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Posted: 13 years ago
link to the previous chapter
wanna thank everbody who liked the previous chapter... got 112 likes... u all made me really happy... love u all...
CHAPTER 29

viren : manvi where is my wallet...??
manvi : it must be in the drawer of the corner table...
viren : i am not able to find it... manna...
manvi : coming... wait a minute...
manvi came to the room and gave him his wallet...
manvi : yahin toh tha... tum theek se dekh nahi sakte the... tum bhi na viren...
manvi turned around to leave when viren hugged her from behind and nuzzled her neck with his nose.
manvi : u did it intentionally... right...??? (smiling to herself)
viren : obviously... doing this has given me a chance to romance my wife...
manvi : ohhh u are soo damn intelligent...
viren : you had doubt about that mrs. vadera... did u...???
manvi : no how can i doubt my one n only husband... i trust you...
viren : ok then where is my... (and he kissed manvi's cheek)
manvi : my...???
viren : kissy...??
manvi : abhi toh li tumne... (making a cute pout)
viren : maine toh le li par mujhe milni bhi toh chahie... (pulling her towards him)
manvi : ye kya hisab hua...?? (turning around and putting her hands around his neck)
viren : hmm... its give and take honey...
manvi : ohh... but what if i refuse to give the much desired kissy of yours...
viren : then i will forcefully take it...
manvi : achha... toh leke dikhao...
" la...la..laa... morning time... "
manvi opened her eyes with a jerk and saw that it was her morning alarm. she blushed thinking that she just dreamnt of her n viren being married and the life after...
manvi : tu bhi na manvi... pta nahi kya kya sochti rehti hai... shit... i was dreaming... but this dream will come true very soon... but haaye re meri kismat... sapne mein bhi kiss nahi ho payi... haha... i gotto tell viren... yes... yes i should call him...
manvi took her mobile and unlocked it to see that it was a message from virat. manvi didnt want to spoil her mood and decided on not reading the message and staright away deleting it. manvi was about to delete it when she thought why not read the message and see how low virat can stoop.
manvi opened the message and read
" i loved you... i really loved you manvi... oh really... i know... but now... now i am letting you go... what...?? i am setting you free my love... setting me free... no matter how hard it is for me, i am still doing it... doing it for u n for bhai... but dont think i will ever stop loving you... this time i am backing out but for every coming lifetime, you will be mine... only mine... n i will always love you... love u till my last breath
yours n only yours
virat "
by the end of the message manvi was numb... everything came to a standstill except the tears which were continuously flowing from her eyes.

manvi : did u really do it virat...?? u really mean all this...?? if yes... then u left me speechless. i never thought you would let me go... i thought you would hold on to me till the end which would result in nothing but pain... holding on would have hurted you as well as me... but you made a right decision virat... what changed you virat...?? what happened overnight...?? but whatever happens... happens for a reason and i am happy... happy that u have learnt the real meaning of love today... tum jaan gaye ho ke pyaar kya hota hai... main mehsoos kar sakti hoon... i can feel every emotion you must have felt while typing this message... kassh... kaash... tum mein ye change... ye badlaav pehle aaya hota... toh shayad hum kabhi alag nahi hote... tum aur main shayad aaj bhi saath hote... humara pyaar zinda hota... humara baccha... humare pyaar ki nishani humare saath hota... par ab bahut der ho chuki hai... mere dil mein ab sirf viren hai... i really love viren now... i cant think about living without him... but i cant ignore the fact that the virat i loved is now changed... he is a changed man... a man whom i always wished of seeing and spending my life with...
manvi wiped off her tears and click on the reply message
" i never thought i would up end up seeing a new mature virat... trust me i am very happy... i wish u all the best in your life virat... and today u proved that there is love in holding and love in letting go... you know i always wanted THIS virat in my life... i might not be able to love u back now... but now i respect you virat and will cherish you in my heart...
once yours
manvi "
manvi composed herself and got ready for a new day with a new breath of freshness...
manvi : diii... beeji... dabbe... where is evrybody...??? chachiii... pta nahi sab kahan chale gaye mujhe chod ke... uff...
manvi checked the whole mansion but no one was there.
manvi : i wonder where is evrybody... nobody cares about me... wait a minute...!!! lemme call jiju...
manvi : hello jiju...
shaurya : hey sweetheart... aaj subah subah meri yaad kaise aa gayi...??
manvi : jiju... i woke up n found taht nobody is at home... do u know where is everybody...?
shaurya : mannu... cmon... did u check the garden... the weather is way too pleasant... they all must be outside...
manvi : good idea... lemme check...
manvi went to the garden and saw everybody enjoying themselves with snacks n tea.
manvi : you are great jiju... i found them... thanks... love u...
shaurya : hehe... love u too... take care...
manvi ran to them n sat on the ground in front of maya while manvi caressed manvi's hairs.
maya : mannu tu jaag gai...
manvi : pta hai di main kitni darr gayi thi... no one was there inside and i thought u all left me home alone.
maya : accha... we all would go n leave the to-be bride at home... really...
beeji : leave it u too... manvi your coffee beta...
manvi : thank u beeji (sitting on the chair beside maya)
maya was about to say when her mobile beeped n it was shaurya...
maya : shaurya... good morning pati dev...
shaurya : good morning... but why r u troubling my dearest saali sahiba...?? u all were out n was damn scared thinking she is all alone by herself...
maya : haha... she told us...
shaurya : she is just a kid and our kid is going to be married in less than a week maya...
maya : i know shaurya... i know... (maya became senti and started crying)
manvi snatched the phone from maya seeing her crying
manvi : jiju... are u okk...?? everything is fine na...?? jiju say something na... why is di crying...?? did u say anything to her...??
shaurya : shh... take a deep breath mannu... ur sis ter just became senti on thinking about u getting married and on the top due to pregnancy her hormones are playing with her...
manvi : oh... mood swings... yeah it happens...
shaurya : i have a meeting to attend but make sure you make ur di aka ur mommy smile... okkk baby...
manvi : haha... okk daddy... trust me... bye
shaurya : by,...
manvi disconnected the phone and consoled maya...
manvi : di its okk... i am not going anywhere... i will be staying in chandigarh only... only half an hour away... cmon di.. dont cry na... its not good for the baby...
maya : promise u wont go away... you would come n meet me...
manvi : anytime u say n u know viren na... he wouldnt stop me instaed he would accompany me as he is way to fond of jiju n u... his one n only saali cum bhabhi...
maya : but my house is away mannu...
manvi : di its just 15 minutes away from here... i would come n meet you di... please smile now... smile...
maya : okk...
maya smiled and hugged manvi while the other members admired their bond n wished for their happiness and well being.
beeji : chalo manvi maya... u both should now go n ready as u both have to go to the temple today... from tomorrow the wedding rituals are going to start na...
maya : ok beeji we will... so mannu so n take a bath...
manvi : okk i will be back in 20 minutes...
maya : take an hour sweetheart... im in no hurry...
manvi : hehe... okkk
scene shifts
vadera mansion
vanshika : where is virat...?? i have been looking for him since morning...
viren : mom... where is virat...??? he slept in my room yesterday night but right now he isnt there...
vanshika : i have also been searching for him... god knows where is he...??
viren : he must be here only... i will call him...
viren called virat n vrat didnt picked the call. but seeing vanshika getting worried viren enacted as if virat picked up the call...
viren ; hello... where are u mere bhai...??? mom is so worried about u...
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viren : accha... chal koi nahi... jaldi aa ja fir...
****
viren : okkk... chal... bye...
virat kept the mobile in his pocket and turned to vanshika
viren : see mom he is fine... has gone out for some work... will be back soon... and maa i will just be back... i have some work to complete...

vanshika : u are getting amrried viren... aur yahan toh tumare important kaam hi nahi khatam ho rahe hain...
viren : aapka beta famous lawyer hai na... is liye... bas thoda sa kaam baaki hai... wo kar loon please...???
vanshika : okk... fir tum aur virat mandir ho aana... okk...??
viren : okk sure...
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hope i didnt diappoint you guys... because these days i feel i fail to maintain my standard n the people liking the updates is going down day by day... it makes me cry sumtyms... 😭
Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tring 😳😆
Edited by ashishi - 13 years ago
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hope i didnt diappoint you guys... because these days i feel i fail to maintain my standard n the people liking the updates is going down day by day... it makes me cry sumtyms... 😭


nainu toh always rocks na😉no worries u r the besht😎
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashishi

hope i didnt diappoint you guys... because these days i feel i fail to maintain my standard n the people liking the updates is going down day by day... it makes me cry sumtyms... 😭


nainu toh always rocks na😉no worries u r the besht😎

not only nainu... MINU IS THE BEST... 😉 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

not only nainu... MINU IS THE BEST... 😉 😃

exactly minu toh hei hi best😉minu khud ek award hei remember🤣😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashishi

exactly minu toh hei hi best😉minu khud ek award hei remember🤣😳

exactly... MINU IF KE LIYE AWARD HAI 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont get disheartened u r gving us amazing updates as u used to do before we love them!
N u r still gvng the updates of ur level only ok nw no more feeling low we all readerz love each n every story!
Sorry i havent been cmmenting late due to sme probs bt nw i did!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


exactly... MINU IF KE LIYE AWARD HAI 😉

bang on😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
Why are you so sad?? You write so well Naina!! I love your updates.. Please don't be sad.. Keep smiling like this --> 😃
Update was superb 👏👏.. Dream sequence was awesome!! Cute and sweet.. Manvi's reaction on reading Virat's message is beautifully portrayed 👍🏼.. Loved her message also.. She respects him and I'm sure it means a lot to him.. I love Manvi-Maya-Shaurya bonding.. Adorable 😛.. But where is Virat?? 😕 I hope he is fine.. Eager to read the next part now.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nainu really nice update plz plz plz update soon really want to see what will happen next plz plz plz virman ko ek saat kardo nd plz plz plz update ur next stories nd ur THE BEST

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