TAAREY FF-LOVEBIRDS FOREVER # 3*CHAPTRER 106 & 107 On Pg.89&91 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
i read the story so far and update yaar itzz awwsome yaar i loved it very much❤️ i m sorry coz i cant read 91 chap that even u can understand but ill follow it now yaar and for u dear...😳😳😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Lovely taarey nokh jhok was superbbb
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
awesome update
loved Taarey nokh jokh
I have a feeling the guy that Rey was fighting with was Bhade Bhaya
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Loved it...especially taarey nok khok...so adorable!!
And best was when rey was about to kiss taani in front of the gang!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
wow wat a update love it
waise woh hain koun???
tall handsome,muscular body???
really excited to know
so update soon...
plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Loved the update...
Rey ne bada panga le liya yaar...
Waiting to see jab dono milenge tab kya hoga...
please update soon...
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Superb update! Loved it!! Looks lyk bade bhaiya aa gaye!! N I'm soo sorry I think I dint comment earlier so anyway Congrats for new thread!!! Update soon n thnx for d pm... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

TAAREY FF'LOVE BIRDS FOREVER

Dil thaam kar padiye,,,,

Apni apni dhadkano ko sambhalkar bhethiye'.

Kyun ki aaya hain koi aapki dhadkane,,,aapka dil chura kar le jaane walaa hain'

So comeon'..

CHAPTER:93




taani:wo aagaye'..

sharon:tum janti ho unhe(taani doesnt utter a wnrd n run downstairs n see that guy standing n talking she was on steps n team was upstairs n was slowly comming down taani say)
taani:aap agaye..(that guy turn n al girls get fida on him...)
girls:awwee...(boy were feling jelous n that guys smile seeing taani n she run to him n hug him tightly...he to hug her bck n team get shock seeing this n nil say)
nil:abh taami ise kyu gale lagaya
vicky:may be wo rohan jaise taani bestfrnd hoga..
bharath:abe taani ke kitne bestfrnd hain...
amar:par wo taani ko kitna tight hug kiya
simmi:how lucky taani is..
neha:neha thinkhng same.
vishaka:taani how many bestfrnd yaar
rinni:that to al hot hot.
sharon:cme on guys we have to go down cme on..(al go down n here taani eyes were ful of tears...she was hugging that guy tightly n telling)
taani:main abh aapko chod ke kahi nahi jaungi..i missed so much.mujhe mumbai nahi jana chati..main mumbai wapas aap sab ko chod ke nai jana chati main aapko chod ke nai rehsakti..i mis u so much

(taani was realy hurt by what happened with her n she was felling comfortable with that guy..due to taani tear the guy shirt was wet..n the wet shirt was burning his skin as he cnt see taani crying so he break the hug n cub taani face n say...)
guy:bas bas bohut hua...abh meri taani aur nahi royegi..k i 2 missed u bt tujhe rone ki zarurat mahi hain..k(taani smiles...n then she team n then wipes her tears n then say)
taani:in sab se miliye ye hain bhai aur mere mumbai ke friends hain wo nil,vicky,bharath,amar (boy give him what ever luk n girls luk at him with smile n blushing...)ye hain simmi,neha,vishaka,rinni n ye hain
sharon:ek minute taani main apna intro khud dungi(sharon cme frnt to guy n then luking straight into his eyes...she say)
sharon:hellow mr.hottie..aap sabse to miliye bt main baki hu bt i m sure aap mujhe aache jante hoge..i m (follding her hands acrosr her hibs n tel)SHARON,,,SHARON RAI PRAKASH...naam to suna hi hoga mr.hottie.(team luk at her in stunned taani luk at her with open mouth n guyr was in shock to hear n see sharon like this then sharon walks to him n put his finger on his chest n she rotate with her finger around his chest 4m frnt to bck n keep telling )
sharon:waise i must say that u r very very smart n hot.!!(with naughty expresion n taani try to stop her bt sharon doesnt listen to taani n keep telling)waise tum itne hot ho to apka naam kitna hot hoga apna naam to batiyena...
taani:bhabhi wo ye...
sharon:plz taani dnt cal me bhabhi plz aur apne apna naam nahi bataya..
guy:(luk at taani then say)wo ka..
sharon:waise apka naam kuch bhi ho we al wil call u mr.hottie..hu..
all girl:yaaa(with naughty expressions...boys were dam angry n guy see taani with wired luk n taani shout at top of his voice n tell)
taani:guysss...ye mr.hottie nahi ye mere ..
sharon:(dreamily)tumhare nahi ye to hamare sabke bestfriend hain...
taani:ofoh bhabhi ye mere bestfrnd nahi ye mere BADEBHAIYA HAIN KARAN SHIKHAWAT HAIN MERE BHAI KE BADE BHAIYA HAIN...
sharon:(stil dreamly)ha to tumhare badebhaiya hai...(then her mind catches what taani said n she luk at taani n say)BADE BHAIYA..?(taani nodes her head in yes n al luk at him shock )
all:badebhaiya(n then the guy no no no badebhaiya folds his arms n luk at sharon 4m top to bottom n then luk at al n they were felling nervous...then bade bhaiyaa luk at taani n she continue)
taani:ha guys ye mere badebhaiya hain..wahi bata rahi thi bt bhabhi aap sun hi nahi rahe the?..(til then ritu,aashi,simar n anirudh cme n simar say)
simar:karan agaya tu..(she cmes n hug him anirudh to cme n hug him n bade bhaiyaa takes blessing of anirudh n simar n then hug ritu n aashi n ask them how r they?they smile n answer n anirudh ask karan)
anirudh:tumhari metting kaisi thi.
bade bhaiyaa:milkul thik badepapa infact gudnews hain
anirudh:wo kya?
bade bhaiyaa:badepapa jo case hum log pichle 6saalo se lad rahe the papa ne jo land taani ke naam pe chod apne aakhir nishani chod gaye the wo land hum finaly jeet gaye...
anirudh:what ye to bohut achi news hain

simar:ye to honahi tha akhir tumne itni mehat bhi to ki hain is case ko jitne ki..
bade bhaiyaa:wo to karna hi tha badimaa akhir papa ki taani ke liye akhri nishani jo hain...(bade bhaiyaa luk at taani n she smiles here sharon n team were tensed..when simar says)
simar:acha wo sab thik hain par tum insab se mile ye swayam ke dost hain mumbai se aaye hain aur ye sharon hain jiske bare mein taani ne tujhese baat ki thi..(bade bhaiyaa luk at sharon she luk bade bhaiyaa n again get lost in him dreamly when bade bhaiyaa says)
bade bhaiyaa:ha badimaa main in sab se mil chuka hu'

simar:to kaisi lagi karan hamare swayam ki pasand...(bade bhaiyaa luk at sharon n taani n team luk at eachothe with margaye luk..then bade bhaiyaa say...)
bade bhaiyaa:bittuji...(the person who came with bade bhaiyaa

NOTE:GUYS THERE IS A NEW CHARECTER INTRODUCE I FORGOT TO MENTION IT EARLY THAT BITTUJI IS THE NEW CHARECTER N HE IS A SECRATARY OF BADE BHAIYAA N HE CALL HIM AS "KS"HE SUPPORTS BADE BHAIYAA VERY MUCH N HE IS LIKE A FAMILY MEMBER TO SHIKHWATS AL TREAT HIM AS WITH RESPECT TAANI TO CONSIDER HIM AS HIS BROTHER N BITTUJI FOLLOW BADE BHAIYAA IN EVERY POSSIBLE

N IMPOSSIBLE MANNER BADE BHAIYAA ALSO TRUST HIM VERY MUCH AL SHEDULE,WORK N CARE OF BADE BHAIYAA BITTUJI HANDLES IT...


(as bade bhaiyaa call bittuji comes n stand beside him n bade bhaiyaa continue..)
bade bhaiyaa:bittuji aaj ke case ke papers shambhal ke rakhna kyu ki agar wo log
bittuji:aap chinta mat kijiye KS wo hamare purane buisness compaditor hain to main unhe ache se janta hu...to main careful rahunga aur ye land hamari taani ke naam pe hain to main ise apne jaan se bhi zayada shambhal ke rakhunga..(bade bhaiyaa nodes his n move to mandir 4 darshan'taani moves to sharon n ask al to cme in her room soon when they al were moving to her room bade bhaiyaa cmethere n cal taani she bit her tounge n turn to bade bhaiyaa)
taani:ji bade bhaiyaa...
bade bhaiyaa:swayam kaha hain?
taani:wo bhai mahapuja ke liye radha-krishn ki murti lane gaye hain...
swayam:aur rohan.
taani:wo..wo(was woundering what to say when rinni spoke out..)
rinni:rohan bhi swayam ke saath gaya.
neha:neha telling nt only rohan bt rey bhi gaya hain swayam ke saath..
(bade bhaiyaa luks at taani with question luk n ask)

Bade bhaiyaa:rohan swayam ke saath gaya hain'???aur ye rey kaun hain taani????{taani was tensed n all boys too get tensed bt girls n Sharon were still dowing on bade bhaiyaa'n bade bhaiyaa was confused n was wating for answer from taani'n taani was stammering for an answer'}

Taani:bade bhaiyaa wo..wo..actually'wo'{meanwhile simar come there n tell'}

Simar:rey swayam ka dost hian'aur maine kaha tha rey aur rohan ko swayam ke saath jane ke liye'.{all look at simar excluding girls who were still admiring bade bhaiyaa'bade bhaiyaa look at simar in confusion look n she continue'}maine bheja as tum nahi the isliye wo teeno gaye hain'}

Bade bhaiyaa:par badimaa ritual ke hisab se to ghar ka betaya damad hi ja saktato?????

Simar:ha par rey aur rohan ghar ke bate se kaam thodi hain'{bade bhaiyaa raises his eyebrow'n servent come n call simar n she goes'n bade bhaiyaa see taani n say,,,}

Bade bhaiyaa:lagat hain mere absence mein kafi log is ghar ki bte bane ki koshish ki hain..hu??{taani n boys get tense n look at each other girls were still admiring bade bhaiyaa'bade bhaiyaa expression as he was lost in thinking something'deep'then he was making for his room bt stop at the girls n look them as they were still downing n then he see taani n tell}

Bade bhaiyaa:taani jaise hi swayam aajyae use mujhe milne ko kehna..aur ha rohan ko bhi saath mein aane ko keh dena'

Taani:ji bade bhaiyaa'{he leaves n taani n team goes to taani room n aashi comes there n taani was walking from here to there girls were talking about bade bhaiyaa'when taani shouts'}

Taani:enough girls'.kya kar rahe ho tum log'wo mere bade bhaiya hain'

Simmi:so what wo tumhare bade bhiyaa hain mere to nahi'

Neha:neha thinking same'

Vishaka:men he is really amazing guy'

Rinni:n hot too'{taani luks at boys n they look at taani with helpless expression'then Sharon say'}

Sharon:taani koi galat fami hui hogi as mr.hottie tumhare badebhaiya kaise ho sakte hain wo kitne hot hain..oh gosh!!!{taani bitsher head n say to Sharon}

Taani:bhabhi aap bhul rahi ho'aap ki saagai ho chuki hain..

Sharon:so what'n taani plz'don't disturb me as I m in dreamland'now'{she go to girls n they all again start talking about bade bhaiyaa'all boys n aashi come to taani n she says'}

Taani:abh inka kya kare???

Nil:taani inki chinta maat karo ye to bade bhaiyaa ke piche pagal hogai hain'

Vicky:don't worry girls hain to itna to karenge hi na..

Amar:ha meririnni bhi aise kar rahi hain'

Bharath:par abhi ye locha hain ki'bade bhaiyaa rohan aur rey ki waat lagyenge'

Aashi:wo to pakka gaye types'abh kya types kare taani???rey ko agar bade bhaiyaa ne pucha tupes ki tum kaun ho types to rey sach types baata denge na types'bade bhaiyaa ko..types'{taani look tensed n boys too'n taani say..}

Taani:bade bhaiyaa ko rey ke bare mein main khud bataungi'mahapuja ke baad'{aashi n boys look at her in shock'n she continues'}

Taani:parabhi bhabhi ka impression bade bhaiyaa par shayad kharab hua hain'maine jitna bhai aur bhabhi ki baate kit hi bhabhi ke is action se pura paani phir gaya'I hope ki bade bhaiyaa ko bhai aur bhabhi ki relationship se koi problem na ho'

Aashi:wo to hum bademein pata types chalega na''{all llook at girls'}

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''...

{scene shift:bade bhaiyaa has gone out as with some work'n taani,ritu n aashi were also in garden backside. with decoracting something'when reyham comes with murtis of radhe-krishan..n they places it in mandir in thereplaces the murtis face was covered with cloth'as some ritual that on maha puja the coth will be removed'the boys look tensed n reyham goes to swayam room n boys too come there mean while nil says to Vicky'}

Nil:sun tu rey ko bade bhaiyaa ke bare mein batane wala hain

Vicky:ha bata na tohain na'

Amar:ha aur taani nahi hain to hame hi batana padega na'

Bharath:par tu aise kyu puch raha hain'

Nil:guy yaad nahi kal raat rey ne taani ke saamne hamare image ka faluda kit hi so'lets do some fun with rey'

Vicky:bt girls to bata denge na'

Nil:are wo aise hi bade bhaiyaa ke piche pagal hain'aur hum hain na to sab shambhal lenge'

Bharath:to p'pa

Amar:plan'

Bharath:waich'plan kya hain'

Nil:suno'{n he say something to'boys'}

Vicky:bt rohan aur swayam ka kya kare'

Nil:abe unko bata nahi sakte to'unpar bhi ye prank khelte hain...{all smile smirkly'n they go to swayam room'n they act sorry for rey'reyham look confusingly'to boys..n rey ask them what happened n nil say'}

Nil:rey lagat hain tujhe wpas taani ke bagare hi jana hoga'

Reyham:kyu?????

Vicky:wo actually taani ke life mein tere alwa koi aur bhi hain'

Bharath:gaalt'.{all looks at him'reyham in confusion n nil,Vicky,amar in tension'}mera matabh hain kit ere alwa nahi sirf ek hi insaan hain taani ki life mein'

Rohan:ye kaise ho sakta hain taani ne kabhi mujhe bataya nahi'

Nil:abh wo sab chod aur wo guy ka soch jo'taani ke life mein aaya hain..

Amar:aate hi taani ne use galae se laga liya aise ki jisae wo use kabhi dur nahi jaane degi'

Rey:tum log bakwas kar rahe ho'aisa ho hi nahi sakta

Swayam:exactly'{till then girls comes there'n vicky see them n say'}

Vicky:agar bharosa nahi hota to'puch lo girls se'batao kagu hum sach bol rahe hian na'{slowly in neha ears..}

Vicky:wo bade bhaiyaa I mean mr.hottie kaise hain wo batao'rey ko'

Neha:{dreamlly..}mr.hottie'{reyham look at nil n he says'}

Nil:taani ke saath saath sari girls bhi bad..{Vicky bits his head n he says'}wo mera matlabh hain ki us guy ke piche pagal hogaye'hian'

Rey:par ye hain kaun'

Sharon:he is hot,handsome,muscular body,sixpaks'style sab hain mr.hottie ke pass'{swayam looks at Sharon'rey here some music'when nil go to rey n say'}

Nil:Koi na jane kittho aaya hai tu''..{keeps his hand on rey's shoulder'.till thn Vicky comes in frnt of rey n sings'}

Vicky:Sab de dilon vich hogi kukkadu ku {by this rey removes nil's hand n pushes Vicky n was abt to go when amar cumes in his way'}

Amar:Koi na jane kittho aaya hai tu{by this rey gets irritated n was abt to move side till thn there cumes bharath'}
Bharath:Sab de dilon vich hogi kukkadu ku {now all boys pulls rey bck n turns him n starts dancing'}

Nil:Inna sona, inna cool, munda inna wonderful {now amar joins nil n they bth starts dancing in frnt of rey'}
Amar:Ainu vekhe je kudiyan to kehndi {all girls comes around rey n says'}
All girls:O my god.. O my god.. O my god..O my god'. {till thn bharath jumps n cums to rey n sings..}

Ho..

Bharath:Munda sab mein sabse best {rohan n swayam cums to rey n stands n amar does'}
Amar:Munda better than the rest {now rey looks here n there in anger n nil makes him to look frnt n sings}
Nil:Ainu vekhe ke munde to kehnde {all boys together..}
All boys:O my god..{Vicky moves frnt n sings doing steps.}

Bhartah:O.. seena jeb sukud da {now vicky cums n keeps his hand around bharath shoulder n sings..}
Vicky:O.. munda chheh (6) futt da {nil separating them cums in between n sings}
nil:O.. dheere-dheere karta dhamaal sau {thn all boys moves bck n in a line n starts doing the signature step..}
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da {thn all boys moves to girls n shows rey}

Oh kudiya te ho jaayengi flat oh di chaal da {all girls were still dreaming'}
Kukkad kamaal da {thn they all moves frnt n this time girls too join the boys'}
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. bandon mein banda {all boys moves to rey n pulls him n nil n Vicky catches him..}
Perfact bemisaal sa
Kukkad kamaal da {all boys leave rey now n disperse'.here rohan moves to girls n asks n simmi continues}

simmi:Koi na jane kittho aaya hai tu {now all boys pulls rohan n swayam also to dance so rohan starts..}
girls:Sab de dilon vich hogi kukkadu ku{2}

rohan:Tute hoya hai sab dil saal soniya {n he moves to the girls n girls join him'}
Tute chamke ban ankkhaan vich star soniya
Tute lagge tip-top belia {now he showing rey says..}
Tute height pe duje full stop belia {rey was now angry n here for all suprize Sharon continues'}

Sharon:Dil daude itte-utte{girls also join her }
Phir karde titar-bitar
Ho munda angdai je de maar da{rey was shocked n swayam too n boys continues with rohan}


boys:O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da{rohan n girls does}

rohan:Oh kudiya te ho jaayegi flat oh di chaal da
Kukkad kamaal da
boys:O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. bandon mein banda{now swayam also join tjem n sings'}
swayam:Perfact bemisaal sa
boys:Kukkad kamaal da

Hey... Hey... Hey...{rey was abt to leave when Sharon cums in his frnt n keeps her hand on his chest n stops him n sings..}

crazy crazy from from'.

Whose that whose that guy'{till thn simmi cums n keeps his hand on rey's shoulder n dreamily sings..}
He is something very special
I don't know what I want'{till thn vishaka cums n keeps her hand on other shoulder of rey n sings}
He really got me going
He makes me feel alright..{now Sharon continues'her hand is still the same'}
Baby... baby.. think again lucky tonight {rimmi cums n stands taking support of rey's back n sings'.}
I like the way he is looking {till thn neha cums n she too stands beside rinni taking support of ret's bck'}
The way he is moving now'{now Sharon moving her hand rolls dreamingly n says..}
I like the way they call him {thn in frnt of rey's face she does a hand step'n sings}
Kukkad kamaal da..{rey was totally stunned to see all girls like this n he moves Sharon n moves frnt' vishaka sings
}

vishaka:I like the way he is walking{n ri nni sings}
rinni:The way he is talking now'.{simmi cumes in frnt n stopping him again sings'}
simmi:I like the way they call him{again Sharon turns rey n sings}
Sharon:Kukkad kamaal da..{now rey moves frnt n facing girls sings n does steps'}

rey:Hey main kya kariya tu sab nu bukhar bewajah hai kyun {moving towards centre sings..}
Ek anar sau beemaar bewajah'.{by this swayam cums in frnt of rey n sings..}
swayam:O le le do din di zindadi udhaar mundya'{n moves around him n sings..}
Tu te rehna hai atthe din chaar mundya..{thn he doing steps sings}
Tu karle jinni vinti honi na teri ginati {now raising his collar sings..}
Aye gabade bhaiyaaar hai ji tujhe thekedaar naal'.{now all boys except rey sings'now all boys catches rey n pulls him downstaoirs in the corridor..}

O.. munda kukkad kamaal da..{in corridor all girls too join them'}
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da..{rohan sings}
rohan:Oh kudiya te ho jaayegi flat oh di chaal da
boys:O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
O.. munda kukkad kamaal da
swayam:Bandon mein banda perfect bemisal sa
Kukkad kamaal da
Oye...Oye...Oye..
.
{all were dancing in the corridor..'when rey get irritated n luks down n sees taani talking with some guy in the end side of living area'n he stops everyone'n asks nil}

Rey:nil yahi hain kya wo'

Nil:haa haa yahi hain'

Sharon:oh mr.hottie'..

Rey:abhi iss mr.hottie ko mr.gottie banata hu'comeon guys'{all moves down'rey was moving in frnt of all'..all were following him'they were almost at a half distance away frm that guy n rohan luks at that guy n calls swayam./..}

Rohan:ye to,'{by this swaym to leans n luks at guy n luks at rohan n says}

Swayam:haa'

Rohan:margaye'.

Swayam:khada kya hain nikal'{they were talking walking only n suddenly they disperse in different different directions n goes bck n hides bck of pillars'.team notices this n all boys too disperse in different direction n goes n hides'nil,Vicky goes to rohan side n bharath n amar towards swayam' Sharon was walking dreamingly'seeing this girls also disperse'rinni n simmi pulls Sharon n moves towards rohan n vishaka,neha moves to swayam'now rey was alone walking unknown to this all n reaches till thm'rey was facing guy's bck'rey moves to him n keeps his hand on that guy shoulder by this the guy turns n rey seeing him says..}

Rey:tum????


Guy:tum???{taani was standing there only'here rohan says to nil'}

Rohan:nil ye koi aur nahi bade bhaiyaa hain'

Nil:hame pata hain'{same happens the other side n here swayam says}

Swayam:to tumlogo ko pata tha to tum logo ne rey ko bataya kyun nahi'

Amar:wo usne kal chat par hamare bare main jo kuch kaha'{here Vicky was also telling'}

Vicky:ye uska revenge hain'

Rohan:revenge ka to pata nahi par bff to totally gaya'{here rey continues'}

Rey:oh abh samjha'mere mana karne ke baad bhi tumhari itni himmat kit um yaha chale aaye' {hearing this taani gets shock n says to rey'}

Taani:rey ye mere'{b trey cuts her n says}

Rey:tum ruko taani'tumhe pata nahi ki ye kaun hain'aur tum,'.tum yah ape meri takat dekhne aaye hona'to main tumhe apni takaat dikhaunga bt abhi nahi'maine kaha na kit um haina mahapuja ke baad aana tab batunga'tab tak main bahut busy hu so abhi tum niklo yaha se' {by this here swayam'}

Swayam:ye rey bol kya raha hain'taani here tries to stp rey bt he does nt stop'n she thinks'}

Taani:pehle Sharon bhabhi aur abh rey'hey krishnaji abh main kya karu'dono bst frnds hi gadbad kar rahe hain'..}{seeing taani here rohan mummers..}

Rohan:ye idiot klya dreamily khadi hain'ye bff ko rok kyun nahi rahi hain'.lagta hain mujhe jana chahiye'haa'{he was abt to move bt thn stops n says..} nahi'beta rohan'tu jaha haina wahi ruk jaa'{here till thn bittuji cums frm beside n syas'}

Bittuji:KS wo'..{n he sees rey n stops n rey to sees him n says'}

Rey:oh to assiatant bhi aagaya'.

Bittuji:tumhe pata nahi kit um'{b4 he culd complete bade bhaiyaa shows him his hand n he stops'}

Rey:ofoh'ek action n assistant ki bolti band'.{bade bhaiyaa in full attitude folds his hands which were in his pockets 'rey sees this n says'}

Rey:firse style'samjhaya na maine'{bt taani cums in between says'}

Taani:rey aap samajh nahi rahe hain ye mere {bt again rey cuts him n says..}

Rey:tum ruko taani'aise logo ko handle karna mujhe bahut ache se aata hain' tumhe nahi pata ye dono haina bahut pahunche huve chor hain'.{hearing this taani n whole team shouts'}

All:wat???{n here swyam falls down hearing this n amar n bharath makes him stands'n here rohan hits his head to the pillar n says..}

Rohan:gaya bff'ye to totally gaya'{here rey says}

Rey:n abh tum log niklo'agar tumhe abhi hi dekhna hain to lets do it guys'{he gets no sound n again he says..}

Rey:guys????{no response'by this rey luks at bade bhaiyaa n turns bck n sees there is no one n he get shock n his mouth get open seeing no support..'bt then he sees here n there thn again gain courage n with full attitude turns n says'}

Rey:{raising his collar says}tumhareliye main akela hi kaafi hu'n ye tumhara assistant use to kuch karne ki zarurat bhi nahi hain'aur tum {n he start moving towards bade bhaiyaa n by this now taani gets irritated n she shouts n says to rey'}

Taani:rey'''''''ye mere BADE BHAIYAA HAIN'.MR. KARAN SHIKHAWAT'. MERE BADE BHAIYAA'.{by this rey gets stunned n says}

Rey:wat??????

Taani:haan'.{by this rey luks at bade bhaiyaa in a main to gaya look'n thn he extends his hand towards to bade bhaiyaa'.all were stunned'..rey was lost'thjere was total silence'.taani looks at bade bhaiyaa n thn to rey'she was abt to keep her hand bt thn sees bade bhaiyaa n moves her hand in frnt of rey's eyes bt rey was still lost n taani says'.}

Taani:rey'{bt no response agin taani moving her hand a little loud says..}

Taani:rey''''''..{bythis rey cums to senses n looks at taani n thn to bade bhaiyaa n confused wat to do he n extends his hand towards bade bhaiyaa for shakehand'..bade bhaiyaa looks at hand n by this rey removes his hand...n now looks here n there n joint his hands n gives a fake smile to bade bhaiyaa n thn he looks at bittuji n does the same'.n stammering says'}

Rey:ja'ja'.ja'{n bits on his bckhead by his hand n says'}

Rey:jai shree Krishna !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! {bade bhaiyaa still in same attitude says}

Bade bhaiyaa:to ye hain rey'''.{n looks at taani'.taani nodesher head n bade bhaiyaa luks here n there n asks taani'}

Bade bhaiyaa:swayam kaha hain??????????{hearing his name here swayam falls down again n this time amar was abt to make him stand bt bharath says..}

Bharath:arre mat utha ye to abh girta hi rahega'.{hearing this swayam stands up n push bharath n he falls on amar n amar falls outside'now he was seen'bade bhaiyaa,bittuji,taarey all looks at amar'. Seeing this rohan hits his forehead n says'}

Rohan:sweetheart,guys chalo fatafat ek ek niklo'{by this all one by one cums out on bth sides'all stands in line n swayam n rohan hides behind them'bade bhaiyaa looks at bth sides n moves his hands n insert them into his vascoat pockets n moving his head (bade bhaiyaa luks at taani then sharon then again to taani n wantdly say..}


Bade bhaiyaa: :taani lagta hain tera bhai sharon ko leke apne relation mein sure nahi hain..(sharon stil dreamly luk at bade bhaiyaa n taani luj at sharon n again to bade bhaiyaa n here swayam give an confused expression thejm taani say)
taani:nahi bade bhaiyaa aisa nahi hain...
bade bhaiyaa:agar aisa nahi hain to kya hain dekho swayam humse sharon ke liye baat karne bhi nahi aaya..iska matlabh sharon tum is ghar ki bahu nahi bansakti so tum yaha se chali jao k as swayam tumhe pasand

nahi karta..(sharon was stil admiring bade bhaiyaa n n as soon swayam here this he shouts 4m back...)
swayam:nahi bade bhaiyaa mujhe sharon bohut pasand aur main usse bohut pyaar bhi karta hu...(swayam saying this come front n stand infront of bade bhaiyaa...bade bhaiyaa glares swayam n he bits his tounge n rohan hit his head..n say)
rohan:gaya ye to baraha ke bhav mein...(bade bhaiyaa keeps his hand in pocket n say...)
bade bhaiyaa:swayam tum to yaha nahi thena?
swayam:bade bhaiyaa wo wo wo main(til then anirudh cme to bade bhaiyaa n say...)
anirudh:karan wo office mein ek

urget meeting agai hain to hame waha jana hain chalo jaldi..
bade bhaiyaa:ji bade papa aap chaliye hum aate hain...(bade bhaiyaa then see swayam n say)
bade bhaiyaa:hum tumse aake baat karta hu aur (see back of team n con)rohan agli bar mujhe tum mere samne rehna naki waha piche..(rohan hit his head n come out 4m team behind n smiles n nodes his head n leave luking at rey...)

(as soon as bade bhaiyaa went swayam comes to rey in ful angry mood catches rey colar n say...)
swayam:kya ki tune maine kaha thana ki bade bhaiyaa pe teri 1st impression achi rehna then kyu ye gadbadi kara..bade bhaiyaa ko chor(rey was trying to explain swayam when taani comes n pushes swayam with ful force n he go n fal on boys n swayam adjust himself n stand when taani shouts at rey)
taani:ye kya kiya rey apne?kyu aap aisa karte hain kyu?aap samajhte kya hain apne aap ko?kyu problems create karte rehte hain?phele hi

problem kaam hain ki jo aap ne bade bhaiyaa bade bhaiyaa se pang leliya hey krishnaji kya karu main apka?(as taani telling this swayam come n say..softly to taani)
swayam:taani meri pyaari bhena hogaya tera to plz baju mein hategi...plz(taani realises that had reactd verymuch so she moves out 4mthere n swayam again glare at rey n was abt to speak when rohan come n say n swayam stand there open mouth..)
rohan:bas kar swayam are bichare bff se chotisi galti hui aur tum dono bhai bhen milke uski band baja rahe ho...

bas karo abh atleast uski baat to sunlo..tu bata bff kya hua?(rey tel what al happened with bade bhaiyaa)
swayam:chor have u lost it rey bade bhaiyaa aur chor..
rohan:swayam ruk na kuch sochte hain ek kaam karta hu main bff tere liye sirf tere liye main bade bhaiyaa se baat karunga..
taani:tu baat karega?
rohan:ha idiot abh tu to bff ke bare mein bade bhaiyaa se baat karne se rahi abh jo karna hain wo mujhe hi karna padega na...aur bff tu tension mat le main huna jaise se tune bataiye us hisaf main baat ko turn kardunga n bade bhaiyaa ko pata bhi

nai lagega main kehdunga ki tu unhe bymistake chor samajh liya aur ye sab kehdiya..
swayam:rt rohan may be bade bhaiyaa is baat par yakin karle..to prob slove hogi..(then swayam luk at rey who was in deep thinking smething...then swayam say to rey)
swayam:rey tune itna hi bnlana ki aur kuch bhi baka ki?(rey luks at swayam with guilt eyes..)
swayam:rey sach bata tune aur(then suddely he says)ek mint teri adat jo barbar sasural bolne ki kahi bade bhaiyaa ke samne wo to nahi bolna...(rey slightly nodes his head in no)

swayam again ask to rey
swayam:kahi ye to nahi kaha na ki tu taani se pyaar karta hain ya uska boyfrnd hain(taani opes her mouth in shock n rey again nodes his head with ful force indicating no'...swayam takes a deep breath)
swayam:bach gaye...
rohan:tu tension mat (when rey slightly say)
rey:bas itna kaha ki main is ghar ka damad hu...(swayam falls on sofa n rohan stand there as he was nt understanding what to do...taani bits her forehead n team boys signals as if rey is gone n girls were stil in dreamland...)

swayam:margaye...(swayam was lost n rohan to get lost in shock taani was nt understanding what to say when )

rey:rohan bt tu handle karlegana sab kuch bolna rohan..(rohan luks at rey n then to taani then make funny face n keep his left hand on his hibs n with rt hand cover his face n start laughing n while laughing he says)
rohan:b...f...f...tu great hain...n main tujhe bade bhaiyaa se bacha lunga na ...(rey smiles till rohan forow with anger bring his eyebrow n shouts )par jab..tb main zinda bachunga to...
rey:matlbh?
rohan:matlabh bff tune kya bade bhaiyaa ko chota bacha samjha hain jo tune ye bolke aaja ki tu unka

damad hain aur wo is baat ko care bhina kare ye hoga samajha ki..
rey:i m sorry yaar wo galti se
rohan:beta tune to galti se bola bt main to galat hojaunga na...nil sahi tha tuna taani ke pyaar mein pagal hogaya hain...
rey:sorry yaar swayam suna..
nil:ye kya sunega ye to gaya kaam se...
rohan:ek idea hain
rey:kya bolna...
rohan:tuna upar ja aur apna saman pack karle.
amar:wn kyu?
rohan:kyu ki bff yaha se jaraha hain...
rey:what?kisne kaha?
rohan:beta is phele ki tere body ke tukde pure jodhpur

mein bate tu yaha se nikalle...
rey:bt..
rohan:bff bade bhaiyaa tere tukde tukde kar denge..
swayam:nahiii(al team luk at him including,taarehan n girls excluding sharon comes out of dreamland...)
rohan:kya hua?
swayam:rey ka to bad mein phele bade bhaiyaa mujhe mardalenge...use phele hum yaha se janyenge ya jayenge.
rey:bt swayam
swayam:main kuch nai sununga..taani tuja girls ki packing mein help kar boys bhethe kya ho utho hame jana hain comeon guys...
rohan:rt decion swayam..
taani:ha bhai aap log jaye..phele

hi bade bhaiyaa rohan aur rey apke saath radhe-krishan ki murti kyu lene aye is baat ko leke serious hain aur abg..
rohan:idiot tu kya bol rahi hain..
taani:ha rohan main sach bol rahi hu..infact bade bhaiyaa ne tujhe aur bhai ko baat karne bhi bulaya hain...
rohan:kya??main to gaya kam se..swayam ruk main bhi ata hu tere saath...
swayam:ha guys chalo(til then he see sharon lost smewhere n he go to her n cal her n say)
swayam:chalo sharon yaha se ise phele ki bade bhaiyaa mujhe marde hum yaha se bhagte hain.
sharon(dreamly):

mr.hottie tumhe kyu marenge swayam wo kitne ache,hot,intelgent,smart aur handsme hain
swayam:wgat?tum kiski baat kar rahi ho sharon(vicky cme to swayam n say)
vicky:wo swayam sharon na bade bhaiyaa ki baat kar rahi hain aur use ye shock mein hain bade bhaiyaa jo itne handsme hain wo tumhare bade bhaiyaa hain...
swayam:what?(swayam luk at sharon in anger n loudly calls her...)sharonnn...(by this sharon cmes out of his drmworld n luk at swayam n tel)
sharon:kya hua swayam tum itna chila kyu rahe ho?(swayam luk at her)

in confusion as she dont knw what happend.then she see taani n ask...)
sharon:kya hua taani aur mr.hottie i mean tumhare bade bhaiyaa yaha se gaye jabse hum yahi khade hain..(al luk at sharon n swaxam holds his head n sit on the steps of the hall n al sits where they are n boys tel sharon n girls what happened...as were sitting there lost as they r going to dead holding there heads when rittu n aashi cme ther n ritu luking at taani ask)
ritu:kya hua taani
taani:margaye di..
ritu:kyu kya hua?swayam bhaiya

aap aise kyu bhete hain..
swayam:ritu lakdiyo ka intezam karle..
ritu:kyu?
swayam:meri chita ke liye.(al luk at swayam n he con)
swayam:aur meri maut ka zimedar rey hoga.
rey:what?
swayam:ha tu teri wajaha se sab hua?kya zartrath thi tujhe bade bhaiyaa ke samne oversmart bane ki hazar bar samjhaya tha ki bade bhaiyaa ke samne chup rehna bt tu hain ki sunta nahi..(rey luk at swayam with puppyface n ritu ask taani)
ritu:bhaiya apne frnd ko kyu gussa kare?
taani:wo wo di ha wo di busines..rey ko bade bhaiyaa ke saath busines karn

chate hain par bade bhaiyaa par rey ki 1st impresion kharab giri hain so bhai gusa kar rahe hain..di wo sb chodiyena aur plz aap sab ke liye coffee leke ayenge..(ritu smiles n leaves n swayam glare at taani n say )
swayam:taani phir jhut?
taani:bhai di ko kaise sach batati isliye
swayam:pata nahi kya hoga ek tu hain jo jhut bolti rehti hain aur ek rey hain jo sab ko sach bolta rehta hain..(bit his head n sit down meanwhile go to team n team told her everthing she cme in center n say)
aashi:aap sab aise hi

tension types le rahe ho..
rohan:tu pata bhi kitni badi pro hogai hain
rohan:uska solution to dhund rahe hain.guys jaldi socho kuch
aashi:ha solution to hain na,(no 1pay her attention n she con)guys meri baat suno abhi mahapuja types hone wali hain to bade bhaiyaa ko tumsb se baat karne ka time typds hi nahi milega..bas aaplog bade bhaiyaa ke samne kaam types ayega..(al see her n swayam go n hold her sharon dnt like that n say)
swayam:wow aashi ur grt rt guy abh hum mein se koi bhi bade bhaiyaa ke samne nahi ayega'

rohan:yes'..


phew...done with this part...so guys u all r thinking this update I gave soon'.yaa I gave soon'.n if u want me continue giving u the update soon keep liking n commenting n those who have res do unres soon'I m waiting for lambu comments as u saw our bade bhaiyaa'..so fast fast do comment !!!!!!!

Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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yipee i am the 1st one to comment..!!

loved ur update yr..!!
haaye bade bhaiya pe to mein bhi flat ho gyi yr..!!

sharon tp full on latoo ho gyi apne jeth ji pe..!!
n poor rey kya mast impression jamaya hai bb per..!!


bechara swayam gira hi jaa rha hai barbar..!!
rohan too gud in this update..!!



rey:bas itna kaha ki main is ghar ka damad hu...(swayam falls on sofa n rohan stand there as he was nt understanding what to do...taani bits her forehead n team boys signals as if rey is gone n girls were stil in dreamland...)

swayam:margaye...(swayam was lost n rohan to get lost in shock taani was nt understanding what to say when )

rey:rohan bt tu handle karlegana sab kuch bolna rohan..(rohan luks at rey n then to taani then make funny face n keep his left hand on his hibs n with rt hand cover his face n start laughing n while laughing he says)
rohan:b...f...f...tu great hain...n main tujhe bb se bacha lunga na ...(rey smiles till rohan forow with anger bring his eyebrow n shouts )par jab..tb main zinda bachunga to...
rey:matlbh?
rohan:matlabh bff tune kya bb ko chota bacha samjha hain jo tune ye bolke aaja ki tu unka

damad hain aur wo is baat ko care bhina kare ye hoga samajha ki..
rey:i m sorry yaar wo galti se


this was the beast part in this uupdate..!!!

loved it..

waiting for the next part..!!

Edited by hima_crazyD3fan - 12 years ago
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I will Unres it soon..😆

Unres..

Pheww.. Finally!! I read the whole chapter...
OMG!!! KSG as Bade Bhaiya!!!
This is such a big shock to me..
Haha!!! Sharon aur Rey dono ne kya kar diya???
First impression hi bura hogaya..
And bade bhaiyya is gonna eat Rey up..
The looks and the attitude he gave to them was out of this world..
I loved the Bade Bhaiya and Taani's meet..
Loved his side of a brother...
But Rey???
Ab kya hoga Rey ka..
Kaise apna impression sudharega ab wo..
The gang was so hilarious ..
The way they left when Rey was moving towards Bade Bhaiyya..lol..
And the way swayam kept falling again and again...
Rey was not at all ready to listen to Taani..
Poor Taani..
Kahaan phas gayi hai...
Aur Rey ne to khud ko SM ka Damaad kaha hai..
Bade Bhaiyya is very smart..
The way he understood that Swayam and Rohan were hiding behind the gang..hehe..
Kitna darte hain sab..
Aur girls ke baare main kya kahoon..
Apne hi dreamland main thi..
Realise bhi nahi kiya ke kya horaha hai..
Aur Swayam was even ready to leave..Haha!!!
Loved it dear..
Amazingly written..
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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