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Posted: 12 years ago
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as Bidzie asked, I did come up with something that i would love to see... Anyways, it was too difficult imagining Monu in jail...😭😭 So this is all i could do.. Feel free to comment😛😛😃

Megha goes after Mohan to jail

She just stands there, her feet unable to move. She watches on as Mohan's hand slowly moves away from hers. she keeps looking at him, scared, petrified and tries to look for a little sign of hope that'll say that Mohan will be okay, but nothing convinces her. She keeps looking on as the jeep keeps moving away and farther away from her sight.

They didn't exchange a single word at their moment of parting, but their eyes said it all, about their pain and longing for each other. Mohan could give nothing but a silent nod to Megha. His eyes full of tears, but he willed her not to cry, his heart full of pain, but he willed her not to break down, his soul full of guilt, but he willed her to be strong.

As the jeep turned around the corner and Mohan was finally out of sight, Megha sank from inside. The facts finally started sinking in, but she knew that there was only one that she believed in- Mohan was innocent. She didn't listen to anything anybody was saying. She ran into the house wiping her tears and grabbed her purse and then stormed out again, heading towards the police Station. When she reached, she ran with all the energy she had, afraid that even a second's delay may cause her Mohan some harm.

She rushes to the officer on duty and says in a demanding voice, "Mujhe mohan se milna hai!"

"Dekhiya madam, aap..."

"Mujhe kuch nahi sunna!!! Abhi milaiye mujhe unse!!"

"Madam abhi is tarah nahi mil..."

"Apki koi bakwas nahi sunni mujhe! Bina warrant ke kaise arrest kar sakte hain aap mere pati ko??!! Abhi milna hai mujhe!!!"

Suddenly she hears some commotion . She turns around and sees Mohan being shifted to a lock up. her heart starts to race the moment she sees him. she paces off quickly in his direction, fights her way through a herd of constables and policemen. As Mohan steps into the lock up, she quickly rushes in behind him too, fighting off all the hands trying to stop her. She swiftly takes Mohan into a tight embrace. she wouldn't let him go now for anything in the world.

The feel of Megha against him at that moment relieved him of all tension. He wasn't scared anymore, the fact that Megha was with him meant more than anything else in the world now. He sniffed, braved a smile and broke back from the hug. Megha immediately shifted her hands to his face, his shoulder, neck, hands. She was panicky and shivering.

"Mo... Mohan... tum.. thik ho naa?" she said through her sobs.

He gently caressed her cheeks and nodded with a smile.
"Megha, Himmat rakho... tum toot nahi sakti... sab kuch thik ho jaega..."

She holds the hands that are caressing her cheeks and she softly kisses one of them.
"Main tumhe kuch hone nahi dungi!"

"Pata hai mujhe... Akhir tum MIRCHI Madam ho!!" he said with a painful smile and Megha returned a smile too.

"Erm... Woh Rimjhim..."

"Main sambhal lungi."

"Aur Nanhi..."

"Use kuch nahi bataungi."

They look at each other for a moment and in that moment celebrate their understanding for each other and how they know each other's needs so well. They embrace each other again and he plants a little kiss on her head. for a moment, it feels as if all is well, but then the lady constables arrive and pull Megha away. She is shocked and looks up at Mohan, scared,
"Mohan??"

They keep pulling her away and she tries to struggle out of their grasp, but in vain.

"MOHAN!!!" she sobs, rather screams.

He stands there as still as a stone, watching his wife being taken away from him. addu's words echo in his ears again,"Sab kuch cheen lunga main tumse..." He feels his entire world shattering and quietly he whispers, "Megha..." as if the word itself could cure him of all his miseries.

Megha, who is being walked away is still turned back, looking at Mohan, wishing that she could free him, save him from this hell.

Mohan tries to compose himself, he nods towards Megha to go, and blinks his eyes saying that he trusts her.

She returns his gesture too with a nod and a smile. She then walks away from the station, with the determination that she would be back soon to take back her husband.

Do comment... if you like😃😃

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Pilu05 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such is so romantic and painfull
kiru_maau thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOL... somehow.. for megha- mohan... romantic never comes without a bit of pain😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yet again -so touching. my eyes are all welled up. too moving

👏
its like u wrote the OS so fast -wahan bidzie ne sirf poocha & here u come up with this gem.

aur yeh last sentence kyun daala? if u like ? its fantastic - pls aur aane do , roj if u can 👍🏼
dsgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing👍🏼...bt i really dnt want to see MM lyk dis ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsgirl

its amazing👍🏼...bt i really dnt want to see MM lyk dis ..


i know dear.. none of us want to see MM this way... But this what CVs are giving us... we are only improvising😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!

Aakhir tum mirchi madam ho..
Mirchi madam ka tadka to lagega us Addu ko..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bgscribe

Awesome!


Aakhir tum mirchi madam ho..
Mirchi madam ka tadka to lagega us Addu ko..


Yep!!! Addu ko Bahut zor ki mirchi lagegi ab toh😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajbijz

yet again -so touching. my eyes are all welled up. too moving

👏
its like u wrote the OS so fast -wahan bidzie ne sirf poocha & here u come up with this gem.

aur yeh last sentence kyun daala? if u like ? its fantastic - pls aur aane do , roj if u can 👍🏼


aww😃 thank u... this "mohan in jail" track is making us all teary dear😭😭

yesh well... ab aur dukh bhari dastaan nahi likh sakti😆😆 If i write any more OS, it'll be happy wala MM.. but no promises yet😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww.. Dats awesum.. Was havng goosebumbs whle reading ur OS..! Dogh the track is damn depressing yet amazingly written.. Perfect..

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