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Hello everyone! I'm Amira. I really love this show especially Raghav and Antara 😳.
God their chemestry is so WOW
so I wrote a little story on them.

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It was raining fast. Antara was sitting on a bench. She had tears in her eyes. She was missing a lot her Dad and was so annoyed fighting with Raghu everyday.

Raghu was on his terrace, he wasn't sleeping like always and was missing her mom. He was sitting but then he noticed Antara. He couldn't stop himself so he went to her.

Antara was so busy in her tears so she didn't realized that somebody was there. He saw tears in her eyes and was wondering the reason. He was staring at her beautiful face.

Few minutes later, He sat next to her. Antara felt his presence so she quickly cleaned her tears and saw at him. She was wondering why he's there.

" Zarur behes karne aya hoga! Aur kar bhi kya sakhta hai " She said in her mind.
" Ik baat puchoon? " Raghu asked.
" Mujhe to lagha tha ki Raghu ko kisi ki bhi permission nahi chahiye, woh to apni marzi karta hai " Antara said in an ironic tone.
" Haan lekin baat teri hai na! "
" Kya? " She asked in a worried tone.
" Tu har waqt ansun kyon bahati rehti hai? "
" Tumse matlab? It's my life. "
" But you are in my basti! Main apni basti mein kissi ko problem mein nai dekh sakhta "

She wasn't replying. She was in a deep tought. His dad's burnt face was coming into her mind. She just wanted to scream and to cry but she controlled her self.

" Tum jaisa gunda mera dard kaise samjhe ga? " She said in anger.
" Tu to aise baat kar rahi hai jaise gunde insaan nai, unke paas bhi dil hai aur main gunda nai hoon "
" Laghte to waise hi ho "
" halaton ne aur majburioun ne mujhe aisa bana dia hai " He said with pain.

She could not stop her eyes to seeing in his eyes. She was able to see pain in his eyes. They had a painfull eyelock. Antara was feeling something different while learning something on Raghu.

" Dard har insaan ki zindagi mein hota hai, sirf teri hi zindagi me nai balke meri life mein bhi hai. Tune apne Dad ko khoya hai to maine bhi apni maa ko khoya hai. Aaj bhi uska chehra mujhe nazar ata hai jo chila chila kar help mang ra hai " Raghu didn't even realized that he told his story to that girl. He didn't knew why he was telling his story to her.

For the 1st time Antara was seeing tears in his eyes, she also got emotional and again had tears in her eyes. They again had an eyelock.

" Main bohot koshish kar rahi hoon age pharne ki magar har baar haar jati hoon aur phir tum bhi har waqt mujhse larte rehte ho " She said with her tears and with an innocent face.

He cleaned his tears after all he was a strong guy and asked " To kya tujhe acha nai laghta mujhse larna? "
" Nai! bohot bura laghta hai "
" To phir kyon larti hai? Kyon akarti hai? " He asked him.
" Tum bhi to attitude dikhate ho phir uske badle mein mujhe bhi to kuch kehna parta hai " She replied him.
" Chor do apni Akar! " He ordered her.
" Tum bhi Chor do apna attitude! " She added. Suddenly all of her tears dissapeared.

That guy had something special, He had an invisible and unknown magic in his words, which cleaned her tears. For some minutes they both forgot their pain. But then they had to came back to the reality, fights are not the solution.

" Tumhe meri fikar karni ki koi zarurat nai, Tumhi ne to mujhe itni problems aur tensions di hain, at first you broke all mama ji's house's windows then you cut off our water supply then you throw me and my family out from your basti. My family was hungry and I had nothing to give them. I was so helpess. It was the 1st time of my life that I spent a night outside my house. Aur yeh sab tumhari hi meherbani se huwa hai " She said with anger.

He was feeling guilty today. He never wanted to hurt her but still he hurted her so He closed hi eyes and said " I'm sorry "

Antara was amazed after listening that 3most awaited words. But she wasn't able to believe that Raghu was saying sorry to someone. They had an eyelock.

" Lekin maine teri help bhi to ki na, jab kuch badmash gunde tujhe ched rahe the maine tujhe bachaya phir uske baad tere bhai ko bhi maine dhunda " He added. Antara doesn't know why but whenever this guy was with her she felt secure.
" Thank you " Antara said.

They smiled to each other. Few minutes later..

" You know what? You were right! " Antara added. He was wondering when and why he was right.
" I'm fed up! I feel so alone. Main bohot akeli par gayi hoon. Tum sai keh rahe the ki mujhe kissi mard ki zaroorat hai " She said with tears.

Suddenly, there is a storm, Antara got scared and hugged tiedly Raghu. She didn't know why but whenever she felt helpless or alone she wanted to be in his arms, once she's in his arms she felt better and secured. Raghu also tied her in his arms. He also didn't know why but he wanted to be there and help her whenever she is in help. Both were completely wet in the rain. They have a passionate hug.


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Here the story end, plzz give your opinions .

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BabyHimavari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome os...rantara's convo was so beautiful...i felt like this is a scene from ddej...perfectly put up their charecters
kash ye scenes show mein bhi dekhne ko milta...
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wow loved their conversation and nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

awsome os...rantara's convo was so beautiful...i felt like this is a scene from ddej...perfectly put up their charecters

kash ye scenes show mein bhi dekhne ko milta...



Thank you very much!
Aww so sweet! ^^ m so glad <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshiforeve

wow loved their conversation and nice update.



Thank you very much! <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice! luv it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HAyeee sooo cuteee... aaj ke epi ke baad... felll more fr rantara... <3 bfully writtn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

HAyeee sooo cuteee... aaj ke epi ke baad... felll more fr rantara... <3 bfully writtn



Tnx a lot dear<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW GREAT OS.. LUVED IT PLS KEEP WRITING N PLSS PM ME THE NEXT TIME..:)<3 LUVED RANTARA..BEAUTIFUL COUPLE... THANKS FR THE PM..:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitagangwan

WOW GREAT OS.. LUVED IT PLS KEEP WRITING N PLSS PM ME THE NEXT TIME..:)<3 LUVED RANTARA..BEAUTIFUL COUPLE... THANKS FR THE PM..:D



tnx a ton! welcome <3

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