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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys...
this is my first attempt to write...hope u guys like it..if you dont plz dont beat me...as it is just a try to bring back the forum back to live...
so its start from the very next night when they made love for the first time
so here it goes...
khanak was sitting in her room lost in her thoughts and didnt notice when shan entered in the room till he wave his hand and broke her chain of thoughts
"khanak where are you lost"
"nowhere im here only,and when did u came??"
"i came when u were lost in your dreams,now tell me where were you lost"
"nowhere shantanu" she try to get up bt shan hold her and ,and her sit again
"khanak you know you cant lie to me so just tell me"she know she cant hide it anymore and tell to tell him what is disturbing her
"shantanu its not like that i dont trust you, i trust u a lot but sometimes i feel that u did a mistake by marrying me,by falling in love with me,by making me your wife"shan really cant understand what she is trying to day is she douting my love shan cant understand whats going in her mind and became little angry
"khanak do you know what are you saying,r u douting my love for you??"
khanak stand up from bed and stand near the window nd cant stop tears flowing from her eyes
"shantanu i am not douting your love i know that u love me very much...i cant able to measure your love"shan came and stand behind khanak and hold her arm and with a jerk made her turn"khanak then why are you saying this khanak i love you only"
"shantanu i know but im from village and know the culture of the city i dont wear small small clothees which the here wear...i cant speak english properly...i am not at all of your type...dont you sometimes feel surfocated in this marriage...dont you feel embrasses...shantanu you know sometimes it feels just a dream as if somebody will wake me up and you will dissapear...i feel so scared as now i cant live without you shantanu... why do you love me so much despite of the fact we are totally opposite to each other..."
she was still crying nd goes near her cupboard to take out her night...as she turn around she saw shaan just behind her he wiped her tears nd cupped her face nd says
"khanak you are my life i cant think of my life without you...you are the most beautiful woman on this world with pure heart...nd u dont make me embrasse infact you made me proud...i am so lucky to have a life partner like you...you are the best thing happened to me..nd i dont care wheather you wear small small clothes or not cauze i love you not your stlyle of dressing...khanak i love you only you..."
shan hugged khanak very tightly as never letting her go...this is the place where they both feel secure and dont need anything in their life...as they feel so close to each other nd they dont want anything to prove their love to each other...they both knew how much they fight,they tease at the end they love each other and cant even thought of leaving without each other as they are addicted to each other
shan to enlighen the mood says while hugging only"khanak dont you think today i should sleep with you on our bed"
khanak without thinking says as she was enjoying in his arms close to his heart
"why you will sleep on the bed, u always sleep on the couch only"
"i always used to sleep on the bed until last night we made love"nd smile mischievously
hearing this khanak deeply nd slight push him and says"datt"nd ran into washromm nd close the door, nd lean on the door,shan standing at the same place smiling a lot
when khanak came from washroom after changing he saw shan already on bed waiting for her to join him..khanak was blushing a lot nd taking very small small steps towards the bed...nd when she reached near bed she quickly lay on her side of the bed facing opposite to shan..shan who was closely noticing khanak smiling throughout...nd whn she say on the bed...he goes near khanak nd hug her from back nd holding her vry close to himself so that there is no space between them nd he slowly kiss her on her neck which made shiver run throught her body...and she grab shan hand which was on her waist...
shan made khanak turn so that she can look into his eyes as khanak turn she saw his face very close..by seeing his face so close she cant stop butterflies in her stomach...nd litte sacre by seeing the passionate eyes who was looking at her lips nd slowly the distance between them dissapear nd thirst lips met each other so passaionalty as if thier lips made for the first time..He put his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. He whispered to her ears 'Khanak! Do you really want to see what you do to me!' He tilted her head on his shoulder and placed slow, gentle kisses from her neck to her cheek and then her ear
She closed her eyes as she felt herself go weak. She tried to remove his hands from her shoulders, but she felt something reached her deep within, when she touched his hands. Her touch encouraged him as he slowly put his right hand down to unbutton the rest of the buttons on the shirt.
nd theirs blissgul night ended into each other arms...
hw do u guys like my first attemp so let me knw...

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Maneesha_Shanak thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS...
Its so romantic...
Keep writing!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ahhhaaa...its lovely Btw, Can i know ur name?๐Ÿ˜Š

Its doesnot look like its ur 1st attempt...U r superb๐Ÿ‘ first half is very emotional...but loved last partโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†

While reading it I feel like Butterflies flattering in my stoumch๐Ÿ˜† Its really blissfull to read anything on our shanak๐Ÿ˜Š Plz do write more๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully Written ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Cant believe its your first attempt in writing. You are fantastic ...Do keep Writing would love to read such treats from your side. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ this was awesome ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Beauty of Shanak is magical and the way wrote their Expressions and also her insecurities all described very beautifully. ๐Ÿ‘ Khanak was stressed shaan made her pour her heart out and when she did i loved the way Shaan reacted first little angry but he immediately made her understand it was emotional yet very Amazing moment and Second half was Bliss shanak romance is always a blissful thing to read loved the cute description of it plus the way you wrote their togetherness was amazing. โ˜บ๏ธ Loved it so much ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

BTW we talked so much throw PM's but dont know your name yaar ๐Ÿ˜ณ

thanks a ton for this treat ...will wait for many more from you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well written...
Loved shanak romance... Its a treat to read stories on shanak...
Hope you will continue writing all the stuffs..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!! ๐Ÿ‘ Loved it!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ It was so realistic!!! Khanak thinking about her lifestyle and how Shaan is different from her..

ShaNak are bound by a bond called love!!!โค๏ธ Nothing stands in front of it!!!

Loved how Shaan explained that he loves her only!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

And the romance part was really good and subtle!!!
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Thank you for writing a fanatastic OS!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was supub update love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome loved it :)
short sweet emotinal and very romantic
sab drama mix ๐Ÿ˜†
i love it very much last part sab se jyada ๐Ÿ˜‰
keep writing like this it doesnt seem ur first attempt man :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it babe
Do write more stuff!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys hw can u like my ff...there is so many mistakes in it...

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