Jodha akbar ki pehli mulaqat..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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400 saal pehle ek prophecy hui thi ki jodha mughalon ke ghar jayengi aur jalad badshah ko akbar ke title se sammanit kiya jaayega jodha ki wajah se par iss prem kahani ki shururat toh unki pehli mulaqat se hui thin na.

chandni raat thi, jo Milan hone wala tha uske sakshi the timtimate tare aur ek khoobsurat chand aur devi maa. Jodha ko usi raat pata chala tha ki uska vivah suryabhan se hone wala tha aur wo khush thi par unhe kya pata tha ki unki kismet kuch aur thi. Akbar ek daure par nikle the akele na bairam khan na unke sipahi unhe kya malumat thi ki woh aaj us noor ka deedar karenge jo hamesha ke liye unki dil mein bas jayengi. Dono bekhabar apni kismet se theek the.

Jodha bai nadi kinare diya jala rahi thi aur jaise hi unhone diye ko paani mein pravahit kiya unhe apni taqdeer dikhi unhe jalal ka chehra dikha jo unke piche khade hokar unki khoobsurti ka deedar kar rahe the. Jodha ki jannat wali khoobsurti ne akbar ke saare khaane chit kar diye the. Jodha iss baat se bekhabar thi ki woh unka sabse bada shatru tha aur akbar ko bhi pata nahi tha ki woh amer ki rajkumari hain. Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho gaye aur tabhi paani ki kilkari ne unhe unke swapn lok se jagaya. Akbar pe aaj tak kissi bhi haseena ka itna assar nahi hua tha aur na hi jodha par kissi yodha ka aisa haseen assar hua tha. Unke Milan mein aisa laga ki poori qaynaat unke milne ka jashn mana rahi hai, tare jhoom rahe hai aur unki balayein utaar rahe hai. Ek aisa bhavya drishya ban gaya tha jo aaj tak na dekha tha na suna tha.

Aur iss tarah shuru hui jodha akbar ki sunheri dastaan!!

This is my take on the first meet of jodha akbar. Sorry peeps writing for the first time so all criticizing and opinions are most welcome. i only wrote my extension and analyze on the new promo

I was listening to salaam aaya from movie veer while writing this post: my inspiration!

Edited by malvikatiwari96 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh awesome...

Such a god hindi do you have...

Please continue writing something like this is weekends...

When we miss Akdha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update. Just loved it. Plz wright more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really amzing !!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just one word for your writing. BEAUTIFUL. Bahut khubshurat likhte hai ap.
Akdha is magical n u hv captured dt magic through ur words very well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! So beautiful! I never thought Hindi could sound so soulfull!
Loved it! Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing , beautiful...subhanallah...👍🏼
You wrote beautifully...you've a beautiful hindi writing hand... I can very well picturise what you wrote .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u so much to all of u for praising my first attempt in writing i really appreciate it thank u and yes i will start writing and will try my best to you keep you all entertained with my posts! luv you all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey thats so beautiful.. first time read something completely in hindi.. else most of the write-ups would be in english or mixed with hindi..

u wrote it really well..

and btw which promo wer u talking about ? can u gimme the link ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How soulful! This was awesome! Please continue with your composition. Very refreshing! Thank You!

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