Khawaish...pyaar ki :(- thread 2 added - Page 44

priyanka it was great part. maan is showing his concern for geet. he wants to give his lots of love to geet. i hope their all misunderstanding sort out very soon. precap is amazing. waiting for next dear.

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Originally posted by: ..Enigma..

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Originally posted by: aishu3003

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Part 23

In this update you get one song sequence... "jeene laga hoon"

With the help of song I showed maaneet beautiful moments of togetherness...in this past also include...friends please you imagine maan sees geet face constantly and lost into previous memonts...in this in between maan also take care of geet...and he also imagined future of togetherness..

present (pink)

past(black)

future(green)

above three colors present the text not the song lines...

He enters into her room...take each step slowly -2 to her... he sees her head not comfortably lay on pillow...

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada

Pehle Se Zyada Tumpe Marne Laga Hoon

He goes near to her and held her head softly then placed on pillow...

I have started to live life more than ever before

I love you, dying on you more than ever before

She held his hand and slides his hand under the face...

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Geet : maan please stop the bike

Maan : kya huya

Geet : maan gol gappe khane hai

Maan : geet

Geet : please

Maan : ok

He sees her ...how she eats gol gappe and make different -2 faces while eating...

Main Mera Dil Aur Tum Ho Yahan

Phir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukayein Wahan

Geet : ase kya dekh rhe ho

Maan : kuch nhi

geet : aapko khane hai

My heart, you, and I are present here
then why are you standing there, away from me with a downward gaze

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She moaned in pain...he caresses her face...

Maan : kya huya geet

He takes her into embrace...

(Due to high fever, she is in unconsciousness state)

She felt relax into his arms...

Tum Sa Haseen Pehle Dekha Nahin

Tum Isse Pehle The Jaane Kahan
Before you, I have never seen anyone beautiful like you
Before this where were you, where you were hidden

He kissed on her forehead..

Maan : geet mein yhi hoon

Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada

Pehle Se Zyada Tumpe Marne Laga

I have started to live life more than ever before
I am loving you, dying on you more than ever before

With one hand he continuously places the piece of cold cloth onto her hand..

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Maan : oouch

Geet : ye kya kr rhe ho maan

Kitni baar kaha hai

Mein bna dungi khana

Dekha lag gyi na...

Rehte Ho Aa Ke Jo Tum Paas Mere

Tham Jaye Pal Yeh Wahin Bass Main Yeh Sochun

Geet : dekha lag gyi na

He enjoys her cares..

Maan : geet

She instantly sucks his finger...

When you come near to me and stay with me
On that moment, I just think that the moment should freeze or stop

He smiles..

Geet : aap acting kr rhe the

She turn but he pull her by waist...


Sochun Main Tham Jaye Pal Yeh Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum

Sochun Main Tham Jaye Pal Yeh Paas Mere Jab Ho Tum

I think that when you are near to me that moment or time should stop or freeze

She tries to open her eyes..but eyes not fully open ..some blur images sees by her...

Chalti Hai Saansein Pehle Se Zyada

Pehle Se Zyada Dil Theharne Laga

Geet : maan

He felt so much happiness she take his name...

My breathing has increased my breath is running more than ever before
My heartbeats, my heart has started to stop more than ever before

Maan : geet

Kuch chaiye tumhe

Geet (think) ye sch mein yha hai

Kal jo maine kiya

Uske baad ye yha kaise ho sakte hai

Maan : geet

He again called her...she opened her eyes...

Maan : geet ab tum kaisa mahsoos kr rhi ho

Tanhaiyon Mein Tujhe Dhoondhe Mera Dil

Har Pal Yeh Tujhko Hi Soche Bhala Kyun

In lonely moments, In loneliness my heart starts to search or look for you
My heart thinks about you every moment why

Geet (think) kitna khubsurat sapna hai

Sch kaise ho sakta hai

Mein maan ke itne karib...kaise ho sakti hai

Tanhai Mein Dhoondhe Tujhe Dil

Har Pal Tujhko Soche

In lonely moments, In loneliness my heart starts to search or look for you
Each moment thinks about you

Maan : geet kuch kaho na

She tries to touch his face...but she takes back her hand ...she felt if he touch him her beautiful dream break into mid..and she want enjoy this moment..not want loose this moment...he held her hand and placed on his cheek...

Tanhai Mein Dhoondhe Tujhe Dil

Har Pal Tujhko Soche

In lonely moments, In loneliness my heart starts to search or look for you
Each moment thinks about you

Geet : maan aap sch mein yha ho

Milne Lage Dil Pehle Se Zyada

Pehle Se Zyada Ishq Hone Laga

Both lost into each other...

The hearts started to meet more than ever before
More than ever before love is growing happening

I hope friends you all like the update...please hit like button & do comment...

& see new MG ff "kya pyaar karonge mujhse"

next part 24 on page 118

lovely part dear liked it

hmm awesome song dii n song adds more emotions to it

nyc part...

P-21,22,23
Lovely parts.Its cute that Mohan is helping Maan so much.

Spcly luved p-23,with the song sequence and Geet considering Maan to be a dream.Beautiful.