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yashi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey
u read my update...wow...i was waiting for it...ya i will pm u...and thanks for the lovely comment...

sorry pari i know i am too late

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Aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

superb update .. 👏

TR romance waz amazng .. ! 👍🏼

yug iz becumng naughty day by day .. 😆

update soon ..

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi
superb update .. 👏

TR romance waz amazng .. ! 👍🏼
yug iz becumng naughty day by day .. 😆

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

thank u so much...i will...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: anagharaj
waiting for ur update.

after this weekend dear...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: lovelysweet
Update soon

ya dear...will soon...

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Awesome TR romance...

Pls update soon...

update...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome TR romance...
</div><div>Pls update soon...
update...
update...
update...
update...
update...

thanks dear...will update tonight...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

hi guys...ruko ruko ruko ...put ur juta chappals chaku talwar eggs tomatoes down...i know m updating after ages...but kya karu i was busy...aur ab free hui hu lekin cant give u all fast updates bcoz m going to my grandmothers home so vaha me story likh nahi paungi but i will try to update if i write...ufff it take two days to write this bcoz i n so pissed off.bcoz i lost all my written chapters so i m so pissed off...ye dusri baar type kiya mene...aur pehle jitna achha nahi hai...

guys i become sizzler...and this is a gift for all of u...enjoy...

chapter 17:

he saw taani infront of him ...he try to stop but it ended in he collide with taani...both were going to fell down...rey wrap his hands around her petite figure so that she didnt got hurt...taani closed her eyes in fear...she felt his arm around her...she hide her face in his chest and clutch his shirt as they fell down...first rey was on top of taani ...then they roll and now taani on rey again they roll ..now rey on taani and finally they stop after one last roll...now taani was on top of him...her face was in his chest...and his hands were protectivly wrap around her...

"haawww..."said yug with open mouth in shock...

"taani tum thik ho??"ask rey worriedly...

her head was in his chest and her eyes were closed tightly bcoz of fear...

"taani r u ok??"again ask rey...taani open her eyes and saw her position..."ha...ha me thik hu..."said taani and try to getup but cant...

"one minute..."said rey and help her to standup...

she was not looking in his eyes...she was feeling shy...

"ummm...me ready ho jati hu college jana hai na..."said taani and start walking without looking forward and clash with rey again...he again hold her by her waist so she didnt fall...she look in his eyes this time...his chocolaty brown eyes were so deep so pure that she get lost in it...

yug was standing there with his one finger in his mouth...he was giglling...he ran to his room and grab the camera and come back...taarey were still in that position...

"click..."...he quickly click a pic of them...

"click..."again he click...

then he went to taarey and hold his pant and call him.."papa..."

when yug call them...they both came out of their dream land.

both let eachother go...

"ha...ha beta kya hua??"said rey...

"wo yug ko video game khelna hai...'said yug with a cute pout..."ok lets go. "said rey picking him up in his arms and went ...

taani also went from there and get ready for college...

after sometime both left for college...

"hi guys..."said rey entering in the RH...

"hi rey..."said gang.."hi taani..."

"hey guys..."said taani...

"guys vp sir ne bulaya hai.."said vicky to taarey...

"ha to chalo na..."said rey and all went in vp sir's cabin...

"may we come in sir??"ask rey...

they enter in the cabin and saw vihan already there...rey and vihan both look at each other...

"so guys...so there is a good news for u all"said vp sir...

"good news??what sir??"ask neha...

"st. louis is participating in national group dance competition and national couple dance competition..."said vp

"what??"said all in chorus..."thats great..."

all were hugging each other...and when comes to taarey they both also hug ...that too tightly...

when they broke hug they saw that all were looking at them...they both feel embarased...

"guys so group dance u all can manage but here is your new couple dance teacher in st. louis...he will come in the afternoon..."

"ok sir...all said..."and left the cabin...

in the afternoon:

all were in the RH including vihaan kriti vishakha...

suddenly a guy of 27 enter in the RH...

guy:hello guys...

all:hello...

guy:so i m the couple dance teacher here...

ta:oh...welcome sir...

guy:i m samar singh and ya u all will call me samar only...ok??

all:ok...

samar:so group dance ka koi prob nahi hai...kyuki mene videos dekhe hue hai...so all 12 members simmi rinni nil amar neha sharon vicky swayam aashi bharat rey and vishakha...u all are in group dance ...ok???

all were shocked because samar didnt add taani in group...

ta:but sir me bhi...

sa:ya i know ...u two girls and this guy are left so we will decide kon couple dance karega..aur jo ladki baaki rahegi...she will be in group dance...so first taani and vihan u both will dance...

taani and vihan nod...and went in center...

"huh...ye vihan meri taani ke sath...kutta kamina kahin ka..."thought rey...

"huh...ye vihan gadha meri baby sis k sath..."thought swayam...

sa:chalo guys start dancing...

taani and vihan start dancing but taani was uncomfortable with him...

vihan put his one hand around her waist and she put her hand on his shoulder...

"oh god...ye kya...mere samne me is vihan k bachhe ko taani k sath nahi dekh sakta...god koi idea do..."thought rey...suddenly rey got an idea...

"samar they are not looking good together and he didnt know about couple dance i think...me bata ta hu..."said rey..

"oh sure...plz show us..."said samar...

rey went near them and "can i??"ask rey to vihan and vihan let her go...

rey came in front of her and ask her for her hand...she blushed a little and give her hand in his ..he take her hand and pull her near him...he slip his another hand around her waist and she put her hand on his shoulder. ...

the bg song was ishq wala love...

they both danced together making all shock with there chemistry...the song ended but still taarey were lost in eachother...they were standing like rey's hands around her waist and her hands on his chest...both were coming closer to each other unknown with the fact that all were watching them...

"awesome..."said samar..."what a chemistry..."

and all start clapping and after that our taarey came back in the real world...

rey remove his hands from her waist...both were embarrased...

"u guys are just mind blowing ."said samar...

"thank u samar"said taarey...

"ok so u both are in couple dance..."said samar...

taarey were extremly happy.

"what??"said the team members..."to phir group dance??"

"group dance k liye tum sab ho na .."said samar..

"but rey k bina..."said vicky...

"are guys hum sab hai na group dance k liye..."said swayam...

"ok"all said ...

"so vihan is also in group dance..."said samar..."so taani rey ...kal sharp subah 7 baje rehersal ok??"

"ok sir "said taarey and samar left the RH...

suddenly taani's phone rang...its her neighbour...

ta:ji uncle boliye...

un:ha taani beta...me tumhe kuch batana chahta tha...tumhare papa k bare me...itne din tum log pareshan the to nahi bataya...

ta:ji uncle boliye kya batana tha??

un:vo me batana chahta tha ki tumhare papa ko kisine janbujhkar mara hai...

ta:what??

un:ha beta...mene dekha tha usse...

ta:aap usse pehchan sakte ho??

un:ha agar samne aaye to pehchan sakta hu...

ta:ok uncle...me aap ko phir ghar aa ke milti hu...

un:ok beta...bye...

taani cut the call...

"kya hua taani??"ask rey...

"rey papa ka accident kisine janbujhkar kiya tha...uncle ne dekha tha usse..."said taani...

all hear this..."what??"all were shocked...vihan heard this and he was scared...sweat was clearly visible on his forehead..."guys i will be back"said vihan and left from there...

"ye isse kya hua??"thought all and they also left RH...

at evening :

rey's home:

they reach home and rang the bell...

yug was in his room with his teddys and all...he heard the bell and ran down staris..."mumma papa aa gaye..."he open the door quickly...and saw taarey...he quickly hug taani around her thigs..."mumma...aaj der kyu ho gayi??"ask yug...

"vo beta kuch kam tha mumma ko...isi liye..."said taani and pick him in her hands...both comeinside...

"achha to papa ko to kisine miss hi nahi kiya..."said rey with fake anger...

"awww...papa...i miss u too..."now yug jump in his lap...

"i miss u too beta..." said rey and he pick him and went in his room..."taani tum change kar lo...tab tak me bhi fresh ho jata hu..." said rey and left...

both get fresh...taani was standing in front of mirror...combing her hairs and remembering the dance of their today...his hands was around her waist...she was blushing badly...she saw herself in mirror...her cheeks were deep red due to blush...

suddenly she feel his hands around her belly...she look up and saw in the mirror...he was standing behind her...looking at her face...she close her eyes and put her hand on his...he rub his nose near her ear and said "you are beautiful..." ...

she open her eyes and turn to face him but when she turn no one is there ..."pagal" she hit his forehead and went near window and feel the cool breez...

in rey's room:

rey was whistteling and setting his hairs...

"kya baat hai papa...aaj bahot khush lag rahe ho??"ask yug who was sitting on a window...

"no beta...me to roz hi khush hota hu..."said rey...

"achha aap ke liye ek present hai..."said yug...

"mere liye present...wow..."said rey..."kya hai??"

"ummm...pehle aankhe bandh karo..."said yug

"ok..."said rey and close his eyes...

yug ran take out some pics from his room...

"ok...now open..."said yug and rey open his eyes...

"taddaaa...ye lo aap ka present..."said yug and handover him the pics...

"mere aur taani k pic...wow..."he was so happy...yug was giglling watching him...

"ab...vo...ye pic yug ne mujhe kyu diye???"ask rey...

"uffo papa...i know u love mumma...so keep this...ok???"said yug..."and ya stick it in this scrapbook" he give him a scrap book...

"oh...thank u so much baby..."said rey and kiss his cheek...

"u welcome papa..."said yug and ran to meet taani...

taani's room:

"mumma...kya kar rahi ho???"said yug but taani was lost in her thoughts...

"mumma..."said yug but no responce...

he stood on the couch and tap her shoulder...

"aahh..."scream taani not so loudly and then sigh in relief when she saw yug there...

"tum ho..."said taani...

"mumma aap kiske bare me soch rahi thi????ummm...papa???"said yug and taani bit her lower lip...

"ab...nai...nai to beta...achha ye batao aaj yug ne kya kiya pura din???"ask taani to change the topic...

"aaj...mene bahot kuch kiya...par vo sab chodo...mujhe abhi garden me jana hai...chalo na mumma..."said yug with a cute pout...

"awww...sure honey...aap ke papa ko bhi puch lo..."said taani...

"papa is always ready for yug .."ssaidd rey from behind...taani look at him and their eyes met...a cute little eyelock between them but it was broke by yug...

"yeee...lets go...he hold both of thhem's hand and drag them...

precap:taareyug scenes...entry of rey's mom...taarey romance...

ufff...finally i done with this chap...and guys dont think me vihan ko jane dungi...usse to saza milegi...

now like and comment...plz plz plz...