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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shruti

Wonderful! This was the first word that my heart uttered when I read your poetry. ๐Ÿ˜Š

I too am a lover of poetry and have written a few. Your poems are simply amazing and I loved them all.๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for the PM ๐Ÿ˜Š



welcome new reader๐Ÿค—
awww...u too??๐Ÿ˜›
will love to read ur poem๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jeez Beautiful Rumpu๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DreamyDeepz28

      All Poems are good ๐Ÿ˜Š So sorry haven't been able to read properly because of lack of time... Wil do when I get some time .Thanks for the PM ๐Ÿค—& buddy request ๐Ÿ˜Š



sure dear...take ur time๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks a lot fr accepting me as a frnd๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear first of all congrats for your new poetic corner.

U r amazing dear.i am loving your work.keep writing.
Thanks a lot for the pms dear.
And sorry for late comment as i am little busy these days so whenever i get time i try to comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaintini

Hey dear first of all congrats for your new poetic corner.

U r amazing dear.i am loving your work.keep writing.
Thanks a lot for the pms dear.
And sorry for late comment as i am little busy these days so whenever i get time i try to comment.



thanks ๐Ÿค—
it's ok dear...take ur time๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 10 years ago


welcome๐Ÿค—
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Daffodelic Beauty of Something Undefined  


When a yellow bud spreads its petals
With a longing to get someone special
Offers the most affectionate relation in your world.

...Passionate love...

The marvelous colour of rainbow
Gets faded in front of a light
A light of true care,anxiety,sympathy & much more
Every drop of it lulls you,cheers you,glimmers to you.

...Paradise...

Having wound in his heart
Who offers his lap for your comfort,
Makes you feel the reality beyond your imagination,
Wipes your tears with a mind-blowing smile,
Spread a magic can make you sing.

...Hurtful love...

A lover who says-"see the light through my eyes." 
Who feels-"you are a unique jewel."
Who comforts-"I'm with you for ever."
Who forces-"come on,achieve your goal."
Who challenges-"your good qualities must defeat bad ones."
Who pleads-"remain simple...just like YOU.

...That's called friendship...

 Friendship is not how you feel
It's how you feel from the bottom of the heart
Friendship in not what you perform
It's what u perform selflessly
Friendship is what you can deny
But only when you are not in life.
Friendship is what by that you are forced...
Forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
That perfumes your breath till death.



A friend is who he thinks himself incomplete to complete you.
& you??--you think the same. 



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Posted: 10 years ago
friendship ko leke jo jitna kahe,kam hey...so thoda bada ho gaya ye poem๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful...
thnx for the pm dear...๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing 
thank u for pm