REVANGEFUL LOVE #4 UPDATED PT 36 pg 113 19/7/2013 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
wtz gonna happen nxt???scard wid precap
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PART - 36

Closing her eyes,she shifted her soft petals to his and abandoned herself to the wild exulatation of their passion that fused not only their mouth and their bodies but their souls. He pulled her more. Geet's lips parted and his hungry tongue entered seeking the treasure waiting for him. She tasted so sweet like honey. He devour every ounce of her. Both's tongue toyed and exchange saliva. He placed his hand on her jaw line and nape. He pulled her more. He kissed her slowly as if to savor her taste and the silky texture of her lips. Warmth flooded her until she felt like she was overflowing with passion and happiness.

He loved her. He always had. Finally she believed this miraculous truth. He kissed her long and passionatly,make her every fibre alive. Both parted for few moments to catch their breaths. The gleam of their eyes are just enough to tell how they felt.

Geet softly stroked his cheek and he grabbed her hand,placed a soft kiss on her palm and confessed.'i love you Geet and cant imagine my life without you. I loosen my all hopes. How can i accept any forgiveness afterwards the sin i commit...',He still burning in his guity concious so Geet stops him say further more painful words.

'pls Maan made me promise that you wont bring our past afterwards. I want my life with you,vanishing all worst memories from our lives. Maan you alredy punished yourself so much. Now i dont want any bitterness between us. Maan promise me from now we dont discuss that night again.',he nodded. Geet try her level best to bring him out of his remorse and her words effect magicaly. He felt lightened and free. Both anticipatedly hug each other
Her strocking on his back soothing all his pain. She end all his tormenting. He was so alone in his life but not any more. Now his love is with him.

'Maan today you get your Geet in form of your bride.',she revealed and bring smile on his sculptured lips. Maan loosen the hug and kissed on her forehead. He again took her lips and suck them with luxuary. But they have much to wait. A knock sound on their door broke their kiss. Reluctantly both parted and Maan moved to open the door. Nakul was standing there. Maan gave him a dreadful glare and he shuddred like a dry leaf.

'wo apko bade saab study me bula rae hai.',he told quickly.

Maan glance his watch showing 1am.'is waqt?', he asked strongly to which he nodded sharply and made a move.

Maan glance back to Geet and she allowed him. Maan went to his father.

'aa gaye awaragardi kar ke?',he taunts.

'dad bulaya apne?',Maan avoid his que and asked another one.

Samarth stare him and nodded. He gave him tickets of his flight.'ye mumbai ki tickets hai 2am baje ki flight hai. Jao jake k nikalne ki taiyari karo.'he commands him.

Maan turned shocked.'dad is waqt?',he asked meeakly.

'hmm. Any problem? Do dinn ka trip hai. Clints ko achhe se handle karna ab tumhari zimmedari hai. This time i dont want to hear any complaint from your side. Understood?',he said rudly.

Maan pick up his tickets and moved to Geet with heavy hearted. He was in turmoil again. After a long time their bitterness is ended and now when she is waiting for him,he has to leave her like this. He was only thinking how he tell her. He entred in their room. Geet gazed him and went near to him.

'kya hua Maan? Papa ne abi kyu bulaya tha?',she asked worridly seeing his painful eyes.

'Geet wo... Actualy...',words struck in his throat. He found him so helpless. He knows if he tells,he broke her heart.seeing him like that Geet get more worried for him.

'pls Maan tell me. Papa ne firr daanta kya?',she feels concerned for him.

Maan wont able to speak much,so he show his tickets to her. Geet read them and tears start rolling on her deligate cheeks. She hugged him tightly.'no i wont let u go',she sobbing cluning to him tightly.
Maan's heart sinks seeing her broken. He parted from her,cupped her face and wiped her tears.'pls Geet its equaly painful for me too. But i cant denied my father too. I want to make you proud on me. Dont make me weak by your tears. I cant see you like that.',his voice turn hoarse.

Geet said nothing more and helped him in packing. Both turned silent. Maan take his bag and moved towards door. He glance back towards Geet and she ran towrds him. Geet hugged him from backside and Maan clenched his eyes. He held her hand and bring her forward to face him. Her teary hazled wrenched his heart. He kissed on both one by one and leave KM without uttering a word. Geet only gazing him leaving.

Whole night spend in tears only. Next morning Arpita told everyone to get ready for the ocassion of marriage of their distant relative. They all had to leave just in few moments as marriage function is going to take place tonight. Geet turn gloomy without him so she denied throughly making excuse of health. Somya feels to stay with her but she denied for this too. She wants to stay alone actualy.
Arpita allowed her to take rest and leave for gurgaon. Geet resting in her room. Gloominess bounds her completely. She try numerous time to contact him,but Maan doesnt replies to her calls,which turns her subdued. She indeed weltring for his single glimpse. Moreover whole KM was empty,which rosed her dullness...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent but sad part...
atlast our maneet is getting closer...
still i hate maan's father...
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Posted: 12 years ago
speechless

awesome update me excited for this ff

maan and geet parted

nowi want maan to prove himself infront of his dad

than it will be fun
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
both have accepted each other with whole heart
and wanted to spend time but maan's father is still villian in their life uff
he send maan to take care of a meeting
andd thsi made geet very upset along with maan
next day all family member alos went away and now geet si all alone
and maan not picking up her phone
i hoep nothing has happened to maan 4

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional part.. Both forgiveeach other.. & trying to start afresh.. Maan ki trip aa gayee beech mein..😡 Geet sad sad.. Maan will return back soon.. Nice update,😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg why maan has to go at this time

they just came close and father has to send maan away

poor geet is feeling so sad and maan is not picking up phone either

hopefully he is ok
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
finally both confessed
sad to see them agair parted
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab ud dr 😊
finaly maan cnfsed hs love to geet 😛
nw everythng is fine btwn them
uff yeh maan,s dad i realy wana kick hm 4 partng our maaneet
both maan nd geet wnts to stay together bt nw maan has to leave 4 mumbai
maan gone nd geet becuming restless
hope maan cum soon to hs geet
nw dr me to desparately waitng 4 d nxt part
ud soon
Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 12 years ago
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Super update

wow maneet finally understand their love for each other and decided to move on together😳
oh so sad maan has to leave geet at this particular moment
hope he come soon
Edited by lenageorge - 12 years ago

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