Rantara SS ||Dosti ki shuruat|| Note on pg 5

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hello peeps! Yesterdays epi was like THE BEST and the precap was mind blowing. So I wanted to write something based on the precap so here is my take on the precap. It will be a SS. So enjoy!

PS: My hindi is not good cuz i from Bangladesh. So kindly ignore the mistakes.

Prologue


"Raghu" Antara almost whispered in fear. Raghu turned around and looked at a worried Antara and a confused Inshaan. "Tum... Voh bottle.. Tum thik ho?" [You...That bottle..You ok?] Antara asked. Raghu grabbed her wrist and carried Ishaan on his back and fled away. The trio reached a garage when Antara yelled, "Raghu! Ye saab kya.." [What is...] Raghu covered her mouth with his palm and said, "Chup..ek dum chup! Bahar jo log khare hain voh mujhe marne aaye hain. Tum dono mere saath ho matlab voh tumhe bhi nahi chorengey. Toh aapna ye mo band raakh. Samjhi?"[Shut up! The people who are standing outside are here to kill me.. Both of you are with me so they won't leave you either so keep your mouth shut! You get it?]" Antara's eyes widened in fear but she managed to nod.

Raghu moved his hand. Ishaan had no clue what was going on. "Didi ghhar..." [Sis! Home] "Shh!" Both Antara and Raghu said. They both looked at each other and exchanged glances.
"Abey tu idhar dekh aur main idhar dekhta hoon. Saley aaj nahi chorengey!" [You look there and i'll look there. Today we won't leave him!] Said one of the goons. The trio heard this and Raghu guided them inside. If Antara and Ishaan wasn't here he would have beaten up them black and blue but he was least bothered about himself.

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Please leave your precious comments and like this post. Will continue soon.

Love
Mally <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the prologue.
Please PM me if possible.
Who are this men trying to kill Raghu?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..eyecatchers..

I loved the prologue.
Please PM me if possible.
Who are this men trying to kill Raghu?


well you'll get to know that soon.
yeah sure
i will pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyy mally :-D
prologue seems intersting n i would like to lov further update also
soo can u pm me dear?
continue soon dear

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Originally posted by: gal.angel

Heyy mally :-D
prologue seems intersting n i would like to lov further update also
soo can u pm me dear?
continue soon dear


yeah sure 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds really interesting
pm please?😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: VirmanArhi4ever

sounds really interesting

pm please?😊

sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now dont get lazy like me to update... tu jaldi wala update dede kal hi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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n ya pm me too.. dare not forget...lol
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Originally posted by: tintin0602

now dont get lazy like me to update... tu jaldi wala update dede kal hi


sure sure
kal update pakka
aur ha pm for sure

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