After separation Maaneet Epilogue pg54 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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my God Prem is planning to make Geet his...

he is🤬...after he knows that Maan loves Geet still he is doing this...

and does Prem and Maan has same face being twins or they are different...

hope Geet recognize him and never betray Maan...

awesome start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
loved the update
so excited to see how this is different form living together
such nice maaneet moments
can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
but this prem?????
maaneet should be together!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
part 1
nice...
is Geet gonna get married to Prem?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome part.. Does Geet know abt Prem..? She won't MU him as Maan..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow.. d 1st part was lovely wid maan fighting 4 his love bt geet is gone to uk 4 studies & prem's intention doesnt seems gr8... i hope maaneet come out of dis separation soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Double trouble sam seems nice here
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Posted: 12 years ago
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After separation Part 2


Some of you may be wondering how similar this SS is to Living together with love or friendship?Well...the theme is same...some of the scenes are also same.But new characters are introduced.In Living together i felt bad for Sanchi..Bcz of her unknown fault she lost her love Arnav and though Shravan cheated on Sanchi he got her.So I thought what if Sanchi gets Arnav back...?This thought made me write this maaneet SS.Here Sanchi is replaced by Geet.And Arnav is replaced by Maan.
Naintara rang up Sameera.

NT:Sam,this is me.Naintara.

S:Hi Bhabhi..

NT:Sam,Maan devarji is there?

S:Yes bhabhi.He is here.

NT was relieved:Thank God.I was scared.

After some time Dev came back from office.

NT:Dev...you came back?Maan Devarji is there at Sameera's place.Thank God.He is safe.I will tell mom now.She will be relieved.


D:Naintara,though I am Maan's brother nobody will believe that you are only his sister in law.You are like his own sister.

Naintara smiled:Maan devarji is like my own brother Dev.

Dev smiled.


Yash and Meera were Maan,Geet and Sameera's classmates in school.They are living together though they are not married.Laboni who is their servant is a mother like figure for them.

Sameera was in a supermarket.She heard some people making fun of her.They were gossiping that that Sameera and her boyfriend Maan are living together.It hurt Sameera.Yash noticed itThat time only he saw Sameera.He decided to go and comfort Sameera.But before he could do that his mobile rang.
YASH:Meera?
M:Yash..please come home soon.
YASH:But my shopping is not over.
M:Shop later.Come soon.
YASH:Anything serious?
Meera cut the phone.

Yash went home.
YASH:What happened Meera?
Meera and Laboni smiled.
YASH:I got tensed when your call came.But you both are smiling.
L:Don't be tensed Yash.There is a good news.You and Meera are going to be parents.
Yash was surprised.
YASH:Really?
Meera nodded with shyness.
YASH:I'm so happy.I love you Meera.You are so sweet.
Meera blushed.
L:Now you both are starting a family.Don't you think that you both should get married now?
YASH:We both are happy.We know how much we love each other.Even you know how much we love each other.Then what's the need of getting married?
L:I'm old fashioned children.I think you both should get married.Anyways it's upto you.
M:Yash,shall we visit Sam and Maan?We need to share our happiness with them.I can't wait.Unfortunately Geet is not here.But at least Maan and Sam are here.

Y:Sure.What happiness we have without our friends?


Yash visited Maan and Sameera.
YASH:I saw Sameera in the supermarket.
SAMEERA:Really?I did'nt see you there.
YASH:I left immediately.So i could'nt speak to you.I know that you both are hurt by people's comments about living together.Don't worry.There is nothing wrong in living together in the same house.

M:We know what kind of relationship Maan and Sam share.Once Maan gets married to Geet people will shut their mouth.

Maan became dull:I really miss Geet.

Yash patted him:Hey'be cool.Only for one year.
Yash held Meera close to him.
Y:By the way let me tell you guy that i and Meera are going to be parents.

MAAN:Really?congrats.
SAMEERA:Meera is pregnant.Still no plans to get married?
YASH:We don't think marriage is necessary to live together.We are throwing a party to celebrate our happiness.You both are invited for the evening party.
SAMEERA:We will come.


Sameera and Maan went to the party hall.
SAMEERA:Look at Meera and Yash.They look so happy together.
MAAN:Yes.They are made for each other.
Sameera...Let us give them a gift.
SAMEERA:Ya...
They went near Yash and Meera.
SAMEERA:Congrats Yash and Meera.
Sameera gave her the gift.
M:Thank you.
Meera and Yash received the gift.It was a baby's framed photograph.
M:So cute.Thank you so much guys.


Geet was missing Maan.
GEET:I should not have left India.I miss Maan.I got my new SIM.I will call him now.
She was about to dial the number.The calling bell rang.She opened the door.She could'nt believe her eyes.
GEET:Maan!I missed you so much.
She embraced him forgetting everything else in joy.
He enjoyed that moment which he dreamt of having many times.
GEET:How come you are here?
He:I missed you.So i decided to join you here.
She smiled.
He held her hand softly:This moment onwards i will be with you always.
GEET:That is so sweet of you Maan.I love you.
He:I love you too Geet.
He says in his mind:Geet does'nt know that i'm Prem.I'm sorry Geet.I have to do this drama to get you.
Geet thanked God:Thank God for sending Maan here.Otherwise I would have gone crazy without my Maan.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
nice part,hate prem ,continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read just now

hate prem he is taking advantage of being maan's twin
i hope wo geet ke saath koi hanky panky na kare
poor maan
i want to kill prem maan jab sach pata chale to prem ko meri taraf se 10 punches jarur lagana
thnx for pm
waiting...

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