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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for the first part..update soon
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Originally posted by: vironikajain

Waiting for the first part..update soon


Will Update tomorrow surely , update is ready , but editing is not done :) will surely update tomorrow . :) sorry for keeping you all waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wen is the update...ram is too sweet... Contn soon...
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Waiting for the update. Please.
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Hey , Friends ,

Here i am up with the Chapter 1 of the New SS ... A tale with twist turn , laugh , pain , and cry i promise , with no as such negative person in their lives. This story will be voiced Anonymously
Your comments are awaited ... and as promised will start working on the sequel of the last SS very soon , should i update the Prologue to the sequel of the old SS.

Cheers
Nairita



Chapter 1







Bad Start to a Beautiful Day ' For the TWO '..

As The lady in formals left the place , the man standing in his fully equipped conference room , took a chair and settled himself on it , his eyes were still on the door , which is still coming up and down by the throttle of the lady . His best Friend ,Vikram , co founder of the industries was noticing his friend , he signaled the personnels to leave.. His orders were followed immediately . As the personnel moved to the door , the business tycoon revolved his chair and stopped sharp at the table , his shiny boots smashed against the limb of the table .His eyes now got fixed on the white wall infront of him ..

" Ram '" Vikram walked to him , he showed his hand and asked to stop him , rotating his head to him ,he said " This is an INSULT!!! And I cant tolerate it '.".

" I warned you '" vikram sat , placing his hand on ram's shoulder he added , " I told that the lady is arrogant , didn't I ?"

' her watch was fast , I have a GPS enabled watch which connects with the time of five cities .." he said angrily '

" ram you never seemed to be so angry ' just let it be '" Vikram said '.

' angry ??? I am pissed off by that lady , I believe in good relations and she announced the verdict , is she a GODDESS of All good Damn '. Does she thinks that ??' he was ferocious over the lady ..

' whats wrong with you Ram ' just let it be ' just a trader she was , which is over now '" vikram said impatiently ..

A wicked smile , he curved his lips to smile , a wicked cunning smile , cocking his head to vikram he said " over !! No it just started ' I can take anything , if I have my fault '. But if I have no fault '. Why should I take the responsibility !!! and now that LADY whats the name Priya ' Miss Priya Sharma ' wrong place .. u have hammered on a wrong place darling ' you have to deal with me '. I m not going to let you go so easily '." He took out his mobile .. as he ended up talking with himself '. Dialing a number he placed the mobile on his ear and when the person on the other side said hello , he smiled and said " Hello'" in turn'

Back at the Innovative supports and solutions ', the lady , walked in to the office , pushing the glass door hard which stopped hitting the stopper ' she snapped at the guard who was shocked to see his mistress in such a mad mood , " Close the damn door '" with the sound of her heels she walked directly to her room , asking her Personal secretary to call for her next appointment . Her secretary nodded and ran to arrange the lady's next appointment .

She was pacing up in her cabin restlessly ' there was a knock , come in she said roughly '

" Ma'am .." her secretary asked for permission which she gave by saying come in only .. and she kept on pacing in her room. She asked , about her appointments . after her secretary the whole day schedule , Miss Priya stopped pacing and asked to cancel all her meetings and party adding that she is leaving for home .

It needs just much guts to stop the arrogant lady , her secretary has no right to stop her boss, from leaving. Priya took her phone and raced to the door , before she could open it , a man in white suit opened it . Priya Seized at a place ' looking at the man in front of her. She looked down and wished him good afternoon in a very low pitch . the man asked her secretary to go out, and asked to priya to come in as he needs to talk with her then ,it was urgent.

Priya helplessly walked behind the man back to her room , she sat on her chair , The CEO , of The Innovative supports and solutions . infront of her is sitting the chairman of the same where is she the CEO. Mr.Sharma.

" what I just heard is that true ?" The father asked her daughter , she replied that if her father is asking about the lost deal with that man , called the kapoor , then yes it's true . Mr. Sharma got startled and said , " do you know what you have done , he is not just a client , his father was a good friend of mine , I was in touch with him all the way from London too ' don't you remember Priya , how much you and ram had a great time together when Ram with his family came down to London , you two were kids then , and what happened today '"

" Papa ' sorry ' sir" she corrected as she never calls her father , the chairman, as papa inside the office , she further added , " I don't remember anything from my childhood , and may be I had a good time then , that doesn't mean , I will tolerate his no time sense now , after all , our preference changes as we grow up '."

" ok ' I don't want to argue with you in this matter , just I m here to inform you that I have passed an order and you have to deal with him ,I have invited Ram over lunch tomorrow , and you have to deal with him as you know I cant be here at office , I have to go to pick kartik from airport ." sudheer Sharma stood up '

' this is not right Papa .." priya said restlessly '

" this is office Miss Sharma and not as your father as a chairperson of this company and for the good of my company I am ordering you ' either do or get ready to face a show cause letter , I don't think that this will go good with your image and career both '" Mr Sharma cocked his head to priya , who like a lost soldier of the battle said " ok sir I will attain him and get the deal done by tomorrow '"

" good this only I expect from you and an apology to Ram too '." He said

"Apology ?? are you '" priya looked other side smiling out of her anger she said " sorry ' that he will get never from me papa .. I was right .. that man was late .. and one second late can do a lot harm to a person '"

" what it can do priya ' one second one second '" sudheer said hurriedly to priya in an annoying note.

" what it can snatch papa , that you know more than me , those 5 minutes changed my life '. I respect and give importance to each and every minute of my life papa'.please , let it be '" priya's eyes turn blur red ' from dark red '.

" ok I will not 'but just be good with Ram .. he is a good person '.so do you I know that too '. And please attain the party today '. It's also important , I need some space .. alone .." Sudheer Sharma walked out of the room ' Priya sat back on the chair , taking up a photo in her hand she said " I miss You ' why this is between me and papa .. I don't know ' I don't know , ever I could be able to change myself ' I don't know will I be get to love myself again ' why you left me Mom ' why ??? just tell me .. why ??" Priya kept the photo down ' resisting her tears , she said smiling odd to the picture , ' when you cant make me cry then , how can you make me cry now mom ' I promised and I promise , I will not cry ' no one will be able to know my pain ' no one ' no one 'will ever can make me cry'" she walked out of the room '..

What priya is ?? An arrogant lady ' or a lady with so much pain that made her live a life without any emotions ' who is she ?

At a posh hotel , Mumbai '.

It was about 7 p.m when he , Ram Kapoor , in a steel grey trousers , white shirt , perfectly ironed, with a black jacket worn over it , walked into the banquet' the host of the evening welcomed him . he shook hand with many persons , he just settled at a corner with his drink when his eyes got fixed to a Lady , in a polka dot saree , back less blouse , her black hair just like a flowing river , flawlessly flowing just down her shoulder height ' he , walked to the lady '

" hi '" he said smiling to her '., when she looked at him , he added , ' remember '" showing his watch '

" why not ???" priya replied ' , ' Mr.Ram Kapoor '"

" pleasure you remember me ' someone said me that you don't remember people whom you dnt need '" Ram said '

" wrong !! you heard wrong !!! I discard out those people whom I want to discard ' and , about need , I really don't need any one '." She looked aside ..

' still mad over me ??" ram smiled , sipping his drink ..

" mad over you ?? are you mad ??? people get mad over those person , who belong to eachother and we are no one ' so jot it down in your brain '. I m not mad over you '. And will never be '" she snapped ..

" do you talk like this with every one , or I am the special one '??' Ram asked as his lips curved up to smile '

" good choice to flirt .. but this goes no good with me '. Mr. Kapoor '" she walked to the bar joint .. and settled down , followed her was ram he sat by her and said if he can order something for her '

" peace !!" she snapped , adding " if you can !!!!"

' I know an excellent quality wine , try it" ram wanted to order , when priya stood up and said " I have never seen such a flirt like you what you think about a lady , who is sitting by a bar , that means she is an avid addict !!"

" why you are over reacting !!" ram countered '

Priya looking around , the guests still didn't noticed them fight , she calmed herself , " please ' go away ' and I am sorry '. But please it's a request don't try to flirt with me ..." telling him , she left '..

Ram stood there , looking at the lady leaving the place , his eyes scrutinized what she is doing , she meet the host , had a short conversation with him , and then she looked behind , he was only looking at her , she stole her eyes and rushed out of the party ..

" Not bad .." he turned to the bar gulped his drink in a go '.

Hours passed ram was still sitting there at the party , he goes jolly with every one , when his dadi called him , looking at the watch he articulated " Shit '" it was almost 12 and he was still out of the house . He was labeled with the tag of " Good Boy" from his childhood' that day he was there still then , it had a valid reason .

Making a face , to hear heavy scolding from the elderly lady he said hello, and as expected the lady shouted on him for not being present , when the prospective bride's family came to meet him. He tried to calm down his grandmom but she was trigger the words on him like " array of bullets coming from a machine gun" in an automatic mode must be added to it , to make it more appropriate for his situation.

" Dadi ' please ek gaal sun loo" he said lovingly '

"dash 'puttar '" his dadi answered '

Walking to the host of the party , wishing him good night and exchanging wishes he walked with his phone .. to the door ' he spoke out to his dadi ' " Dadi , the girls till date whom you choose for me , were really not of my type' darling ' I have something different in my mind and till date , I have not meet any one like that ' Dadi ' if really there is someone made in heaven match for me , then I will meet her , but , please dadi , dont hurry for my marriage I am only of 30"

As he talked over the phone he reached the parking lot ' and he stopped noticing something , he asked his dadi to sleep , and also assured that he will be back at home within an hour latest . he held up , and went to the BMW (white) whose indicators where blinking in rhythm .. when he reached the car , he found , what he expected "Priya Sharma '"

He knocked at the car window ' once , she pulled down the window glass pressing the button ' the glass automatically slide down ' she looked at him and said " you ' here what !!"

" I think you are asking my questions for you ?" Ram said in an angry tone..

" sorry .." she said getting bit irritated '

" what the hell you are doing here ?" ram interrogated

" why ?? cant I be here ??" she countered

' ma'am see the time don't you need to be at home ?" Ram asked getting angry over her .

" I think you are crossing your line ' why I am here , what for I am here that is none of your business , so please , don't put your nose between me and my space .." she said rejecting ram's anger .

" your father should know this '" ram pulled out his phone .

" I m not a kid of 10 that if I m out of a shitty party , which is supposed to be a school to you , and for bunking that , my parents has to be informed !!!" she now came out of the car and faced Ram , which made ram step back and think , when and where and why the hell she changed into a night suit !!! priya looked at Ram and then scrutinized herself ' to get if there is anything wrong !! in her outfit ' her pink top and white pajama.

"what !!!" Priya asked '

' no .. I mean you were in a saree if I m not wrong then '" Ram said '

' Yes and now I m in a night dress !! is that confusing you ?" she asked ' and ram nodded back ' priya then added after him , ' then the answer is behind you walking towards me '" she asked ram to look back ' he turned his face back and found priya's father walking to them '.

' arey .. Hello Ram , how are you beta '" Sudheer Sharma priya's father greeted ram .. and then his eyes went to priya , he knows his daughter very well , he can smell his daughter's emotions , which was annoying then ' sudheer asked ram is priya has misbehaved again .. priya protested and asked her father why he always think that she is the one to misbehave with people . Ram then and there interfered saying that he is the one to misunderstand her , and she was not at all rough with him . Sudheer calmed down , and priya asked her father if they can go back home as both of them has important schedules next day .. sudheer wished ram good night , ram reciprocated ' ram wished priya the same .. but the answer from her was "whatever.." ram smiled and nodded his head .. in dejection ' while priya drove from there with his father , who came there to meet a delegate , who was really important for the company , and priya only came with him as his driver for the night , and as she was in her night dress she didn't stepped out of the car , and ram over thought without knowing the truth '.

So how their lives will turn ' how they will fall in love when both of them are full of attitude , the difference is Ram answers back to them who misbehaves and priya shots back to everyone whom she come across. Why priya is so rude ?? Can the cupid make them come closer , and hit them with an arrow with love hypnotizer ?? are they supposed to be a couple in future??? Are they the lovebirds ' and what will happen when ram will come to make the deal final with priya's company , will they end up in fighting again .



Edited by IM__NB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too emotional update... Bt liked priya's attitude... Contn soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updt dear 😛
loved it
very interesting story
looking forward to it 😊
thanks for pm
cont soon 😊
Edited by .sangs123. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start. Ram is so very nice. He alone can handle Priya.
U gave an array of questions. And yes u have to give the answers. Waiting to get the answers.
Yes, want a prologue for the sequel for sure.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arrogant priya..
the convo between Ram n Priya @ the Hotel was so gud..
priya with full attitude -every girl seen in a Bar doesn't mean she is addict was so correct.

lets see how they end up.but the fighting part indeed was very well.

Thx for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start..
Arrogant priya but calm yet angry ram...
Priya with so much attitude nd only ram will be able to handle her by giving back..
Hotel scene was nice nd their convo both the time inside nd outside hotel was good..
Lets see what will happen when they will meet again for deal..how they will end up together for it...
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
Yes i want prologue for the sequel of ur other SS..
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago

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