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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 13
Tujhe sab hai pata...hai na Maa..-I

"Are purvi and ovi,sisters???" Maan questioned quite intently,with his gaze fixed at the plasma screen in Dadi's room.
"Yes,they are sisters.." Dadi answered little irritated with Maan's continuous questions. He was disturbing her badly with his queries since last one hour.
Savitri devi was quite surprised when he found Maan in her room at 6 am in the morning. She used to watch repeat telecasts of all her favourite serials during this early morning time because Maan never liked these telly serials. Hence she had chosen the time when her grandson used to be lost in his dreamland. Her mouth was agape in astonishment,when maan suggested to watch serial with her this morning. She was suddenly remembered of Suta's words previous night.Girl had completed her challenge very soon but how??? Savitri devi got answer of her question when Maan told her that Suta had to prepare a forty pages report on Indian daily soaps and he had promised to help her with this assignment. Savtri devi had somehow controlled her laugh.She knew very well that Suta had lied to Maan.She felt bad for her grand son but on the other hand,It was a great chance to take revenge from him for all the moments when he had forbade her from watching her favourite shows on television. Hence,she decided to play along.
"and who is their mother???" He asked again.
"Archana .." Dadi replied.
"What???? You mean that young girl,who has just returned from the hospital..." Maan asked with surprise.
"Yes.." Dadi consented.."But why are you so surprised..??"
"She is too young for being grandmother of Purvi's daughter..Even she does not look mother of two 25 or 26 years old girls..."
"She has two more sons too..." Dadi exclaimed enjoying Maan's astonishment.
"How is that possible dadi???"
"Actually Archana had adopted four 13 years old kids just like you when she was twenty.." Dadi said biting her cheek to keep herself from laughing.
"Really???" Maan asked innocently.His eyes were surprised to find a story similar to his life on TV.
"No I was kidding..Story has taken 20 years leap.." Savitri devi spoke as she snatched the tiny notebook from Maan's hand.He was using that notebook for writing the information about serials from his grandmother.With much expertise,Savitri devi drew a family tree of Respective families of "Manav" and "Archana",which were male and female protagonists of the serial "Pavitra rishta".
"Its so confusing" Maan said as he read the names of characters of "four generations", shown in the serial till now.
"It would have been easy,if you have watched the serial from the first episode only.." Dadi chided him like a school kid,who had missed the school on the day when teacher had taught something very important."It was cute love story of a boy "Manav" who was an illiterate Car mechanic and girl "Archna" who had to left her studies after eight standard.." Dadi said further with a dreamy expression.
"What/??" Maan was astonished."Is he still a car mechanic???" He asked further pointing towards "Suited booted" Maanav on the TV screen.
"No..Now he owns a big business..."Dadi informed.
Maan was about to ask "How" when Nakul knocked at the door to call them for breakfast.
Maan jotted his inquiry beside the "Pavitra Rishta family tree" as both of them came to dining hall.
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"Good morning Maan.."
Morning became more "good" for Maan as he looked at happy face of his daughter,who just wished her.She was already present at the dining table today. He himself was feeling very elated since the moment Suta had come to his room last night,asking for his help for the "daily soap" assignment.
"Good morning baby.." He said with a wide and proud smile on his lips taking a seat beside her.After Nakul,he had managed to make Suta open with him,in the family.
"Good morning sexy...!!!" Suta chirped again,now looking at the Dadi,who was coming slowly towards the dining table because of her knee pain.
"Morning my Red bull.." Dadi said in a sweet voice as she gave a soft peck at Suta's fore head.
Maan was astonished watching Suta's behaviour with his grandmother.He was more astonished with the "names",they both had called each other.
"Sexy??Red bull???" He said raising his eyebrows,shifting his gaze from dadi to suta.
"yes,we have given each other pet names..Do you have any problem with that???" Savitri devi asked shrugging her shoulders.
"No..no problem.."Maan spoke hiding the astonishment in his voice.
Smile on his lips vanished instantly as he saw Mamta coming out of the kitchen with breakfast tray in her hands.He did not want to leave the dining table without having the breakfast once again,that too when Suta had joined them happily for the breakfast for the first time. His heart cursed his mother's stubbornness repeatedly as he called Nakul in an angry voice.
"Nakul..My breakfast...!!!!"
He gave a fleeting angry glance to his mother,before dipping his head in the news paper.
"Parantha...!!!" Suta exclaimed in happiness as she looked at the breakfast tray in Mamta's hand.."Thank you so much dadi..." She spoke further as Mamta served a hot and crunchy parantha in her plate.
Maan who was pretending to read the newspaper,got alert immediately.
"My pleasure beta.."He heard Mamta replying to suta with contentment on her face.
Maan was amazed with drastic change in Suta's behaviour with everyone in one night.He was unable to comprehend the reason behind this change but whatever the reason was,He was happy with it,though there was certain disappointment too because Suta had called his mother "dadi" before calling him "father".
"Can I get white butter too,dadi???"Suta asked as she blew at hot morsel in her hand.
"Yes baby,why not??I have made fresh for you.." Mamta said serving some butter in suta's plate as she fed her one bite with her hands.
Maan bit his "vegetable sandwitch" harshly,as a subtle jealousy hit his heart.He was jealous because 'his mother" was feeding 'his daughter".They both were connected because of "him" and still they were avoiding him as if he was not present on dining table. He was actually missing his mother "stealthy attention" on him to check whether he was eating properly or not.He was always aware of Mamta's eyes on him,though he always pretended to be oblivious.
He looked around at the dining table to find everyone busy.Mamta was busy serving as well as occasionally feeding suta,where as Savitri devi was drowned in the newspaper article,"Fashion for Monsoon..". He coughed loudly to gain everyone's attention. Mamta's worried face thinking Maan had choked on his food,gave strange calm to his slightly jealous self. He controlled his lips from carving a smile as he shifted his gaze from Mamta to Suta..
"Baby,I have started working on your assignment..." He said in a happy voice.
"Thank you so much .."Suta exclaimed licking butter from her index finger.."Maan..Its Abhi's birthday tomorrow..She has invited you too.."
As soon Maan heard Suta's words,Name "Geet" started ringing in his heart and brain as her face from the picture in his wallet flashed infront of his eyes.
"Are you listening me Maan???" Suta asked in confusion on finding Maan lost somewhere.
"Ye..yes..I am listening Baby..!! I would surely come for the party..."
"Wow..Thats great..But..."
"But what baby???"
"Actually Maan..erm..."
"Don't hesitate suta,Say it clear..." Maan encouraged her.
"It would be better,if you dress a little different for the party..Since I have "youngest Father" in my friend circle,My friends would expect you to look "Cool"..Suta said air quoting the word "Cool".
Maan gave an awkward smile to Suta as he looked at decent Navy blue shirt he was wearing.."and what kind of clothes would make me look "Cool"??? He asked.
"Wear a "cool" tshirt with colourful denims.."Suta suggested."and yes,please shave your stubble.It makes you look older..."
"and hot.." Maan thought in his mind as he nodded his head like an obedient student.
"I already have some tshirts in my wardrobe baby..I would show you..." Maan spoke.
"Do they have "cool quotes" printed on them???" Suta inquired twitching her eyebrows.
The word "cool" had started irking Maan's ears.."No baby..But they are classy..."
"I don't want "classy"..I want "cool"..."Suta said with certain stubbornness in her voice as if Maan was the one who was forcing her to wear something against her will.."But its all your choice,Maan..If you don't want to dress cool,you can wear whatever you want.."Suta spoke further making a puppy face.It was her last attempt for saving the "bratty plan" her mind had woven to trouble her "brat father".
"No beta..I would wear whatever you would choose..."Maan said immediately as he thought of rescheduling his day's plan.There were a lot of telly serials to be watched on youtube.He had to steal one hour from his busy schedule for purchasing "cool tshirts".
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Maan stretched his arms as he yawned.Clock was showing 2 of the night and he had finished watching two famous shows from Zee tv named "Punar Vivah" and "Qubool hai" on Youtube. He picked up his tiny notebook from the table as he prepared his mind to write down something "Positive" about both the shows as per Suta's teacher's instructions.

Both the shows "Punar vivah" and "Qubool hai" have portrayed "women empowerment" in true sense as well as in a "novel way". They have broken "orthodox" trend of Male being the "Rapist" and Female being the "Victim" in Indian television and Cinema.In the last track of Punarvivah before show went off air and in the recent track of Qubool hai,Creative team showed rape attempts on the "Male protagonists" of both the shows by the respective "powerful vamps". It clearly indicates the change in the "mentality" of our society.Female characters in Negative roles are presented as "Strong headed women" who do not face any difficulty in bringing "well built,six pack laced" Hero to place of her choice before disgracing him by establishing a sexual relation with him in drugged state..

Maan felt his head bursting with pain as he read the "nonsense" his pen had produced on the paper.He had not taken his dinner today because each and every cuisine was cooked by his mother as per Suta's request. Hunger, sleep and irritating "daily soaps" were taking a toll on his body.He discarded the notebook as he got up from the couch to cook something for himself.
Maggi did not seem that appealing to his empty stomach as he entered the kitchen.He needed something heavy and proper.His gaze went to container of "Rice" as he decided to apply his culinary skills in cooking "Vegetable fried rice"
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Mamta who was coming towards Kitchen to have some water,stopped in her way as she watched Maan coming out from the kitchen with steamy hot plate of Fried Rice in his hands.She felt the familiar pain in her heart. Maan had preferred to take the trouble of cooking himself rather than eating the left over food in the fridge,just because his mother had cooked it.She hid herself behind a curtain to watch her son pouncing on food greedily.
Maan was eating as if he had seen food after ages.Even extra amount of "Black pepper" was not able to stop him.His tongue was extra sensitive for "Chillies" since childhood.He could not endure even sight amount of chillies in his food but tonight,despite having watering eyes and red nose,his hungry stomach did not let him abandon the rice cooked by him.
Mamta who was silently watching her son,easily guessed the extra amount of chillies in food,despite being at suitable distance from him.For world,he was a grown up and responsible father now But for her he was still her four years old Maan who could not eat spicy food..

"Maa..I won't eat yellow potatoes..I want red one like papa..."Four years old Maan spoke with a cute pout as he stopped his mother from feeding him "Zeera aaloo" without chillies.
"But beta..They are very spicy..They are red because of chillies in them..." Mamta tried to make him understand as she gestured towards her husband's plate which had "extra spicy dum aaloo".
"Maan loves "Red" maa...Yellow..Yellow,,dirty fellow..."Maan spoke crossing his little arms on his chest.
"But beta.."Mamta tried to say as her husband intervened.
"Let him eat once Mamta..He would stop troubling you once he would get his tongue burned with chillies.." Nitish spoke with a wink,serving "dam aalo" in his son's plate.
Maan clapped his hands in joy and excitement before opening his mouth infront of Mamta so she could feed him.
With much reluctance in her heart,Mamta fed him one bite.Chillies did their job as soon Maan chewed the piece of "Red potato.."..
"Aaah..water..water...!!!" He started crying next moment.
Mamta immediately brought a glass of water near his lips as she chided him,"I told you gravy is too spicy for you..But you never listen to me,Maan..'
Maan wiped his watery nose with his tshirt's sleeve as he looked carefully at "Dam aaloo" in his plate.After studying them for two minutes,he picked a potato from the plate with his tiny fingers.
"Maa..You lick the spicy gravy..I would eat potato only.." He gave his wise and innocent suggestion with a wide smile on his lips as he brought "potato" near his mother's lips.

Mamta wiped lone tear that escaped her eye as her brain freshened an old memory.There was a time when her son was ready to eat food 'licked' by her and today,he did not want to see the food touched by her.Maan's eyes had started watering very badly till now.It was impossible for Mamta to see him this way but on the other hand,She could not stop him from eating too.
Maan who was wiping his eyes was astonished as he found Mamta near the dining table.Next he saw Mamta keeping a bowl of "curd" near his plate.He knew,Mamta had brought curd so he could mix it in his "extra spicy rice" to mellow down the effect of chillies.
"I don't want curd.." Maan spoke pushing the bowl of curd away from his plate.
A subtle anger captured Mamta's conscience watching useless stubbornness of her son.She did not know what came over her as she poured the whole curd from bowl in Maan's plate next minute.
"You spoiled my ri..." He could not complete as his eyes met with furious eyes of his mother.Several years had passed since he had witnessed his mother's anger.It affected him more now because he knew,this time it was his mistake.
"Finish it right now.." Mamta ordered in an angry yet low voice.
Maan immediately sat down on his chair as he commenced eating once again.
"No one eats Fried rice with curd.." He mumbled.
"I am your mother and I know better..." He heard his mother saying,as she left the dining hall with hurried steps.
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PS-Sorry for silly mistakes.😛 and Thank you for your lovely wishes..I am much better now..😊
PPS-Next update would be after 10th july..I am going out of town...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maan actually watched serials to write an article...so sweet...he is trying hard to make suta happy...
felt bad for mamta...she cook everyday for maan...i loved the last part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht was a lovely update... noting down the family tree of pavitra rishta...is tougher than noting down about mahabharat...🤪

ahhh suta has come up with such great plans to trouble him...noting down the bakwas of telly serials,,,and he sitting with his dadi and enquiring about all the convoluted rishtas that the characters of the serial share with each other🤢...and then he has to wear t shtirts with cool printed on them😆...pyaar mein beti ke liye kya kya karna padta hai...😆

i loved the part of mamta and maan...i see reconciliation on the cards/
i loved this forceful and angry mamta... maan bahut nakre karta hai...so mamta should stop showering attention on him,, and be stern with him, banda barabar line par a a jayega😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
His mother did a perfect job...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan watching serials for suta's assignment
loved it
waiitng for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update

suta ne achha plan banaya hai maan ko sabak sikhane ka

poor him daily soaps dekh daale

and i loved d last part where maan's mom actually scold him

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...
moi loving the character of Suta...she is too good...
loved the last scene...Maan very much needed it
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Posted: 12 years ago
The TV project by Suta had me laughing out loud. I wish I could do that to the males in my family.
Poor guy writing all the details for PR, PV and QH... Zee TV fan hai Daadi...😆
Yeh kya zulm hai Palin...😲
You will make him shave his stubble... NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!
Personally I can't stand GC's T-shirts...ugh... Shirt better hai..😉
Love to see this over eager father trying to be cool for his daughter.
Beti Papa ki mast band baja rahi hai
Suta rules KM! I adore her and her masti.
Finally Mamta showed her anger when she knew his actions would hurt him. 👏 The tortures over herself she can bear but things that would hurt her child she could not. Lovely moment.
He is eager to see Geet.. me too...
Loved the update!
Thanks for updating😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...feeling very very bad for Maan...i feel like maan will be badly insulted in the party...
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Posted: 12 years ago
How r u palin????? take care.. we can wait...

now coming to update

Suta is such a brat..😆

poor maan.. phas gaya bechara..

Zee tv ke 2 serials me ho gayi thesis puri maan..😆

woman empowerment.. Tanveer is just😡

my sis used to watch it but now she has stopped. i stopped MB and she stopped QH. our pact..😆

PR ka kya hua.. uspe thesis nahi huyi kya... pakka uspe to puri novel likhi ja sakti thi.. saare aspect- romance thriller fighting..😆

ab kapde.. suta kya banake layegi maan ko geet ke ghar me..

i loved that childhood wala happy happy scene..

gud mamta scolded Maan.. he was behaving like a brat there..

awesome update palin..

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