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Swayam was pacing his room anxiously.It was Sunday and he was hoping he could take sharon for their first official date as a
couple.He thought that even though that jog date was their first date it was too casual and he wanted something more classy just
like sharon style the diva style for them to call their first date but he was confused as to what to do.He wanted to plan something special but his mind was stumped and he couldn't think of something classy as he is our swayam.
Sw:kyaaa karu i know sharon and me yeh bhi jaanta hu ki she likes classy stuff to aisa kya plan karu ki sharon ko pasand aaye.
kyaa karu kyaa karu...
He keeps pacing back and forth thinking hard as to what to do...
Sharon was sitting on her bed holding a cushion smiling thinking about her and swayam.SWARON their first date.She was loving thisbeing in love feeling.She never thought that being in love and relationship with swayam will be so blissful.She was loving every
moment of it😳😳.Every moment she spent with him was like heaven for her and she wished that this would never end...Her musing were disrturbed when her cellphone chimed to life.She picked and saw swayam picture and her lips automatically curled into a breathtakingly gorgeous smile😃 and her cheeks turned an adorable pink in colour😳.She recived the call
Sh:hello😳
Sw:(n mind abhi se hi shuru krta hu) hey gorgeous😉.
Sharon turned tomato red☺️ at the endearment and smiled
Sh:good morning Swayam😃
Sw:goood nahi bad morning😭
Sh:kyuu kya hua😕
Sw:aaj sunday hai aur subah se tumhe nahi dekha to morning gud kaise ho sakti hai😉
Hearing this her cheeks turned pink again☺️ and she blushed profusely...She couldn't believe how easily he could make her blush..
Sw:yahaaa mai sad hu and you are blushing...
Sharon panicked 😲😲at how did he find out she started looking out of the window to see if he is there yet again but she saw no one..
Sw:Main wahaan nahi hoon sharon stop looking😉
Sh:to phir tumhe kaise pataa ki i was blushing or looking for you.Sach bataao swayam kahaa ho tum😕
Sw:hmm mai apne room me hu and i knew because i love you😃...

Sharon blushed again and sat on the bed smiling like a love struck maniac😃😃..
Sh:Hmmm
Sw:Hmmm kya at least reply to kar do
SH:okkk i love u too bas ab khush😳
Sw:Naaa
Sh:hmm? Matlab😕
Sw:Matlab not khush mujhe tumse milna hai so miss Raiprakash maine yeh btaane ke liye phone kiya tha ki there is a surprise for
you so be ready.I will pick you up at 7 in the evening for our First official date..
Sh:Surprise kya surprise😕
Sw:If I told u it would not be a surprise so be ready..Bye and I LOVE YOU😉
Sh:but swayam...
She couldn't complete because he hung up..Even though she was nervous as to what he was planning yet she was excited to go...
Swayam's excitement was no less.
Sw:Hmm Sharon ko to bol diya ab arrangement kar leta hu jaldi se...
He becomes busy doing the arrangements.Soon the clock strikes 5 and Swayam becomes restless..
Sw:kyaa phnu kyaa pehnu😕😕..
he takes out a few shirts and examines them one by one deciding which one to wear
Sw:ye nahi bohot simple hai umm na yeh bhi nhi not this one...this one is not classy kyaa phnu😡
He throws all the shirts on his bed and sulks
Sw:kuch bhi classy nhi hai inme se 😡😡ughh kya phnu.
He suddenly remembers and opens his other cupboard and takes out some clothes
Sw:perfect ye bilkul sahi hai classy bhi hai aur cool bhi yess.👍🏼
He looks at the time and panicks when he sees its already 6.
Sw:shit 6 baj gaye 7 baje to sharon ko pick karna hai dude...jaldi se ready ho jaata hu.
He quicky dashes to the bathroom to get ready..

Sharon is no less.Her room is a mess ,dresses thrown everywhere
Sh:kuch bhi dhngka nahi hai kyaa phnu kyaa phnu😕😕... yeh umm nahi bohot zyaada flashy hai..umm ye naa too classy umm swayam
likes simple to kuch casual dekhti hu finally after so much mess and so much tries she decides on the most simple and casual dress

Sh:hmm ye theek hai👍🏼 swayam likes casual and agar mai too classy and wo casual hoga to bohot awkward ho jaata.Yes this is nice or isme mai cycle pe bhi baith sakti hu..Hmm i think Swayam cycle pe hi aayega..
Here swayam is ready to go
Sw:Hmm cycle pe to bohot baar gaye but i think Sharon will like me picking her up in a car as a classy gentleman and waise bhi aaj
ke date ke liye car is perfect sharon dress me cycle pe kaise baithegi..
Saying so he gets in the car and drove off to sharon's house...
Sharon is busy doing last minute touch up when doorbell rings
Sh:Swayam hi hoga😳
She quickly walks downstairs to open the door.She opens the door and see him standing there smiling with a carnation bouquet.
Swayam sees her and get lost in her beauty even though she is wearing simple clothes she looks out of this world.Beyond beautiful.
Sh:hii😳
Sw:hiii😉
its then she notices his attire.he is dressed formally in crisp white shirt,blue dress pants with red blazer looking handsome and
dashing as ever.As opposed to what she thought.
Sh:(in mind)Swayam formal me and mai aise casuals ab kya karu damn😕.
Sw:Hey sharon so ready to go
Sh:wo tum aise i mean formal me cycle pe?😕
Sw:(laughs)😆 cycle pe nahi sharon car me aaya hu isliye formals so chalein
Sh;ohh gosh😲
Sw:kya hua?😕
Sh:umm wo i thought ki tum cycle par aaoge to i wore casuals but tum to aise wait mai abhi change karke aati hoon
Sw:Nahi sharon koi zarurat nahi hai kuki tum kuch bhi pehno tum hamesha khoobsurat lagti ho😉😉..
Saying so he forwards the bouquet towards her.She takes it and blushes😳.
Sh:okaay to chalein
Sw:after you
swayam opens the door like a perfect gentleman,sharon was both impressed as well as amused by his sudden change of behaviour and all the sweet and gentlemanly gestures that he was doing but she didn't mention anything to him because to her his every action was making her feel special.They both sit in the car and Swayam starts driving.He turns on the music player.Kucch khaas hai is
playing.Listening to the song both of them look at each other and smile.while changing the gear swayam's hand accidentally brushes
against sharon's hand,a soft and simple touch yet so powerful that it jolts their entire body and soul.After the accidental touch
swayam holds sharon's hand intentionally while sharon is shocked😲😲 at first at his bold gesture she later settles down and just enjoythis new side of him the classy and forward side.The drive is pleasant and love is all around them but suddenly car stops.
Sh:kyaa hua pohonch gaye😕
Sw:Nahi wo pta nahi ku gaadi band ho gayi tum ruko main dekhta hu
saying so he gets out of the car and opens the bonnet.Few minutes pass when sharon comes outside to see whats taking so long
Sh:kya hua koi problem hai kya
Swayam is busy working out the fault.the engine is hot and is radiating heat causing him to sweat.He wipes the sweat off his face and replies
Sw:pta nahi sharon kuch samajh nahi aa rha😕
Sharon looks at his face and starts laughing maniacally.Swayam is confused but sharon is laughing uncontrollably😆😆
Sw:kyaa hua sharon hans ku rhi ho😕
Sh:tumhaara face bwahaaa😆😆😆
Sw:kyaaa huaa😕
Sh:tumhaare face pe grease lagi hai bilkul monkey lag rahe ho😛
Sw:achha mai bandar lag rha hu hmm to ye lo😈
Saying so he smudges her nose with grease too and stars laughing.Sharon glares at him but then starts laughing too.They laugh and play with grease some more
Sw:okk sharon bas even though gaari kharaab ho gayi hai and hum dono weird lag rhe hai but i still want to take u somewhere.
Sh:par hum jaayenge kaise😕
Sw:ummm😕
he scratches his head thinking of something when he sees a cycle standing at the roadside and his owner enjoyi at a tea stall.His
eyes turn mischievious
Sw:waise😉
saying so he points towards the cycle
Sh:par wo kisi aur ki cycle pe hum kaise tum paagal ho gaye ho kya swayam😲😲 usne dekh liya to
Sw:shhh
Sh:par
Sw:chalo mere saath come on
saying so he catches her wrist and they both move towards the cycle quietly.they reach the cycle and swayam sits on it without
making any noise.He motions sharon to join him.Sharon though hesitates but then sit in front of him.Swayam holds the handle and starts paddling as fast as he can to go unnoticed by the owner.Even though Sharon is scared but she is secretly loving the
adventure.Soon they are far and riding the bicycle freely.Swayam is loving the feeling of having her enclosed in his arms so close to
him and sharon is enjoying the warmth radiating off him and the feeling of his heartbeat against her back.They both are loving the proximity and just bask in its warmth,suddenly swayam starts humming a song and sharon becomes intrigued his humming turns to full on singing the old melody
YEH SHAAM MASTANI,MADHOSH KIYE JAYE
HUME DOOR KOI KHEECHE TERI OR LIYE JAYE.
he continues singing but after a while sharon becomes impatient.
Sh:par hum jaa kha rhe hai
Sw:you'll see
Soon they reach the beach and sharon is mesmerised.Moon is brightening the sky bathing the ocean with it moonlight making it shine like diamond.Waves are rising and falling.Wind is blowing as if purifying the atmosphere.The whole ambience just makes sharon fall in love with it.
Sh:woww swayam this is so beautiful😃
Sw:pata hai sharon mai hamesha chaahta tha ki tum ho main houn aur hum dono moonlight me beach pe walk kare aur halki halki
baarish ho aaj sab hai sirf baarish ki kami hai
Just as he said this, clouds roared to life and thunderd making loud noise as if saying you just had to order and we shall deliver the rain.Soon small droplets started falling on them.
Sw:Ab sab hai,lekin fir bhi ek kami hai
Sh:wo kya😕
Sw:dance?
Saying so he forwards his hand and She takes it with a smile.
Sw:actually ek kami aur hai
Sh;ab kyaa😕
Sw:music ek min
he pulled out his phone and played pehla nasha and set the phone on a rock nearby and took sharon's hand again.The music started
and they started swaying to the melodious beat.It was magical all of it the scenery,the song,the dance,the rain and most
importantly them.

CHAAHE TUM KUCH NAA KAHO
MAINE SUNN LIYA
KE SAATHI PYAAR KA MAINE CHUN LIYAA
MAINE SUN LIYAA...

She sang with the lyrics and swayed with him.She was feeling the words of the song and she knew he could to.They started doing
waltz with the piano music.

PEHLA NASHAA PEHLA KHUMAAR
NAYA PYAAR HAI NAYA INTEZAAR
KARLU MAI KYA APNA HAAL
E-DIL-E BEKARAAR MERE DIL-E-BEKARAAR
TU HI BATAA
PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR

he sang and twirled her around gracefully with so much poise.their each movement was perfection.he lifted her up in his arms and
twirled her in his arms and she took hold of his shoulders and just enjoyed the moment.It was magical him,her and the night
everything.He slowly put her down and their eyes connected and they could see the intense love in each others eyes.It was
engulfing them both.

UDTAA HI PHIROON IN HAWAAON ME KAHI
YAA MAI JHOOL JAOON IN GHATAON ME KAHI
IK KARDOON AASMAAN AUR ZAMMEN
AB YAAARON KYA KARU KYA NAHI

he left her hand and jumped high and then twirled around her as if justifying the lyrics with his dance.He opened his arms wide and
bent backward a little(SRK Style😆) he did a few more pirouettes and then sat on his knees in front of her with his arms wide open
with a huge smile on his face.She looked at him with awe and love.He stood up again and engulfed her in his strong and muscular
arms.

PEHLA NASHAA PEHLA KHUMAAR
NAYA PYAAR HAI NAYA INTEZAAR
KARLU MAI KYA APNA HAAL
E-DIL-E BEKARAAR MERE DIL-E-BEKARAAR
TU HI BATAA
PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR

they again started doing waltz steps soft and graceful like peacock dancing in rain.They twirled and swayed with the wind and
danced their heart and souls out.

USNE BAAT KI KUCH AISE DHANG SE
SAPNE DE GAYA WO HAZAARON RANG KE
REH JAAON JAISE MAI HAAR KE
AUR CHOOME WO MUJHE PYAAR SE

she left his hand twirled around him in circles singing the song with full emotions.She stopped and kept her head on his shoulder as if
she was dreaming right there.She sang
REH JAAON JAISE MAI HAAR KE
and hid herself in his chest as if hiding there for the rest of her life.
AUR CHOOME WO MUJHE PYAAR SE
as soon as she sang these words he kissed her forehead lovingly and hugged her tightly to his chest🤗.

PEHLA NASHAA PEHLA KHUMAAR
NAYA PYAAR HAI NAYA INTEZAAR
KARLU MAI KYA APNA HAAL
E-DIL-E BEKARAAR MERE DIL-E-BEKARAAR
TU HI BATAA
PEHLA NASHA PEHLA KHUMAAR

they again resumed the basic waltz pose and started dancing.they kept dancing and enjoying the moment of love and warmth.It was
a really very special moment for both of them their first official couple dance and they both were loving it to the core.Soon the
music ended but they both were too lost in each other to notice.Loud thundering noise brought them out of their trance and theyboth separated reluctantly.
Sw & Sh:WOW
they both said at the same time and then shared a smile at their thoughts.
Sw:thank you sharon for this memorable day.Agar tum meri life me nahi hoti to ye kabhi possible nahi hota.I Love You sharon and
I'm soory mai aaj ki date special banaana chaahta tha tumhaare liye lekin sab kharaab gayaa but still kuch hai jo main tumhe dena
chahta hu
saying so he bent down on his knee and pulled out a beautiful velvet box out of his pocket .he opened the box and inside it rested a gorgeous platinum band with S❤️S engraved on it.
Sw:this is a promise ring which i am giving u today as a reminder of all the promises that i made with u and wish to keep them
forever.with this ring sharon i want to promise u that no matter how the situations are i will always stand there right beside u.
I promise that i will never leave u alone and will keep on loving u more and more with each breath i take so do u accept this ring and will u let me have the honour of calling u mine forever n ever.

Sharon's eyes were moist😭😭 she was touched by his sincerety and his undying eternal love for her.she could not believe her luck ,it astonished her that after everything that she has put him through he still loved her with such devotion.
Sh:OMG swayam ye sb 😲...ku i mean😲... i dont...i can't believe😲😲 Thank you Swayam for making me feel so special.Agar tum meri life me nahi aate to mai kabhi jaan hi nahi paati that love is such a beautiful feeling which makes your life heaven
She forwards her hand
Sh:It will be my honour to call u mine not the other way round and kisne kahaa ki date kharaab ho gayi isse zyaada beautiful aur
perfect date to ho hi nahi sakti😃😃.So dont be sorry okk and I Love you too...
Swayam puts the ring on the ring finger of her right hand
Sw:abhi ke liye is hath mein but i promise one day i will put another ring but in ur left hand😉.
she blushes☺️ thinking about what exactly he meant by that it surprised yet thrilled her too that he was so determined to marry her

Sw:thank you sharon for coming in my life and for making me aware of this magical feeling called love
Sw:I LOVE U❤️
Sh:I LOVE U TOO❤️
Sw:Vaise mn to ni kr rha😉 but kaafi raat ho gayi hai and i think bohot tez baarish hone waali hai aur phir hume kal college bhi jaana hai to chale..

Sh:hmm chalo chalein and hume us poor person ki cycle bhi to return karni hai

Remembering about the cycle incident they both started laughing🤣.Soon their Laughter died down and they both sat on the cycle and left with more love in their hearts than ever and the promises of a future full of only love and happiness for both of them...


A swaron os I wrote for shilpa dii's birthday.Do hit the like tab if you like it and comment too.Enjoy
Harshi😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..
padne kebaad hi toh unres karunga...😛



hey its was cute...very darn cute...loved the single it of it...but i liked dance the most...awsm os with a lovely end...and yaa the ring...awww...


Rohan :)
Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was great and superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all really sorry for late comment... 😔

coming back to ur OS..

harshu it was too cute and romantic.. 😳

its always treat to read loverboy swayam...and laila sharon... 😳

bechara swayam..sare plans flop hogaye... 😆

ending ws beautiful... 😳

and bg tune made it perfect.. 😃

overall just loved it.. 😃
Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Harshu first a big wala hug 🤗 for giving such big n beautiful OS...jitni baar Sharon blush kar rahi thi utni hi baar main bhi blush kar rahi thi...This was freaking beautiful dear love u so so much for this lovely n wonderful update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Harshi that was so beautiful... I loved the date concept...Sharon blushing swayam smirking... loved of...cycle ride was amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a lovely os! 😃 I hope something like this happens between swaron in the show...it will be amazing!😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kiddo 🤗 🤗
Thank u so so so so much for writing dis os for my b.day 😊
Mein shocked thi yeh padke mera dream date for swaron n u wrote an os on dat woh bhi for my b.day..
Thank u very very much.. Am so so happy i just can't explain it in words 🤗
Dis one was brilliant... U know Wat i ve read it so so many times on my b.day thread but not able to get over it..
Its so sweet of u to write it for me..
Just can't thank u enough..
U guys really made my day more n more special..
Dis os was so beautiful i loved it 👏
It was so perfectly written...
Loved d part wen dey took off dat guy.s cycle n ran 😆 😆
Cycle ride beach baarish n cherry on d cake was pehla nasha song
It had all elements of Wat i wanted in my dream date for swaron...
But d way u penned out n wrote all d dialogues was brilliant 👏 👏
I could never think of writing anything like dis..
Very cute os..
Swayam formally dressed behaving like a gentleman n sharon casually dressed.,
Swayam singing for sharon.. I just loved every bit of it😊 😊
Dis is very special for me... I feel like reading it again n again..
N now i know y dis Chandu was asking me about my dream date for swaron 😆 😆

Thank u so much for taking in so much efforts for me 🤗

With love..
Shilpa 😃

Ps: copy pasted comment from my b.day thread..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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harshu di for you 🤗🤗
lovely OS
agar aap writing gallery nhi banate to mera kya hota 😭😭
but ab mene pad liya 🥳

P.S. me last 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt😳🤗

That was oh-so - adorable...beautifully written...loved the flow in the story...their excitement about the date...trying look special for each other...trying to understand each others likes and dislikes...determined to make the date special for each other...loved the way u portrayed their excitement for the date...adorableness personified..SWARON😳
The momenthe came to pick her ...Sharon's cuteness was beautifully expressed...when she wanted to go and change just because he got car instead of cycle😆...these two are cutest thing on earth...
The ride..the sudden break down ...cycle hijack...i loved the flow...
The end of this OS was dreamy...not only SwaRon but for any couple in love will look adorable saying those lines..the promise ring signified his determination to make her his forever...beautifully written😳👏
Keep writing dear...loving ur style of writing
Love
Deepika
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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