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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the update Sandy, pls PM me dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


exactly issliye mein yeh scene avoid kiya. matlab Priya ke mann mein bhi ek baar bachha abort arne ka khayal aaya.
actually mother ki consent zaroori hai. yes, aaj bhi hus. overrule😕.


True but i m happy its changing slowly slowly..
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bpatil3


OMG Sandhya Ramji ko apni biwi ko uthakar leke jaane ki zaroorat kya hai , paagal premi ki tarah😆😆. kya kya twist leke aa rahi ho👏👏

achha hai na, new thinking😆. mein toh kabka happy ending karne wali thi,lekin kuch log ek se ek suggestion dete rehte hai unhe udas nahi kar sakti. arre itna bor bhi nahi hoga😉
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

am waiting for the concluding update

update coming in minutes😊
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Originally posted by: zeylanica

That was just awesome ..very much emotional.. well penned down..

continue soon n thanks for PM

thank u😊
update is coming...
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

waiting for the update Sandy, pls PM me dear

last time aapne update pad liya tha so meine PM nahi kiya. surely this time I PM u😊
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PART- 30

Scene-87

Priya not in office

Ram stirred from his sleep. He is missing her badly. Silence of room is killing him. He opened the cupboard and selecting dress for himself. He doesn't know what to wear; after marriage Priya select dress for himself. He saw her sarees are hanging; he touched her sarees and feeling her presence.

He comes out takes her photo

Ram:- I am sorry Priya. Meine tumhare saat jo bhi kuch kiya uske liye sorry. Lekin mein sab kuch teek kar dunga. kitne din ho gaye hai hum dono ko ek saat'''' I am missing you badly.

He smiles and kisses her photo and put it back and left for office.

Ram reaches office little early. He is feeling fresh today. He is eagerly waiting for her. He is losing his patience and keeps looking his watch.

One by one all staff came but not Priya.

Ram "Priya aaj bhi tum late. Abhi tak nahi aayi. Shaadi se pehle kabhi bhi late nahi hui, mana ki shaadi ke baad tum hamesha late aati ho lekin at least aaj toh time par aa jao. Apne maa ke ghar par ho time se toh aa hi sakti ho. Tum nahi jaanti mein kitna tadap raha hoon tumse milne"

Vikram entered into his cabin. He saw Ram is talking to himself.

Vikram:-(teasingly) kisse baate ho rahi hai akele mein'

Ram:- vikram!!!! Tu kab aaya'.

Vikram:- jab tu akele mein Priya se baat kar raha tha'.

Ram blushed.

Ram:- Vikram meine Priya ko kaafi hurt kiya hai'..mein usse maafi maangna chahta hoon. sab kuch pehle jaise'.woh mere bachhe ki maa banne wali hai'mein usse batana chahta hoon ki mein kitna kush hoon.

Vikram:- yeh hui na baat. Abb lag raha hai ki tu mera hi dosth hai.

Ram:- Vikram!!!! I am so exited'mein baap banne wala hoon'.I am going to be a father'.(Ram hugs Vikram in excitement)

Vikram:- jaa'aur priya se bol that u r equally exited'.

Ram:- haan lekin Priya hai kahan'.hamesha ki tarah late'

Ram keeps looking at the watch. Its 11 o'clock but Priya has not come.

His impatience, anger, love everything is increased.

Time is moving but Priya is nowhere. Its 12 o'clock. He decided to call her but as usual her mobile is switched off. Ram gets irritated.

Ram:- abb agar meine Priya ke haat mein mobile dekha toh sach mein , mein khud usse uthkar feq dunga. Agar swaitch off hi rakna hai toh lekar ghumti kyun hai. He bangs his hand on the table.

He is biting his nails and thinks. Suddenly he remembers "Priya teek toh hai na'kal usne kahan tha ki woh doctor se milne jaa rahi hai'.kal maa ne bhi kaha tha'afternoon uski tabiyat thodi kharab thi'.aur yahan bhi toh woh faint ho gayi thi'.mein abhi doctor se baat karta hoon"

He calls doctor

Ram:- doctor mein Mr.Ram kapoor baat kar raha hoon. Mrs. Priya kapoor meri biwi. Kal aapse milne aayi thi. Kya aap bata sakte hai ki woh kyun aayi thi, unhe kya hua hai'

Doctor:- yes, Mr. Kapoor. Priya bilkul teek hai. kal unhe thodi si bleeding ho gayi thi'but she is fine'meine unhe rest karne ko kaha tha'

Ram(worriedly):- dr. bachha teek toh hai na'

Dr:- don't worry Mr. kapoor'Priya is alright.

Ram thinks"itni badi baat ho gayi aur tumne muje bataya bhi nahi"

He calls in her landline. Priya attended the call.

Priya:- hello!!!!

When he hears her voice he mesmerized with her voice. He closed his eyes. Priya again said hello

Ram came back to his sense.

Ram:- priya'mein Ram bol raha hoon.

This time priya becomes enthralled with her man's voice. She becomes silent.

After sometime

Ram:- kaisi ho Priya'.meine tumhare mobile par call kiya tha,switched off aa raha tha.

Priya:- shayad mobile mein charge nahi hoga issliye''.

After some time

Priya:- Ram maa bula rahi hai'

Ram:- ok''apna khayal rakna'.

Both hang up the call.

Priya thinks "Ram aapne abhi bhi bachhe ke baare mein nahi poocha. mein jaanti hoon Ram aap mujse naraz hai''.lekin meine bhi ek faisla liya hai'.uske baad aapko mujse koi takleef nahi hogi.

In cabin,

Vikram:- kya hua'Priya se baat hui ki nahi'

Ram:- haan hui..

Vikram:- kya kaha'aaj aa rahi hai ki nahi'.

Ram:- shayad nahi'.waise bhi woh apne maa ke paas mein hai. jab se shaadi hui hai kabhi maa ke paas ruki nahi hai'mein kal uuse bula lunga.

Vikram:- yeh baat sahi ki. Biwiyaan poora din, poora saal hamara khyal rakti hai'apne maa baap se door'''issliye toh jab bachho ki school ki chutti hoti hai, mein Neha ko uske ghar bhej deta hoon''..toh aaj toh Priya ghar par nahi hai'toh aaj ka kya plan hai'.tu kahe toh sham ko hum dono ek ek peg'.

Ram:- Nahi Vikram'.aaj nahi'aaj mein sirf akele rehna chahta hoon'

Scene-88

In KM, at night

Ram in his bedroom. Takes photo of Priya and talks

"Priya'I am very sorry'tumhara shaadi ke baad pehla birthday tha aur meine poora kharab kar diya'.lekin jo mein tumhe uss waqt dena chahta tha'.mein tumhare aane ke baad dunga aur hum wapas se uss pal ko phir se jeeyenge. I miss you dear".

Saying this he slept.

Next day morning,

At Sharma house, around 6 o'clock

Somebody knocks the door. Priya open the door. She is surprised to see Ram in front of him. Ram is smiling at her and said Good morning

Priya:- aap!!!!!yahan..iss waqt?????

Ram:- saara interrogation yahi logi ki andhar bhi bhulaugi

Priya:- sorry'.aap aayiye'.

Ram:- Maa-Papa kahi dhikayi nahi de rahe

Priya:- woh abhi thodi der pehle morning walk ke liye gaye hai'

Ram:- oh wow~!!!! Iska matlab tum ghar par akeli ho.

Saying this he hugs Priya very tightly. He closed his eyes. Priya is shocked with his sudden reaction. She can feel pain. She brushes her hand on his shoulder.

After sometime he broke the hug. He looked into the eyes of Priya and again hugs her. This time Priya also hugs him. She understands how much Ram is missing her. He broke the hug and kisses her forehead and gives numerous kisses on her cheeks.

Ram:- I love you Priya. Wada karo Aaj ke baad tum muje kabhi chodkar nahi jaaongi. I can't live without you.

Priya can see pain in his eyes.

Ram bend down in his knees. Pulls Priya and place his head near her stomach. He touched her stomach and gently kiss on her stomach.

Ram" mein aapka papa bol raha hoon'.aapke papa aapka besabri se intezaar kar rahe hai. aapke papa bahut bure hai'pata hai aapke papa ne aapki mumma ko bahut rulaya aur aapko''

Priya puts her finger on his lips and stops and nods in negative. Priya had tears in her eyes'

Ram removed her hand and said'mumma aur papa aapse bahut pyar karte hai.

He kisses on more time on her stomach. He stands and wipes her tear. Ram gently takes her lips in his, priya is also responding''.

Scene shifted to KM

Bansi Kaka called Ram from his sleep. Ram opens his eyes and saw on the other side. Priya is not there. He realized he is dreaming.

Ram:- kya hua BK'aapne itni subah subah jagaya kyun????pata hai kitna achha sapna dekh raha tha

BK:- saab'.subah ke 8 baj gaye hai

Ram jumped from his bed and said "8 baj gaye hai'aapne muje pehle kyun nahi jagaya'aap jaayiye'aur mere liye chai lekar aayiye"

BK:- naaste mein kya banau'.

Ram:- kuch bhi nahi. Mein office mein kar lunga.

Scene- 89

Ram and Priya's shopping

He reached office. But today also Priya is not there.

Vikram:- Ram'aaj Priya ko batane wala hai na..

Ram:- haan lekin mein kaafi nervous hoon. pata nahi woh muje samjegi bhi ya nahi..mere dil se yeh baat jaa hi nahi rahi ki mein apne hi bachhe ko abort karne ko kaha. Jab woh hamari zindagi mein aayega mein usse dekh paaunga.

Vikram:- Ram apne demaag se yeh guilt nikal de aur Priya ko samja aur jitni khushi tu Priya aur apne iss bachhe ko de sakta hai de de. Jo hua so bhool jaa.

Ram:- teek hai'.Vikram!!! muje na bachhe ke liye shopping karne ka dil kar raha hai.

Vikram:- arre itni jaldi'.abhi time hai'

Ram:- haan mein jaanta hoon. lekin phir bhi'.

Vikram:- ok toh chal'.

Both ram and vikram left. They reached one mall, parked their car and entered into one toy shop. Ram purchased many toys like small car, big car, remote control car, many soft toys, sound making toys etc. etc.

Vikram is standing in the corner and smiles. Ram is very much exited.

Vikram;- arre bass kar'..aaj hi poori shopping karega ki bachhe ke aane ke baad mein kuch baaki rakega'

Ram:- arre karunga na'next time Priya ke saat, phir apne baby ke saat.

On the other side,

Neha came to meet Priya. She saw Priya is feeling lonely. To change up her mind Neha told Priya to go with her for shopping.

Priya:- nahi Neha'muje kahi nahi jana'.mera mann nahi hai

Neha:- issliye toh keh rahi hoon'hum kahi shopping ke liye chalte hai. wahan ring road ke paas ek naya shop khula hai'wahan new born baby's ke liye kaafi saare items aaye hai'chalo na'

Priya:- please neha'

At last Priya agreed.

Priya:- tum na bilkul Ram ki tarah ho. Ek baat ko lekar adh jaate na phir uske peeche hi pad jaate hai.

Neha:- Ram ki yaad aa rahi hai'.

Priya:- Nehaa' ek toh muje bilkul mann nahi kar raha..upar se tum'

Neha:- ok ..ok..sorry'jab tum bachoo ke kapde dhekna shuru karogi na..apne aap mood teek ho jaayega'

Priya smiles'

Both Neha and Priya did shopping and came out from the showroom and on the other side Ram and vikram also came out.

Vikram saw Neha and Priya coming from the opposite side of the building.

Vikram:- Ram'..sirf tu hi nahi'priya bhi apne bachhe ke liye shopping kar rahi hai'..woh dekh wahan par'hamari biwiyaan'

Ram saw Priya and neha holding shopping bags.

Ram called Neha

Ram:- Neha gaadi zara dheere chalana''aur tum saamne se hato yaar.

Neha:-(turns to a side and looks around) tum kahan ho

Ram:- mein tumhare paas wale building mein hi hoon. Vikram bhi saat mein hai'.

She saw Ram and Vikram standing. She shows her hand.

Neha:- tum dono wahan par kya kar rahe ho'.aur mujse hatne ki liye kyun keh rahe ho

Ram:- (irritatingly) muje tumhe dekhne ka koi shouk nahi hai.

Neha:- ohhh'..aur kuch msg hai toh bol do mein paas kar deti hoon.

Ram:- koi zaroorat nahi'.woh mein khud kar dunga'.

Priya who is standing outside gets irritated.

Priya:- Neha'.tum gaadi mein andhar aakar baat nahi kar sakti'bahut dhoop hai'..nahi toh ek kaam karo'gaadi unlock kar do, mein andhar baith jati hoon aur tum yahan kadi hokar baate karo.

Neha:- oh sorry Priya (and gives her car key)

Ram:- Neha'Priya toh chali gayi'usse jane kyun diya

Neha(slowly):- tumhari biwi bade gusse mein hai. agar itna hi shouk hai apni biwi ko dhekne ka toh jao uske ghar aur uska haat pakadkar uuse apne saat apne ghar lekar aao. Mein abhi rakti hoon bye.

Vikram:- chale'

Ram nods.

Priya:- kon thi

Neha:- thi nahi tha'.woh mera ek friend hai'uski na biwi rooti hui hai aur apne maike jakar baiti hai'.toh who mujse pooch raha tha ki kaise manau..

Priya:- usko bolo haat pakadkar apne saat le jaaye'.maan jaayegi

Neha:- exactly'meine bhi usse yahi suggestion diya'.dekhte hai kya karta hai..

Both neha and Priya reaches home

Sudhir:- Priya'.yeh tumhare liye beta'abhi courier wala dekar gaya hai

Priya reads "rodds financial consultancy". She opens and read

Neha:- kya hai'

Priya:- muje job mill gayi hai'Delhi mein'

Neha and sudhir shocked''

Precap:- Priya decided to leave, Ram tries to stop her. Sudhir-Ram secret out.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy me 1..
oye ye update mai bhh raya alag alag hai...
aap to cv ki trh raya ka separate scene de rhe ho 😭
ram ji ki shopping ho rhi hai 😛
sandy abhi tak raya ko milaya nhi 😡
priya ram ko chodkr delhi ja rhi hai 🤢
ram sudhir ka kya secret hai 😕
continue soon !!!!
Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
missed the place as usual😭

oye ye kyaaa

ram dar gaya hain and ab talking to himself😆
hehee

btw ye kya pura sequence when we start to img it u make it as dream😲 😆 omg yaar kab milwavogi raya koo shopping ke time par bhii

ab i am sure ram will get super excited for the kids..

btw wait last mein priya gave idea to carry her away by ram kya😆

kounsa secret of ram and sudheer

continue soon

good one
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dream sequence was very beautiful...❤️
Well written...
Priya's job news is shocking...
Hope everything goes well bet raya...
Thanks for pm

Edited by 123fiza1 - 12 years ago

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