Kria's comeback...hw do u wnt it 2 b?? chck pg4

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva
So in my promo swayam had still not accepted taani and rey's relation...

It starts with swayam sitting in the rehersal hall where no one was their...he closed his eyes and a flashback comes of weaklings practising including kria...

Swayam-The last practise with you...

He passed a sad smile as he took out her picture...

Swayam-Chali toh gayi thi tum hum sabko chod kar...kal jab tumhaare aane ki news mili hain...i was soo happy...lekin ab dar lagta hain...dar lagta hain ki agar tum aa gayi toh nahi dekh paaunga tumhaare tears...

Neha-Kiske swayam??...

He looked up and saw neha amar and bharat...neha came and took the picture...neha amar and bharat were shocked...

Neha-Sach mein??..
Swayam nods..

Swayam-Nahi chahta voh wapas aaye...nahi chahta ki voh dekhe ki rey move on kar chukha hain...nahi chahta ki voh aur hurt ho!!!...

Suddenly a voice...
Voice-Nahi hun mein hurt...

They turn and saw kria...she wiped her tears...and smiled at them...
Kria-Bhale hi mera dil haar gaya...lekin meri dosti toh abhi bhi zinda hain na!!...aagayi hun mein wapas...koi accept kare ya na kare...mujhe parwa nahi kyunki iss baar mein apne dance ka sapna pura karke hi rahungi!!...

Amar-Hum tab tele saath hain klia!!...
Bharat-Haan...

The weaklings hug her...when rey came out from his hiding place...as tears rolled down his cheek..and from behind the door came out the dazzlers sharon aashi and taani...

The screen divides into 6...first had the weaklings hugging second had rey who was looking their with tears third had sharon looking shocked...fourth had taani looking at rey in anger...fifth had the dazzlers and aashi sixth had kria closing her eyes as tears rolled...

Bg voice-Aagyi hain kria wapas...kya karega rey usse accept??...kya rok paayega swayam kria ko hurt hone se??...kya bol paayegi sharon kria ko unn dono ka sach??...kya bacha paayegi taani apne relationship ko...kya bann paayegi kria phirse sabki life ka part??..

Khatam!!...hope u lyked it..

nyc😆

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

So here's a Neha Version...

Classroom scene...

Everyone is sitting in their place...Swayam and Sharon together, Taani has forcefully taken a place next to Rey, much to his annoyance...

Neha who is sitting next to Vicky, is in another world. She is holding a pencil in her hand and is making random scribbles in her book, while she thinks of something.

Flashback.

In Neha's room..Her phone began ringing and her eyes widened as she saw the name flashing on the screen.

"hello" she spoke holding her breath...

"what? So you are coming back? It was a lie? But Aunty...agreed??? awesome news this is..."

End of Flashback..

AVP enters the classroom.

AVP: So, aap log Dance mein believe karte ho? You guys think yeh ek career option hain? Tell me, Dance ke baare mein jaante hi kitna ho tum log? Thoda Dance kya kar liya, apne aap ko coreographers ya dance troupe members samajte ho? Tell me, Chup kyu ho? Humesha ek doosre ka saath dete ho na? Friendship? And aap Vicky and Swayam..pura din apni respective girls ke saath ghumte ho na? Pyaar..huh! I challenge u all..Define Dil, Dosti & Dance. In one word.

Her voice spat Venom. Everyone looked at her angrily at the use of her words.

Neha shut her eyes as the memories came back to her. She roamed alone in the college and banged into someone..Soon she was a part of a Dance team..Two people had helped her and vicky come together...

Someone had sacrificed a lot for them, and she knew it now..

As people thought of a word to define Dil Dosti & Dance, neha looked up suddenly and spoke.

"Kriya"

Everyone looked at her shocked at the sudden mention of Kriya's name, and then, the next moment, Kriya enter the classroom.

Crappy rite? I knw 😆

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

great it is... continue soon and pm me...

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-Shravzz-

@-Shravzz-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

All the promos are awesome...
Inme se atleast ek promo kaash tv par aa jaye aur phir se woh old D3 start ho jaye...bahut miss karti hu old D3 ko...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

we want update of this since i am back to comment it been long time u have not update...

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ramya26

@ramya26

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

guys I want to believe dat ny of these can happen

especially nw

Is it possible will kriya be brought back??

Oh I cn nli hope nd pray

Come back to ur dil dosti nd dance kriya😭

Edited by ramya26 - 12 years ago

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ramya26

guys I want to believe dat ny of these can happen
especially nw
Is itpossible will kriya be broughtback??
Oh I cn nli hope nd pray
Come back to ur dil dosti nd dance kriya😭

even m thnkg same