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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

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geet ko yakeen nehi horahe hai k maan uske saath hai...

nice update...

loved it very much..

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thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Ishita Irani

@IshitaIrani

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

awesome update😊

maan taking care of geet so sweet👏

geet eating golgappas u reminded me of ghsp yaar😛 i love this scenes very much as i also love golgappas very much😉

my mouth gets watering by listening golgappas😆

geet got happ to see maan there kyun nahin 1st time he got time to take care of her

iss baar agar maan ne kuch kiya to ek punch meri taraf se

maan jaldi geet ko manao

thnx for pm

upd soon

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Amazing part... 👏Just loved it..

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

dear..😃..

4 PMing ME.😃.. & me can't able to write my feelings in exact words to me use this way. hope u like it...

4 ur ...👏👏

just dear.😳.

it is just update.😛..

the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

dear...😳

lov,❤️

Tama

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

love part dear... loved it... just supereb...

very well written...

:)

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Waiting

😊

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

PART 24

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She opened the eyes after one hour and see around megha sit near to her...

Megha : geet ab kaisa mahsoos kr rhi hai

She tries to sit but megha stops her.

Megha : tu aaram kr

Ek to aapna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhti

Mohan : megha tum

Megha : mohan khabrdaar tumne iski side li

Ye bilkul nhi sunti

Geet : megha mein thik hoo ab

Megha : pta hai kitna thik hai

Seema

Seema : ji memsahab

Megha : geet ke liye soup leke aayo

Seema: ji

Geet : megha mera kuch bhi khane ka mann nhi hai

Megha : chup

Maine kaha na

Geet : hmm

Megha : mein bhi aati hu

Geet : hmm

Megha & mohan left the place...

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Geet(thought)

Wo yhi the...

Pr ab khi dikh kyun nhi re

Her eyes searching him, her heart only wants him...

Khi firse mujhe chodke toh nhi chale gye

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Her tears flow down from eyes...

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Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya

He wiped her tears...and cupped her face and asked from her "geet mein yhi hu"

Maan : khi nhi jaa rha hu

Yhi hu

Tumhare sath

Tumhare pass

Geet : no

Khi nhi hai aap

Hamesha asa hi krte hai aap

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She hugged him and cried ...

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Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa

Maan : jaan please chup ho jaayo

Kyun khud ko takleef de rhi ho

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Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa

She felt relief in his arms..and slept in few minutes...

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After one day

All are sited on dining table...and doing breakfast...

Megha : geet tum room se bahar kyun aayi

Mein bs

Geet : bore ho rhi thi waha

Ab thik hu

Mohan : aayo geet

Tumahre aane se ab family complete lag rhi hai

Mohan said those words to geet but see to maan...

Maan : thanks bhabhi

Ab mein chalta hu

Megha : par abhi aapke parr ki chot puri tarah thik nhi huyi hai

Maan : bhabhi pr mein

Mohan : maan tu apne friend ke ghar ruk rha hai

Itni formality kyun kr rha hai

Maan : pr mohan

Geet : jb megha aur mohan itna kh rhe hai

Tu ruk jaaiye na

Rimzim : uncle

Maan : ok

see this update also

MG-Kya pyaar karonge mujhse

part 1 on page 10

part 2 on page 22

part 3 on page 30

part 4 on page 33

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

yipee

me first

O mg Geet ne maan ko rukne ke liye kaha aur usne Maan ko hug bhi kiya

ye meri tarf vse Geet ke liye

Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: doublecross

waah kya updates hai!
amazing yaar
this story is getting so very interesting
am all ears and intrigued
can i have some more
hungry for more
continue soon dear please

dear updated...check on page 118

thanks dear