angel , if you go against him , he is the devil , which will make your live living hell
Meera Singh
Love her or hate her
you cannot ignore her
She is the super B of her college
Guys love her , women hate to adore her
everyone wants to be with her , thsi strong willed woman is the apple of her mums eye who she fondly calls her Bittu
Born and Bred in Delhi
She is a total Delhi Girl
Loves to hang out and party with Friends
Modern yet traditional
She is caring , loving , beuaty for within , and outside
sometimes naive , yet strong and stands up for what she believes in , Total 21st century Girl

Hi guys i am starting FF , of Mitvi
Its gonna be filled with love , obbession , desire
rage , hatred
Its gonna be a bit dark
yet enjoyable ride hopefully
I am try to update regularly
if you want pms
just buddy me for the updates
Thank you and
Hopefully you will enjoy this story !!!
I will update
Chapters 1-5
Tommorow





PROLOGUE:
There will never be a me or you , there will always be just you , I hate you Pritvi Khanna , I regret the momment I met you , and that I ever thought you loved me , you love just yourself , yourself and this power and authority !!!!
I HATE YOU !!!!!!!!!!! Meera screamed , ran towards the door to look for an escape !!!!!!!!!!!!

All the while Pritvi sat there , taking each and every single word of Meera's in , her hatred fill eyes , her accusation about him not loving her , It started to build up rage , rage from within , that he had never felt before !!!!
He simply stood up , and turned towards Meera and said
Mrs Pritvi Khanna
You accused me of not loving you ,
Now I will show my love , every day , every second
I will make you come back to me
by Hook or by Crook
I challenge you
To stop me if you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

























































































































































































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TehsinaJFJ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg!!!!!😃😃😃Another FF on Mithvi?!!!😃😃😃😃😃Yay!!!!🥳Thank u so much...?M sorry I dnt know ur name?😕M Tehsina,u r?!!😃😃😃
Waiting eagerly for ur update dear!!!Thank u for strtn dis FF!🤗

p.s I REALLY LOVE UR CRCTR SKETCH!!!😛😛😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love u dear Aditya as Prithvi n Ishwar...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛😛😛😛U got me drooling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!M already hungry for da story!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃Deir love story will start after marriage!!!!!!😛😛😛😛😛😛Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳
Waiting for da 1st chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank u for dis FF 1ce agn dear Marina!!!!Love u for it!🤗Plz update soon?😳M a voracious reader!😳Nd heat up da romance,as much as u want!😉😛Thank u 1ce agn!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start.
An intresting story it seems.

Waiting for the updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys for the comments
part 1
will coming up soon
will update today
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it so much , love ur description about Meera so true, love this post thanks
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Here is the update for Love Filled with Obbession
The story will have the past and present side by side


Chapter One
Present:
Pritvi slammed the door behind him after the fight with Meera.
He was angry , no he was outraged that how he would describe his emotion , he had never let his emotions control his mind , Pritvi Khanna never used his heart for anything.He always used his head. He hated the feeling of being vunerable , helpless.
He never wanted to see himself as a helpless man. He was taught to be strong , after all he was a male , to fight and dominant was in his blood. But Why was Meera words hurting him so much ? The way she accused him of not loving her , just loving himself. Did she really think that ?
Was his love not enough for her , for godsake he had tried to change himself for her. In a short span of time , she had become his life , he wanted nothing but just her , she was his everything. What had he done to her to make her feel this way. He knew he was aggressive to her sometimes , but it was all for her good being , she had to know that she was not in Delhi anymore. The way she stood up to him , and tried to dominant him , it angered him. The way she looked at him with her judgy little eyes , it would spark a fire within him that he was not aware of. She was something , she always knew how to push to the extent , these thoughts brought Pritvi back to memories of their first kiss , the way she had challenged had resulted into their first kiss.


PAST:
Mr pritvi khanna you dont own these people , how dare you treat people like that , who the hell are you!!! Meera shouted
Pritvi looked at her trying to control his rage , and simply said
"Ms City" You dont know me or these people , infact you dont know the situation , so it best if you dont butt in , go back to what you were doing before , Stop interfering , and for your kind of information i might not own these people , but i own this place , if i want i can get you kicked out of here , fast as lighting , so carry on and mind your businesses , Pritvi said with a smirked
How dare you Meera screamed
I might not be from here , and i might not know what is going on but what i can see from here is clearly that you are punishing innocent people , look the way these poor men are begging for their lives , do u not have any mercy??? Innocent people eh
Pritvi retorted Do you even know what i am punishing these people before calling them innocent. First of all get some sense in your pretty thick skull that no sane person will punish some one of no mistake of theirs.
Sane people , eh Meera said I dont see any sane people , all i see is crazy people , who are punishing innocent people
The most craziest of them all is you!!!
Do you know what you are pritvi khanna
YOU ARE AN ANIMAL , AN ANiMAL
You insenstive abnoxious full of yourself Animal
WHo has no feelings for anyone but yourself
I pity your parents
Meera screamed and walked away
Pritvi stood there in shock , no one had dared to talk to him like that not even his parents , and this chit of girl just insulted him not only front of his men but front of his enemies , the men he had caught to punish sat on the floor with a smirk , looking directly at Pritvi eyes , reminding him of what Meera had said
It angered him to no extent , he was full of rage , someone had to pay for his insult , he looked at his men , and said
"Beat these hooligans till they beg for Death , until they dont understand the consequence of their deed " He walked of to find the source of his anger.
Meera felt relieved , she could not believe she had said all these things to him , he scared her that was true , but she had to say that to him , he always made her feel vunerable and weak against him and she hated that feeling. She was interupted from her thoughts when she felt a hand grab her from her waist. She was about of scream when she felt the huge hand cover her mouth , she looked up scared and frightened , when she saw the person face , who she had just blasted few mins ago It was Pritvi, The frightened look was replaced with anger , eventhough she felt intimidated by him , she refuse to show it , no one dominated Meera Singh. She looked at him directly in the eye , she could sense the anger and rage , it sent a shiver down her spine. Which made her frantically move , and try to get out of grip. He moved his hand away from her mouth , look her in the eye , as she continued to try get out of his grip.
Finally after a long struggle , she said " LET ME GO"
"HOW DA---- She was cut short when he said with gritted teeth
AND HOW DARE YOU INSULT ME , WHAT DID YOU CALL ME AN ANIMAL" LET ME SHOW WHAT AN ANIMAL IS
He pushed her against the wall , and started kissing her aggressively , with that Kiss Pritvi poured his emotions , punishing her for insulting him , and coming in his way.
Meera contiuned to struggle against his 6 foot 3 body which crushed her 5 foot 5 body . She pushed him hit him , to let go of her. The more she pushed , the more aggressive he got with his insult on her lips. He bit her lips to gain entry in her mouth , when entered her mouth tasting her sweetness which drove him crazy. The kiss was driving him insane , meera was losing her control she kept on fighting , she was drowing and falling weak. It angered her , which resulted in her kissing him back which equal anger and aggression. With her kiss she tried to hurt him , by biting his lips and tongue until they bleed , little did she know that she was giving pritvi immense pleasure. The way she was trying to dominant him , pushing him clawing him until he let go. Two stubborn souls kept this ordeal until one did not dominant the other.

Knock on Pritvi door , bought him back from his memory to the real world. He got up to see who it was , he opened the door
and The Man said to him
"Sir Meera Madam has ..."
Pritvi shocked and panicked
Meera MAdam WHAT ANSWER ME...







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Posted: 12 years ago
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very promising start
seems very interesting, should definitely continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh dear...!!!☺️☺️☺️I love dt kiss part!!!😳Awesome start dear!!!👏👏👏👍🏼I love ur story,nd writing style!😛
I love dis passionate sizzling fights..Hatred which leads to love...Dis is my type of story!!!👍🏼Plz go on,nd update as soon as u can?!!😛I m sooo loooking forward to da next chapter...😉

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