ArHi SS: A Thousand Miles | NOTE Page 44 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -.Pearl.-

Awwieee... Thank you!!! Thanks for the lovely comment (as usual) and thanks for liking my attempt at writing after months! Always feel awesome after reading your comments!

And yeah.. They are rerunning the show on LifeOK I guess... Not in India though...

Amazing and brilliant prologue, loved the start.

The concept of the story sounds very interesting and I'm excited to read further.

So Khushi has left, loved the way Arnav was looking for her at the station.

Awww it was beautiful that he had felt her presence and knew Khushi was around,

So Khushi has advised Arnav to leave, can't wait to read what he decides to do.

Awesome writing and a wonderful read from start to finish.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and can you please PM when you update next part, thanks xx

Originally posted by: aquagal

It's so good to see your PM.
This track is awesome, it has so many layers to it.
I loved the details, the way you described , platform, people I could envision Arnav looking around helplessly to locate that one face, his hand going in his hairs, the little kid & everything.
This is an amazing beginning to a very interesting story.😊

res res

How do you do it? Each word pulls you in quicker. Quicksand. Deeper, and so fast, you never know. Just happens. Brilliant. The word play. His feelings. Desperation. Anger. Frustration. Misplaced confusion, hiding the guilt. And her. Normal. But hiding. Quiet. Patient. Confused. Still loving.

Following it is a treat. Such a dessert. I adore you and what you do. I'm so glad you're back. Ufff, love you :)