FF: Betrayed by Love: T2 *Note and a teaser page 143* - Page 34

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awesome...loved it di...very interesting..continue soon...

Hi Shilpa, To start with you are really awesome writer! I read your whole FF in one go from last night to today. I love how you have paid attention to each and every character and painted them well. Ofcourse i loved both Priya and Arjun but I was hoping to get more insight into Roshni's character. I was not able to hate her, even though she created so much chaos in Priya's life still she gave her life for her love and so I am not able to hate her.

Hey! Was away from IF for a while and didn't want to rush reading the last few chapters but am glad I waited patiently hehe

Hello everyone!🤗

I know, long time no see, but kya karoo was caught up with some things and didn't get a chance to take this update where I wanted it to go.

Anyhow, I am back with an update, but first I want to thank all of you who commented on the previous part. And also those silent readers who pressed the like button to let me know that my PMs are not going to waste.

Revathi K, ptuc, sangeethbala, Sawera87, benaz, Amna1234567890, AnuRjun, angelicdeepti, sony1990, live, Bhaktikapasi, kirthiii, pallavisarkar, hal96, shaileshjn, Pisces_Gurl, littlebrat, ll-Farheen-ll, nakshatra92, Nikita121, gujjupari, daydreamer..., AnjuRish, yas23, zuena, -Siaa-, 123pritha, Seenavas, angelirebelli, miss_precious, pihu_angad, pratik54000, ..sweetchilly.., mastmegha22, ...Mithuz..., ll_piya_ll, shona14, Swaronvrushan, _Mohabbatgirl_, Gurmeet4Drashti, sips_crazy, reeti.poly, Krishnaluv94, -dia-, drunkiiebabe, vidya.anand, Xarina, haruhi26, Payal_156,


I am sorry I am unable to thank all of you personally, but know that I appreciated each of your comments and cherished them all.

Now before we go on there are few things I want clear up.

To my understanding some people don't like this story anymore, or never liked it before because I was one of the first to move on when the change in the show happened.

Not that I owe any explanation to anyone, here is why I did what I did.

Before Arjun forum, I was on another forum and had the biggest shock when things changed suddenly on that show, even then I gave my best to enjoy the show, but in the end I had to stop watching the show, so this time I was determined to not let that happen because I happen to like Arjun way more than I liked the other show. Also the change in that show happened after I watched the show for two years so that change was hard to accept then this one. I am sorry that if some of you didn't like that I made Shilpa Anand as Priya, but for me she fit perfectly.

Moving on to my next thing, it seems some people also wonder how I can do this while being a mother, a wife and also a professional, while I call this my determination some of you may prefer desperation, so be it. All I want to say is you haven't seen my desperation yet, keep pushing me and you will see how desperate I can get.😈 Samjhae Ya Samjhaun.😉

Last but not the least...while I borrowed Arjun, Sameer, Shree and Chotu from the original creators of the show Arjun, Priya and Swati were born out of my imagination and they are very special to me so if you want to comment, comment from the heart, don't comment just for sake of commenting or because I am sending you PMs, and you are tired of getting my PMs so you are obligated to comment.

Comment karna hai toh dil se karo, adha adhura comment mat karna, if you know what I mean.



Sorry for this long lecture but it was necessary for some people.

Lots of love to all my loyal reader, even the silent ones.🤗

I will be back shortly with the update.

Thank you all once again, and I am sorry I am making you guys wait so long.😊

Firstly, Thank you for the Note and SYS.. Not only some, but I guess all of your readers needed to know about it..

Anyhow, moving on to the update, thanks for the warning in advance but I'm not sure if my tears were the happyones or sad-ones.. Maybe a bit of both.. Oh and yeah, my antennae were on high alert, all the while.. 😆😉

Swati-Sameer.. ☺️ ❤️ Now, that's what I call 10/10 romance! Loaded with passion, sentiments and louuve!! 😉

Sikky's return was bound to create havoc in their lives as well.. And marrying her right away, seems to be the most logical thing, I'd say.. That way she will be with him 24/7 and maybe her presence and faith in him and the others will help him sail through tough times.. 😊

Swati, isn't any less than our Tigress, I think.. She's just as strong and determined.. To have him back in her life and watch everything hanging by a loose thread now that things were just getting back to normal must be difficult.. Yet, she deals with it with so much maturity, every single time that I'm awed.. 👏

My beloved Tiger and Tigress.. This is it!! (Remo D'souza ishtyle)

Priya's insomnia, very well justified.. It is a combination of all those and his affectionate gestures and words are only worsening it.. But so far, so good..
The bells need to keep ringing in her head until she can't take it anymore and takes a drastic step, which she otherwise wouldn't..

Haaye.. B1, I love their 'khidki-wala' love... ❤️

Seriously!! How well do they know each other.. KC at its best.. This is RMJ, Behna.. 😃

Tiger.. Tiger.. tch tch.. As much as I love and sympathise with Priya, I cannot help but be partial towards him.. He knows exactly which buttons to press and when..
She reacts exactly as he expects her to.. Except when it comes to her thoughts on love..

Their conversation had me grinning at first, but a second read, and I was overcome with sadness.. What has their lives come to.. A stage where you cannot accept nor deny feelings for a person you've loved all your life! Heart-wrenching!!

1. "I don't think you are ready to hear my answer to that question and we are talking about you not me."

2. I didn't always prefer to be alone but some things are not meant to be."

3. "Liar,"

4. "You wouldn't believe me if I told you now, but one day I will make you believe, I promise."
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5. "I was not there when you needed me the most, don't stop me from being there for you now."


My most favorite bits in their entire conversation and you know why!

Another brilliantly drafted Chapter, B1.. And the concluding lines gave me hopes.. Though she doesn't see it yet, I'm sure he isn't going to let her assume things for a long time..

Besides, I'm sure her words will replay in his mind, at some point of time and he will get to the root of all of it.. Or So I hope..

Phew.. Nice.. Good.. Brilliant.. Beautiful.. Awesome.. Nah! Nothing makes justice to what I have to say.. Toh 'Hotwa ki tarah mere bhi dil ki baat samajh lena, B1..' 😉😆

Loved it to bits.. And love you more.. 🤗

P.S. : Yes I am biased and I love BL.. Sorry! Can't help it.. 😃

Awesome, sorry for unres so late😳