you are a magician...!!!!! 😃
you just wrote two parts, that too the second being smaller than the first...!!!! yet managed to deliver everything that a 50-55 part FF would be able to offer...!!!!!
i salute you darling...!!!! you truly a marvellous creation in this world..!!! and your creations are even more marvellous...!!!!
the fact that he named her first, in both the times, just squeezed my heart with delight and happiness...!!!! i felt so wonderful, such a simple concept, yet it made me feel butterflies in my tummy...!!!
the best dialogue by Khushi was... " like a man looks at a women" 😆 so cute, so perceptive, yet so innocent..!!!
just loved arnav's reaction and every gesture after meeting khushi...he controlled his urgent desire just to give khushi space, and also refrained from looking at her like that fo rhis pleasure..!!! from which planet have you brought this so darling arnav???!!!
this was an absolutely precious piece of writing..!!! people tend to love and remember and reminisce wonderful FF's and SS's...but i would for a long time remember this brilliant two shot...!!! love you darling...!!! mmuuuahhh!!! you are a magician...doing magic with words...!!!👏
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