virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 71

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Aenna thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwwsum...update I really lovedit
Lolzz manvi my gosh she is soo naughty...
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good...
Super as alweays...
What cooking there?.. Wan know...
Try to soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updatw what plan now they make
to come out truth update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome updatethe fight they had n then the way they made upn also the compensation convo lolz im wondering how virat will make manvi see maya n kabir's realitywaiting for the revelationcontinue soon naina jii 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
17,18,19,20,21???????????/how did i miss readin all those parts????😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

*off to read them*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! Kya Update tha!!
Luved it!! Kya story ending soon??
Acha ending dena!!
Amazing update!! Piyali as cute as ever!!
Luved the Virman parts!!
Update soon!!
x Avika x
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 17...ehm ehm.☺️the rain dance.☺️the seduction.☺️
part 18-manvi's so despo na?naina same pinch!!!!my younger brother's birthday is also on 17th june!!!!shit!!!!i mean how???😲
part 19-piyali is too cute!!!!
part 20-the baby thing has gotten on my nerves.poor manvi.😛
part 21-i loved emotional virat.yes!!!!my viru boy in action!!!!kabir n maya...watch out!!!!


sorry naina...i was busy on my project back then.may b that's why i missed all these updates.u angry?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daydreamer9

part 17...ehm ehm.☺️the rain dance.☺️the seduction.☺️
part 18-manvi's so despo na?naina same pinch!!!!my younger brother's birthday is also on 17th june!!!!shit!!!!i mean how???😲
part 19-piyali is too cute!!!!
part 20-the baby thing has gotten on my nerves.poor manvi.😛
part 21-i loved emotional virat.yes!!!!my viru boy in action!!!!kabir n maya...watch out!!!!


sorry naina...i was busy on my project back then.may b that's why i missed all these updates.u angry?

thanks for the comment dishu n i m not angry... i understand it happens... 😊
nainu loves dishu... 😉
n i am soo glad that u liked it 😉
my brother's bday is on 16 june... Tongue
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PART 22
after the breakfast
virman with piyali in their room...
virat : wow meli beti... i m proud of you...
piyali : pal why hum doing it...?? (but why r we doing it...??)
virat : arrey meli jaan its a game...
piyali : main stupid nahi hoon vilat... 😛
manvi : hehe... (enjoying the convo of the duo)
virat : accha... actually na ye ek plan hai...
piyali : fir se lamming...??? (again planning...???)
virat : meri maa its planning...
piyali : haan chachu wohi lamming...
virat : listen dont call me chachu in front of that kabir n witch
piyali : but why...???
manvi : do as vilat says baby...
piyali : aul fil manvi ko bhi manvi hi kehna hai... chachi ni...
virat : nahi... n trip pe we can act like a family...
piyali : but we r already family... papa told me that day...
manvi : baby chachu means u call him papa for that trip n me ur mommy...
piyali : confuse kyun kar rahe ho...??? ye chachu hai n aap chachi...
manvi : haan but...
virat : piya... come to me baby...
piyali shifted towards virat n sat on his lap.
piyali : bolo na virat...
virat : i dont like that witch... i want her to go back... so...
piyali : ohh i also dont like her... ab samjhi...
manvi : very good... kya tuning hai tum dono ki...!!! hats off...
piyali : ab meri itni bhi tareef mat karo...
virat : kya karein...?? aap ho hi tareef layak..
manvi : hehe... chalo fir packing karein...???
virat : yes...
piyali : aur meri packing...
manvi : tumhari new mom hai na... i will do it...
piyali : love u manvi... but i love vilat more...
virat : i also love u more meli jaana...
manvi goes to kabir's room n seeing manvi they both stopped talking n acted as if they werent talking about anything.
manvi : done with the packing guys...???
kabir : but where are we going mani...??
manvi : donno... virat just booked a resort...
maya : ohh... but still is it possible he didnt tell u...?? i mean u both have a kid, then also does he hide things from u...
manvi : he is like this only maya...
maya : but you are his wife manvi... you should let all this happen...
manvi : maya i think i shouldnt be talking about my husband like this...
maya : u really trust him... dont you...???
manvi : yes i trust him more than myself... after all he is not only my husband, but my friend n above all the father of my child.
maya made a face yet tried giving manvi a fake smile n manvi noticed it today while kabir was also not less... he was playing with his phone just to show he isnt listening...
manvi : chalo... come soon... we will be waiting downstairs.
kabir : ok mani... give us a minute...
kabir : see i told u na they are happy... we shouldnt be doing this...
maya : oh cmon didnt u notice... manvi isnt happy... she is bound in a relationship... married to virat you see n has a kid also...
kabir : maya i dont think so... they look damn happy... n i am happy seeing mani happy...
maya : woww u are happy seeing mani happy... but cant u see the darkness, the eptiness that was in her eyes when i talked about her marriage.
kabir : oh cmon stop playing ur tricks on me... they wouldnt help... you want to be with virat...
maya : oh yeah... you never wanted manvi.. oops your mani... NO NO NO... MRS. MANVI VIRAT SINGH VADERA...
kabir : yes i wanted mani... i loved her god damnit... but i think virat is the one for manvi...
maya : you are the one for manvi kabir...
kabir : i wish maya... but
maya : lets give it a try kabir... agar nahi hua toh we will go back...
kabir : are u sure...?? is it worth taking that risk...??
maya : absolutely...
manvi was busy dressing up when virat hugged her from behind n admired them in the mirror.
manvi : what are u looking at...???
virat : we are loo perfect... hai na...??
manvi : jaan its perfection at its best...
virat : yeah... god's best creation...
manvi : think about OUR creation...
virat : besharam ladki... u are just the limit...
manvi : arrey besharami ki kya baat hai... tum bhi na bahut sharamate ho...
virat : accha... main sharamata hoon...?? dikhaun tumhe...
" vilat i am ready... " piyali came running.
virat : ye har baari romance kharab kar deti hai...
manvi : shut up... now leave me na...
virat : kyun...??? ruko main besharami ki heights dikhata hoon tumhe...
manvi : piya ke saamne nahi... chodo na...
piyali : chodo na mumma ko daddy... (and she started giggling)
manvi : ye toh full mood mein hai...
virat : piya meri jaan ye drama wahan karna... yahan nahi... okk...?? (winking at her)
piyali : okkk vilat...
daydreamer9 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
kabir is a good boy.but that maya!!!!uff!!!😡
virat sure is a little shy n manvi too brazen.
naina have some shame!!!😛

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