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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Very nice yaar..loved it...
i knw u are angry bt i was sick and really buzy hope u arent veryyy angry 😊 cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update ...wonderfull..
Love all mayur scene ..specially car n ring wala.
But yeh kaha end kiya h ab next update full romantic chahiya huma plzz 😳
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Beautiful update ...wonderfull..
Love all mayur scene ..specially car n ring wala.
But yeh kaha end kiya h ab next update full romantic chahiya huma plzz 😳
Continue soon
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Your wish is my command Next update is full on romantic...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here Is My Part...
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Love Never Looses

Part 70

He was holding her'.embracing her within himself taking fragrance of her hair'their hearts were rhthymically moving with each other'.slowly she felt his warm breath across her neck 'sending shivers down her spine..their hands were entagled with each other tightly..

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

she pressed her finger's pressure on his'holding them as tightly as could'his breath has started effecting on her'she closed her eyes to embrace their moments in her heart'
He was seeing her..seeing her reaction'how their closeness..his warmth effects on her'

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

He moved near to her more'making his lips to brush her ear lobe'she took a deep breath to stablize her heart when she felt a movement near her ear with a sound'it took a second for her realize that he saying something'he apprached her ear and amorously said,"Nupur'I want to make you mine'wholly mine'"


She was so shy to react ..she just closed her eyes..with a smile on her face giving him her permission'he looked at her smiling face from mirror and turned her towards such that she was facing him'..her gaze was lowered..he cupped her face between his palms and softly asked her,"Nupur..meri taraf dekho'".


Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

She negatively nodded her head still a soft smile playing on her lips..she was all scarlet to even look at him..he held her face more profously and said in his most loving voice,"Nupur please'dekhne do mujhe inn aakhon ki chamak ko'."


Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

Now how on earth she could refuse him'she slowly..moved her eye-lashes upto'his level 'the way love was oozing out from his eyes were making her knees weak to stand..she instantly broke the eyes lock and hugged him tightly hiding her head in his chest..he too embraced her within his arms clutching her tightly..his half arms were caressing her waist while other's were other was touching half her back and her hair'


Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

He broke their hug'removing strands of her hair from her face'.drowning in her eyes'.he neared his face to her'and said sensously,"Doobna chahta hoon aaj mein inn aakhon ki gehraiyon mein'."..She looked to him..seeing how much love..how much passion his eyes carryng for her..specially for her and only for her..she don't know when ..how but words blurted out from her mouth,"Roka kisne hain Mayank apne saath mujhe bhi le chalo..mehsoss kerne do tumhare pyar ko'"

Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

In no time he took her and carried her towards their bed'she was constantly looking to him..without breaking their eye-lock he softly placed her satin sheet soft foam bed which being covered with rose petals'.they were so in each other..unaware of surroundings'setting their own world


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara


They embrace each and every moment of their love'.this is their night of love'he cupped her face in his hands'leaned to her'.placing a soft kiss on her temple'she closes her eyes'to feel his lips on her skin'it left her in bliss..a pure bliss feeling 'a feeling of which she was longing for four years'a feeling to be enclosed in his arms'to hide herself in him'.today is their nupital night'a night to become one..a night after that from Mein Tum they will be Hum


Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera

Now she turned him'enabling herself to be top at him'she stroking his face'touching each curve of his face'feeling his skin..under hers'she placed featherly kisses on his face starting from his forhead to his eyes'going to his nose'.giving kisses on both his cheeks..leaving his heart to to beat spontaneously

Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila

She was making him to looses his sense'he grabbed her waist in his hands..turning her beneath him'.he gave a keen look to her face..it was carrying the beautifull smile which always makes his heart flutter ..it was reflecting happiness'


Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara

He flicked her eyes'while she closed them anticipation..his soft touch was roaming against her skin..he reduced the distance between them and kissed her dove shaped eyes'which holds so much..tremendous amount of love for him..her hands were clutching his vest tightly'the dim light of moon was enlightening their faces'as if they were present there to witness'their love'the twinkling of stars were making the night more beautifull.


Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

He turned her..such that now her back was facing him'.her hair were all apread on her back which were swiftly moved aside by him'.he touched his back..roaming his finger'.at each knot of the dori'.slowly he moved his fingers their opening the knot..and with opening of each knot he was placing a soft and warm kiss there'sending shiver's through her spine due to which she clutched the satin sheet beneath herself tightly to stablize her breath'the rapid beating of her heart'


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara


She was blossoming in red...he turned her towards him...seeing the scenic beauty infront of him ...glowing in moonlight...he caressed this thumb over her trembling lips...while she grabbed his neck in er hands...seeing his curious wife he didn't wasted a minute...and placed his soft lips on her's making a soft..slow...and warm kiss..he want her to feel it...he want her to feel his love...he too wanted to feel her...taste her..want to feel how does it makes difference making love with your newly wife who once was his love..and now has become his better half...


Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho



After ages it seems they broke the kiss...hey both were panting heavily...he touched his forhead with hers...he was ardently gazing making her go pink again and again....

Hum Hai Re Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara

Moving his hand up he caressed her shoulder removing the sleeve of her wedding dress's blouse... she felt shiver ran through her spine with a contact of his skin with hers.. . Leaning a bit he kissed her forehead followed with her dove shaped eyes and cheeks which gave competition to rose petals scattered on the bed... Cupping her face he between his palms...he started caressing her cheeks... with his thumb stroking them on her warm skin... she closed her eyes in anticipation and a zest smile played on her lips...she was loving all this...as time passing..the more steamy his kisses were becoming leaving her in a certain state of solace...

He smiled a little to see his effect on her...it made him feel that she belongs to him only... his gaze followed her pout pink lips which were as inviting as ever..and how on earth he could deny that invitation....

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'

Without any more delay and not intend to make her wait any longer he took her lips in his in the most softest way possible but it last for a short time as in no seconds it took to convert that soft kiss to become more n more passionate with every passing minute from both sides. She parched her lips to give him better access, realizing the invitation provided he entered his tongue. As his tongue touched hers she gasped and hugged him more tight if that was possible while his hand roamed around her feminine curves setting their feelings on fire.

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

Breaking the kiss what seemed like ages he gave trail of kisses on her collor bone followed with neck not leaving her skin for a it second he dragged it towards her ear..leavign a line of wetness on her cheek...on reaching her ear he softly bit her earlobe while she moan in pleasure...next he again moved down giving a pleasurly love bite on neck...she moaned her name,"M-A--AYA--NK..."...while he kissed the spot to sooth the pain... Her arms resting on at his back..clutching him tightly..scrapping her nails..making him more passionate and to move furthur...

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum ...
Hum' Hum Tum ...



He was giving her wet kisses on her bare shoulders n the area between her neck n curves. Her nails digging inside his skin in an attempt to lessen the pain his love bites giving in the process making him go wild with groans which resulted in some more wild moans of hers with pleasure.

Hum' Hum Tum ...
Hum' Hum Tum ...

He moved down to her...leaving her face for a time being...on reaching her waist..he kissed her navel as passionately..as could..and with each kiss..his hands..opened the last knot of her lehenga...he dragged his lips to her...and took her lips again passionately to which she responded back with no less passion as his. On the verge of ecstasy they submitted to each other once again moving in syncronization with heart beats as they were moving..., surrending their body their soul...naming their soul to each other...he made love with her..in most loveable manner he could..he she too responded his each gesture..his each kiss equally...

Finally they were one...after seperation of four years they were together..she was all his now...they become do dil ek jaan...



Hope you like it...
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aye haaye mera waala gaana le liya ye to maine KI mein daala hai😡😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now they are one... lovely update. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

Aye haaye mera waala gaana le liya ye to maine KI mein daala hai😡😳



mene nahi churaya...
but isse sahi aur mujhe mila nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update.
Keep up the good work.
I am loving this ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ayee Hayeee Di, kya update diya hain... Blockbuster...

Romance and passion to iss update mein kut kut ke bhara tha☺️... Really it was superb... Nice song..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm...
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!

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