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I'm so glad to see both Asad n Zoya work together to catch the culprit!!!
Even in investigation they can romance!!! 😆
I hope they find out soon who the real criminal is!!!
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Originally posted by: mysticlover

I'm so glad to see both Asad n Zoya work together to catch the culprit!!!
Even in investigation they can romance!!! 😆
I hope they find out soon who the real criminal is!!!



Wait for the next update...
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yipppe ...i am the first one

that was really a awesome update

u nailed

i am really loving ur story a lot

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello QHians!

Firstly, I m so sorry for the late update.Kya karoon my laptop was under repair! But, now ALL IZ WELL!

So, here I present Chapter 9 of my FF: Passionate Revenge😊

Chapter 9: In your arms...

Her eyes grew almost wider than the sockets.Everything turned numb with shock.
Asad and Zoya were literally shocked. Even before they could come out of their Ermnn...*ice-cream date* , panic struck them.

All the test reports and paper work they had done lied dead on the floor. The already ugly office looked a complete mess.And, perhaps Zoya made it uglier by searching vehemently for that paper which contained the ten names they had rested their doubts upon.

On the other hand, Asad just looked disturbed.
His mind went on thinking.

Somebody had come to the office, aware of their motive. There was somebody who did not want them to continue further and that somebody was *THE CULPRIT*.
Alas, this conclusion made him stronger. That moron has made a mistake and the day is not far away when he will be infront of Asad.

"Asad, the list is missing!". She shouted with the little energy left after all the exercise she had done to search that list.
She buried her head in her hands. Tears streaming down her cheeks.
"This is all my mistake. If only I had not been adamant on going out..." her head rocked back and forth in disappointment.

She removed her hands and noticed something white. She wiped her tears which were disturbing the image.

"OMG! The list." She held the paper and read the letters again and again to make sure this was not a dream. She turned back to look at the person who was holding this piece few seconds back.
"Zoya, I had this with me. The mess you see around are results of futile attempt." saying so he perched his hands on her shoulders, "nothing can go wrong. I'm there."
He cupped her face comforting her stressed nerves and wiping the tears, caressing her soft cheeks.

She caught the hand wiping her tears and held them tight. She brought them near her whole lips and planted a kiss on his palms.
She smiled through tears which refused to stop, looking radiant.
Asad could not stop himself.
He pulled her close, very close and wrapped his arms around her perfectly curved waist.

It was tempting and resistance looked next to impossible.

She threw herself onto him and he engulfed her entire frame within his own.
It was overwhelming, complete...and immeasurable in a way, without bound, length or depth, just Absolute. As though someone has given you peace, Space.

The moment was one of the most loveliest things in the world for both of them.
The warmth of being with another human being and being happy. The realization that we are not alone and that we are love. The exchange of pure joy between to people.

She lay her head on his shoulders and just fell deeper into him.And,he gently clutched her a little tighter responding to her closeness.
It was so relaxing...so romantic, the exchange of pure joy between two people.

But, it did not stay long enough as an irritating noise broke it all. It was the beep of Asad's phone.
And, they pulled away, embarrassed...were they? Didn't look like that.

She blushed turning ten shades redder than usual. Asad was kind of irked with the phone. How desperately he wanted to throw it away and once again get his torso in contact with her heavily breathing chest.
They looked into each others eyes and smiled at the varied array of emotions they were going through.

* * * * * * * * * *

"I love you, Asad."
Well, this was the hundredth time she was saying it...in front of the mirror!

In sheer disappointment, she sulked and walked towards the kitchen.

"Is it so difficult? Ofcourse, not. I need to just say that I love him. Thats it." she talked to herself unaware of the pair of desperate eyes watching her.

"Damn, she too was thinking the same." and, he smiled at himself nostalgic, of those three hours he had spent rehearsing.
Unknowingly, she had actually confessed and it was a morale booster for Asad. He could not believe at all the weird ideas cropping in his mind to impress this girl.

He has always been the *heartthrob* and for a girl to resist that "Khan Charm!" was impossible.
So, now that she was so desperate( like him). He decided to go slow and make it a little more special for his Ahemm...LADY LOVE.

Without, making a noise, he went away giving Zoya a lot more space for self-talking.

* * * * * * * * * *

It was growing dark and she was wondering actually waiting for "HIM". After all, they had loads of to be done and she too had to confess.

Just, then the bell rang. She hurriedly reached the door for "Him". But, to her surprise, it was a nice bouquet that met her outside. It was filled with red roses and it's fragrance was delicious.
She noticed a cute letter attached to it.

"Dinner. Lovers Paradise. With me:)"

She smiled and bit her lips in excitement. He was asking her out for date. Her first date...naa, second one. She blushed and her heart danced in joy.

She opened her cupboard to chose an outfit. Her eyes searched for something special...different , in short, KILLER!

Phew, finally I'm done.

All your chappals are welcomed:)




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Posted: 12 years ago
Very short update...need long one..
continue soon...

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TADAAA IM BACK...

choly 4 bein late yaaar... actually ths is 5th time im unres ths comment of mine... 😆😆
frst time i did d net betrayed me...😡😆 ,
2nd time same probs , 😆
3rd time i ws just typing d last line my phones battery phooosh n phonw got switched off... 😕😕😆
4 th time i typed d whole comment succesfully n i evn clicked d UPDATE POST button bt god knws whr bt it VANISHED...🤣🤣🤣
bt koi nii AALOO bhii haar manne waalooon mein se ni hai... jab tak comment post ni hota tab tak il keep posting...
hallla bol...
ths is d 5th time hope ye waala comment sahi salaaamat pohach jaaye...🤣🤣

kk now il zip off my mouth n come to d update... 😆

frst of u tell me how on earth u write sooo amaaazinglyy welll...

i mean yaaar u r like wooow...

im ooolways left amaazed reading ur updates...

redaing d frst 2 lines of d updt i ws like ...

i ws bout to have a heart attack bt thaaank god Asad saved me...

oool thanx to u atleaaast u put some peice of brain in asad's character...

awww he wiped her tears...

she kissed his hand...

OMG!!!! THEY HUGGED EACH OTHER...

haaayeee they love each other...

awwwieee flowers, date thts sooo sweeet of asad ...

aweeesome updt yaaar...

i don knw how ... But uv got d ART OF MAKING A COMMON SCENE ATTRACTIVE AS WELLL AS ALLURING...

HATTS OFF TO U YAAR...

n i must telll u tht u described d hug scene damn gracefullly...

it ws excellent...
A WONDERFULL UPDATE...

olthough short bt complete in itself...

tnx 4 d PM n 4 d update...

bt u stopped it here...

now il hv to wait 4 a whole 1 month to read ur updates...

olthough il get a stock of updates bt stilll...

bt stilll LOVE U N UR UPDATES!!

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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