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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice & interesting update wo ladki kon thi
waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
thx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

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yahi smiley bhejna jab mein Priya-rajat ki love story bataungi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

very nice & interesting update wo ladki kon thi

waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
thx 4 PM

thanks for comments. u will know in next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

yahi smiley bhejna jab mein Priya-rajat ki love story bataungi😆

Dont worry..uske liye mere paas or bhi simileys hai.. 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Girl:- madat!!!!!! Really aap meri madat kar rahe the. (Very slowly but angrily)- ladki ke kapde nikalkar aap keh rahe hai ki aap madat kar rahe the, aur kya bakwaas keh rahe the uss din mehsoos karo. Uss halat mein muje aap mehsoos karne ko keh rahe the. R u gone mad????. Aur kya 'aapne kuch dekha nahi'really'aapne sach mein kuch nahi dekha. Please don't tell this. Madat my foot. Aap kya har aane jane walo ki eisi madat karte hai. kapde uthar kar.

Ram:- just shut up!!!!now, u r talking much.

Girl:- meine abhi tak kuch bola hi nahi… jo aapne kaha uske liye bolna kafi nahi hai…. uss din mein chup rahi issliye ki mein darr gayi thi. Obviously koi bhi kitna hi strong kyun na ho..uss halat mein koi bhi darr jata. Aur upar se aapki haveli….koi bhoot bagle se kam nahi lagta…itna bada aur upar se itna sunsaan…kahi bhi kisi ki bhi koi tasweer nahi hai…..koi bhi darr jata.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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kya precap diye aap
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sandi yeh kaisa preview hai.. 😲
Uss din toh mahabhaarat nhi hui thi lo ab ho gyi.. 😆
Update soon plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Sandi yeh kaisa preview hai.. 😲
Uss din toh mahabhaarat nhi hui thi lo ab ho gyi.. 😆
Update soon plz..

kya viru uss din Mahabharat nahi hua reason pata nahi chala preview mein.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


kya viru uss din Mahabharat nahi hua reason pata nahi chala preview mein.
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Haha pata chala isliye toh bol rhi hun uss don nhi hui lo ab ho gyi... 😆
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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PART 7

Two days passed'.Ram keep her Payal somewhere inside the cupboard.

Ram in his office doing his work, when he gets a call from hospital. Lady from the other side told him that one Vikram Shergill is admitted to this hospital and he given this number and told to inform u.

Ram(shocked):- Vikram in hospital!!!!!...what happens to him, how is he????

Lady:- don't worry Sir, he is fine. He met with an minor accident.

Both hang up the call.

Ram runs to meet Vikram. Ram reached hospital. He asked receptionist the room no. and moved towards there.

Ram:- Vikram yeh sab kya hai!!!!!..kaise hua yeh sab'.Neha ko bataya hai ki nahi?????

Vikram:- woh chota sa accident ho gaya. Theji se saamne se gadi aa rahi thi lag gayi. Woh log hi muje yahan lekar aaye. Meine gaadi deemi kar di thi, Issliye itna hi hua.

Ram:- Neha ko bataya???

Vikram:- nahi aur tub hi Neha se kuch nahi bolega. Kaam ma khaa pareshan ho jaayegi aur mein nahi chahta ki woh apna holiday drop karkar yahan aaye.

Ram:- teek hai abb tu aaram kar, mein doctor se abhi milkar aata hoon. Discharge ke baare mein aur koi formalities ho toh uske baare mein dekh leta hoon.

Ram met doctor and came out. He saw the same girl whom he helped her on that day going out from doc. Amar's cabin. He runs towards her and calls her and stops her and stands in front of her.

Ram:- Aap'''aapne mujse jhoot kyun bola ki aap uss hostel mein rehte ho

Girl:- so!!!!aapko isse kya matlab????

Ram:- Arre meine aapki madat ki aur aap keh rahi hai muje isse kya matlab!!!!!!

Girl:- madat aur aapne!!!!!!. Let me tell u one thing shayad meine uss din nahi bola kyunki mein uss halat mein nahi thi ki aapse kuch bolu. Lekin aaj aap khud mere paas aaye hai toh bol du ki aap nihayati ek battameez insan hai; aapne jo kuch bhi kiya bahut galat kiya; aap jaise log sirf mauke ka faida uthana jaante hai, ladki deki nahi shuru ho gaye.

Ram:- shut up!!!!. Trying to low his voice as everybody is watching them. God!!! Kisi ki madat karna itni badi galti hai muje pata nahi tha. agar itna hi gussa thi toh uss din kyun chup rahi, uss din kuch kyun nahi bola. Aur ..aur uss din itna concern dikha rahi thi 'woh khada'woh kya tumne muje punishment dene ke liye diya tha kya????

Girl:- madat!!!!!! Really aap meri madat kar rahe the. (Very slowly but angrily)- ladki ke kapde nikalkar aap keh rahe hai ki aap madat kar rahe the, aur kya bakwaas keh rahe the uss din mehsoos karo. Uss halat mein muje aap mehsoos karne ko keh rahe the. R u gone mad????. Aur kya 'aapne kuch dekha nahi'really'aapne sach mein kuch nahi dekha. Please don't tell this. Madat my foot. Aap kya har aane jane walo ki eisi madat karte hai. kapde uthar kar.

Ram:- just shut up!!!!now, u r talking much.

Girl:- meine abhi tak kuch bola hi nahi' jo aapne kiya uske liye bolna yeh kafi nahi hai'. uss din mein chup rahi issliye ki mein darr gayi thi. Obviously koi bhi kitna hi strong kyun na ho..uss halat mein koi bhi darr jata. Aur upar se aapki haveli'.koi bhoot bagle se kam nahi lagta'itna bada aur upar se itna sunsaan'kahi bhi kisi ki bhi koi tasweer nahi hai'..koi bhi darr jata.

A nurse passing by tells to talk slowly.

Ram:- dekho abb tum mere haveli ko kuch matt bolo. Tum abhi Dr. Amar se milne gayi thi na; deemag ka doc. Hai. sach mein tumhe iski bahut zaroorat hai.

Girl:- jiski koi family nahi hoti eise hi log iss tarah ki harkate karte hai. Aur aap na koi Psychiatric se apna ilaz karao ya fir kisi sex ke doctor ko dikao. Muje toh lagta hai appke gene mein hi problem lagti hai.

Now, Ram is very much anger.

Suddenly she feels dizzy and falls on the floor. She is unconscious. People standing nearby gather there. Ward boy put her in the stretcher and taken her to the theatre. Ram is so angry so he goes from there to Vikram's room.

But, he is restless. He actually wanted to know what happen to her. He also remembers she fainted before also.

Ram told Vikram that he is comingin a minute'.Vikram confused'..

Ram is standing outside the Amar's cabin'he is confused'.but, at last he entered.

Amar is Ram's schoolmate, so he knows him personally.

Ram:- may I

Amar:- hey Ram..come come'come inside sit. He gets up from his seat and hugs Ram.

Bahut dino baad'yahan kaise aana hua.

Ram:- ya my friend Vikram is admitted in ur hospital. So laga tumse bhi mill u.

Amar:- ok

Ram:- (hesitantly) Amar'''.abhi thodi der pehle ek ladki faint ho Gayi thi..kya muje tu bata sakta hai ki uuse kya hua hai'

Amar:- tu kiski baat kar raha hai???

Ram:- aare wahi jo thodi der pehle tumhare cabin se nikli thi. Usne pink aur white combination ki kurti pehni thi.

Amar:- ohh'so u r talking about PRIYA!!!!!...tu priya ko kaise jaanta hai.

Ram:- Nahi mein uuse personaaly toh nahi jaanta,haan lekin ek baar lift diya tha uss waqt bhi woh faint ho gayi thi.

Amar:- yes, she is in big problem. Sahi bolu toh uske paas samay bahut kam hai.

Ram:- what????kya hua hai uuse.

Amar:- waise mere profession mein patient ki problems batane ke liye mana hai. lekin itne dino mein koi toh hai jo uske baare mein pooch raha hai, issliye bata raha hoon

"Priya is my patient. Priya ka case muje 3 mahine pehle aaya tha. ek accident case tha. Priya ko kafi jyada chot aayi thi. Uska condition kafi serious tha. operation karke uski jaan toh hamne bacha li. Teen din baad jab uuse hosh aaya tab use sirf apna name yaad tha Priya aur kuch nahi. uss accident ki wajah se uski memory par asar pada. She is suffering from Retrograde Amnesia Jisme patient accident se pehli wali saari baat bhool jata hai. kuch logo ko jaldi sab yaad aa jata hai,kuch logo ko mahina lagta hai aur kuch logo ko saalo lagte hai. eise patients ki sabse badi help unki family hoti hai; patients ko apne family se milwana,unhe unki baate batana waghera waghera'.

Lekin aaj tak Priya ke ghar se koi bhi nahi aaya. Teen mahine ho gaye koi bhi information nahi. Meine Mumbai ke saare police station mein pata kiya kahi koi missing case report nahi hui aur na hi koi accident case. Meine bolke bhi rakka hai agar koi information mile toh muje inform karna.

Ram:- toh unse kyun nahi poocha jinnhone Priya ko idhar lekar aaye the.

Amar:- woh log Priya ko yahan chodkar bhag gaye. Unka koi ata pata nahi hai.

"Priya teek toh ho gayi lekin jati kahan. Muje uuse iss halat mein chodne ka mann nahi kiya. Meine Priya ko Aashiyaan womens hostel mein bhej diya. Priya roz mere paas aati yeh poochne ke liye ki uske gharwalo ke baare mein koi khabar mili ya nahi. Police station se koi khabar mili ya nahi lekin har baar mayusi hi haath milti hai.

Ek baar Priya ne bataya ki uuse baar baar chakkar aate hai. Kahi bhi faint ho jati hai. meine uske kuch test karaye, check kiya toh pata laga ki due to accident brian mein blood clot hua hai aur jiski wajah se uuse baar baar chakkar aate hai. operation karna bahut zaroori hai clot badtha jaa raha hai'..lekin

Ram:- lekin kya!!!!!!

Amar:- lekin operation ka cost bahut jyada hai. jab tak paise jama nahi honge operation nahi hoga. Mein majboor hoon. Mein uski madat karna chahta hoon lekin itni badi rakam'..

after little pause he continue'..

meine kuch NGO se bhi baat ki hai, abhi tak koi response nahi aaya. Aur Priya ki condition din bhar din kharab hoti jaa rahi hai. blood clot ki wajah se shayad uski eye sight mein problem ho sakti hai. uske paas bilkul waqt nahi hai. Aur priya ko itne paise arrange karna impossible hai.

Ram is shocked.

Amar:- pata hai aaj woh kya keh rahi thi;ki woh operation ke baare mein nahi sochti, jab uske baare mein uuse kuch yaad hi nahi. Koi uske baare mein poochne wala nahi hai,toh woh jeeke kya karegi. Kiske liye jiyegi. Uuse kuch nahi pata aage kya karna hai. uski sirf ek aakiri ichha hai ki marne se pehle woh yeh jaan sake ki woh kaun hai. marne se pehle koi ek insaan uske paas ho jo uska apna ho.

Amar had tears in his eyes. He wipes his tears.

He continue'.

Mere paas kahi case aate hai, lekin pata nahi Priya ka case se mein itna attach kyun nahi. Shayad issliye ki uske iss halat mein woh bilkul akeli hai aur mein kuch nahi kar sakta. Priya ke bhahari gauv toh bhar gaye lekin '''..Ram she is sinking day by day.

Ram still in shock.

Ram:- woh abb kahan hai.

Amar:- uuse abhi general ward mein shift kiya hai. drip diya jaa raha hai. meine uuse injection diya hai so she is unconscious now.

Ram left cabin without saying anything. He is disturbed. He walks towards general ward. He saw Priya there. He goes near to her and sits beside her.

Priya ne wahi kapde pehne the jo Ram ne usse lekar diye the.

He put his hand on her forehead and slowly brushes her hair. He is feeling bad for her. After some time he left from there.

Ram in his bedroom. He skips his dinner. His mind is full of Priya's visual. He is sitting on his bed. Amar's word "Priya is sinking" disturbs him too much. He closes his eyes.

Suddenly he gets up from bed and searching something from cupboard. He is throwing his clothes out. He takes that payal out from cupboard.

He is remembering his fight with Priya and smiles and suddenly his smile vanished when he realize her state.

Ram sleeps keeping payal next to his side.

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago

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