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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Confusion hi confusion hai solution ka pataa nahi!

I guess this summarises my state on reading this chapter. While it is more evident that Khushi is mourning the loss of Shyam and Arnav isn't even aware of it, I can't wait to know his side of the story and more importantly his past hatred for Khushi.

The description of the mountains and the rivers take us to the lap of nature while that of the monastry adds to the serenity😊

This flashback was much more informative and although it certified that Arnav has always been a pompous a**, I'm eager to know much more about other characters and waiting is going to be maha difficult.

Continue soon!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

They really have so much bottled inside them...I hope this expedition will change things...they both are hurting very badly...

Well...i hope Fate brings lovers back together...and hope they just take some pains to give a chance to let it happen...

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

A B C D...and I await eagerly for what E is going to bring...

Both of them seem to share a very bottled up past, filled with MU's that is holding them back, but I like how you bring and connect the past and the present...Makes the reading a treat and a delight to be able to go on this expedition with them and feel...

I cant wait to read if things will settle between them...

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Amazing chapter

Loved it

Has khushi cheated arnav ???????

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Forget the timeline or the confusion ...

All I know is that I am loving the progress of the story ...

Thanks NB ...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

And i am back for for more. I love this interplay of timelines that you are doing so effectively. It leaves me wanting to know more. And also sort of mirrors life a little - two people are never really going to be thinking of just one event all the time - unless it was the event that changed their lives. Here too, what affects Khushi and Arnav are slightly staggered and it makes for stunning mystery! So keep it up and don't worry. When the story is finally told, I know it will all make sense.

Till then it is...I know you don't understand Harry Potter much...but it is like Harry's dream of walking down the Department of Mysteries - he didn't know till the end what he would find but when he did . the effect was stellar!

But now that I have the story out of the way, may I applaud for the terrific research you are doing on the backdrop. As I said before - this is the way published books are written. The detail is astounding and perfectly in sync with that the story set out to do.

You are doing a wonderful thing here, K. But then who expected anything less :)

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

NAACH B ...YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE ME SUFFER WITH NO

HELP NO OXYGEN N THE CHILLING COLD ACCOMPANIED BY

THE SHEER INDIFFERENCE OF THIS 'HOT' DUO TURNED 'COLD'

I ACTUALLY FEEL I MUST BUCKLE UP MYSELF WITH MORE

EQUIPMENT [OF WORDS] AS THE JOURNEY SEEMS TO BE

MORE DARING N DANGEROUS THAN IT SEEMS

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS TALE OF TOILING TO CONQUER THE

UTMOST

THEIR EGOS

THEIR HEADSTRONG-NESS

THEIR GRIEVANCES

THEIR STANDS

THEIR PROMISES

THEIR LACK OF LOVE

THEIR NOT TO UN-KNOT THE KNOT

THEIR FUTILE ATTEMPTS TO REACH THEIR GOAL ONE ON ONE

THEIR HINDERING PROGRESSION

THANKS

KKKA

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

this was really very nice...!!
w8ng for next,,!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

I seriously can't believe that you haven't gone on a mountaineering trip like this yourself. The detail with which its written is astounding. It is so vivid.
I loved the mix of past and present in your story telling.
It's like a peek-a-boo leaving us to ask for more.
Arnav & Khushi have a past and the memories are still afresh in their minds.
I'm enjoying this.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

U are a gifted writer Basanthi and a perfectionist too. U must have dedicated lot of time to read the experience of Mountaineering .Or Do u have direct experience in mountaineering?

Loved the way u narrated the story.

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago