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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome dear..witing for next part..update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
Aisha genuenly saying ria to forget her one sided love..ria following aisha's words and trying to not to think about arjun..
Whose is behind aisha..
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
isko bhi update karo na ...pls pls
want to know kya hota hai aage
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Posted: 12 years ago
An intense update with all these acts happening cant wait for the killer to be in custody so that ETF can take a breath of relief :-) thank you for sharing please update soon xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great fic...love the suspense. I love the Arjun/Riya moments. Hope they will get together. I also feel so sad for aisha ._.


Please update soon. Thanks and good luck.

bzw how can I keep track of this fic? is there a follow button or something.. I am still new here 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thanks to all those who have liked and loved this story of mine till now:🤗

and thanks for all those lovely comments😳
I'm sincerely sorry for not having replied to each individually😳
@Vidya: what i meant was that Arjun just helped Ayesha when she needed him, they are nothing more than that😉 and Ayesha knows that Riya loves Arjun😊
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first and foremost i'm sincerely sorry that i havent been able to update this for a long time, but many must already know that i'm a bit caught up in a few things, and hasnt been able to be on IF like before, hence the lateness in this story and also other stories of mine😳

and now without wasting any more time, here's the next installment😳

Chapter 11

"Hain, he was the one. If he hadn't helped me, maybe Riya would have been dead!" Ayesha said shivering.

Riya sat next to Ayesha, and was busy comforting her, after everyone had left.

"Why me? Why you? I fail to understand what's going on," Ayesha said while sobbing. Riya tried desperately to comfort her, but none of her words seem to be working on Ayesha, so Riya put Ayesha's head on her shoulder and let her cry as much as she wanted. Riya couldn't see Ayesha at all in this way, she was no longer the strong and arrogant girl as before. here was a girl completely broken by fate and its cruelty.

After some time when Ayesha calmed down, Riya left her to bring a glass of water. When Riya came back, Ayesha wasn't on the sofa. She was scared for one second and went to look for her everywhere in the house. she found Ayesha in her room, packing her things.

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho?" Riya asked.

"I have taken my decision. I'm going away! I cant risk your life Riya nor those of the other people around me! I'll stay alone and far away from everyone!" Ayesha said in determined voice.

"Pagaal to nahin ho gaye tum! There's no way i'm letting you go Ayesha! Besides you dont need to protect me, i'm an ETF officer, i can protect myself. And the same applies to everyone there who cares deeply about you! We can defend ourselves and protect each other!" Riya said angrily, and snatched away Ayesha's bag.

"Riya you dont understand! Except you people i dont have anyone else in my life!" Ayesha said with tears in her eyes.

"And still you wanna leave us? You claim to love us and yet you dont mind leaving us and go away! Have you ever thought what will happen to us if something ever happens to you! Ayesha dekho, i made a big mistake last time, i let my feelings cloud over my duty, but not anymore! I promise you this, i'll never be a liability to anyone there! we are a team and we'll find that murderer before he can kill anyone innocent ever again!" Riya said.

Riya went near Ayesha, and hugged her, giving her some strength through that hug.

"Theek hein Riya. But then let's not waste anytime! I've only sprained my ankle, and i have rested enough already! We can go and help each and everyone in this case. Please Riya?" Ayesha pleaded.

"Ok, we'll leave in one hour! Riya said accepting defeat.

Riya left Ayesha and went in her room. She took her phone and called Rathore Sir to inform him about Ayesha's decision. Rathore was angry at first, but then he had to agree also.

"Ok, Chotu will pick you people up! Wait for him!" Rathore said and cut the call.

"Kya hua?" Arjun asked to Rathore. They were on their way to their office when Riya had called Rathore.

"It seems that Ayesha wants to work as from today! She's determined to help us find about the murderer!" Rathore said.

"It's good Rathore, that way she'll always be in front of our eyes, and if not the ETF is the most secure place for these two," Arjun said.

After more than one hour

Riya supported Ayesha till the conference room, where everyone were present discussing about this case.

Ayesha went to take her seat, and waited for everyone to tell her what they have got.

"Ayesha, are you sure you told us everything about yourself?" Arjun suddenly asked.

"What do you mean?" Ayesha asked confused, "I told you everything about me!"

"Nahin Ayesha, kahin kuch choot raha hein! I dont understand why we are unable to find to pinpoint who is after you and why? There must be something, some link missing!" Arjun said frustrated.

"I have told you about everything that ever happened since i've been working. All my missions and every criminal which i sent behind the bars!" Ayesha said.

"Arjun, let her in peace. She has said everything she knew!" Rathore said glaring at Arjun.

"Nahin Rathore, we checked everything. Everyone who she mentioned! Yet we dont have any clue to guide us!" Arjun said while in deep thoughts.

"Maybe we have been following the wrong lead till date!" Arjun said.

"Ayesha tell us about your parents! You said they died in an accident when you were very young! And that your uncle brought you and your sister up," Arjun said.

"Hain, my parents died when i was twelve years old," Ayesha said.

"How did they die?" Arjun asked.

"But why are you interested in them?" Rathore asked.

"Maybe the person behind her is not someone she knows about? Maybe it's from her past Rathore!" Arjun said. "Ayesha, how did your parents die?"

"I only know they died in an accident. And soon after that my uncle took us with him. My uncle died three years ago. I dont know anything else," Ayesha said.

Arjun again went into deep thinking, it may be a just a false lead, but he couldn't ignore it. So he sent Chotu and Shree to find out about Ayesha's parents and their deaths.

While somewhere in a hotel room

He was lying on his bed, thinking about his next step, when someone knocked at his door. he went to open it and found himself looking at the porter holding a parcel for him.

"Sir, this just came for you," the porter said and gave him the parcel.

He took some money, gave the porter and closed the door. He opened the parcel and took out the sim card. He put the simcard in his mobile, and waited for his phone to ring. And he wasn't disappointed since barely a few minutes later, the phone started to ring.

"What is happening? Are you getting old?" someone said on the other side of the line.

"Nothing, just a temporary delay!" the man replied.

"You are not getting paid to be late or for any mistakes which may happen! You well know that no one is vital for me! If not you, then someone else! You have one more week, and if you dont manage to kill that girl, then consider you are no longer needed!" the man said on the other side and cut the call.

He stared at his mobile, took out the simcard and burnt it using his lighter. If he wasn't wrong, if he doesn't manage to kill that girl, then from the threat he just got, he'd be running for his life. He loved this shot of adrenalin he got. He better kill that girl soon, or he'd be the one hunted.


No precap😳

and sorry for any spelling mistakes😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres :

That was a great update!

Can we just get a bit lengthy update next time? Pwease! 😳

Anyways, coming to the update!

Hmm...so Aayesha has a support system in the form of Riya! 😃

Loved the update!

Continue soon!
Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh... Nice one hope riya will be safe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update 👏 ahh this is getting more interesting. I cannot wait to know who is doing all this. The Ayesha/Riya moments were so sweet. Hopefully the next chapter we will get some Ariya moments too 😛

Please update soon. Thanks and good luck.

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