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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee start👏
continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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(((Hey……it had been a pretty long time….. I took a longish break from this writing job because of my exams……….but I am here to share a new story with you all….hope u will like this stuff!!! All situations till remarriage and arnav's b'day are same……but small changes are made here and there…….I doesn't have sheethal and aarav in my story…..but it doesn't mean that there are no villains…there are lots of twists and turns. This ff is dedicated to all ipkknd fans!! But, special dedication to my lovely friends- VARSHA,APARNA,RESH,RANJU!!! And to my naughty bunch of friends- SREEJU DI, (thnq smiling beauty, for the encouragement u gave me), 2 my cutest sister-LEENA CHECHI and last but not the least , to gorgeous GEHAD for the enormous support u gave me……to YASH, my sweety, and the best, CHEESEMAD, thnq for ur directions...SUSHI..chutki is bk dear!…here goes the first part……… )))

The sky was deep orange and the sun was about to set. Birds were heading towards their home. By now, the sun hid himself somewhere in the sea and darkness was slowly gulping the surroundings. People were busy to reach their destination. Heavy traffic was a curse of Delhi. But, life was normal in the city, that dusk!!!Khushi was peacefully watching the sunset. The last ray of burning sun hit her pellucid face and it glowed, as usual. She was seeing that beautiful scene from the one-walled window near the poolside. In the wine-red sari, she was looking gorgeous as ever. She had put her long, silky hair in front. Her milky skin showed sparkling effect to the pale colours of that surrounding. Small hairs were falling on her forehead and were tickling her eyelids. She was still staring at infinity. She was thinking! Thinking about her…..thinking about everyone…. Most importantly thinking about HIM!!!*She was an ordinary girl. She became an orphan at the age of eight. Her broad-minded, loving uncle-aunty adopted her and brought her up. She was a fun-loving, educated desi-girl. She loved her life in Lucknow, with her amma-baabuji and her supportive sister paayal.Like a dream coming true, her jiji's marriage was fixed. She had lots of works to do. But, she was shocked to know that her baabuji was struggling to make the dowry.Without seeking anybody's permission, she took the shop's papers and went to see the fiance of paayal at a hotel. And there she met HIM!! Her raajkumar! Once laad governor!!!!! *She passed a faint smile. But, life is unpredictable. She fell in love with the same guy whom she once hated. Even, she didn't know, when did the hate in her mind turned out to LOVE! He is the inseparable part of her life. Without HIM Khushi is incomplete………………….. *She thought about all her naughty deeds just to provoke him. She utilized, even all those small situation to take revenge on him. But, she saw something more than anger when he saved her from the building and also from a rushing car on a rainy day and also at the photo shoot. She saw his caring side at Nainital when she was attacked by some strangers. She found concern in his eyes when she fell ill. She found guilt in his eyes at hospital and she found a protective shoulder where she could lay her head and cry. But, she found sparkle in those eyes when he helped her in removing the lights that were on her. She found some magic in his eyes when he was about to kiss her on diwali night. She found frustration in his eyes when he fixed his own engagement with laavanya. But, she felt the pain in his eyes when he got to know about her engagement. She felt something unknown, yet exhilarating feeling in both, her and his minds' during her jiji's marriage. She was surprised to see his naughtiness then. And, the first kiss!! She cherishes that moment every now and then… she felt blissful right at that moment when his soft touch invoked strong feelings in her mind!!!!! She, later, felt the same feeling many times. But, surprisingly, she found anger in those eyes when he forced her for the abrupt marriage. She felt painful and disappointed. But, he loved her and she too loves him!!!!!!!! She realized that the strong feelings in her mind were LOVE!!! SHE UNDERSTOOD HOW MUCH IMPORTANT IS HE IN HER LIFE! She found and felt the same feeling-LOVE- in his eyes when he saved her from the clutches of death. And, love blossomed………… she saw his concern and care towards her. It was their ardent desire to be the soul of each other till the end of their life. She remembered about those old days. The days when he scolded her. But, all that were past. Once he made her cry, but he made her smile and laugh many times later. Once, he left her alone in darkness, but, later he was always there beside her at all turns of life. Once he disbelieved her, but now he trusts her more than anything in this world. His divine presence enraptures her and the importance of him in her life is inestimable.She remembered about her transition from a naughty girl to a loving wife of him. Her ARNAV, who makes her complete, and without whom her life is like a lone bird who is unprotected. Her life is aimless without the precious ARNAV beside.But life is not always in our control. Fate had a dirty role to play in their beautiful life. Even, the angels up in the heaven were envied seeing their bond. And, the worst and the unexpected occurred! Chilling and killing her, which completely shattered her! She tasted salt.Thud!!! It fell from the wall with a large sound and the glass broke into pieces. She was shocked and her chains of thoughts were broken all of a sudden by the sound. She wiped off the tiny drop of tear that had just escaped from her eyes. She quickly turned to see from where did the sound came. But, as she turned around suddenly, she shrieked on the top of her voice with immense pain. Aaahhh……………………….

So, here ends my first part…hope u all liked this one!!! Pls do comment everyone…….. And leaving a question to you all…….why did khushi shriek??? Leave the answer in the cmnt box!!!!!!! Will be posting parts on alternative days…….. Till we meet for the nxt tym with yet another interesting part………byeee

-chinnu


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Posted: 12 years ago
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(((Hey……it had been a pretty long time….. I took a longish break from this writing job because of my exams……….but I am here to share a new story with you all….hope u will like this stuff!!! All situations till remarriage and arnav's b'day are same……but small changes are made here and there…….I doesn't have sheethal and aarav in my story…..but it doesn't mean that there are no villains…there are lots of twists and turns. This ff is dedicated to all ipkknd fans!! But, special dedication to my lovely friends- VARSHA,APARNA,RESH,RANJU!!! And to my naughty bunch of friends- SREEJU DI, (thnq smiling beauty, for the encouragement u gave me), 2 my cutest sister-LEENA CHECHI and last but not the least , to gorgeous GEHAD for the enormous support u gave me……YASH-my sissy,the best and the great! SUSHI- chutki is bk! CHEESEMAD-thnq for ur directions!…here goes the first part……… )))

The sky was deep orange and the sun was about to set. Birds were heading towards their home. By now, the sun hid himself somewhere in the sea and darkness was slowly gulping the surroundings. People were busy to reach their destination. Heavy traffic was a curse of Delhi. But, life was normal in the city, that dusk!!!Khushi was peacefully watching the sunset. The last ray of burning sun hit her pellucid face and it glowed, as usual. She was seeing that beautiful scene from the one-walled window near the poolside. In the wine-red sari, she was looking gorgeous as ever. She had put her long, silky hair in front. Her milky skin showed sparkling effect to the pale colours of that surrounding. Small hairs were falling on her forehead and were tickling her eyelids. She was still staring at infinity. She was thinking! Thinking about her…..thinking about everyone…. Most importantly thinking about HIM!!!*She was an ordinary girl. She became an orphan at the age of eight. Her broad-minded, loving uncle-aunty adopted her and brought her up. She was a fun-loving, educated desi-girl. She loved her life in Lucknow, with her amma-baabuji and her supportive sister paayal.Like a dream coming true, her jiji's marriage was fixed. She had lots of works to do. But, she was shocked to know that her baabuji was struggling to make the dowry.Without seeking anybody's permission, she took the shop's papers and went to see the fiance of paayal at a hotel. And there she met HIM!! Her raajkumar! Once laad governor!!!!! *She passed a faint smile. But, life is unpredictable. She fell in love with the same guy whom she once hated. Even, she didn't know, when did the hate in her mind turned out to LOVE! He is the inseparable part of her life. Without HIM Khushi is incomplete………………….. *She thought about all her naughty deeds just to provoke him. She utilized, even all those small situation to take revenge on him. But, she saw something more than anger when he saved her from the building and also from a rushing car on a rainy day and also at the photo shoot. She saw his caring side at Nainital when she was attacked by some strangers. She found concern in his eyes when she fell ill. She found guilt in his eyes at hospital and she found a protective shoulder where she could lay her head and cry. But, she found sparkle in those eyes when he helped her in removing the lights that were on her. She found some magic in his eyes when he was about to kiss her on diwali night. She found frustration in his eyes when he fixed his own engagement with laavanya. But, she felt the pain in his eyes when he got to know about her engagement. She felt something unknown, yet exhilarating feeling in both, her and his minds' during her jiji's marriage. She was surprised to see his naughtiness then. And, the first kiss!! She cherishes that moment every now and then… she felt blissful right at that moment when his soft touch invoked strong feelings in her mind!!!!! She, later, felt the same feeling many times. But, surprisingly, she found anger in those eyes when he forced her for the abrupt marriage. She felt painful and disappointed. But, he loved her and she too loves him!!!!!!!! She realized that the strong feelings in her mind were LOVE!!! SHE UNDERSTOOD HOW MUCH IMPORTANT IS HE IN HER LIFE! She found and felt the same feeling-LOVE- in his eyes when he saved her from the clutches of death. And, love blossomed………… she saw his concern and care towards her. It was their ardent desire to be the soul of each other till the end of their life. She remembered about those old days. The days when he scolded her. But, all that were past. Once he made her cry, but he made her smile and laugh many times later. Once, he left her alone in darkness, but, later he was always there beside her at all turns of life. Once he disbelieved her, but now he trusts her more than anything in this world. His divine presence enraptures her and the importance of him in her life is inestimable.She remembered about her transition from a naughty girl to a loving wife of him. Her ARNAV, who makes her complete, and without whom her life is like a lone bird who is unprotected. Her life is aimless without the precious ARNAV beside.But life is not always in our control. Fate had a dirty role to play in their beautiful life. Even, the angels up in the heaven were envied seeing their bond. And, the worst and the unexpected occurred! Chilling and killing her, which completely shattered her! She tasted salt.Thud!!! It fell from the wall with a large sound and the glass broke into pieces. She was shocked and her chains of thoughts were broken all of a sudden by the sound. She wiped off the tiny drop of tear that had just escaped from her eyes. She quickly turned to see from where did the sound came. But, as she turned around suddenly, she shrieked on the top of her voice with immense pain.Aaahhh……………………….

So, here ends my first part…hope u all liked this one!!! Pls do comment everyone…….. And leaving a question to you all…….why did khushi shriek??? Leave the answer in the cmnt box!!!!!!! Will be posting parts on alternative days…….. Till we meet for the nxt tym with yet another interesting aprt………byeee

-chinnu


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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Superb update
u wrote all their journey in one part
is khushi hurt????
update soon
thanks for pm
welcum bak
how was ur xam????
Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome update loved it sooo much but why did u stop here? ???? Update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hey m glad ur back...
aww i can seamy name there at the top...
thnk u so much...
coming to the update, why did u stop here...
please update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
welcome back😊
and awesomee update t was👏
wat happ to khushi😲
pls update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Wow nice part dear..
Beauitfully written..
Thanks for the pm.
I think her leg is twisted while turning thats why she shouted.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Superb update
Is Khushi hurt?
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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