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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5

Meera was comfortably nested in Prithvi's arms as he carried her to her car. All was well for some time as silence filled the air. Meera preferred to stay silent and Prithvi chose the same.

It was after a few minutes, small sparks of doubt began to develop in Meera's head.

Is he really the one?

Prithvi looked at her trying to tell her they were there. Her car stood ahead of them with Prithvi's jeep a few metres away from her car.

"Get me down," Meera coldly said.

Those sparks of doubt had increased considerably.
How do I know more about him?
I am such an idiot.

Standing in the middle of road in rain washed surrounding at midnight with a guy who looks like the one I see in dreams. Great! God I hate you!

Prithvi put her down. Meera cringed as the pain shot up to her brain when her whole weight came on her injured foot. Prithvi rushed forward to hold her.

Meera shrugged off his hand holding her arm saying,

"I am alright"

Prithvi stepped back. Earlier, he was quite surprised to see a girl at such a place . He had stood there aghast after he saw her face. She resembled...

His thoughts were cut short when Meera spoke with utter calmness and tranquility about her.

"Thank you very much for saving my life. I need to reach Barahgaon as soon as I

can. Can you tell me the way." she paused a bit. "Oh sorry, my car broke down. Give me a lift to the village. You yourself seems to be a village guy." she spoke nonchalantly.

Prithvi gazed at her.
This girl looks spooky. Is she really human?

Prithvi thought for a moment before speaking.

" Fine. I would have dropped you to Barahgaon. But we have a little problem here." he smirked.

Shit! Whats with that grinning?! I'll kill him if he tries to even touch me.

"Don't even think of anything stupid." Prithvi said.

Is he reading my mind??

Fear filled her already numb senses.

"The road to Barahgaon is dangerous in normal days. It would be feasible to travel in daylight." Prithvi continued.

"Why not now!!! "

"Are you dumb? Rains." he replied, clearly annoyed. This girl was really getting on his nerves.

Inner Meera was boiling with anger, blood bubbling.

THIS GUY...

"You said you car is broken. Let me see it."
"Yeah, sure."

Meera had no other words to say. She stared at the guy as he opened the bonnet of the car. Rain had stopped now and she was all drenched. She knew she would catch a cold.She couldn't believe herself. All weird things had to happen to her.

My man of dreams is a mechanic too! Perfect!

She let out a huge sigh.

Did I really think about the start of new beginning? I have really lost my brains. There is an urgent need to reconsider my thoughts.

With Prithvi busy, she had some time to while away.

I have to know if he is the same guy. But how?

Prithvi walked to her.

"Start your car."

Seeing incomprehensible face and impenetrable eyes of him made her shudder.

"Y-yes"
"Wait. You won't be able to drive. You are hurt."
"I am fine. Lets go."
"No you are not."
"By the way, where are we going? You said the roads are bad"
Prithvi slapped his forehead. She was being incoherent.

"I stay nearby. You have to treat your wounds," he pointed at her foot. "Then you can go to Barahgaon as and when you like."

"Fine"

"Follow me," Prithvi ordered on a stern voice.


After an eternity of driving and enduring pain, she saw his Jeep slow down before a...

Hut??!!

Meera stared as her own car came to a stop. In front of her was a small house, a cattle shed on the side and a big porch. Prithvi motioned her to come inside through the small wooden door.

Meera hauled her belongings from the car and proceeded inside. She gasped at the simplicity of the house.

The living room contained a khatiya, a small writing table and an old wooden almirah on the side of the wall. Kitchen was on the right side.

There were practically no luxuries and with bare minimum facilities she had to stay in a place full of mosquitoes and flees.

"Great." Meera muttered sarcastically.

Meera dropped her bag on the floor in exhaustion when suddenly her phone rang.

Prithvi stood just a few steps away from her folding his hands.

DAD! Oh no!

"Hello dad" Meera tried her best to sound normal.

Ramdhari was very worried her daughter had not reached the village and it was raining heavily.
"Miu, where are you? You should have reached here by now."
"I know dad. Actually I started from delhi qiute late. And the rains..."
"Oh dear! Where are you know? You know the rains haven't stopped. Stay at..."

"Dad, I am staying at a hotel for the night. It is difficult to drive at night in rains."

Meera looked at Prithvi and continued. "Its a very posh hotel dad, with all amenities and facilities." She sneered at Prithvi.

"OK, bye dad. See you tomorrow."

Before her father could ask her anything about the hotel, she cut the call and looked at him. Prithvi very well understood she was mocking him, but he could do nothing.
Meera was about to laugh loudly when the world around her started spinning and darkness engulfed her.


xXx

This is it. I know this is a bit long. I hope you enjoy reading chapter 5. And apologies for updating late. 😊










Edited by SuperChillz1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Its not long at all!!!😲Mk dm longer,i say!😉Nice 1 agn May!😃Now next what happens..Hum tum ek kamre mei bandh ho..Aur chabi kho jaye...😉😈Update soon dear!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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May! how are you doing this? So many parallel tracks and you are like this juggler - we are getting spoilt rotten 😃

I loved this update. Meera's confusion is very real - the whole feeling of should I trust my gut instinct or is it all my imagination - it is very nicely brought out.
But she is being a meanie to Prithvi - but I am sure he is going to give it back to her too 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Chapter 5

Meera was comfortably nested in Prithvi's arms as he carried her to her car. All was well for some time as silence filled the air. Meera preferred to stay silent and Prithvi chose the same.

xXx

This is it. I know this is a bit long. I hope you enjoy reading chapter 5. And apologies for updating late. 😊


nice - well done👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Its not long at all!!!😲Mk dm longer,i say!😉Nice 1 agn May!😃Now next what happens..Hum tum ek kamre mei bandh ho..Aur chabi kho jaye...😉😈Update soon dear!😉

I'll try to make it longer 😉 and thanks dear 😃 btw, idea achha hain 😆 lets see if i can put it in the chap 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
I am waiting... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoonian

May! how are you doing this? So many parallel tracks and you are like this juggler - we are getting spoilt rotten 😃


I loved this update. Meera's confusion is very real - the whole feeling of should I trust my gut instinct or is it all my imagination - it is very nicely brought out.
But she is being a meanie to Prithvi - but I am sure he is going to give it back to her too 😉

well Binu, mission accomplished 😆 😆 Mithvi keh liye kuch bhi karenge 😉 but i am glad you liked this chapter. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-nut

nice - well done👏👏

Thank you, shanti 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok , sorry , i totally forgot , if i hadnt seen your comment 😳
bahut badhiya 👏😉
so they are in the hut ☺️
all alone ☺️
with attraction already brewing
and not to forget the tension of fighting between reality and dreams 😉
good going , I wish I could also start writing again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 6

The world around her started spinning and she rapidly started losing consciousnes.

She knew she would hit her head on the hard floor. Trying to control her fall turned out to be futile. But before anything pernicious happened, he was holding her close to his heart. She could feel his warmth before she lost her conscious completely.

Prithvi delicately picked her up and put her on the lone khatiya. Frantically looking around, he grabbed the water jug on the table. Sitting besides the unconscious beauty.

He sprinkled water on her face and patted her cheek.

"Ae ladki..."

He stared as she didn't move. This was the first time he ever felt scared. He desperately sprayed more water, hoping she would move. He had almost emptied all the water in the jug over her, when she finally stirred.

Prithvi had his gaze fixed at her as he fondled her cheek caringly. He muttered her name as Meera fluttered her eyelashes and stared at Prithvi in confusion. In a flash before she could understand, Prithvi pulled back his hand.

Her head ached. Meera got up to a sitting position and held her head.

"What happened?"

"You fell unconscious."

She realized it due to too much exertion. She had barely got any sleep since she had to do all the packing, and all the running and getting wet in rains added to it.

Without a word, Prithvi got up and headed straight for the kitchen. Meera looked at him in confusion. In a few seconds he was back with a steel glass in his hand.

"Here." Prithvi thrust the glass to Meera.

Meera took a look at the contents in the glass and made a expression of dislike. She stretched her hand towards Prithvi which held the glass.

"I am not going to drink this!"

"And why not??"

"MY wish!!"

Prithvi was now standing in front of her, arms akimbo.

"How can anyone hate milk??"

"I do." Meera replied trying a puppy dog expression.

I will make the cutest expression. He won't be able to say 'no' to me.

"To hell with that expression!"

He gave a stern look which made her feel even more vulnerable and stupid. He raised his eyebrows.
"I want the glass empty in 10 seconds !"

Meera undisputably felt she was in a classroom getting scolded by a rough and scary
teacher. She didn't have any choice, did she?

"You iniquitous jerk.." meera muttered lowly.
Unfortunately for her, he heard it. A vein popped on his forehead. She was really getting on his nerves now.

With a slightly lopsided grin he inched close to her face.

"You are staying in MY house. Better accept the hospitality offered or I have entire authority to kick out guests who are mendacious and insincere."

Meera stared at those unearthly eyes boring into hers. She gulped.

"Fine." Giving a loathing look to Prithvi, she gulped down milk with disfavor.

"Good." Prithvi said aloud with a grin. He took a towel and threw it at Meera'a face.

"Here. Get yourself dry and changed. I'll wait outside. Call me when you are done."
He started for the door when he heard a apprehensive Meera speak.
"Wait!"
He turned back to face her. The situation finally sunk in after two minutes of dead silence and staring. He decided to break the silence. What was he suppossed to do, he didn't know.

"Don't tell me you don't..." Prithvi left words hanging mid-sentence.

Meera sheepishly looked at him and slightly scratched her head. "No"
He slapped his forehead. He hastily looked around, his face masked with
embaressment, which should have been Meera's situation.

She doesn't have any spare clothes and telling me this with a smile.
These city girls have no shame.

He opened a tin trunk and motioned Meera towards it.

"Wear whatever you like." he continued as he pulled out a small box from almirah.

"Here. Clean your wounds."
And he was out in no time.

So he has a first aid box too?

Meera peeked in the supposedly large trunk, her hands rummaging through haphazardly thrown clothes. In the dimly lit room, her eyes caught something red.

With effort she pulled it out.

A Kurta?

She searched through it but found nothing else the kurtas of all available colors and dhoti. A huge sigh escaped her lips. She had to wear dhoti, and she had no idea as to how to wear that long yards of cloth.

Outside on the large front porch, Prithvi sat on a footstool facing his farms. He couldn't help but muse over the girl he had just met. How was he going to ascertain that she was the same woman he had unbreakable bonds with? That she was his soulmate...

xXx

This is it. Sorry for updating so late.
Don't forget to comment.
Edited by SuperChillz1 - 12 years ago

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