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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~~ Ajnabee Ishq ~~~


The coldness of surrounding hardly affected the broken man who took support of the big Peepul tree who stood like a monster with its branches trying to duplicate itself...


Yes it was never easy never ever easy to fall in love for a person like him belonging to an upperclass arrogant family. He still remember how his Punjabi dad and Gujarati mom used to fight continuously for hours right in front of him n his baby sister. Many a times their ugly fight disturbed his small sister's sleep and he who was very much cared about her made it a routine to seal her small ears with cotton balls. He know he can't hide from the bloody truth- yes the bloody truth that she too is cursed by a unloving parents.


Love -Marriage- Family it was all fun for them. None would believe the fact that the duo who fights every single day once loved eachother like hell. It was a utter shock for him too who came to know that his ever fighting dad-mom had a love marriage...Two people coming from 2 different culture united and the end result was just fight and pain...But as a correction the pain was restricted to him and his choti while his mom-dad was busy fighting and making up new relations for themselves. That was the day he decided that once he gets an opportunity he will dumb his parents and will just live a peaceful life with his choti

God heard him perhaps and he made a miracle..The great Udaichand Singh gave out a will which made clear that minor Udayveer Singh is his heir, The whole Udayam Empire was his in a day.. It didn't took time for him to decide further. The very next day he with the help of his loyal advisor shifted himself and his choti to a new house. Well as expected his dad and mom never cared, and they went on with their life until both had tragic end in a car accident.

Well he cared least and gave a smirk that day..But it has another meaning and that was never to love any1, never to marry anyone, never to make a family. Physical relation was just sex for him and family a mess.


But then she changed it, changed his mind, changed his life. He too was hit by the spell of love, but then he didn't realised it was yet another play of ugly fate... The life it turned out again to break him. And like all other she too vanished away, leaving behind a heartless him.

As he was looking to extremes he didn't realised but some1 was looking at him. Her innocent small black eyes was trying to find out something or perhaps some1 whom she lost in the chapter of life.


Soon Sister Marta came and composed her taking her forcibly to room..


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So this was it...I don't how much it took ur attention. But i really wanna know should i continue or not. ...


If i continue all liking people would be sent pms...so do that too😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY MOM...
YIPPEEE AM FIRST TO COMMENT...
HOWZ U???

WELL THE PROLOGUE WAS LIKE A BOMB...

AWW... I FEEL BAD FOR UDAY...
AND HIS PARENTS DUE TO THEM HE BECAME RUTHLESS BUT THAT ONLY GIVES STORY A TWIST NA LOL...

BUT WONDER WHO WAS THAT GIRL MAYBE MANYATA OR SOMEONE ELSE...

WELL IT WAS FANTASTIC FABULOUS LOVELY A CROWD PULLER PROLOGUE OR WE CAN SAY READER PULLER LOL...

THE CS IS REALLY INTERESTING...

DO CONTINUE SOON...
HUGZZZ


Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Udayveer Singh


A hot dashing upperclass man for whom business and money alwayscomes first. Himself being the head of Udayam group of companies he is the most eligible bachelorette of the country. For him love is just another word for Sex. There is only one girl in his life and thats his sister whom he always kept a safe distance from himself. He never want to be in a relation and his this attitude turned out to be a disaster in his life. He lost everything and everyone in that decision. And now he is in a path of complete darkness waiting for that ray which will enlight his world.

Unnati Singh


The one and only sister of Uday who loves her brother to eternity and can do anything for him.Kind by heart and is always by her brother's side let whatever circumstances it may be. She just has one wish and that is to see her brother having a family on his own. She values relationship and culture. Committed to Vijay Raichand , who is also a friend to Uday.


Manyata


A missing rhyme in the story. She who lost her identity in a day is now searching each n everywhere to find that one link which will connect her to herself.

Jainandini Kaul.


Personal Secretary to Udayveer Singh. She loved and cared for Uday a lot and many a times tried to bring out her heart in front of him too... He just like any other women ignored her and just used her for pleasure. But she unlike to others gave herself in the burning fire of life leaving behind ashes.

Vijay Raichand


Friend to Uday and Boy-friend of Unnati, he is the owner of Raichand Empire. A sweet caring guy who is responsible in all fields.

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story is awesome sisu
Uday's tale is heartrending perhaps parents indifference to their children made him heartless too, in adulthood..😳
but why did his love desert him again?
i definitely want to read more..👍🏼
so please continue with the story😃 and please PM me😳

sorry for commenting too early..
character sketch is good..⭐️
Jainandini is Uday's secretary..loved it😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story is fantastic 👏
Very interesting, can't wait to read 1st chapter 😃
Plz continue with the story n plz pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both prologue and cs
was awesome
please do continue
and update chappy 1 asap
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Captivating prologue

Very catching

Like it very much

do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept and character sktech...who is marta...?u don't mention her in your cs...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice concept and character sktech...who is marta...?u don't mention her in your cs...

i mentioned is story as sister...she is just a side charac prerna thats why😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Krishy krishy awesome start...cont soon re😃

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