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Before I write anything I would like to say one thing to all readers reading this, PLEASE NO NEGATIVE COMMENTS!
This is my prediction to what would make the story better and raise popularity and the TRP that has been lost becoz of following the novel. Helpful feedback would be appreciated
Kumud is in agony but then decides to go to Dubai to find out what the matter is. When she gets there she finds out that Saras is satying away from his father and knows it must have been Guman. Laxminandan is shocked to see her there. She informs him that Saras has called off the wedding and again Laxminandan is furious at Saras. Kumud enquires about the whole story and she gets to know through Gumans cleverness and evilness. Laxminandan is in anger and apologises to Kumud and tells her to forget Saras. Saras is also shocked to see her there and doesn't talk to her. They have argument and Saras wont listen to anyone. Guman lets Kumud stay with them through taunts and decides to make her life miserable. Kumud decides to sort everthing out and make things perfect again. Eventually after many toils, falling apart a million times and so many times loosing hope and belief that she could ever make this possible, she does. she sorts out differences between Laxminandan and Saras. Saras apologises and promises to make her his bride.
According to me this tack could take at least 2-3 months. Meanwhile bak in Ratnanagri Danny and Kumari have fallen in love and Vidyachatur has brought a proposal to Laxminandan. Also Sunny wants to marry Kusum. Guman is shocked... They decide to have 3 marriages at the same time
Just saying, I am very well aware that I can not change the minds of SLB with this story but please whoever thinks it would be better to do this rather than the novel please say!
Shiv Shakti
