ArHi SS : Dramebaaz Life

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

it surely is fun i would love to read it

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piyakrishnan

@piyakrishnan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

nice update👏 i badly want to read a noke joke story..

pls update soon and thanks for the pm😊

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cutelittleangel

@cutelittleangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

hey diva...

how r u?? h0pe u r f9...

just got ur pm and thank Lord that i was free so i got a chance to read this SS...

and believe me if the writer is YOU then its got to be PERFECT!!! cuz YOU *points towards u* ARE A MIND BLOWING WRITER!!! :))

so first comes the title of the SS...hmmm...dramebaaz life...that's interesting and if i make a trip in its depth then i can see that its going to be a happy-go-lucky, very soothing and calming story...which one cud read when they are tired... :))

Okie n0w to the character sketch...

hmmm...

So Arnav is as the same...thats good...

wait...but khushi HAS GOT A CRUSH ON HIM...now thats new and thats very blo0dy exciting... :)))

i like it... :))

all in all i like the wh0le c0ncept...

n0w to the st0ry...

soo0 Khushi is j0bless...aww..po0r soul..and plus s0on to be h0meless... lol

well but who kn0ws that before th0se 12 hrs A LOT can happen.. 😉 ☺️ couldn't it???

and awww she has a stalker and that too shyam jha...hawww

n0w thats dejected...

but well who pays attention to SHYAM...when we have ASR... :)

and i like their first encounter...the bumping part was amazing! :))

and awww he helped her...thats cute... :))

i was like this - 😆 - when she screamed...! After all girls are girls... :))

and Arnav found a lady for him...hmmm

but as i read the prolouge i was like c0nfused someh0w...that they are sexually involved but still din love each other...i din read anything like this b4...and that's what catches my attention...as i always say diva that your work is unique...stimulating... :))

and awww the end was gr8...

he kissed her...w0www... :)))

and it would be m0re crispy when khushi would remove 'ji' from Arnav... :) Simple Arnav would s0und gr8... :))

anyways

overall...this was amazing piece!!!

love it to core...!!

:))))

and update s0on...

waiting...

xoxo